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Date Posted: 13:27:16 02/20/04 Fri
Author: Me
Subject: Re: Suggestions to take your writing to a higher level
In reply to: Me 's message, "Re: Suggestions to take your writing to a higher level" on 13:20:16 02/20/04 Fri

One of my favourite descriptions from my own sketches (funeral home grief seminar) is as follows;

[ Focus on Male Usher standing in the corner, apparently bothered by the sobbing. He looks away in disgust ]

[ Focus on "The Corner Cackler" standing in the opposite corner, a "shadowy" corner. He gives the Male Usher a "look" as if to behave ]

[ Male Usher bugs his eyes out at him ]

And this part to;

[ Male Usher looks down while scratching his forehead. He looks up to reveal he's even more agitated. He looks at The Corner Cackler, who shrugs his shoulders and laughs silently. Male Usher shows him his fist and makes an angry face ]

Now, I'm not perfect with descriptions either, but I have made the decision to atleast be aware of the physical aspect part, and try to incorporate it. And that's where it starts.

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