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Subject: Im so sorry I havent been posting, but my parents have been restricting my internet time lately. Inside! Author: Whiteye [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 23:06:59 08/08/03 Fri In reply to: Whiteye 's message, "Yay! I'm so glad you like it! I'll go write right now! I'm telling it to another friend of mine, so I'd better hurry so I can satisfy y'all! (Grrrr that post time limit!)" on 18:00:28 08/03/03 Sun The concerned looking elf opened her front door a crack, then, seeing Arion, she opened it wider and snatched her inside. Her beautiful face was creased with worry and she clasped Arion’s hands in hers. “They haven’t gotten you!” Arion felt she knew the answer to her own question, but she asked it anyway. “Who?” Idela looked furtively about, then answered in a whisper. “The Galen!” “Galen” “Yes, Galen. They rode through here not too long ago. They are evil men…Hephaestus is their leader.” Arion’s face slowly bore the image of rememberance. “Hephaestus…Isn’t he a Greek god?” Idela nodded. “He was not attractive though, but very strong and ugly. And that describes the Hephaestus of today perfectly.” Idela shuddered and went on, saying, “This has never happened before in the Land of Ages. That means he has somehow discovered a way to alter our ages into what he wants. You must help us, Arion!” The young elf began to cry, so much pressure on her. Then she remembered what she had come to tell Idela. “Jeniva Karr…She was robbed by the Galen today!” The older elf nodded, understanding perfectly. She turned to Arion quickly and said, “Take care of the place. I’ll be back when the sun sets.” And with that, she mounted her unicorn expertly and rode southwest. Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok. I know this is EXTREMELY short, but I wrote this in about...oh, five minutes, so it had to be brief. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date Gosh...does it really stink that much? I'll stop then. (NT) Whiteye 18:19:02 08/10/03 Sun Noooo!!!! Whiteye keep going!!! Pleeasse??? OOC: One quick question, which elvish language are ye usin'? Quenya or Sindarin? (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 21:51:19 08/11/03 Mon Thanks! Ok I'll write somemore! OOC: Mainly Quenya, a little of my own as well. (NT) -- Whiteye, 22:42:58 08/11/03 Mon Please do Whiteye! It's a great story. OOC: I see...I was wonderin' about that. Do you speak it fluently? (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 02:33:00 08/12/03 Tue Ok! Thanks, Tacroy! OOC: Yeah. I dont speak in fluently, but enough to get by. I use a dictionary now and then. And you? (NT) -- Whiteye, 22:39:06 08/12/03 Tue OOC: Same here, though I don't know Quenya, only Sindarin. I'm working on congegating the verbs, but it's really challenging. (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 23:22:18 08/12/03 Tue OOC: Boy do I ever know what you mean...Its a tough language, but I love it! (NT) -- Whiteye, 23:58:04 08/12/03 Tue OK Im sorry that this has to be so short, but I dont have much time. Here ya go -- Whiteye, 00:05:50 08/13/03 Wed wow....so suspensful! It's great!!! For a second there, I thought Jeniva was dead! I was like, "Nooo!!!! Not Jeniva!!!!!!!" Then, when I found out that she lived, I breathed a sigh of relief. :) OOC: It is a hard language to learn, but it's very rewarding. Do you have the Red Book? It helped me a lot. (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 01:36:18 08/13/03 Wed **grins** You like it? Great! You're extremely talented with your stories as well! Yeah, I liked Jeniva (and was going to make her dead, but as you will find out later, she's the last surviving changer in the Land.) OOC: No I don't, but if you recommend it I'll see what I can find (NT) -- Whiteye, 19:29:59 08/13/03 Wed OOC: yeah, it helps a lot with congegating the verbs and it gives you a list of nouns with their elvish translations. BIC: Thanks for the compliment, but I find that you're work is ten times better than mine :) That's good with Jeniva....I like her a lot! Keep writing!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!! (NT) -- Your humble admirer, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:58:22 08/14/03 Thu OOC: Kewl I'll have to check it out! Oh, by the way, IRL I'm blushing at your compliments BIC: Oh come on! My writing isn't THAT good. Yeah Jeniva is really neat. WAIT! I just got an idea for my story...**mischevious grin** Well, no time to write right now, but I will keep it up! (NT) -- Whiteye, 14:11:31 08/14/03 Thu Oh yes, your writing is wonderful! Look how many people think so!!! Yeah!!!!!! KEEP IT UP! KEEP IT UP! (NT) -- Your friend, Tacroy Bladefire, 19:03:40 08/14/03 Thu **blushes** Awwww you're so nice, Tacroy! I'll write right now! Inside (Tacroy this part you will love) -- Whiteye, 20:01:25 08/14/03 Thu BIC: Whiteye! You're so nice! I'm speechless.....Thank you! Thank you so much Whiteye! THANK YOU!!!!! You are such an excellent writer, it is an honor to have one of your characters named after me.....Thank you so much (NT) -- Your speechless, breathless, and extremely happy friend who waits eargerly for the next part, Tacroy Bladefire, 20:30:43 08/14/03 Thu **grins** I'm the one who's nice? Well I'm glad you're pleased. I am honored that I have such a persistent reader! I really am flattered by all of your compliments, and so I will write more! I hope you like the future for Tacroy which you will find out later **mischevious grin** Inside (Oh BTW, is your name pronounced Tack-roy or Tase-roy or what?) -- Whiteye, 01:04:23 08/15/03 Fri Heeeheee!! I burst out laughing when I read this. Whiteye, you have a wonderful gift because it takes quite a lot to make me laugh just as I did when I read this. heeheee....*Wipes away tears of mirth* This is excellent! MORE!!!!! OOC: It's Tack-roy, you got it right on first try! Really, Whiteye, I'm very honored that you named a character after me. Once again. Thank you and really, I was laughing very, very hard. (NT) -- Your fan, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:12:19 08/15/03 Fri (WOW! We're on at the same time!) BIC: Really? You liked it? Thanks so much! It feels great to have a fan. I'll write right away! OOC: Really, it was no problem. It was the least I could do for you (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:15:21 08/15/03 Fri OOC: BTW, do you have AIM? If so, I could talk to you there (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:19:45 08/15/03 Fri OOC: Well I have to go now, but I promise I will get more up soon! Tomorrow I should be able to. (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:25:41 08/15/03 Fri YEAH! TOMMAROW!!!! MORE TOMMAROW!!!! Keep it up Whiteye, your story is awsome! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 04:39:53 08/15/03 Fri Inside for next! (You are so sweet, Tacroy) -- Whiteye, 15:11:59 08/15/03 Fri Oh NOOOOO!!!! Not the Galen!!!!!!!! Oh the suspense Whiteye!!!!! I froze too when they heard the hoofbeats!! Keep going please!!! I beg of you, oh fabulous writer, indulge your humble fan with more! (NT) -- The suspense is killing me, master storyteller, please write more, your friend who wishes he could write as well as you, Tacroy Bladefire, 17:45:49 08/15/03 Fri **laughs** Awwwwww you're so so sweet, Tacroy! You can definatelly write as well as I can, if not better, so dont worry about it. Lol I promise to get more up soon, but I g2g. Thanks for the comments! (NT) -- The extremely pleased and blushing Whiteye, 21:08:39 08/15/03 Fri Now you're the one who's making me blush! You can write far better than I ever can/will and both you and I know it. It is an excellent story and I eargerly wait for more!!!! (NT) -- Blushing, Tacroy Bladefire, 23:46:02 08/15/03 Fri Oh, Tacroy! **grins shyly** Do you have AIM? That way I could talk to you about some idea's I had...If you do, my AIM s/n is WhiteyeDobieLuvr (NT) -- Whiteye, 15:39:52 08/16/03 Sat *shakes is head sadly* No, I don't have AIM....Unfortunately not.... (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 17:44:34 08/16/03 Sat **juts out her lower lip** Awwww...Well you can download it free from AIM.com...oh well. Anyways, I need to get more story up, dont I! (NT) -- Whiteye, 23:47:20 08/17/03 Sun I'll try to download it, but my computer's acting up so I don't know if I'll be succesful. And yes! You do need to write more! MORE!!!!! Heehee! I've been waiting on the edge of my seat for the next part!!!! Please, MORE!!!!! (NT) -- Your fan, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:02:23 08/18/03 Mon **laughs** I'll see what I can do, oh good and faithful fan. Maybe later today (NT) -- Whiteye, 19:49:52 08/18/03 Mon ok! Next inside (didnt I promise I would get some up today?) -- Whiteye, 23:26:16 08/18/03 Mon How could that bore me, Queen of Writers? That was excellent! But now, once again, I'm left waiting on the edge of my seat in anxiety! And once again, I beg you, Write MORE!!!! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 23:37:59 08/18/03 Mon **laughs** Well I hope I'm not using too cheesy action. I will write soon! Hey, anyone know how to move the messages over? (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:42:29 08/19/03 Tue Cheesy? No way!!!!! My writing uses cheesy action! Yours is above and beyond cheesy. It's more along the lines of...fabulous, wonderful, exciting, suspensful. And yes, anyone who could move this over,it would be greatly appreciated, because I haven't a clue how to do it! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 02:16:03 08/19/03 Tue Well I'm glad you enjoy it! Let me try something. I hope this works (NT) -- Whiteye, 13:21:49 08/19/03 Tue Did it work? .......I don't think so. Grrr, I really don't like it when this board does this. (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 19:15:47 08/19/03 Tue Grrrrrrr me too! I know it's not much (at ALL) , but here's the next part -- Whiteye, 20:11:37 08/19/03 Tue Yeah!!! Go Ferriff!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 20:40:56 08/19/03 Tue OH MY GOSH!!!! THAT ROX SO BAD!!!! I've been busy wid my site and other stuff, so I haven't been able to read stuff here, but I had some time FINALLY so I came here and saw you were writing something so.. But man, thix rox! It kicks butt! Your so talented Whiteye! I was reading the story as fast as I could cause I wanted to know what happened SO bad! Keep on writing! (NT) -- Shade, 05:06:28 08/27/03 Wed