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give me sum responses -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 15:55:54 03/06/03 Thu
- the only person who can "BEAT" me is "MYSELF".... hahahahahaha I took it in a wrong way man... ok rhyme but mad misspelled words... keep postin (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 16:23:07 03/06/03 Thu
- this was funny, i like spits that make me laugh. (NT) -- nemesis, 16:49:18 03/06/03 Thu
- This was good....a little funny...but not too funny....You need to keep posting and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:07:42 03/06/03 Thu
- This is hiphop save the comedy shit for Chris Rock (NT) -- dlaster, 17:07:47 03/06/03 Thu
- back at ya -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:27:27 03/06/03 Thu
- yea...this was kidna funny in parts...but ya need some elevation...keep writin and stay up kidd. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:36:45 03/06/03 Thu
- lol "ill rap circles around you?" that was pretty kew...but your Bars are still comin in STRIAGHT LINES haha (NT) -- NoFlow, 21:39:34 03/06/03 Thu
Repost!..."The Wonders of Meaning".......this kinda got slept on last time. -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:21:37 03/06/03 Thu
long -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:37:02 03/06/03 Thu
Yeah this was long but it keep my attention alllllllll the way through ...keep it up...this is some good shit.. (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:11:31 03/06/03 Thu
this was real long but pretty nice....i like tha line about watchin tha world spinnin outta your control.nice work. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:36:13 03/06/03 Thu
Check dissout an tell me what da deal wit it -- chromenine, 08:45:17 03/06/03 Thu
maybe its just the way im readin it but , it didnt even rhyme (NT) -- nemesis, 13:35:23 03/06/03 Thu
Only 15 syllables?....Try 37.....Anyway, you used slant-rhyme in this...so I'll give you credit for that....The content is a little played out....Talking about how ill you are or how long you've been rhyming is just plain annoying now these days....But keep doing you and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š....., 15:57:59 03/06/03 Thu
wad up....... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 17:03:52 03/06/03 Thu
huh???? -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:32:14 03/06/03 Thu
yeah, so this is for new mc's so yall peep -- nemesis, 13:56:40 03/06/03 Thu
Ok, I understand. It. was pretty good. -- Lil' Lucky, 14:33:08 03/06/03 Thu
yo this was a kind of reputicious kind of rhyme.. did not like it.... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:29:04 03/06/03 Thu
The message is very appealing...but your way of showcasing isn't too appealing though....Maybe, try a different rhyme pattern rather than a different rhyme scheme.....Keep doing you and stay up..... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:53:22 03/06/03 Thu
wad up...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 16:58:56 03/06/03 Thu
hummm -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:29:44 03/06/03 Thu
Key-styles for the child- in the back screaming for Path to come back like Ivy-throw-backs- I tackle rats in alleys till cats appluad and squad up like AML when I spit the martial LAW - with high-hats snares bass-drops and kicks- I'm iller then you when you bed-ridden puking up shit.. word, check the stance I rock the M.I.C's like I was born with it in my hands! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:45:50 03/05/03 Wed
Bars 16 -26 were my fav, you've been busy yo. Flow was nice through the majority of it and ya vocab and word connection, shit I don't have ta say anything that shit speaks ill by itself. I didn't like the line about dealing powder. Thats just me, and that was the only thing I didn't like well done you are soaring over heads lately. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:16:45 03/05/03 Wed
nice mang... -- virt, 19:15:57 03/05/03 Wed
you always drop hot shit (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:55:03 03/05/03 Wed
this was packed wit imagery and all that shit but bein honest, i had a hard time catchin tha scheme.pretty ill drop tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 22:08:19 03/05/03 Wed
damn man been a MINUTE since i been in here...but yo man, this was very refreshing, damn man your flow is crazy...vocab....very nice use of words man....u kno the deal...i liked the line about "A trained vet who TRAINED vets to be ill..." very true man...nice piece...i need ta stop by more often, stay up man, oNe (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE.....O.M.N.I.... Im out there somewhere, 01:33:51 03/06/03 Thu
this had all the vocab and what nots in this piece you dropped.. this was a master piece in my view.. nice structure as well... stay up! (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:46:21 03/06/03 Thu
KEYSTYLE -- BaZiC BaRz, 21:48:50 03/05/03 Wed
YO MY REPLY IS ONE MORE UP!!! TO THIS WEAK SHIT -- DAT NIGGA YoUnG, 23:46:59 03/05/03 Wed
This was alright, keep at it though......peace (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:40:48 03/06/03 Thu
long but short (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:25:38 03/06/03 Thu
nice drop but the rhyme was kinda short... how come? make it longer next time... aiight (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:40:28 03/06/03 Thu
If ya'll sleepin on this your ass must be narcoleptic/ I hope you dreams are filled with gases that refelect a septic -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:33:13 03/06/03 Thu
This was pretty GOOd, i was on the flow contrast, nice drop it was pretty ill (NT) -- Noflow NNB ...NOFLOW NOW BACK, 01:36:28 03/06/03 Thu
ive never seen you here, yet again i havnt been here for a while...but this was iight yo, you show alot of potential man, keep workin on your rhyme scheme and your topics, try uppin your vocab so you can expand your thoughts...but this was cool yo, stay up, one (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE O.M.N.I., 01:37:06 03/06/03 Thu
pretty ill -- chromenine, 08:18:37 03/06/03 Thu
long as a mo fo (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:24:23 03/06/03 Thu
tight shit! (NT) -- nemesis, 13:44:05 03/06/03 Thu
somethin new -- c-dawg, 13:11:08 03/04/03 Tue
not that bad of a flow.one (NT) -- a.k., 11:20:29 03/05/03 Wed
ya dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 09:13:47 03/06/03 Thu
ide do anythang -- Lil' Jay, 20:41:08 03/05/03 Wed
interestin approach to old topics but try and use more substance and elevate. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 21:54:03 03/05/03 Wed
ice ice ice,...yada yada yada...u can flow....but u need newer topics...n concepts to stay round here...otherwise cats'll run u out....word of advice...change your name too many lil's in the game (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 22:12:47 03/05/03 Wed
Tight flow man. You straight ballin. Much respect, cause you better than me. (NT) -- Lil' Lucky, 00:23:51 03/06/03 Thu
THanx Dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:13:35 03/06/03 Thu
This is a prime example of what a lot of that watered, down non lyrical, Platnum and Ice bullshit results in doing to a young mind ladies and gentlemen (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:47:07 03/06/03 Thu
YOU FUCKING SUCK (NT) -- Lil G, 08:20:11 03/06/03 Thu
Street Life -- Lil' Jay, 13:25:13 03/05/03 Wed
No Comment, but were you from Jay. -- Lil' Lucky, 14:28:53 03/05/03 Wed
this was the best post I've seen from you... elevate (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:33:44 03/05/03 Wed
I'm sorry, usually I don't stay attentive to the rhythm of agitated-rhymes....sorry, keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:39:41 03/05/03 Wed
this could be cool if you thought harder.. about what you was saying.. just simple.. the style is tired, try harder man I see you can talk so be intelligent! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:55:25 03/05/03 Wed
did u call urself a 2 time loser in ur rhyme?...well...sounds about right...damn yo..u needa elevate...set ur computer up in da attic..maybe that'll help..peace out ralph wiggum (NT) -- DiAtRiBe...feels sorry for springfield, 18:21:54 03/05/03 Wed
Weedolution- this is a true rendition of history -- gollum, 02:00:55 03/05/03 Wed
Interesting.. But tell me this, if the US is so evil for killing off ecosystems that grew it, why are you supporting it by smoking it? Aint that "HIPHOPCRACY" as you say? Guess you bought the "propergander".. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:42:42 03/05/03 Wed
This was alright, the flow was real weak though. I know its hard to throw facts into a rhyme scheme and make the shit go together. I like the fact that you did try to drop some knowledge though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:16:26 03/05/03 Wed
My styles off-the hook while you get booked from being wack- spitting all shook- I leave hooks deep as Barnacles- and tabernacles underneath Atlantis- writing shit ill as cancerous managements planned to bomb shit like Arabian knights after Wu tipped the the Iron Flag, my lines smack your dad have him warning YOU not to fuck with Path! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:24:10 03/05/03 Wed
this was a dope post... I've seen better from you but this was good as other post's.... and no disrespect but that redfont color got's to go... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:45:47 03/05/03 Wed
I dont like red either.. it's just when I post in blue.. it gets even more irritating to the eyes.. for me anyways.. thanks for peeping.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 13:09:47 03/05/03 Wed
Yep, I'm lovin' it.....tHe hŢ-ř-tHetĄcál/|_ u m Ą ń a r i Ł .....We make a great team....Don't we?....HAHAHA....Keep this up....Your word usage and rhetoric is something that's not to be overlooked....Keep this up and stay up.....Oh yeah, what's this "theory" boggling your mind?... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:44:41 03/05/03 Wed
yeah we gotta start reppin' that and making more collaborations.. "HYPOTHETICAL LUMINARIES!" Just the name should send chills up the living cadaver.. lmao.. when my e-mails back up I'll get at you.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:54:31 03/05/03 Wed
This was mad ill son, i liked this not the other style ya dig? The part about hitn chests so hard ya nipples touch was fresh. Nice wordplay on allot bars too, nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:06:21 03/05/03 Wed
Once you get your shit back together we oughta do more audio collabos.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:24:23 03/05/03 Wed
word.. do you got a cool-edit crack...? or a web-address where I can find it.?. (NT) -- Path, 18:52:47 03/05/03 Wed
Dope shit...loved the word usage and everything else...um, try this link inside if you want -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:41:03 03/05/03 Wed
new to the lounge and i'm bout to make an impact -- ONSLAUGHT, 15:38:42 03/05/03 Wed
I agree about the "rapping about girls in the club"....That's played out.....and so is your rhyme style....Sorry, but it's true....It's DAMN true!!!....Try concentrating on bringing your rhyme out in a way that it's different (content-wise) from anybody else....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:23:25 03/05/03 Wed
hit em in the face with my elbow.. made me laugh.. um this was iight.. but yall should put more time into it if you want better feed back.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:46 03/05/03 Wed
real dope but i rap bout clubs and hoes and all that real good tho (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:50:22 03/05/03 Wed
Run Tun Tun (That best explains this keystyle cause even I don't know what the fuck I'm talking about!!!!) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:16:41 03/04/03 Tue
"It's like a freedom fight under cerebral heated lights..." THAT LINE DID IT FOR ME...I LIKED THIS...KEEP UPPIN... (NT) -- A dollar ten, 00:40:55 03/05/03 Wed
average..why not think up a more original topic...why do mcs always talk about themselves?some nice lyrical flow though (NT) -- gollum, 02:04:14 03/05/03 Wed
Dope.. The flow was on-point, your best flowing piece for sure.. Yeah kinda did lack direction, but these days thats what im into anyways.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:45:45 03/05/03 Wed
Yah, there was no direction but dope as hell. Flow was nice and ya vocab slid in nicely in allot of spots. I agree, the freedom fight under cerebral heated lights was deep nice key, Once again.. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 17:57:12 03/05/03 Wed
Audio --- 4 Man Collaboration ME, E-Klips, Abz & MC Spit Fire I dont know the other emcees and what they like but Im the FIRST emcee PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:41:03 03/03/03 Mon
sorry cant peep audios in school.... sure this was dope as hell... peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:59:18 03/03/03 Mon
Man...shyt shouldn be slept on.....feeln the beat....ya accent aint bad....sounds good...way better then sum other cats from the uk i heard on the net...other cats came nice as well...but im likin it...keep doin u Eternal nice...1ne (NT) -- Lucian0, 16:59:35 03/03/03 Mon
Eternal, your verbalistics are outstanding...keep that up...E-Klips sounded like he just woke up...I'm sorry for peeping this so late...Abz had the most energy though....MC Spit Fire's voice box is dope......All around, everybody came with theirs....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:05:48 03/05/03 Wed
Main Loop Presents --- Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 6: "Tunnel Vision"...Missed the last 5? Betta' ask somebody! -- ===||Swords--->, 03:37:11 03/05/03 Wed
nice dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:16:28 03/05/03 Wed
Kind of mellow laid back type beat. For some reason I feel that trumpets or horns in some arrangement would go with that bassline......oh well, Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:37:42 03/05/03 Wed
Yeah, I ENJOYED this!!!.....This is something I can picture Eyedea rhyming over...especially over the part where the beat changed...It started to remind me of the feeling that overwhelmed me when I had my out-of-body experience years ago....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:59:10 03/05/03 Wed
New audio ...beat by Swords....Unfinished Product....it's called that because basically it's not fished forreal...I just wanted some honest criticism on it..before I went back and started changing shit..ya know..One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3...Oh yeah To the MOD I'll be back with my replies I gotta run, 11:10:12 03/05/03 Wed
wasn't really feeling this one.. I didn't think I would say that either.. the beat could have been killed way harder then that.. but you did say it was unfinished.. so I check back with you on the finished product peace! "SWORDS THAT BEAT IS ILL!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:36:26 03/05/03 Wed
No offense...but the beat reminded me of those Blaxploitation films from the '70s...Your voice seems inanimated a little....Then again, I have yet to drop an audio...besides you have other audios that I haven't had the chance to peep either...so, I'm going to give credit....when credit's due...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:52:35 03/05/03 Wed
u suck -- BTB, 12:51:28 03/05/03 Wed
fool..YOU suck..wtf is this?? ."u use penis pumps bang do u want me talk chinese ching chang"...go drink some nyquil and go to sleep or just run in warmup suits like martin lawrence and pass out..do something else with ur time ...like seriously.. (NT) -- how do wheel chair kids play arcade games??, 13:05:57 03/05/03 Wed
man give me crack.. I mean give the registered crack for Cool edit pro.. and wheelchair kids play vidio games in the arcade by bring they school books and a extra pillow.. but they gotta put they brakes on so they don't slide-back when the getting amped.. lol.. get at me! not through the mail right now.. lol (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" The devil has taken away his address so I can't recieve mail no more.. what the fuck!, 13:16:17 03/05/03 Wed
i told ya SET gave me the crack..and i have a 56k..sending files takes ALL day..lol..cant help ya there ...damn..and i was bout to ask for a damn audio collab.but ur azz dont even got cool edit lmao!.. (NT) -- lol@way wheelchair kids play arcade games..i hate when they go to the movies..getting the aisle..and its dark and u cant see and u trip over dem and shyt, 14:09:25 03/05/03 Wed
fuck outta here before I muder you... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:23:57 03/05/03 Wed
wheel chairs kids taking the whole aisle... it's dark and you trip over them and shit... hahahahahahahaahahahah!!!! damn thats funny (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:39:19 03/05/03 Wed
LMFAOOO@u use penis pumps bang do u want me talk chinese ching changHOW DA FUK DOES DAT EVEN MAKE SENSE?!?!? hold up..lemme read it again...LMAOO..oh shyt yo..go hang urself with ur underwear and for da sake of ur family..don't leave a suicide note cuz you'll fuk dat up too..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe.., 16:12:31 03/05/03 Wed
damn.... just wanted to start a cypher..... read and reply -- the dark spitter, 13:20:39 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:28:02 03/05/03 Wed
you fuckin fagot.... why is your reply here three times?... your soposed to add to the cypher or get the fuck out bitch (NT) -- the dark spitter, 14:27:45 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style -- Lil' Jay, 13:29:19 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style -- Lil' Jay, 13:30:28 03/05/03 Wed
not to bad. i didn't like it that much though. you just kinda threw this one down really quick huh? (NT) -- Digits, 15:42:14 03/05/03 Wed
My Fate? -- Digits, 12:07:44 03/05/03 Wed
I put a little more thought into this one. Tell me what you think. (NT) -- Digits, 12:22:37 03/05/03 Wed
I liked the part about you looking up and bullets wiz over- your head.. that had a nice feel to it. the rest was decent.. pretty good drop keep it up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:27:15 03/05/03 Wed
agree with path... I think your elevating now... but keep it up and well see... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:49:28 03/05/03 Wed
real dope shit dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:33:17 03/05/03 Wed
love the end.that was some dope shit .stay up (NT) -- a.k., 15:40:26 03/05/03 Wed
pimpin -- Lil' Jay, 08:15:08 03/05/03 Wed
fowin was nice.stay up pimp (NT) -- a.k., 08:24:58 03/05/03 Wed
Delete this please. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:27:31 03/05/03 Wed
After long two seconds of contemplating I agree this should be deleted (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:28:58 03/05/03 Wed
not bad at all. i dont think it should be deleted. (NT) -- Digits, 12:18:36 03/05/03 Wed
uhhhh.... I think "LIL JAY" is a "LIL GAY".... delete this piece of shit because it just wastes threds (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:58:32 03/05/03 Wed
yall hatin cause u aint pimpin so shut up. Dark spitter is tha one on the queer side. (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:16:52 03/05/03 Wed
Ok, umm. It was good, but, I cant find the word im looking for. Help me out here. (NT) -- Lil' Lucky, 14:42:21 03/05/03 Wed
Yo... I wrote this piece last night... its called "street mentalities"... peep and criticize -- the dark spitter, 13:19:28 03/03/03 Mon
Got audio capabilities? cuz it would sound dope.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:47:56 03/03/03 Mon
i liked it. i've liked some of your other stuff better but this was still off the chain. stay up (NT) -- a.k., 14:35:13 03/03/03 Mon
this would def make a nice track, it's got all those live vocal elements! nice,1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 14:48:24 03/03/03 Mon
that was actually a really good rap there you got a flow (NT) -- Lil G, 11:46:45 03/04/03 Tue
Coo -- Elite one ~The Los Angeles Street Team~, 14:05:20 03/05/03 Wed
some new stuff -- a.k., 11:06:52 03/05/03 Wed
keep writn (NT) -- c-dawg, 11:17:55 03/05/03 Wed
Do what I told the guy above you to do (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:25:12 03/05/03 Wed
not too bad (NT) -- Digits, 12:16:24 03/05/03 Wed
keep it gangsta dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:36:01 03/05/03 Wed
inside -- c-dawg, 11:09:55 03/05/03 Wed
your best post by far.liked the second stanza.stay up and keep postin (NT) -- a.k., 11:16:25 03/05/03 Wed
Practice...Practice...Practice...Practice...Practice (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:21:44 03/05/03 Wed
i liked it. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 12:12:38 03/05/03 Wed
Was this a drunken freestyle you decided to post up? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:39:26 03/05/03 Wed
this shit was going no where... very weak format and shorter then pee-wee hermans dick in trousers... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:54:35 03/05/03 Wed
Be ready -- D-Formed, 16:03:33 03/04/03 Tue
fuck you. who the fuck cares about your lame ass fuckin posts. Fuck you and all those other wack ass wanna be rappers. Much respect to those holdin down on the lounge. these motherfuckers are embarrassing.FUCKIN DIE AND ROT (NT) -- G.O.D (SORRY YOU FUCKERS WERE BORN), 16:18:22 03/04/03 Tue
The anticipation is killin me.........Like the grinch's echo in the movie You're an Idiot. Yeah I did watch The live action version of the grinch who stole Christmas..... WHAT! (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:20:52 03/04/03 Tue
you have a favorite "day" rhyme? i'll mark my calendar. (NT) -- A dollar ten, 00:42:49 03/05/03 Wed
??????? (NT) -- gollum, 02:07:50 03/05/03 Wed
<---My thoughts on this (NT) -- ===||Swords---> Favorite day rhyme? does he have a favorite "night" rhyme?, 03:47:38 03/05/03 Wed
can't wait till the shit drops (NT) -- a.k., 10:42:16 03/05/03 Wed
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LOL That's all i gotta say.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:12:39 03/05/03 Wed
not bad, but you r trying to profit from this???? (NT) -- gollum, 02:06:25 03/05/03 Wed
D-ILLUSIONAL IS REALLY CONFINED TO A WHEEL CHAIR? (NT) -- CURIOUS GEORGE, 03:30:09 03/05/03 Wed
fuk u talking bout you midget monkey...wanna dance for quarters or something with lil doorman hats on??...spell the name right at least.. (NT) -- and no i aint confined to be on a wheelchair..., 08:00:32 03/05/03 Wed
what the fuck main. thatr was straight bumb as fuck (NT) -- a.k., 08:18:21 03/05/03 Wed
not to good keep trying (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:19:29 03/05/03 Wed
Well all that extra shit at the bottom wasn't really necessary. You showed you could associate words nicely in the rhyme, but it wasn't very impressive. It seems like you were rambling on about nothing. I think if you focus on what you're writing about you'll come up with something (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:32:58 03/05/03 Wed
diss -- a.k., 14:31:48 02/28/03 Fri
Dark Spitter -- Lil' Lucky, 14:59:10 02/28/03 Fri
what the hell is this? your really getting a bad reputation.. quit wastin thred fag (NT) -- the spitter aka tired of weak emcees+, 15:00:03 02/28/03 Fri
if this is effort than find a new outlet for your uncreative talents (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:37:58 02/28/03 Fri
not good not bad (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:22:11 03/05/03 Wed
How it USED to be done.. This is like 1 1/2 years old.. Id even forgot about it till the dude showed me it.. Long Cypher but full of quoteable.. Definite good read.. -- ===||Swords--->, 13:35:13 03/03/03 Mon
your right this was a good read and worth my time. i would recommend this to anyone who likes tight shit. stay up (NT) -- a.k., 14:19:46 03/03/03 Mon
damn this was raw ill shit.... I loved it.. keep doin what ya doin.... (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:54:14 03/03/03 Mon
omg, what pure fire, shit was blazing indeed, both emcees came wit energy and complamented the other's style perfectly, mos def a true gem right here, word life, respected!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 14:59:28 03/03/03 Mon
fucking ill Swords, Joe came very nice too, i neva even seen anything from that fool, maybe i just neva noticed him or something, but kid has talent...you both shined on this collabo, way too many quoteables for me to pick just one or two, so ill say that this piece was full of nice vocab, superb content, and had me vibing with both flows...nice drop, glad you posted this...peace (NT) -- Essence.....AM, 17:17:08 03/03/03 Mon
pretty good rap just needs a little more (NT) -- Aaron G., 08:28:56 03/04/03 Tue
mad shit (NT) -- gollum, 01:42:48 03/05/03 Wed
Struggles -- Digits, 13:36:16 03/04/03 Tue
real dope (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:40:37 03/04/03 Tue
the rhyming itself was pretty blah..but since shyt was feelings from YOU and wat YOU feel..cant critique dat..so stay up.. (NT) -- Some Guy From OMNI...wheelchair kids have feelings too!!..just not on their legs..., 14:23:10 03/04/03 Tue
comin from a broken home i know what you mean pimp.keep posting and stay up (NT) -- a.k., 15:39:28 03/04/03 Tue
This was like a 1/4 alright the other percentage wasn't. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:29:32 03/04/03 Tue
None -- D-Formed, 14:54:22 03/04/03 Tue
this colab was a nice attempt... still a little weak and the misspells... dont worry I spell very bad to.. never was the friend of the english catogory.. peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:03:38 03/04/03 Tue
Yo Dark Spitter. Collabe with Lil' Lucky -- D-Formed, 15:06:15 03/04/03 Tue
nice collabo (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:24:25 03/04/03 Tue
tight collabo.stay up.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:43:28 03/04/03 Tue
I hope ya'll are like 11 years old, cause this rhyme was elementary. I'm not tryin to knock you I'm just lettin you know the truth. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:27:07 03/04/03 Tue
pissed off freestyle not alot of time -- Lil' Jay, 15:22:29 03/04/03 Tue
i dont know why you call out abcent minded at the end but i thought it was still pretty dope.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:46:44 03/04/03 Tue
pretty decent i liked it. (NT) -- Digits, 16:09:15 03/04/03 Tue
Nice -- D-Formed, 16:17:50 03/04/03 Tue
This was really simple. You'll get more feedback when you post something with more substance (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:23:26 03/04/03 Tue
Main Loop Presents: Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 5 "Calm Under Pressure" -- ===||Swords--->, 03:25:00 03/03/03 Mon
Listening.....nice lil intro....beats OK... yea actually this is kind of funky....feeling it Swords....reminds me of some Ninja Tunes beat....keep it up ...PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:36:51 03/03/03 Mon
Ohh...this is that shit...that last shit I wrote flowed perfectly to this...can I use this or you keeping it for self???? (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:33:24 03/03/03 Mon
this belongs on a shaft soundtrack... I like it... only advice i could give would be to cut the "duh-duh... duh-duh... duh-duh-duh" bass out more in the beginning like you did at about 2:30 of the way through... dope shit swords! (NT) -- INTOX, 18:35:42 03/04/03 Tue
Midwest Ballin' _____________Lil Lucky is a pimp -- Lil' Jay, 12:43:13 03/01/03 Sat
NOT BAD RYHMIN -- A.K., 12:53:15 03/01/03 Sat
kinda good! (NT) -- nemisis, 13:23:18 03/01/03 Sat
Are you fucks serious? (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 13:54:27 03/01/03 Sat
ya im serious y u thank i wrote it keep pimpin there only one (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 16:12:14 03/01/03 Sat
Yo man, this was Pimped out -- Lil' Lucky, 23:51:37 03/01/03 Sat
that was aight but check this...... -- Chi-Towns #1 Playa, 15:52:44 03/04/03 Tue
life -- stoney, 13:13:58 03/04/03 Tue
midwest is dope (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:30:46 03/04/03 Tue
nice (NT) -- Digits, 13:44:23 03/04/03 Tue
fukin sad..go skydive with a wheelchair kid or something..i rather see a wheelchair kid like try and jump into the crowd den see a rhyme from u...this was weak..elevate..or just stay on the ground..who cares.. (NT) -- Imagine wheelchair kids like in the X-games going off them ramps...., 14:40:53 03/04/03 Tue
midwest is the shit.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:36:17 03/04/03 Tue
yo... just was litening to a JUICE freestyle with eyedea... made me want to post a key with that ill mobb deep beat... peep and critcize -- the dark spitter... sorry it might be short I'm capable of longer post..., 13:26:35 03/04/03 Tue
pimp work homie (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:29:32 03/04/03 Tue
good (NT) -- Digits, 13:43:06 03/04/03 Tue
this was decent for a key i guess..dont capitalize like every main word..if people truly emcee's..they'll understand the line regardless feel me?..re-read ur shyt before to pick up on a few spelling errors..kinda ruins the flow of reading when u come across a word mispelled..keep posting..keep elevating..at least your a few steps ahead of most of the other newbie.. (NT) -- I Wonder how coaches congratulate wheelchair kids who play sports.cant pat demm on their back or on their azzt..fuk dey do? pat dem on their head??slap 'em over da head?, 14:36:48 03/04/03 Tue
Tha Plot______________Different tha normal style -- Lil' Jay, 13:28:27 03/04/03 Tue
yeah i liked this. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 13:39:35 03/04/03 Tue
yeah i liked this. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 13:41:42 03/04/03 Tue
ok...this was like blah..nothing interested me at all..it was just there ...not even a good read..elevate kid...be more desciptive..more details..give us more to pick up on and shyt..use bigger vocab to add something to it and shit u know? just keep elevating.. (NT) -- This Guy..Who Like..Stole Shoes From Christopher Reeves..i wonder how many wheelchair people could fit in a normal size elevator.., 14:26:58 03/04/03 Tue
4 ever we ball -- Lil' Lucky, 10:50:40 03/01/03 Sat
this was dope, can you remember the first spit you ever did on here, and i took the piss out of you a little bit well, i take it back this was tight (NT) -- nemesis, 12:42:19 03/01/03 Sat
lil lucky is a pimp dog -- Lil' Jay, 12:44:59 03/01/03 Sat
nigga this shit was wack as fuck..fuck you and your wannabee pimp ass nigga..with your lame ass concept..you suck (NT) -- P.T. from GROUP THERAPY, 17:13:06 03/01/03 Sat
HoLLa fo' tha dirty..dirty -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 12:01:39 03/03/03 Mon
I liked this. Finally something that sounds like it didn't come out of the 17th century poetry on here. (NT) -- Digits, 18:35:11 03/03/03 Mon
Thankz -- Lil' Lucky, 13:23:59 03/04/03 Tue
Off count -- Lil' Lucky, 14:56:47 02/28/03 Fri
the only part about feeling "lucky" was when i finished reading this...this was very weak shyt..i hope u were like playing around and pulled out ur pad from like 5th grade and typed up some of ur old rhymes or something..cuz if not..then wow..please elevate..and dont know why u trying catz up in here..if ur not nice urself.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..i wonder if christopher reeves gets lucky when he bets on horse races.., 16:20:58 02/28/03 Fri
I want you to read the VERY last THREE words in this post....here it is:..."....it's fuckin' sad...."Well, you said it yourself....."It is fuckin' sad!!!"<<<<<...Referring to this post.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:07:08 02/28/03 Fri
A lil basic yo, dont try taking a cat whos better than u cus i leraned that this week no matter how strong u feel inside its better left alone, the like the thread u used for this post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:35:53 02/28/03 Fri
This wasnt me -- Lil' Lucky, 23:41:19 02/28/03 Fri
i didn't think it was that bad even though it was about me. you can do better. one (NT) -- a.k, 14:39:04 03/03/03 Mon
nice work (NT) -- stoney, 13:20:58 03/04/03 Tue
This is a production I'm going to recite for a 600-level "Cultural Trauma" course about the effects of cataclysm on social narratives and the contexts in which these memories are encoded. It's not meant to be spit, but said. Any comments are welcome. Sorry about the length. Thanks. -- Blueprint, 19:37:09 03/01/03 Sat
feeling this, intellectiual spoken word type ish, makes analyze shit more deeply, pretty deep ish blue much respect here!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:07:35 03/01/03 Sat
hmmm...this was nice...definite nice word usage...flow was cool...and it was real shit, mixed wit some knowledge...i liked that.."Nurture over nature, Blank canvases, we humans consume variant narratives, that - like legs - carry us through precarious areas."..my favorite line..just stood out to me...the flow of it..and internal rhymin..and just the content of that one line...nice....overall a nice piece...long though...but who am I to complain about long shit haha...anyways, a fairly enjoyable read...stay up kidd, peace. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:33:16 03/02/03 Sun
Inner content, nice Blue, i remember a deep one u did bout ya buddy wrecking in a car. wordplay was nice flowed well i loved bars 5-8 allot. THis was a nice job, good luck with this in ya class id give u an A. Stay up (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:58:24 03/02/03 Sun
real long but nic -- stoney, 13:19:46 03/04/03 Tue
found this in an old book from a year or 2 ago and thought i'de post it -- a.k., 11:22:54 03/04/03 Tue
actually in my view... this was kinda nice... keep droppin pieces like this and you'll see.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:09:24 03/04/03 Tue
nice (NT) -- stoney, 13:18:17 03/04/03 Tue
Repost ta get a lil more feedback on this PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G., 11:33:49 03/02/03 Sun
Peeped this the first time...work on your wordplay and multi's more because that's seems to be the direction you headed in anyway ...other tthen that what can I say but keep writting ..no matter if it's garbage or not eventually it'll get better...I hope (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:17:38 03/02/03 Sun
im sure this was good but im really not in the mood to read shit this long now but i'll read it later dawg. PEACE! (NT) -- nemesis, 16:22:25 03/02/03 Sun
Sick Shit -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:21:12 03/02/03 Sun
this was my first time reading this post and i'de read it again cause it was some dope shit.keep posting one (NT) -- a.k., 13:06:49 03/04/03 Tue
any one in the mood for a cypher.. reply... -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:08:44 03/03/03 Mon
I guess....I'll add on.... -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:30:43 03/03/03 Mon
...my turn...again.... -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š..., 17:51:02 03/03/03 Mon
my turn -- BaZiC BaRz, 19:26:55 03/03/03 Mon
Going on -- Lil' Lucky, 23:29:41 03/03/03 Mon
guess ill drop a few lines -- ===||Swords-->, 02:10:25 03/04/03 Tue
my reply -- the dark spitter, 13:05:18 03/04/03 Tue
HUDDWAH -- Gollum, 11:10:17 03/04/03 Tue
yo first of the rhyme was pretty basic. step it up a notch. second your the type of person who fears confrontation so you sit back and wait until it hits home. then you ask how could this happen. i say kill them all be for they kill us. (NT) -- starks, 11:22:16 03/04/03 Tue
keep tha flow going better (NT) -- Lil G, 11:57:29 03/04/03 Tue
not that bad of a flow.keep posting and stay up (NT) -- a.k., 13:00:45 03/04/03 Tue
Am i crazy???????---- Gimme the truth -- C4 aka str8 jacket, 18:56:35 03/02/03 Sun
I be likin dat crazy shit -- Ode Masta Odd, 22:52:18 03/02/03 Sun
This had it's Up parts.. More downs then ups, sorry to say.. Shoulda kept it clever throughout.. "Hannibal lecter met jeffery dalmer in jail Hannibal dropped the soap, 9 mos later he was like what the hell/Out popped me Doctor was so scared he fuckin dropped me/" HAHA..That made me laugh.. peace.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:29:41 03/03/03 Mon
Yea some aiight lines but I weren't really feeling this tho.. a bit simplistic PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:25:53 03/03/03 Mon
Not bad NOt thaaaa best (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:30:32 03/03/03 Mon
SkRaTe -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 11:50:15 03/03/03 Mon
thats FUCKED UP but on a 1-10, its a 6 -- Digits, 12:12:45 03/03/03 Mon
as Digits said thats FUCKED UP I would probably give you a 4 to 5 (NT) -- Lil G, 11:52:53 03/04/03 Tue
just a lil' flow -- Digits, 12:04:02 03/03/03 Mon
this had some ok flow... but over all I dident like the word usage or that " down south mentality... this was wack.. please elevate (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 12:52:12 03/03/03 Mon
No comment.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:54:32 03/03/03 Mon
not that bad. "i make giants look migits" was my favorite line (NT) -- a.k., 14:14:34 03/03/03 Mon
off tha hook -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 14:54:06 03/03/03 Mon
not bad (NT) -- Lil G, 11:42:11 03/04/03 Tue
I was tired of gettin bitches ta for not being lkyrical, so here i switched my style up -- INS, 18:22:41 03/03/03 Mon
ok (NT) -- flowmasta, 19:00:53 03/03/03 Mon
i honestly didnt read all of this..if someone put the title u did..would u peep it? u cant even spell LYRICAL..wow..as far as the rhyme..it was ok for the most part..ur rhyming structure was HORRIBLE...dats all.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...ur steps to success are going slower den wheelchair kids rock climbing..., 22:39:15 03/03/03 Mon
Aint no way in hell im gonna read all this bullshit.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 02:01:55 03/04/03 Tue
this is the most stupidest rap i h;ave ever heard (NT) -- Aaron G., 08:25:31 03/04/03 Tue
not feelin anything i just scanned through. another waste of space and time. go volunteer somewhere and make a difference. (NT) -- starks, 09:14:49 03/04/03 Tue
you wrote some dumb shit and need to rethink your rap. (NT) -- a.k., 10:47:47 03/04/03 Tue
tough guy...Jay Z suxs tooooo -- gollum, 11:23:03 03/04/03 Tue
''Raps Ominous Rage''. Peep -- starks (the mouth of madness), 10:47:27 03/04/03 Tue
this was pretty dope (NT) -- a.k., 10:50:50 03/04/03 Tue
pretty typical-about being tough -- gollum, 11:17:27 03/04/03 Tue
classic performence -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 15:02:21 03/03/03 Mon
damn this was nothin but that raw hip hop shit very ill..... ps you wanna maybe cypher with the dark spitter? are colab will include highly intensive vocab, word usage and on of the illest forms.... reply back to this and I'll have my e-mail ready for you.. aiight? peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:15:48 03/03/03 Mon
this was tight, i like the whole paintbrush thing you got going, i also have similar thoughts...well done, it flowed nicely and the content was straight...nice drop...unO (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:59:28 03/03/03 Mon
that was f@@king dope -- INS, 18:31:18 03/03/03 Mon
yeah nice. you had some good word usage here. stay up and keep postin. (NT) -- starks, 10:54:23 03/04/03 Tue
I really feel like a ASS-HOLE for how many times this shit has been up here.. BAD QUALITY and all .. but fuck it the LYRICS and BEAT sound so nice.. so for the last time.. "EMINENTS DANCE!" REAL AUDIO of-course! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 21:23:25 02/28/03 Fri
wow...lol.some sick shyt..flow was dope..lyrics were nice..beat was pretty cool 2..some nice shyt..mos def a nice audio yo..should drop more often..about the program..i use cool edit..got the crack from SET...and how could i get at you if ur email is down?!..u dont have yahoo messenger or even MSN messenger? lol...holla back.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..i should do an audio called "wheelchair dance", 21:39:35 02/28/03 Fri
Right now, I could give a shit about the quality...honestly, this was entertaining to listen to...the beat was nice...that's actually a soothing type of instrumental which I dig...the flow ran well with the beat...you got a real professional sound to it...I played it over a few times and I really feel the sound...dope ass lyrics...imagine if the quality was top notch!...If you need a Cool Edit Pro 2.0 Program(Registered)..hit me up at my email...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:40:23 02/28/03 Fri
not cool -- Lil' Jay, 12:47:35 03/01/03 Sat
illness...ur very few i heard on the net that can rhyme intense wordplay and big words and actually make it sound Nice as hell Hotshyt 1ne (NT) -- Lucian0, 14:21:33 03/01/03 Sat
WHERE IS THE FLOW AT (NT) -- A.K., 15:58:02 03/01/03 Sat
Nice shit Path...uhm yeah the quality is a bit low, but that doesn't take away from the skills any. Nice to finally hear you again in audio. Do you have any cds made that you're giving away? If so you gotta hit me with one yo. Anyway I'll holla back atcha kid....One (NT) -- The Accent of Tundra and Camelions', 09:05:08 03/04/03 Tue
Main Loop Presents --- Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 6: "Tunnel Vision"...Missed the last 5? Betta' ask somebody! -- ===||Swords--->, 02:00:36 03/04/03 Tue
[I wonder what would happen if I mixed the regular ingredients with some gutter???].....The lyrics to my next audio..should be done within the next few days if every thing goes as planned...caution:some gutter shit -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:14:07 03/02/03 Sun
I'm Feelin it...... -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:14:17 03/02/03 Sun
Rhyme scheme was nice in this.. Feeling it.. Some good lines.. Nice imagery.. Has a Street-feel to it, you got that conveyed well.. I can hear a calm but rugged beat to this here.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-Almost didnt see this.. Gotta do something with the colors sometimes kid.., 03:34:57 03/03/03 Mon
hey that was good -- Digits, 12:16:12 03/03/03 Mon
Last Level,game over!(part 2) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:05:23 02/28/03 Fri
I don't know man, this is def a new concept that ive seen like this allot of wordplay was nice in here. Flow was lost a lil here and there but its different. i gotta say this alright though nice job wit it PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 21:15:03 02/28/03 Fri
lmao this was dope as HELL I was feeling the creativity.. very nice drop.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:33:01 02/28/03 Fri
yo..this shyt was very dope..entertaing..a lil long but entertaining..reminded me of some shyt i did back in the day ..like some shyt like i was i was jumping from each nintendo system..like from atari to nintendo to gameboy to supernintendo,etc..and explaining wat game i was in and shyt lol...and i called it "GAME OVER" lol..dope dope..nice shyt yo.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...how come there is no games about wheelchair people??!, 21:46:55 02/28/03 Fri
For some reason, your format and rhyme scheme sorta reminds me of IronMonk...the wordplay and CAPITALIZATION... anyways, this was a tight read...I enjoyed how you did this...I haven't seen this type of shit done in a while...yes, entertaining to read...I'm going to check out some of those old school games that was mentioned in here...brought back memories man...heh..keep on writing. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 22:06:54 02/28/03 Fri
Yo at first you don't even notice the wordplay and puns on games,shit like this got me thinkin on the lounge we don't read each other shit enough,illest i've seen from you,you've kept that street ebonic/polyslyllabic scientific shit tight all around wordplay and conceptualism off the hook,post of the mont material this is the stuff i'd guage myself by (NT) -- Sinister aka T>HM<, 13:37:48 03/01/03 Sat
thugged out (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 16:13:25 03/01/03 Sat
i have one phrase to say about this. "the shit" this was one of the best post i've seen on this motha fucka yet. and the subject matter was original (NT) -- a.k., 11:25:52 03/03/03 Mon
''The Nibiru Theory''.....some deep shit to make you think. We all came from the same mass. And we will all die when it again comes to pass! scary ain't it -- starks (the mouth of madness), 10:48:19 03/02/03 Sun
Fresh, a prophetical twist ta how we ignore the truths of our own destructive worth. I remember talking ta ya about this before STarks, this was nice.bars 11 -15 hit the nail on the head about what lies really are son nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:50:02 03/02/03 Sun
this was sick, critique wise, i cant really say anything negative about it, flow was on, and the content was very nice...i have neva heard of this theory before, but it definetly holds truth to someone with an open mind who isnt already caught up in one directing belief....keep dropping the knowledge, peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 14:08:48 03/02/03 Sun
Damn!!! what is everybody at the library today...Naw I agree withEssence..this was sick...That sounds like some Holy Tabernacle type shit..Where did you get that from??? (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:33:47 03/02/03 Sun
hey, i loved this shit, it was dope cause of flow, wordplay and language used. keep writin shit this interesting (NT) -- nemesis, 16:19:48 03/02/03 Sun
Damn.......... -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:25:18 03/02/03 Sun
Damn...I read some shit on this subject by a poster on BET.com's forums, they said blackness (the color and state of mind) was the essence of all that shit, kinda scary when you think about it (NT) -- Novakane, 20:22:34 03/02/03 Sun
liked the subject matter. nice ryhmes too (NT) -- a.k., 08:17:29 03/03/03 Mon
NIce work (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:32:39 03/03/03 Mon
NEW POST!!!!!....yes i know-it's been a LOOOONG time since ya read somethin from me..but here it is...a song i just finished up earlier today..."The Wonders of Meaning"...all critique and feedback is appreciated...kinda switched up styles in each verse too...hope ya'll enjoy! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:17:59 03/02/03 Sun
yo this was cool man. nice imagery and followthrew with word play. all you need is a dope beat to make this into a sure shot audio .peace (NT) -- starks, 07:30:22 03/02/03 Sun
Yo, i feel u big time on this piece yo. Content made make mentals work. The first bars really locked me in nice job wit those. The rest feel right inta place. Very nice job PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 11:53:50 03/02/03 Sun
To be honest I wasn't feeling this...I started reading and it just lost my attention..but hey do you..One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:37:15 03/02/03 Sun
pimp shit -- a.k., 08:09:04 03/03/03 Mon

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