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Subject: Re: Hiding Patty


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Date Posted: 14:25:23 04/14/14 Mon
In reply to: wexwiz543 's message, "Re: Hiding Patty" on 11:51:22 04/14/14 Mon

i can't be the only one who is posting this line

Debbie and a lot of other people organized a reception for her out at the Spearfish Lake Inn to welcome her

Not at the furniture store or is the comma in the wrong place.

The reception at the furniture store was organised at the spearfish lake inn.

Either way good first chapter

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