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Date Posted: 01:39:44 05/21/06 Sun
Author: Matteo
Subject: An SNY Digital Short: The Mannequin by Mark Jennings Reese II
In reply to: Patrick Lonergan 's message, "REVIEWS: Kevin Spacey 05/20/06" on 17:45:07 05/20/06 Sat

Well, Mark has done it again! I was ready to roast him, but this was pretty good! You are getting a lot better with your descriptives and subtle humour! Subtle humour such as showing the mannequin looking put off (vacant look) after having the shirt removed.
I like how you wrote "as fast as he can" when he was running, instead of just "he runs away", because it implies terror, and seems funny that he's terrified by a mannequin.
The funniest part was having the two black guys on the bridge, as if they thought he was terrified of them. It was funny how he exclaimed it was the mannequin. Also, I think you picked the right cast member for the part. And I liked how you thought like a director - how you cut from one thing to another. It was easy to visualize. Overall, a simple, charming and funny sketch. 7 out of 10, which means it was funny.

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  • Answering Machine by Jason Dignard -- Matteo, 02:13:03 05/21/06 Sun
  • Appreciate the reviews, Matteo -- Jim Bevan, 17:27:10 05/22/06 Mon
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