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Subject: Parts 2. and 3. Author: Saih Darkeye [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 20:35:41 03/01/04 Mon In reply to: Saih Darkeye 's message, "A short story with poetry." on 20:32:49 03/01/04 Mon 2. Alone again... Mara saw all the dibbun's happily playing together, and the elders laughing and talking. Suddenly she felt very out of place. A few tears rolled unchecked down the sides of her mask and she furiously wiped them away, "I will not cry. I will not!! I've never cried before. Not when mother was killed, and when I was left to tend for myself. Or when I was cold and hungry. Why am I crying now? There is hardly any reason to." A choked sob built up in her throat, but she wouldn't let it loose. She slipped away in search of someone who would show her to a place where she could stay. 'And' She thought to herself. 'Cry without anybeast noticing.' -All alone in the world, nobeast cares for me. I'm merely the shadow in the window, that you may or may not see.- 3. Sadness. A young hare led her down the hallway to the dormitories, he watched her warily as if she would pull out a dagger and kill him any moment. Mara could not understand why no one spoke to her. There were other ferrets there, why was she so differant? Was it because she wore the mask and black cloak? She sighed, and finally they came to her dorm. She thanked the hare and stepped inside, closing the door firmly behind her. She then flung herself onto the bed and sobbed her young broken heart out. -Crying as if my heart would break, what good is that if it's already broken? Why do I have to be so differant from the other ferrets here? Will I ever fit in, will I ever live a day without shedding a single tear?- [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date Part 4. Saih Darkeye 20:45:23 03/01/04 Mon I like it! Keep writing! What happens next? (NT) -- Talor, 16:09:06 03/02/04 Tue Ya like it? Cool!! I'll write more soon, when I have time. (NT) -- Saih Darkeye, 19:23:34 03/02/04 Tue Part 5. (The end!) -- Saih Darkeye, 14:05:33 03/03/04 Wed Very good. I wanted to know more about Mara's past, but I like how you ended it. (NT) -- Talor, 14:23:16 03/03/04 Wed Well, that's not really completely the end.... I mean, that part is finished. I'll write more about her past when I have time. (NT) -- Saih Darkeye, 16:14:50 03/03/04 Wed Part 1. of Mara's history -- Saih Darkeye, 21:22:21 03/04/04 Thu