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Subject: Re: Revised "Runner's Moon" now available

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Henry Harrison

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Date Posted: 17:35:26 08/03/13 Sat
In reply to: Wes 's message, "Revised "Runner's Moon" now available" on 19:10:27 07/27/13 Sat

>This completes the revisions of the oldest books, a
>project that's seriously been under way for about
>three years. These were first posted without outside
>editing, and you can sure see the difference in the
>revised versions!

Hi Wes
Have just been re-reading Busted Axle Road and Runner's Moon, almost enjoyed them more than the first time! One little niggle in the former, that you might like to correct (I know, you've just finished re-edits, so I'm a real PITA.)
Chapter 14: Josh and Amy are doing CPR on Ed, and the crew arrive, and set out to use the defibrillator. I'm hospital trained in CPR, and to the best of my knowledge when applying the shock to re-start the heart (or stop arrhythmia), everyone needs to "stand clear" so Josh should/would not be feeling Ed's body buck under him. See here for reference: http://www.wikihow.com/Use-a-Defibrillator
Not a standard edit problem I guess.

Cheers
Henry

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Wes
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Date Posted: 00:30:08 08/04/13 Sun

I'm sure you're right on that and other people have drawn it to my attention. The funny thing about it is that when I first wrote that scene -- a long time ago, close to twenty years -- I had a paramedic go over it to check how correct I was. I don't remember him saying anything about standing clear. What can you say but "oh, well . . ."

Thanks for pointing it out!

-- Wes
>
>Hi Wes
>Have just been re-reading Busted Axle Road and
>Runner's Moon, almost enjoyed them more than the first
>time! One little niggle in the former, that you might
>like to correct (I know, you've just finished
>re-edits, so I'm a real PITA.)
>Chapter 14: Josh and Amy are doing CPR on Ed, and the
>crew arrive, and set out to use the defibrillator. I'm
>hospital trained in CPR, and to the best of my
>knowledge when applying the shock to re-start the
>heart (or stop arrhythmia), everyone needs to "stand
>clear" so Josh should/would not be feeling Ed's body
>buck under him. See here for reference: rel=nofollow target=_blank >rel=nofollow target=_blank
>href="http://www.wikihow.com/Use-a-Defibrillator">http:
>//www.wikihow.com/Use-a-Defibrillator
>Not a standard edit problem I guess.
>
>Cheers
>Henry