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Date Posted: 20:20:27 10/09/02 Wed
In reply to:
Dartpaw
's message, "My first story in a very long time..." on 23:25:50 10/02/02 Wed
Tireh the mouse, got up the next morning... and looked around the room, 'Was it a dream?'
He got up, and got dressed, and ran down for breakfast,, and in the main hallway he ran into Maxiell the otter.
Maxiell was a young otter about Tireh's age, he lived in Holt Freewater his whole life, and was a great fighter, he had been visiting Nighway for about since winter, for it was too cold to travel, He was going up north to Bandswamp, which wasn't really a swamp but a small community of creatures, living peacefully in the farmlands.
Maxiell stood up, and dusted himself off and pulled Tireh up,
'What are ya doin' dashin round 'ere I haven't ever seen ya this frisky, dashing mad around the h'abbey like a soakin wildcat.'
'Sorry, 'bout that, I am just excited, for I have seen... (He didn't want to say he saw an apparition because it sounds kinda weird to someone as tough as Maxiell who obviously didn't believe in supernatural things... he could see it in his eyes.)
'I was just hungry! yeah that's it!'
'Oh than perhaps you'd better get ter the kitchen befo' Fatty Lawrence does'
(Oh yes Fatty Lawrence, the tubby Hedgehog who loves to eat, some folks believe he is 3 parts hare, but it is actually because he was a victim of a looney rat, who dashed into his house, and Fatty 'who was then named Huile'
Held off the rat while his family ran off somewhere far away, he slayed the rat but he wasn't very lucky himself, for he had been severly injured, and he layed there in his hut, and awaited to die...
But luckily a travelling Squirrel saw the door open and found huile almost dead.
He took the hedgehog to nighway abbey whom was treated but still very sore in his body and heart... he never did find out where his family went... and just hoped that they would come here someday...
So everyday he waits on the battlements waiting for his family, and he got so depressed he just started eating uncontrollably, to soothe his heart... which pains him everyday.
So Tireh and Maxille went to eat breakfast, and Tireh later decided to look in his archives of stories, hoping to find one about that mouse that told him that spooky advice.
Not very much happened in this story, but it did tell some background of some characters that will have more to do in the story later... and I'm not going to say very much about the ancient underground ruins far below the abbey.
To be continued
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