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Date Posted: 00:45:03 05/21/06 Sun
Author: Matteo
Subject: The People's Court by Justin Kaplowitz
In reply to: Patrick Lonergan 's message, "REVIEWS: Kevin Spacey 05/20/06" on 17:45:07 05/20/06 Sat

I didn't like the idea. I just don't think it is funny. The idea that the Leprechaun put a spell on the rabbit so he could only eat one kind of food is lame, and it happens to be the rabbits cereal. I don't like how the story gets there either (Rabbit bragging in drunkeness about how great he is). I also don't like the idea that he must get stomach surgeries to ward off hunger. To me, these ideas just don't strike me as funny or creative.
I thought there were very few funny lines throughout. The part where the rabbit is drunk on video was a missed oppurtunity. By his lines, the rabbit doesn't even seem drunk. He doesn't really say anything stupid. When he's confronted by the Leprechaun, he should just stare at him for a while, in a drunk stupor, then stammer out some stupid comeback that makes no sense.
I found the tension between the judge and bailiff to be without laughs.
Unfunny lines;
-Jimmy carter
-Irish Temper - unoriginal

Funniest line;
-I made all this money for General Mills and all I got was this lousy T-shirt

I did a second read through and there really wasn't very many funny moments. It just didn't work. 3.5 out of 10.

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