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Subject: Southpaw! I like, I like! Your wording and the mere flow of your lines as fab. In the second stanza, though, you might want to combine your lines three and four ^_^ and your might need a bit of punctuation. But otherwise, Thumbs up to you!


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Who else? Rettie. ^^;;
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Date Posted: 18:52:41 12/04/02 Wed
In reply to: Southpaw the pregnant poet 's message, "I`m gonna try my luck at poems.This ones a bit weird though (Sory about the double post.This is the right one)" on 14:12:46 12/04/02 Wed


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I like it it's very good did you use it in some sort of poem class thing (NT)Boromir00:25:17 12/05/02 Thu


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