| Subject: HERE IT IS "CHAPTER ONE!" |
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Date Posted: 03:54:33 07/23/03 Wed
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Breeze
's message, "Breeze walks in "Hello chaps!" she smiles and pulls a book from her bag, Breeze settles down and begans to write" on 00:09:14 07/22/03 Tue
Chapter one ”Ding-Dong”
the Rat knocked on the door, he was disguised as a simple woodland dweller, and the hood shaded his face from the hot summer sun. He waited, and then the door opened. A strong looking otter stepped out “Hello matey, the name Strongflow, what do you want?” Strongflow asked, the rat answered “Only a place to rest my head, and some food in my tummy” the rat said in a dry tone “the names Ding”. Strongflow looked him up and down “Hmm, let me go talk to Lancepaw” Strongflow turned around and walked back into the fort. Ding waited, of course his name wasn’t really Ding, he snorted Ding! What a dum name his real name was the best “Cluny!” after the great rat king “Cluny the scourge” his hero… Until the Redwallers went and squashed him under a bell, Cluny snorted again “Poor Cluny!” Cluny thought (or should we call him Ding?)
“Well that was them and this was now” Ding chuckled to himself, “these beasts are going to be so easy!” he thought “all I will have to do is threatened to kill a dibbun” Ding looked up quickly as Strongflow walked out of the fort. “Lancepaw said you can come in Ding, as long as you leave all your weapons here” Strongflow told him. Ding shrugged “I got nothing against that” Ding told him as he rubbed his belly “Is their food?” Strongflow laughed “Yes matey there is food, Cheekyanne makes the best hotroot soup!” Strongflow told him, Ding smiled “Good, I’m awful hungry matey” he told the otter. Strongflow smiled and lead him into the fort, after he had dropped his weapon…
“Tree, ten, fifty, five, six, ate, one, seven! Ready or not here I come!” Penny yelled. Penny glanced left and right, she saw a pair of paws sticking out from odd-looking tapestry. Penny ran up to it and yelled “tree, nine, ten, on Opal!” “Oh dibbun!” Opal said “hov come you alvays get me first?” Opal asked. “well you need to jolly well hide better! Wot” Penny told her. “Vell you cheat!” Opal yelled, and Penny froze “I do not!” Penny yelled back, then she stopped as the door opened, Strongflow walked in with rat following him, Penny ran up to him. Opal made a mean face. “Hello Strong, and Hello mister ratty!” she said. “My name is Ding! Not ratty, and I’m a mouse” Ding told her. Penny nodded her head gravely “Alright mister Ding-Dong!” she giggled, Ding glared at her “the names Ding!” he said meanly. “Stop! Penny run ahead and tell Cheekyanne to get us some soup” Strongflow told Penny, and Opal ran up “I vill elp to!” she told Strongflow “alright now go on!” Penny and Opal ran to the kitchen “Anne we need two bowls of hotroot soup!” Penny told her “Alright!” Anne answered as she poured two bowls of soup “keep the bugs off of it well I go and get some cider” Anne told them, and she left. Opal looked at the hotroot and snickered evilly…
“And this is the kitchen” Strongflow told Ding. Cheekyanne walked up, and shook Dings hand “Hello Ding! The names Anne, and your food is on the table” she told Ding. “Thank you” Ding answered. Ding and Strongflow sat down, Penny set Dings bowl of hotroot soup before him, and Opal did the same for Strongflow. “Thankee” Strongflow said after he took a sip of his cider. Ding didn’t say anything he just picked up his bowl and began to slurp it down! Ding took a Slurp, and tears came to his eyes he started to gulp down his cider, tears now pouring down his face! Strongflow looked up from his soup “what’s wrong?” he asked. “The soup!” Ding gasped out. Strongflow heard a giggle from behind him. “Anne hurry and get some water!” he yelled at Anne, she came with two beakers. Anne handed one filled with water to Ding (who still had tears running down his cheeks) Ding gulped down the water, “More!” he told them, Anne handed him the second beaker full of milk, and he pushed it away. “No you need to drink this!” she told him, and he took it and drank all the milk. “Wonder what was wrong with the soup?” Strongflow asked, he picked up a spoon and took a sip, “WOW!” he yelled and grabbed his cider, and he drank it in one gulp. “Is this what you call good?” Ding (who was feeling better) asked. “No that is not what we call good” Strongflow told him “that is what I called poisoned by two dibbuns!” “You mean I’m going to die!” Ding yelled. “NO! I mean that Penny and Opal added some hotroot into it!” Strongflow told him “Its alright know one is going to die, now Ding you stay her and Anne will get you some good food” Strongflow told him then he walked off muttering “those dibbuns are going to get it!”
Penny and Opal ran into the dibbun den giggling. Fleeter walked up “what’s so funny?” she asked. Penny fell over laughing “what we did!” Opal giggled out. Silverclaws walked up “What did you do?” he asked. “Well we were battling horrible monsters in the great hall! Then in walked Strongflow with a rat beside him, Penny ran up to him and growled “mister ratty do you want me to eat you! Or are you going to get out of this fort!” than the rat answered “I’m not a rat, I’m a mouse! And my name is Ding-Dong!” so Strongflow told us “You are so good guarding the hall! Now go and get us some food!” so we went to the kitchen, and Anne was there! And she said, “boo woo! I can’t make any soup for them! I don’t know how!” so we told her “we can make soup, you just go down to the cellar and get some cider” so that is what she did, okay so we made the soup! And we add ten scoops of hotroot to Ding-Dong’s bowl, so they came into eat, and we gave them there bowls! And when Ding-Dong took one sip he turned into a horrible monster! And we had to battle him, just to get back here!” Penny told them, in a spooky voice! Silverclaws looked at them and fell over laughing. Singe a dibbun walked in “I thought we were playing hide and go peek! Penny you never found us!” he said. Fleeter looked at them “Battling monsters?” she said. Just then the door burst open! And in came a… GHOST! It was horrible, all white and big as a door! And he was trying to get Penny and Opal!
“HELP!” Penny screamed, as the ghost grabbed her! “Attack!” Fleeter yelled. Opal and all the other dibbuns ran and jumped on the ghost! They started punching him! (Every dibbun except Silverclaws who was still laughing!)
The ghost started yelling, “I give up! Don’t kill me; by now the ghost was on the ground with all the dibbuns sitting on it. Opal walked up to the ghost “Why should we?” “Because if you don’t let me go I will do this!” the ghost yelled, he jumped up (all the dibbuns still on him!) and stripped the blanket off him! And! It was Strongflow! Penny walked up “Get him” she told all the dibbuns, and they jumped on him and wrestled him back to the ground! Penny walked back and fourth in front of him “Hmm, you were very bad! Now we have to punish you!” Penny told him “Fleeter! Tell him what the punishment is!” Fleeter walked up, and she glared at him “the punishment is…. Fleeter never got anytime to finish, at that moment Strongflow leaped up and ran out the door (all the dibbuns fell of him and into a pile on the floor) “Ha! Got away from you this time!” Strongflow yelled at them, and Fleeter sighed “And I thought up a good one this time!”
Hope you like it!!!!
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