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Date Posted: 16:19:41 03/09/03 Sun
Author: SKORP-I...
Author Host/IP: cache-dm07.proxy.aol.com / 205.188.209.75
Subject: this is nice... content... very smooth flow... relaxed... not too simple... not too complex.... Very nice. I agree with Versetyle on the ending... but I'm no good with ending MY verses so... no complaints there... HOLLA!
In reply to: Eternal Student 's message, " Shedding light so those can relate to my life OK this isn't quite finished BUT have a look and see what you think... I appreciate EVERYONEs' CRIT......PeAcE" on 13:07:21 03/09/03 Sun


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  • Basically i agree with them but i dont think the ending woulda bothered me if they hadnt pointed it out.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:57:05 03/09/03 Sun




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