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Date Posted: 21:31:02 02/11/04 Wed
Author: Prateek Srivastava
Subject: Re: Respond Please
In reply to: CCS 's message, "Re: Respond Please" on 02:28:25 02/11/04 Wed

Hey thanks for all your comments everyone. This will help with my writing skills. For CCS, I think that just for your benefit, you might want to read the rest. Your points are correct, I really do not develop any real identity for the characters. But the events do heighten. The scenes are of the father's interest in the new generation of music, and the constant torture are parents put us through. The end of 2nd and third part, is little Preeti's adventures when she inadvertantly winds up on a pornography site. You might like to read that part. I even tackle SNL constant's issues. It is up to you if you want to read it.

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