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Subject: It was good, but here's a little secret I use to increase the dramatic element when I write: Stop in the middle of a sentence so that it goes into the next line. If you don't get what I mean, read my poems, they're below yours somewhere. Peace.


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Date Posted: 01:17:20 08/01/03 Fri
In reply to: Winshen Riversong 's message, "This poem thingee is called what else, but Fire. Comments would be greatly appreciated to improve it. Thanks" on 00:36:29 08/01/03 Fri


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And put the initial word (In this case, "fire") at the end of the poem. (NT)Vienna Rose02:18:40 08/01/03 Fri
    Thanks for the comments. :) (NT)Winshen Riversong05:33:36 08/01/03 Fri


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