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Subject: Here is part of a story i am trying to write. Please geve me feedback on it; especialy where you think it needs fixed up(pleeeaaase! i will not be offended at all if you tell me it is not good.)


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Lidinia Longbow
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Date Posted: 19:01:23 12/17/03 Wed


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in here (I am skipping posting the prologue to get right to the story. maybe i will post it later)Lidinia Longbow19:29:26 12/17/03 Wed
here is the rest of chapter 1(inside). sorry about putting such a small part out last time!Lidinia20:10:05 12/18/03 Thu
hmmm... I never noticed that one! Thanks Steadykick! i'll try to work somethin' out there! (NT)Lidinia21:02:53 12/18/03 Thu
Chapter 2 inside. feedback please.Lidinia18:57:23 12/19/03 Fri
Ooops! I meant to say 'Brother Drew eased Brother Hobart' or something like that! Thanks!! (NT)Lidinia15:15:13 12/22/03 Mon
Please be patient!! I'm trying!! (NT)Lidinia20:14:01 01/03/04 Sat


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