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Subject: "Breeze smiles *good waiting for smome one to ask for more, chapter three and four in here!*


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BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 03:36:13 07/28/03 Mon
In reply to: Aliana/Demora/Skywing/Checkery 's message, "*Waits*" on 17:55:40 07/27/03 Sun

Chapter three “Dong-Ding

Ding walked into the kitchen. “Mmm, that smells lovely!” he thought to himself, and he looked around the kitchen. Cooks were everywhere! Some were making scones, and others bread cakes, pies, and so much more good smelling things. Ding spotted Anne at the stove making scones, and he walked up to her “may I have a scone, please ma’am?” he asked. Anne chuckled “well matey you don’t need to Ma’am! Everyone calls me Anne” Anne told Ding. “Okay then, can I please have a scone Anne?” he asked again. “Sure! You need a bit of fatting up!” she said, as she handed him two scones. “Thankee!” Ding said as he walked off, “Hmm, I wonder were that leads to” Ding thought, he walked towards the door, and peered inside. “Oh it’s the cellars!” he thought to himself happily as he walked down the stairs “I would love some of the October ale right!” he thought even more happily. Ding grabbed a beaker and walked down the stairs, and when he got to the bottom he walked up to a keg. “Hmm this one looks good” he said out loud, and looked at the name on top “is the October ale?” he asked himself “Oh well it looks good” and he opened the keg, and took a gulp. “Doesn’t taste like it, hmm but it taste very good!” he thought happily, and he drank ten more beakers full. “Woo! Why is the room spinning?” he thought, and he passed out on the floor. The keg read “Elderberry wine”
“Has anybeast seen Ding?” Anne asked, and she looked around. “Not sense you gave him the scones” Black Dirk told her, and shrugged. A hedgehog walked up “I saw him go down into the cellars” he said. “Well then Black Dirk we better go and check”. “Okay” Black Dirk said, and followed Anne to the cellars. The air was cool, musty smelling, and it was dark, Anne shivered and held her lantern higher. Black Dirk looked around, and spotted something, she walked down the stairs quickly. “Come here! I found him!” she yelled. Anne walked down the stairs. Ding was lying on the floor with a beaker in his hand, he had passed out. Anne walked up to him, and she splashed some water in his face. Ding started sputtering “Yes Poisenteeth” he said, and then he opened his eyes “Oh sorry, I had a bad dream” he told them. Anne rolled her eyes “What happened to you?” Anne asked. Black Dirk picked up the beaker “Elderberry wine” she told Anne. “How many beakers full did you have of this wine?” Anne asked. “Umm, ten” Ding said meekly “or twelve”. “TEN!” Anne yelled, “I’m surprised you ain’t ” Anne went one “or at the least drunk!” Ding burst into tears “All I ever wanted to do was be a good beast! Waaaaaaaaaa” he cried. Black Dirk rolled her eyes, she picked Ding (Dong) up and threw him over her shoulder “its nettle soup for you!” she told him “you have drunk yourself into a fit”. “Nettle soup?” He asked as he tried to get down “what’s that?” Black Dirk snickered and said “you’ll see” and she walked up the stairs. “I’m going to stay here and clean up” Anne told Black Dirk. “Alright see you soon” Black Dirk called after her.
“Hmm spooky” Anne thought as she wiped up the spilled wine. There was a loud crash behind her, and Anne turned around fast. And there floating in the darkness was a huge white ghost! Anne gasped, and the ghost talked “I’s da gweat dibbuns watchers! Ifs you wants ta liver longer then twee minutes, you must do what I’s sayer!” Anne rolled her eyes but went along with it, and she fell to her knees “Oh great dibbun watch, pretty please with chestnuts and meadow cream on top! Please spare my life!” she cried out tearfully! “Hee, heee, heee, heee, and hee hee! I’s not sure’s! you ave not’s givings anty candys to dibbuns waitly!” the dibbun watcher (Silverclaws) snickered evil “Spare this poor candy making otter!” Anne wailed “I will give dibbuns baths for the rest of there short and clean if you don’t stop now!” “Oh no da gig is up wun! Wot” Anne heard Penny yell. Silverclaws (in the new bed sheet) jumped off the barrel, and as he was jumping the sheet got stuck on a nail ripped and sent him tumbling to the ground. Anne ed Silverclaws up and said “Ha I got a hostage of war!” Anne yelled as she held the squirming Silverclaws in the air “And it’s the tub for him!” Silverclaws looked down at her and yelled, “DAB! DAB! DAB!”
“Not today!” Anne threw him in the bag and tied it up (so he could not get out) she looked at all the other dibbuns “Does any dibbun want to join him!” she yelled “BBBBAAAATTTTHHHHH TTTIIIMMMEE!” and with that she ran up the stairs, and locked the door.
Penny sat down on the floor “Well we lost one of are best soldiers! But I have a plan, come on to the secret passage way!” she yelled at all the dibbuns “DAB!” the yelled back, and they all followed her.

“What happened?” Black Dirk asked, “I was almost going to go down and get you”. “I wish you had I needed back up” Anne panted “but I got a hostage!” “What?” Black dirk asked, and Anne told her what happened. “Oh goody after that big fall I think he will need some nettle soup!” Black Dirk said well rubbing her hands together gleefully “but first the bath with lots and lots of sweet smelling soap, and clean fluffy towels!” “NOOOOOOO! DAB! DAB! DAB!” Silverclaws yelled. “Sorry its bath time for you, then you can spend the rest of the night with Ding in the Infantry!” Anne laughed, and they took him away!
“Meanwhile Penny, Fleeter, and Cori were thinking up an escape plan!”
Chapter four “WOMP! ! KABOOM”

Strongflow yawned and sat up “what a good sleep” he thought to himself. A little while later he walked out the door “Good morning Clover” he said as he saw the Redwall warrior “good morning to you!” she said, she was in a cotton tunic, and the sword strapped to her back. “Good morning Skipper, and good morning Clover” TearDrop said as she walked out of her room. Strongflow nodded and walked down the stairs, and he fell with a “BANG!” Clover laughed “Can’t you stay on your own two feet?” she asked, as she walked down the stairs, “Whooo!” she yelled as she started slipping. Clover grabbed onto the banister, and she fell with a “DONK!” she grabbed onto Strongflow, and they started falling down the stairs. TearDrop watched them with wide eyes, “Do you need any help?” she asked and stepped onto the stairs, and she started falling to! She hit them and they all went tumbling into the great hall! And they landed with a big “KERTHUNK!” and Strongflow kept sliding! He went strait into the kitchen and down the cellar stairs, as he hit the bottom he managed to grown “Dibbuns again!” before he blacked out! Now Clover when she got to the bottom went sliding off under the table, and hit it with a loud “CRASH!” as the table fell on her! TearDrop went spinning threw the great hall and into the door with a loud “BONK!” and she also blacked out with the rest of them…
“What happened?” asked Abbess Checkery, and Melina tugged on her habit “Mother vat append?” she asked in the most voice. “I’m not sure” the Abbess answered. A hedgehog walked onto the stairs, he hit the soap, and went flying! (I mean flying!) He landed on the floor in the great hall and slid of to some were with a loud “WOMP! KERTHONK BOOM!” The Abbess gasped “No one go near the stairs!” she yelled, but alas it was too late, and a fox went flying and landed on a rafter! Some dibbuns giggled, and Lilic Songbreaze came from the infantry with a mop and bucket “Okay you will all need grab a mop! Some beasts down there are hurt bad!” Lilic told them, and she started to mop up the soap. Some other beasts came and helped, and soon they had all the stairs cleared, Lilic walked into the great hall, and fell flat on her back she went spinning into the kitchen out the door and into the pond! They all watched her in ! Blackbark, Melina, and Purr could not stand it any longer! They grabbed some pieces of wood and went surfing style threw the great hall! And Melina went threw the kitchen and into the cellar with a great WOOOHOO!” and she landed on Strongflow!
Strongflow woke up I while later (with a terrible headache!) and he tried to move, but he hurt too much. Strongflow opened his eyes, TearDrop was beside him already awake and watching him. Strongflow blushed under her gaze. “Well that could have been worst” he told her. “Worst, I suppose it could of skipper, but you will be none too happy” she told him “your left arm and right leg are broken”. “Well you look alright”, he said. “My ankle is sprained, and Clover is still under the table” TearDrop said, and the tears were in her eyes “there a fox hanging from the rafters, Lilic is in the abbey pond, plus a hedgehog is gone!” she said. “Well doesn’t anybeast know were the hedgehog went to?” Strongflow asked, and he tried to get up. “And we found out who did it!” TearDrop went on “Blackbark, Melina, and Purr”. “Hmm what should we do with those three?” Strongflow asked. “Abbess Clover is sending them to Salamandastron!” TearDrop buried her head into her pillow and fell asleep…
“I found him!” A small mouse yelled, “He is here! Stuck in this barrel!” Abbess Checkery ran up with some beasts. “Okay get him out and into the infantry! The Abbess yelled, and some beasts came up and started to pull him out, Abbess Checkery walked over to were they were getting the table off Clover “How does it go?” she asked a hare. “Not to jolly well good marm” the hare told her “but we should have her out bally old soon, wot”. The Abbess smiled weekly, and walked over to the table, she started pulling piece of wood of, and a mouse walked up “Ma’am you should not be doing this, we can handle it fine” she told Checkery. “No, I have to help” Checkery told her, and she kept on pulling pieces of wood away. All the sudden Clover peered out of the wood, and soon wiggled out. “That was one old table” she sighed “Martins sword saved me” she sighed. “Thank goodness you are safe, others have not faired so well” the Abbess told her. “What happened” Clover asked. “Three dibbuns that happened” she told Clover. Clover turned around and saw the fox “Oh my!” she gasped. All the sudden a red squirrel vaulted up into the air using his staff, he landed on the rafter took the rope from his neck, and tied it around the fox he slowly lowered the limp fox down to the ground. Then Red Staff (for that was his name) untied the rope and jumped down. All the beasts clapped, and the fox was lead away. Abbess Checkery went up to him and shook his paw “Good job Red Staff” she said, “You deserve a reward! How about a pumpkin pie?” she asked. “Well that would be nice” Red Staff said modestly “but you know, I think we should have a feast, for everyone they all helped”. “Well if you won’t take a pie then take this” Clover said, and she pushed, a beautiful dagger into his hands. Checkery stared at her “where did you get that?” she asked. “It was stuck in the table” Clover explained. Red Staff held it up, the dagger was beautiful, the blade had no nicks in it, and the handle was leather bound and the it was set with Opals, Emeralds, and ruby’s. Red Staff stared at it. It felt like it had been made for him! “Thank you Clover” he said. “Your welcome Red Staff” Clover answered “I’m going to ask the cooks to start getting ready for the feast” and Clover walked off… "There you go!"

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