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CLOSED~*~

Introducin ODe-MastA-oDD a.k.a Whitey Wildman a.k.a The Vanilla Thrilla!!...jus a lil fuckin around to give u a feel of my flow and style, u can diss me all u want but u aint gunna stop me -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 15:55:44 03/08/03 Sat
- Props.. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 17:33:28 03/08/03 Sat
- really cool... your one bad ass gangsta my homie! (NT) -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 18:09:48 03/08/03 Sat
- just awesome man! why arent you signed? now just spit this over a beat so producers and record companies can hear you and you'll be rollin in the green...if 50 Cent can do it...you can too..and never put down that Rhyming for Dummies book (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:26:57 03/08/03 Sat
- cool -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:20:06 03/08/03 Sat
- da mad hermit shakes his head (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:09:26 03/08/03 Sat
  ok (NT) -- nemesis, 12:03:48 03/09/03 Sun
- Ay man, he's so wack, it just might come true! (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:15:15 03/09/03 Sun
- hummmmmmmmmmm........pretty comical if you ask me (NT) -- Eternal Student, 13:13:24 03/09/03 Sun
introducing my keystyle as your busting a written freestyle -- dlaster aka the fugitive, 16:07:54 03/07/03 Fri
this was a waste of your time man... were you under the influence when ya typed this bullshit? elevate or be elevated upon.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:58:24 03/07/03 Fri
i second that notion ^^....... (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:04:13 03/07/03 Fri
fuck new zealand. you here me! fuck your whole fuckin country.and as far as rap goes fuck you to. go find something to do with your life instead of postin these dumn ass rhymes. better yet strap a few bombs to your chest and suicide bomb a few fellow new zealand faggots so theres less when i get there t o wipe you fuckers out. (NT) -- Colin Powell, 17:57:40 03/07/03 Fri
humm not really feeling this !!! (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:13:51 03/07/03 Fri
there's a word for you...itz called "poser"...just quit trying to be sumthin your not and get back to jacking off... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:00:54 03/08/03 Sat
wack, elevate, 1 (NT) -- Novakane, 04:10:52 03/09/03 Sun
do you listen to D-12 alot? (NT) -- nemesis, 12:15:35 03/09/03 Sun
been a lil since i posted a key, so i sat down and came up with this lil piece...i dont call it anything, just releasing some stress....peace -- Essence.....AM, 17:56:58 03/03/03 Mon
yo that was madd nice -- INS, 18:24:52 03/03/03 Mon
decent (NT) -- flowmasta, 19:03:30 03/03/03 Mon
Nice.. Not my favorite one of yours tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 02:03:34 03/04/03 Tue
nice. nothing spectacular but a definate good read. stay up . (NT) -- starks, 09:19:17 03/04/03 Tue
keep posting so i can read more.stay up (NT) -- a.k., 10:53:56 03/04/03 Tue
not to bad -- gollum, 11:29:30 03/04/03 Tue
this was a nice drop.... keep postin and stay up (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:55:53 03/04/03 Tue
I know this is far down the page so you probably won't see it but i was feelin it... how are the audios coming along? (NT) -- Verse aka �inful �oul⁷ of Abzent Minded, 15:11:23 03/06/03 Thu
nice, I liked the wordplay and complexity (NT) -- Novakane, 04:03:23 03/09/03 Sun
revisiting one of my finest...consider this a lesson in the art of expression and storytelling through lyrics...*** Victim *** love is twisted, unreal, and some people go to the limits no man is allowed to pass...especially not with his blood... -- XitiZeN, 01:38:51 03/08/03 Sat
Um...damn...how the hell am I suppose to react to this?...this was well thought out...it shows...so descriptive man...it's been a while since you've posted and this truely brings the essence back...wow...very interesting concept...I don't know what else to say...I enjoyed reading this...so appropriate word usage...sure was an interesting twist at the end...it saddens me that things like this actually happen and probably still is...you wrote it out well...dope piece right here X..appreciate the read, Peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:20:21 03/08/03 Sat
damn... this was ill... to be able to write so well about such a disturbing topic is quite a talent... nice imagery all the way through but the piece really came alive near the end... glad you reposted this coz this was real nice, post more often...peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 09:44:55 03/08/03 Sat
wow...pure sickness dude...wow..i'm speechless, this was an excellent piece, everything about it was on point...and the end was just like whoa..not many people i know can write like this, an overall gem of a post..keep it up kid, peace (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 09:59:04 03/08/03 Sat
truly a gifted writer here... i really was caught off guard with the continuity... i havent been here in a minute and its nice to see the lounge is still breathing. (NT) -- ?, 12:04:18 03/08/03 Sat
Very Moving Piece -- ODe- Masta- oDD, 15:09:41 03/08/03 Sat
Yeah, i remember this one.. Didnt you get POTM for this? Very vivid, graphic, emotional.. Only problem to me was that i have no idea how this is supposed to flow... but other than that, its good reading, if you have the patience.. This makes me wanna go back and look for the topical stuff everyone used to drop..I might just do that soon, well at least mine.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:33:34 03/09/03 Sun
World War 3 -- Lil' Jay, 15:25:02 03/08/03 Sat
Respond if ya feel or not (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:31:16 03/08/03 Sat
hummm -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:21:16 03/08/03 Sat
I thought it was gonna be decent but i stopped at "Take the towel off your head" I mean im all for persecuting the bastard, but this is a lyricism site.. Gotta come with more of a mind than that.. Stay up.. dont give up yet tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:19:40 03/09/03 Sun
Up Hill Battle -- Digits, 11:35:58 03/07/03 Fri
yea, this was pretty nice, cept for your rhyme scheme...was pretty weak, but your thoughts are felt,nice thoughts, but flow wasnt all there, kinda lost it, but yea, elevate in your Rhymescheme, like using Multis or something that will make a reader stop and say..."WOW" (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:47:01 03/07/03 Fri
yeah man thats whats up..nothin bad about that (NT) -- beans, 12:28:52 03/07/03 Fri
That was straight. -- Lil' Lucky, 12:40:24 03/07/03 Fri
hella short and hella weak...damn man quit coming with that stupid bullshit and come with the real hiphop... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:54:05 03/07/03 Fri
i know exactly what ya mean dawg, everything seems to be just to so ..... arrrrggghhh (NT) -- nemesis, 13:08:39 03/07/03 Fri
I don't know what Dark Spitter is talkin about over here...you're iller than him, atleast you don't FORCE your lines....but yo....I see potential, we all have to start somewhere....scheme was somewhat simplistic but you delivered your thoughts well....keep writin yo and bring up ideas you think no one else can conjure....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:34:08 03/07/03 Fri
i thought this started off strong as hell, around the level you'd expect most vets writing poetic type depressed shit to come off with...flow was pretty nice too...but about halfway through it just kinda fell off...you were just making sure the words rhymed by then...potential yes, and plenty of it, just take critiques well and keep on... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:09:28 03/08/03 Sat
pimp shit dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:27:20 03/08/03 Sat
Mayhem's Idea and WTC Anthem -- Darknodin, 22:19:34 03/07/03 Fri
haha you sound alot like Dlusional, you guys shud collabo, damn iight, first, emotion? or lack there of...i dunno sounds like you just talking for alotta this, almost like you carrying melodies at other points, i dunno overall, i thought this was a pretty solid effort, oh and i only listened to Mayhem's Idea...grr...turn down your vocals, they making me deaf... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:45:46 03/08/03 Sat
the revolution is comin -- Oracle, 01:48:43 03/08/03 Sat
lmao, you do sound like Philoso... anyway i'm listening to Mayhem's idea... beat is decent, your flow is quite good... you need some more emotion tho...dunno why you made the vocals so loud at that one point, but for the rest of the time they were too quiet...overall its quite nice.... wtc: strange beat, not feeling it at all... flow is alright... not as good as the other one... overall i'd say there's lots of potential... just fix up the quality and use more emotion...peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 10:00:16 03/08/03 Sat
A N.a.K.I.X.e.M. DIZASTERPIECE�I�m settlin down more�lots of shit been happenin so keyin and all that doesn�t fit in my agenda�so this is a keystyle to elevate my content�I choose to call this -= Incoherent Ink Coherence=-�quite abstract�I was just on some shit when I keyed this�.***ALL REPLIES AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:50:00 03/07/03 Fri
dident feel this at all.... fuckin short too... I know your capable of iller shit kidd.... comon with that 18 bar bullshit and come iller and show these emcees real hiphop shit... nice vocab tho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab, 17:02:51 03/07/03 Fri
yo i was feeling this. well done (NT) -- mad hermit, 17:04:12 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:07:47 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:08:54 03/07/03 Fri
don't even listen to that hater dark spitter I liked your shit but your not GOD (NT) -- dlaster fuck all these fake emcees, 17:46:18 03/07/03 Fri
this was aight....what stuck out to me more than anything as how well it flowed...nice word connection..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 19:37:25 03/07/03 Fri
i dunno Diz...just hit me as "decent"...flow was evidently sick as Dunn mentioned, i thought the content was 'not bad' but you really did cut back this time...why so short? you also just kinda jumbled random imagery together and gave it almost a 'forced message'...whatever Jesus, good to know you still exist...positive work... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:04:10 03/08/03 Sat
you know what I think about this already... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:22:15 03/08/03 Sat
well i was definately feelin this... when people see a post from you they expect it to be outstanding everytime, this wasn't one of those but it was still ill... and i guess in a way ur still adjusting to a style change... anyway, keep em coming Diz....peace (NT) -- Versetyle, 08:55:28 03/08/03 Sat
**HOLY SHYT!!A MOTHAFUKIN SWORDS AND DLUSIONAL AUDIO COLLAB!!..SICK LYRICS...NICE BEAT..FUKIN PUNCHES AND QUOTES ALL UP IN THIS..ENTITLED "LYRICISM SQUARED"..BUT WAIT...WANT THE TWIST OF THIS??..LAST EVER POST AS DLUSIONAL..OH..AND NOW ITS NO LONGER AM/OMNI..PEEP OUTRO TO SEE WHAT I'M TALKIN BOUT!!..THIS IS HOW U END AN ERA HAHAH! -- A Guy Wit Wheelchairs ...Swordspenz..OMNI&Penz Inc. Collab.2 dope fuka's on 1 collab..we should do dis more often eh?, 14:22:20 03/05/03 Wed
Well, I'm glad I finally got a chance to hear you D-Lusional (Philoso...whatever)...you remind me of a slower MC Paul Barman....Swords reminded me of The Introvert.....a little....The beat sounded like something Edan would spit on....but it was still good to finally hear from the both for the first time...for me at least....No more Abzent Minded for you huh?....I bet Kilwa is laughin' his ass off right now....HAHAHA...Just playin'....Stay blessed....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....., 16:35:14 03/05/03 Wed
iight.. beat is nice.. D you remind me off SUNSET.. SO MUCH.. the voice and the style.. you've gotten alot nicer.. SWORDS very nice stance much more on point... very nice audio.. I'll prolly listen to this alot more times this week.. SWORDS you silly.. D you sound this Arab kid I know at the end talking.. but it's all gravy.. nice job yall! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:52:21 03/05/03 Wed
this was an ill audio..lyrics from both of you was sick...flow was dope too...Dlusional ur flow got faster at times but it sounded right..like it fit..hope that makes sense...swords ur flow was just bangin...dope audio yo...lol@ da outro...u sound mad n shyt..lookin like joe millionare talkin bout a twist haha...hopefully u two collab again in da future...1ne(NT) -- DiAtRiBe....oh yeah...dat kennedys/aaliyah line was just wrong yo lol, 18:12:23 03/05/03 Wed
cool ass collab, D ya flow is coming along....Swords your shit is dope, nice beat too....bout the AM shit....oh well, do you, although i dont agree with the reasons...cant say i rep shapeshiftaz more than AM cause i only dropped two audios, last one two months ago...i've dropped a FEW text posts with AM and OMNI in the sig since (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of OMNI...just remember less people in OMNI post than AM, 19:27:27 03/05/03 Wed
Dope shit..dope shit...Philoso..sometimes, I think you were holding that flow back or something...because it was almost instant after we told you about your flow that it got better...good work on that bro...lyrics are tight...Swords...tight shit also...always enjoy your audios...lyrics are nice..it's ALL good to me..LOL@the outro...something about it made me laugh...maybe how you talked fast...lol...OVERALL, DOPE SHIT...enjoyed it..I'll listen again :-) (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:53:22 03/05/03 Wed
Thanks yall.. Replies are always apreciated.. it keeps this place worth it.. considerign how rare replies are these days.. Hopefully someone can answer me this: How come i hafta collab with someone to get more than three replies? shit bugs me.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:52:47 03/06/03 Thu
haha wassup with yall fukkin bamas!? haha damn been a minute...ne wayz...yo man this was fresh, i really liked this collab...yall sound pretty crazy haha..but yea man i dunno what else to say cept "tight" haha flows were on point, delivery was nice...everythings been sed, stay up fellas, hopefully we can work together on somethin in the future...keep reppin correct ~oNe~ (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE O.M.N.I., 01:42:11 03/06/03 Thu
this took me forever to download on this shit PC... beat is pretty nice... Phil - your flow is improving a lot, still needs work tho, need to get a bit more comfortable on the mic... Swordz ripped this shit, ur flow is sick on this one, you should use this type of beat more often... nice lyircs too... as for the AM shit, well i haven't been active much but i'm gonna keep reppin... i understand ur reasons tho... well anyway, good job Swords and Phil! (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 08:59:07 03/06/03 Thu
I didn't get to hear it....I'm at school and all....can somone fill me in on what he said in the outro?....lol.....Philoso huh?...cool.....I'll try and listen when I get to the house and drop a real reply....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of Abztract Atrocitiez of Horror-core Affiliates of Abzent Minded Ink. of O.M.N.I...haha., 11:55:28 03/06/03 Thu
dope track, nice work from both...but just cause Dlusional changed his name and dropped his crew doesnt make him look or sound like any less of a dipshit... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:18:01 03/08/03 Sat
"Feel the Wrath"...been a while..sup -- ViRTuaL, 18:52:55 03/05/03 Wed
you dont sound so much like Eminem anymore...ya flow's elevated even moreso...feelin this here...dont like the hook a whole lot, but its catchy....and you ride the beat well...good ass quality (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of OMNI, 19:35:41 03/05/03 Wed
ya dog pimp shit (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:45:56 03/05/03 Wed
pretty sick *listenin*.......nice beat and i'm feelin tha chorus...sick verses.nice drop overall. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 22:00:22 03/05/03 Wed
I pretty much agree with Vision..I think there's still a little something about your voice that has a resemblance to Eminem...lyrics are nice...I seriously think I've heard better FLOW-wise from you...but other than that...I liked this..."catchy" shit...drop more raw shit...on some Mighty V shit.. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 22:16:51 03/05/03 Wed
of course this was nice, but i've heard better from you...haha at the hook, liking your voice with the beat, lyrics pretty dope, same with flow...blah peace (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:15:24 03/08/03 Sat
NEW POST!!......somethin i wrote out real quick this mornin....."Yin and Yang".......any critique or feedback welcome......Enjoy! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:01:53 03/07/03 Fri
This had some nice concepts the flow was a bit patch but it was still heat ......hey check mah post up top....cus I havea problem with your first 2 lines hahaha....nah its all love....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:19:12 03/07/03 Fri
Homie i dont get the concept, but i think you got a lot of things do say... that ned to be heard... the flow was nice tough -- MARYTREMCEE, 19:37:09 03/07/03 Fri
i like tha shit! (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:29:03 03/07/03 Fri
truthfully i thought the concept was the weakest thing about this post...everything else, vocab, flow, etc was on point...but the whole race card and society card have been used more than punches involving the word "come/cum"...the post was well written, complex, just think you shud find some newer subject matter... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:58:43 03/08/03 Sat
lunch time key... was dissapointed at the reply from my previous post... wanted to come back and make sense this time... my bad if my lines dont make sense... -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab, 17:26:30 03/07/03 Fri
u suck more than a hoe except you dont get payed for sucking bro your shit will never make sense you illiterate mother fucking bitch (NT) -- dlaster, 17:37:18 03/07/03 Fri
This was ok..pretty short...it weren't as bad as he's saying tho^^but elevation is needed (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:26:20 03/07/03 Fri
to the first replier... shut the fuck up and drop dead or somthing... go kill your self ho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:10:47 03/07/03 Fri
... actually... this is average i'd say. .. elevate dawg (oh and dlaster shouldn't talk) (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:33:44 03/07/03 Fri
this was solid. it kept my attention (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:44:35 03/07/03 Fri
...just comes out like your trying way too hard... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:55:28 03/08/03 Sat
PEEP this SCRIPT...OK, you might have missed my audios for valid reasons, Miss this and YOU'RE CRAZY !!!!!this is going audio as soon as possibleSo have a proof read and ENJOY this peace ALL you newbies take notes.......... -- Eternal Student, 18:30:52 03/07/03 Fri
man that was mad nice... like the flow of it (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:19:59 03/07/03 Fri
nice post. on some apocalypitic shit (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:26:20 03/07/03 Fri
oh yo... this is mad nice dawg! (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 22:26:07 03/07/03 Fri
dark, religious undertones...positive flow...overall very nicely done, not that long though, and just cause you use big words doesnt make a post 'complex' (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:53:46 03/08/03 Sat
early morning keystyle... think that my keys are better then my writtens when I post them up... just peep and criticize -- the Dark spiTTER, 13:24:49 03/07/03 Fri
well...uhh...rhyme scheme was awful....I mean...don't try crammin so much shit in one line...split it up and get vivid with every line...instead of havin to cram one thought into ONE line....Armor I Gedden?..uhh...I dunno bout that man....keep writin and FREESTYLE....a rhythm should stick to your head when you wanna key so the rhyme structure will be a lot better....just...elevate man...don't try too hard.....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:42:00 03/07/03 Fri
what ever man.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 17:05:42 03/07/03 Fri
hmm...flow seemed real choppy in here to me...some of this did seem forced..and the Armor-I-Gedden?!...that was lame....but ya had some nice lines in here too.....but definitely seen better from ya kidd...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:13:02 03/07/03 Fri
your keystyle sucks like your freestyles if you believe me your in denile (NT) -- dlaster, 17:50:14 03/07/03 Fri
umm I thought this was ok, I was feeling some of the lines (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:05:28 03/07/03 Fri
Imaginary concepts, and Value flow, newest lyric tittled GOD vs. SATAN The long lasting battle streaming for ever now commences, in a GROWING WAR -- NoFlow Save your Spirit, 02:25:15 03/06/03 Thu
Thats da shit -- chromenine, 08:13:32 03/06/03 Thu
crazy but good (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:23:10 03/06/03 Thu
i liked it but what is it with all of this abstract rap shit that you'll rap about. the only ones that rap about real shit that i've read is lil' jay,digits,lil' lucky,and c dawg.so big ups to all of you.one (NT) -- a.k., 08:26:58 03/06/03 Thu
Some of the Tightest shit, iv seen. Ever. -- Lil' Lucky, 09:10:06 03/06/03 Thu
i though this was dope all the way through (NT) -- nemesis, 13:39:46 03/06/03 Thu
This was dope.....I was listening to the track "Julia Set" by Noah23 off the "Quicksand" LP while reading this...and it didn't go with the beat....But, what I read is indeed a total amazement....Breaking it up into stanzas kind of got on my nerve, but you changed the imagery with each one...so it's understandable...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:49:28 03/06/03 Thu
wad up....... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 17:07:36 03/06/03 Thu
wow (NT) -- madhermitt, 20:02:22 03/07/03 Fri
and another one, hope u feelin it; its a little abstract( 36 lines!) -- chromenine, 07:05:26 03/07/03 Fri
Sawry!I messed up one line at the end it goes: the massive LYRICAL hydro chemical voodooman...... (NT) -- chromenine, 07:11:29 03/07/03 Fri
Again. Decent. (NT) -- Digits, 11:40:49 03/07/03 Fri
haha "yo girl is fuckin groase, but im glad she aint a ghost, in this show of my debris" didnt understand dat one tho, but your first start was good, but you lost it after your first 4 lines...ELEVATE? (NT) -- NoFlow..I got so much flow, its LIKE I DONT HAVE ANY AT ALL, 11:54:38 03/07/03 Fri
Was Fresh... -- Lil' Lucky, 12:33:52 03/07/03 Fri
a lil short its called "Reincarnation" more of my own lil poem -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:35:14 03/06/03 Thu
WTF is this..lol..I hope it was a joke... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:08:08 03/06/03 Thu
^ i'm wit him.......pure garbage. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:30:59 03/06/03 Thu
What the hell is this? A nursery rhyme? (NT) -- Digits, 11:49:51 03/07/03 Fri
LOL, the the dog went RUFF and the cats went Meow, delete this Dr suese rhyme, Tizza posted Foul (NT) -- NoFlow LMAO im gonna pork u like a pig sizzle ur shit till i turn to bacon, 12:08:14 03/07/03 Fri
just to sharpen skills up a notch bout to bust a key.... vocab spreme for the two-zero zero-three.. -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 16:17:57 03/06/03 Thu
This was good......It's good to see you're starting to elevate at a good pace...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:04:31 03/06/03 Thu
hmm..this was a pretty good piece...the word usage was nice...some nice metaphors and imagery...but the flow did seem kinda 'thick', like to slow-draggin along..and there were a couple spots that i felt ya was tryin too hard to be abstract or somethin..just didn't seem natural...but nonetheless, an aight piece...stay up kidd, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:33:40 03/06/03 Thu
coo -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:40:46 03/06/03 Thu
yeah the start did it for me (NT) -- treyz1, 07:57:21 03/07/03 Fri
it was good. but do you guys ever try to set an overall idea of something you write. everything i read just goes all over the place. decent though. PEACE! (NT) -- Digits, 11:55:31 03/07/03 Fri
and another short (16lines) again, cuz im bored (!!contents is No offence to noone!!) -- chromenine, 07:19:56 03/07/03 Fri
its alright you up for a battle (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 07:46:32 03/07/03 Fri
This was decent. It didn't flow through the whole thing though. (NT) -- Digits, 11:38:13 03/07/03 Fri
eeehh....sortaaaa decent, wasn't feeling it, this wasnt all there, you shouldt post battle verse, or something that looks like your trying to battle anyone who reads this..but ..eh..w/e (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:41:52 03/07/03 Fri
shit aint hard at all...not feelin this at all (NT) -- beans, 11:52:05 03/07/03 Fri
Repost.....*Terminal Illness*.....a post from a longwhile back.........*keystlye from other site included(sorry bout tha caps on tha keystyle.) -- BaZiC BaRz aka Ceno, 20:19:43 03/06/03 Thu
i like that -- chromnine, 06:09:01 03/07/03 Fri
i liked it a little. It needs to rhyme more. (NT) -- Digits, 11:46:38 03/07/03 Fri
This is for the haters, Im gona try. So come comment, -- Lil' Lucky, 00:17:28 03/06/03 Thu
Seriously it's like you keep sayin the same shit over and over again. Like Teddy Ruxpin when you ain't change his tape.......Hahahahahaha ya'll remember that shit (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:36:53 03/06/03 Thu
YO LOL, this reminded me of some EMINEM steeze here, but i was feeling it...as far as your rhyme scheme was pretty decent, keep posted kid..and try rapping about something thats worth rappin about..no one cares about HATERZ (NT) -- NOFLOW, 01:39:33 03/06/03 Thu
this was iight man.....u did kinda repeat yourself over and over but oh well (?) umm im feelin the message u were trynna get across but content was kinda lacking...but it was iight, stay up and building, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 01:45:31 03/06/03 Thu
no matter what anyone says about this i thought it wasn't that bad. we can all relate to the haters and cock blocks out there.keep posting and stay up. one (NT) -- a.k., 08:18:58 03/06/03 Thu
keep it up -- chromenine, 08:24:42 03/06/03 Thu
Ya big homie keep it playa up (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 09:19:37 03/06/03 Thu
man like I hate your fuckin rhyme scheme (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:35:35 03/06/03 Thu
how was this a freestyle if its not an audio? And my favorite line was: "but im a us my head"... irony? (NT) -- INTOX, 10:35:16 03/07/03 Fri
NEW AUDIO!! HAVE GOTTEN SUM GOOD FEEBACK SO FAR -- N'finite, 00:21:54 03/07/03 Fri
yo, this was pretty ill, i liked it, was feelin the beat..cept for that churus or whatever, but lyrics were smoothe and on beat, and yea, liked this one, all around DOPE (NT) -- NoFlow, 01:34:10 03/07/03 Fri
Not bad .... -- chromenine, 06:13:01 03/07/03 Fri
yeah nice kinda morbid but you coo wit it (NT) -- treyz1, 08:06:05 03/07/03 Fri
New Audio...LYRIKIL & OV@KIL..Link inside.....Peep and Critique....One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil and Ov@KiLof G3n@$yD3, 19:06:40 03/06/03 Thu
It was aight but i can't really tell what y'all was sayin........from wut i could hear both rode tha beat well tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:25:59 03/06/03 Thu
I'm feelin the beat. This sounded nice delivery wise, I don't know if ya'll using a shitty mic or what but the sound quality isn't great. It's kinda hard to hear what ya'll sayin. Other than that this was nice. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:51:40 03/06/03 Thu
ok ,but -- chromenine, 06:16:41 03/07/03 Fri
AN ALL-NEW POST.....ANOTHER DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET...."One Man's Spirit" Part 6....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Imagery, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 17:05:32 03/06/03 Thu
this was nice Hex...the same high-grade piece we've come to expect from ya....just ya word usage, and structure and rhymin and the flow of your work is DEFINITELY always enough to make up for the fact that half ya shit goes over my head....which is cool in this piece..cuz we actually get the "clift notes" at the end haha......as always, enjoyable read Hex...peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:29:09 03/06/03 Thu
tight -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:38:09 03/06/03 Thu
NIce ... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:14:50 03/06/03 Thu
i liked this one really nice, even tho some of the vocabulary went straight in one ear and out the other "Vanity's Shit slips off the lips of Humanity's Wit..leaving me with the moldy-leftovers of simple thoughts" that line caught my eye, i liked this very much, nice post..but i got a question..with all these metephores and Very Intesnse Vocabulary, you ever get people involved around you that doesnt understand you?...cuz i do... (NT) -- Noflow... ill look into that Noah23, 21:53:53 03/06/03 Thu
give me sum responses -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 15:55:54 03/06/03 Thu
the only person who can "BEAT" me is "MYSELF".... hahahahahaha I took it in a wrong way man... ok rhyme but mad misspelled words... keep postin (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 16:23:07 03/06/03 Thu
this was funny, i like spits that make me laugh. (NT) -- nemesis, 16:49:18 03/06/03 Thu
This was good....a little funny...but not too funny....You need to keep posting and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:07:42 03/06/03 Thu
This is hiphop save the comedy shit for Chris Rock (NT) -- dlaster, 17:07:47 03/06/03 Thu
back at ya -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:27:27 03/06/03 Thu
yea...this was kidna funny in parts...but ya need some elevation...keep writin and stay up kidd. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:36:45 03/06/03 Thu
lol "ill rap circles around you?" that was pretty kew...but your Bars are still comin in STRIAGHT LINES haha (NT) -- NoFlow, 21:39:34 03/06/03 Thu
Repost!..."The Wonders of Meaning".......this kinda got slept on last time. -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:21:37 03/06/03 Thu
long -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:37:02 03/06/03 Thu
Yeah this was long but it keep my attention alllllllll the way through ...keep it up...this is some good shit.. (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:11:31 03/06/03 Thu
this was real long but pretty nice....i like tha line about watchin tha world spinnin outta your control.nice work. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:36:13 03/06/03 Thu
Check dissout an tell me what da deal wit it -- chromenine, 08:45:17 03/06/03 Thu
maybe its just the way im readin it but , it didnt even rhyme (NT) -- nemesis, 13:35:23 03/06/03 Thu
Only 15 syllables?....Try 37.....Anyway, you used slant-rhyme in this...so I'll give you credit for that....The content is a little played out....Talking about how ill you are or how long you've been rhyming is just plain annoying now these days....But keep doing you and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....., 15:57:59 03/06/03 Thu
wad up....... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 17:03:52 03/06/03 Thu
huh???? -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:32:14 03/06/03 Thu
yeah, so this is for new mc's so yall peep -- nemesis, 13:56:40 03/06/03 Thu
Ok, I understand. It. was pretty good. -- Lil' Lucky, 14:33:08 03/06/03 Thu
yo this was a kind of reputicious kind of rhyme.. did not like it.... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:29:04 03/06/03 Thu
The message is very appealing...but your way of showcasing isn't too appealing though....Maybe, try a different rhyme pattern rather than a different rhyme scheme.....Keep doing you and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:53:22 03/06/03 Thu
wad up...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 16:58:56 03/06/03 Thu
hummm -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:29:44 03/06/03 Thu
Key-styles for the child- in the back screaming for Path to come back like Ivy-throw-backs- I tackle rats in alleys till cats appluad and squad up like AML when I spit the martial LAW - with high-hats snares bass-drops and kicks- I'm iller then you when you bed-ridden puking up shit.. word, check the stance I rock the M.I.C's like I was born with it in my hands! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:45:50 03/05/03 Wed
Bars 16 -26 were my fav, you've been busy yo. Flow was nice through the majority of it and ya vocab and word connection, shit I don't have ta say anything that shit speaks ill by itself. I didn't like the line about dealing powder. Thats just me, and that was the only thing I didn't like well done you are soaring over heads lately. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:16:45 03/05/03 Wed
nice mang... -- virt, 19:15:57 03/05/03 Wed
you always drop hot shit (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:55:03 03/05/03 Wed
this was packed wit imagery and all that shit but bein honest, i had a hard time catchin tha scheme.pretty ill drop tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 22:08:19 03/05/03 Wed
damn man been a MINUTE since i been in here...but yo man, this was very refreshing, damn man your flow is crazy...vocab....very nice use of words man....u kno the deal...i liked the line about "A trained vet who TRAINED vets to be ill..." very true man...nice piece...i need ta stop by more often, stay up man, oNe (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE.....O.M.N.I.... Im out there somewhere, 01:33:51 03/06/03 Thu
this had all the vocab and what nots in this piece you dropped.. this was a master piece in my view.. nice structure as well... stay up! (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:46:21 03/06/03 Thu
KEYSTYLE -- BaZiC BaRz, 21:48:50 03/05/03 Wed
YO MY REPLY IS ONE MORE UP!!! TO THIS WEAK SHIT -- DAT NIGGA YoUnG, 23:46:59 03/05/03 Wed
This was alright, keep at it though......peace (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:40:48 03/06/03 Thu
long but short (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:25:38 03/06/03 Thu
nice drop but the rhyme was kinda short... how come? make it longer next time... aiight (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:40:28 03/06/03 Thu
If ya'll sleepin on this your ass must be narcoleptic/ I hope you dreams are filled with gases that refelect a septic -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:33:13 03/06/03 Thu
This was pretty GOOd, i was on the flow contrast, nice drop it was pretty ill (NT) -- Noflow NNB ...NOFLOW NOW BACK, 01:36:28 03/06/03 Thu
ive never seen you here, yet again i havnt been here for a while...but this was iight yo, you show alot of potential man, keep workin on your rhyme scheme and your topics, try uppin your vocab so you can expand your thoughts...but this was cool yo, stay up, one (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE O.M.N.I., 01:37:06 03/06/03 Thu
pretty ill -- chromenine, 08:18:37 03/06/03 Thu
long as a mo fo (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:24:23 03/06/03 Thu
tight shit! (NT) -- nemesis, 13:44:05 03/06/03 Thu
somethin new -- c-dawg, 13:11:08 03/04/03 Tue
not that bad of a flow.one (NT) -- a.k., 11:20:29 03/05/03 Wed
ya dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 09:13:47 03/06/03 Thu
ide do anythang -- Lil' Jay, 20:41:08 03/05/03 Wed
interestin approach to old topics but try and use more substance and elevate. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 21:54:03 03/05/03 Wed
ice ice ice,...yada yada yada...u can flow....but u need newer topics...n concepts to stay round here...otherwise cats'll run u out....word of advice...change your name too many lil's in the game (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 22:12:47 03/05/03 Wed
Tight flow man. You straight ballin. Much respect, cause you better than me. (NT) -- Lil' Lucky, 00:23:51 03/06/03 Thu
THanx Dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:13:35 03/06/03 Thu
This is a prime example of what a lot of that watered, down non lyrical, Platnum and Ice bullshit results in doing to a young mind ladies and gentlemen (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:47:07 03/06/03 Thu
YOU FUCKING SUCK (NT) -- Lil G, 08:20:11 03/06/03 Thu
aight, i see you're point....but i'll tell you EXACTLY how it went down wit me.....Fly hit me up talkin bout she been peepin people in the lounge to join OMNI....i asked who, she said me....i aint believe it at first but then she asked YOU, Sunset and she even CALLED Blunt.....everyone said it was cool, so did i not earn it for her to even want me in? (NT) -- Vision...I didnt ask for OMNI....i DID ask for Abzent Minded, 22:46:36 03/05/03 Wed
My styles off-the hook while you get booked from being wack- spitting all shook- I leave hooks deep as Barnacles- and tabernacles underneath Atlantis- writing shit ill as cancerous managements planned to bomb shit like Arabian knights after Wu tipped the the Iron Flag, my lines smack your dad have him warning YOU not to fuck with Path! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:24:10 03/05/03 Wed
this was a dope post... I've seen better from you but this was good as other post's.... and no disrespect but that redfont color got's to go... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:45:47 03/05/03 Wed
I dont like red either.. it's just when I post in blue.. it gets even more irritating to the eyes.. for me anyways.. thanks for peeping.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 13:09:47 03/05/03 Wed
Yep, I'm lovin' it.....tHe h��-�-tHet�c�l/|_ u m � � a r i � �.....We make a great team....Don't we?....HAHAHA....Keep this up....Your word usage and rhetoric is something that's not to be overlooked....Keep this up and stay up.....Oh yeah, what's this "theory" boggling your mind?... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:44:41 03/05/03 Wed
yeah we gotta start reppin' that and making more collaborations.. "HYPOTHETICAL LUMINARIES!" Just the name should send chills up the living cadaver.. lmao.. when my e-mails back up I'll get at you.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:54:31 03/05/03 Wed
This was mad ill son, i liked this not the other style ya dig? The part about hitn chests so hard ya nipples touch was fresh. Nice wordplay on allot bars too, nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:06:21 03/05/03 Wed
Once you get your shit back together we oughta do more audio collabos.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:24:23 03/05/03 Wed
word.. do you got a cool-edit crack...? or a web-address where I can find it.?. (NT) -- Path, 18:52:47 03/05/03 Wed
Dope shit...loved the word usage and everything else...um, try this link inside if you want -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:41:03 03/05/03 Wed
new to the lounge and i'm bout to make an impact -- ONSLAUGHT, 15:38:42 03/05/03 Wed
I agree about the "rapping about girls in the club"....That's played out.....and so is your rhyme style....Sorry, but it's true....It's DAMN true!!!....Try concentrating on bringing your rhyme out in a way that it's different (content-wise) from anybody else....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:23:25 03/05/03 Wed
hit em in the face with my elbow.. made me laugh.. um this was iight.. but yall should put more time into it if you want better feed back.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:46 03/05/03 Wed
real dope but i rap bout clubs and hoes and all that real good tho (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:50:22 03/05/03 Wed
Street Life -- Lil' Jay, 13:25:13 03/05/03 Wed
No Comment, but were you from Jay. -- Lil' Lucky, 14:28:53 03/05/03 Wed
this was the best post I've seen from you... elevate (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:33:44 03/05/03 Wed
I'm sorry, usually I don't stay attentive to the rhythm of agitated-rhymes....sorry, keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:39:41 03/05/03 Wed
this could be cool if you thought harder.. about what you was saying.. just simple.. the style is tired, try harder man I see you can talk so be intelligent! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:55:25 03/05/03 Wed
did u call urself a 2 time loser in ur rhyme?...well...sounds about right...damn yo..u needa elevate...set ur computer up in da attic..maybe that'll help..peace out ralph wiggum (NT) -- DiAtRiBe...feels sorry for springfield, 18:21:54 03/05/03 Wed
Run Tun Tun (That best explains this keystyle cause even I don't know what the fuck I'm talking about!!!!) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:16:41 03/04/03 Tue
"It's like a freedom fight under cerebral heated lights..." THAT LINE DID IT FOR ME...I LIKED THIS...KEEP UPPIN... (NT) -- A dollar ten, 00:40:55 03/05/03 Wed
average..why not think up a more original topic...why do mcs always talk about themselves?some nice lyrical flow though (NT) -- gollum, 02:04:14 03/05/03 Wed
Dope.. The flow was on-point, your best flowing piece for sure.. Yeah kinda did lack direction, but these days thats what im into anyways.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:45:45 03/05/03 Wed
Yah, there was no direction but dope as hell. Flow was nice and ya vocab slid in nicely in allot of spots. I agree, the freedom fight under cerebral heated lights was deep nice key, Once again.. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 17:57:12 03/05/03 Wed
Audio --- 4 Man Collaboration ME, E-Klips, Abz & MC Spit Fire I dont know the other emcees and what they like but Im the FIRST emcee PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:41:03 03/03/03 Mon
sorry cant peep audios in school.... sure this was dope as hell... peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:59:18 03/03/03 Mon
Man...shyt shouldn be slept on.....feeln the beat....ya accent aint bad....sounds good...way better then sum other cats from the uk i heard on the net...other cats came nice as well...but im likin it...keep doin u Eternal nice...1ne (NT) -- Lucian0, 16:59:35 03/03/03 Mon
Eternal, your verbalistics are outstanding...keep that up...E-Klips sounded like he just woke up...I'm sorry for peeping this so late...Abz had the most energy though....MC Spit Fire's voice box is dope......All around, everybody came with theirs....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:05:48 03/05/03 Wed
Main Loop Presents --- Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 6: "Tunnel Vision"...Missed the last 5? Betta' ask somebody! -- ===||Swords--->, 03:37:11 03/05/03 Wed
nice dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:16:28 03/05/03 Wed
Kind of mellow laid back type beat. For some reason I feel that trumpets or horns in some arrangement would go with that bassline......oh well, Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:37:42 03/05/03 Wed
Yeah, I ENJOYED this!!!.....This is something I can picture Eyedea rhyming over...especially over the part where the beat changed...It started to remind me of the feeling that overwhelmed me when I had my out-of-body experience years ago....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:59:10 03/05/03 Wed
New audio ...beat by Swords....Unfinished Product....it's called that because basically it's not fished forreal...I just wanted some honest criticism on it..before I went back and started changing shit..ya know..One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3...Oh yeah To the MOD I'll be back with my replies I gotta run, 11:10:12 03/05/03 Wed
wasn't really feeling this one.. I didn't think I would say that either.. the beat could have been killed way harder then that.. but you did say it was unfinished.. so I check back with you on the finished product peace! "SWORDS THAT BEAT IS ILL!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:36:26 03/05/03 Wed
No offense...but the beat reminded me of those Blaxploitation films from the '70s...Your voice seems inanimated a little....Then again, I have yet to drop an audio...besides you have other audios that I haven't had the chance to peep either...so, I'm going to give credit....when credit's due...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:52:35 03/05/03 Wed
u suck -- BTB, 12:51:28 03/05/03 Wed
fool..YOU suck..wtf is this?? ."u use penis pumps bang do u want me talk chinese ching chang"...go drink some nyquil and go to sleep or just run in warmup suits like martin lawrence and pass out..do something else with ur time ...like seriously.. (NT) -- how do wheel chair kids play arcade games??, 13:05:57 03/05/03 Wed
man give me crack.. I mean give the registered crack for Cool edit pro.. and wheelchair kids play vidio games in the arcade by bring they school books and a extra pillow.. but they gotta put they brakes on so they don't slide-back when the getting amped.. lol.. get at me! not through the mail right now.. lol (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" The devil has taken away his address so I can't recieve mail no more.. what the fuck!, 13:16:17 03/05/03 Wed
i told ya SET gave me the crack..and i have a 56k..sending files takes ALL day..lol..cant help ya there ...damn..and i was bout to ask for a damn audio collab.but ur azz dont even got cool edit lmao!.. (NT) -- lol@way wheelchair kids play arcade games..i hate when they go to the movies..getting the aisle..and its dark and u cant see and u trip over dem and shyt, 14:09:25 03/05/03 Wed
fuck outta here before I muder you... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:23:57 03/05/03 Wed
wheel chairs kids taking the whole aisle... it's dark and you trip over them and shit... hahahahahahahaahahahah!!!! damn thats funny (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:39:19 03/05/03 Wed
LMFAOOO@u use penis pumps bang do u want me talk chinese ching changHOW DA FUK DOES DAT EVEN MAKE SENSE?!?!? hold up..lemme read it again...LMAOO..oh shyt yo..go hang urself with ur underwear and for da sake of ur family..don't leave a suicide note cuz you'll fuk dat up too..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe.., 16:12:31 03/05/03 Wed
damn.... just wanted to start a cypher..... read and reply -- the dark spitter, 13:20:39 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:28:02 03/05/03 Wed
you fuckin fagot.... why is your reply here three times?... your soposed to add to the cypher or get the fuck out bitch (NT) -- the dark spitter, 14:27:45 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style -- Lil' Jay, 13:29:19 03/05/03 Wed
homie your not tha best. stop hatin on my style -- Lil' Jay, 13:30:28 03/05/03 Wed
not to bad. i didn't like it that much though. you just kinda threw this one down really quick huh? (NT) -- Digits, 15:42:14 03/05/03 Wed
My Fate? -- Digits, 12:07:44 03/05/03 Wed
I put a little more thought into this one. Tell me what you think. (NT) -- Digits, 12:22:37 03/05/03 Wed
I liked the part about you looking up and bullets wiz over- your head.. that had a nice feel to it. the rest was decent.. pretty good drop keep it up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:27:15 03/05/03 Wed
agree with path... I think your elevating now... but keep it up and well see... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:49:28 03/05/03 Wed
real dope shit dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:33:17 03/05/03 Wed
love the end.that was some dope shit .stay up (NT) -- a.k., 15:40:26 03/05/03 Wed
pimpin -- Lil' Jay, 08:15:08 03/05/03 Wed
fowin was nice.stay up pimp (NT) -- a.k., 08:24:58 03/05/03 Wed
Delete this please. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:27:31 03/05/03 Wed
After long two seconds of contemplating I agree this should be deleted (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:28:58 03/05/03 Wed
not bad at all. i dont think it should be deleted. (NT) -- Digits, 12:18:36 03/05/03 Wed
uhhhh.... I think "LIL JAY" is a "LIL GAY".... delete this piece of shit because it just wastes threds (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:58:32 03/05/03 Wed
yall hatin cause u aint pimpin so shut up. Dark spitter is tha one on the queer side. (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:16:52 03/05/03 Wed
Ok, umm. It was good, but, I cant find the word im looking for. Help me out here. (NT) -- Lil' Lucky, 14:42:21 03/05/03 Wed
Yo... I wrote this piece last night... its called "street mentalities"... peep and criticize -- the dark spitter, 13:19:28 03/03/03 Mon
Got audio capabilities? cuz it would sound dope.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:47:56 03/03/03 Mon
i liked it. i've liked some of your other stuff better but this was still off the chain. stay up (NT) -- a.k., 14:35:13 03/03/03 Mon
this would def make a nice track, it's got all those live vocal elements! nice,1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 14:48:24 03/03/03 Mon
that was actually a really good rap there you got a flow (NT) -- Lil G, 11:46:45 03/04/03 Tue
Coo -- Elite one ~The Los Angeles Street Team~, 14:05:20 03/05/03 Wed
some new stuff -- a.k., 11:06:52 03/05/03 Wed
keep writn (NT) -- c-dawg, 11:17:55 03/05/03 Wed
Do what I told the guy above you to do (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:25:12 03/05/03 Wed
not too bad (NT) -- Digits, 12:16:24 03/05/03 Wed
keep it gangsta dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:36:01 03/05/03 Wed
inside -- c-dawg, 11:09:55 03/05/03 Wed
your best post by far.liked the second stanza.stay up and keep postin (NT) -- a.k., 11:16:25 03/05/03 Wed
Practice...Practice...Practice...Practice...Practice (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 11:21:44 03/05/03 Wed
i liked it. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 12:12:38 03/05/03 Wed
Was this a drunken freestyle you decided to post up? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:39:26 03/05/03 Wed
this shit was going no where... very weak format and shorter then pee-wee hermans dick in trousers... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:54:35 03/05/03 Wed
Be ready -- D-Formed, 16:03:33 03/04/03 Tue
fuck you. who the fuck cares about your lame ass fuckin posts. Fuck you and all those other wack ass wanna be rappers. Much respect to those holdin down on the lounge. these motherfuckers are embarrassing.FUCKIN DIE AND ROT (NT) -- G.O.D (SORRY YOU FUCKERS WERE BORN), 16:18:22 03/04/03 Tue
The anticipation is killin me.........Like the grinch's echo in the movie You're an Idiot. Yeah I did watch The live action version of the grinch who stole Christmas..... WHAT! (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:20:52 03/04/03 Tue
you have a favorite "day" rhyme? i'll mark my calendar. (NT) -- A dollar ten, 00:42:49 03/05/03 Wed
??????? (NT) -- gollum, 02:07:50 03/05/03 Wed
<---My thoughts on this (NT) -- ===||Swords---> Favorite day rhyme? does he have a favorite "night" rhyme?, 03:47:38 03/05/03 Wed
can't wait till the shit drops (NT) -- a.k., 10:42:16 03/05/03 Wed
WHERE ARE YOU GOING?an interactive board game new from Hasbro�...try to test your skills of analyzation, multi-tasking and reaction time...THE GAME 'US WEEKLY' CALLS... "outrageously fun...Friday nights are now Family nights." GO GET THE GAME YOU ALWAYS WISHED SOMEONE IN STORES NOW!!! -- A dollar ten, 00:38:40 03/05/03 Wed
LOL That's all i gotta say.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:12:39 03/05/03 Wed
not bad, but you r trying to profit from this???? (NT) -- gollum, 02:06:25 03/05/03 Wed
D-ILLUSIONAL IS REALLY CONFINED TO A WHEEL CHAIR? (NT) -- CURIOUS GEORGE, 03:30:09 03/05/03 Wed
fuk u talking bout you midget monkey...wanna dance for quarters or something with lil doorman hats on??...spell the name right at least.. (NT) -- and no i aint confined to be on a wheelchair..., 08:00:32 03/05/03 Wed
what the fuck main. thatr was straight bumb as fuck (NT) -- a.k., 08:18:21 03/05/03 Wed
not to good keep trying (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:19:29 03/05/03 Wed
Well all that extra shit at the bottom wasn't really necessary. You showed you could associate words nicely in the rhyme, but it wasn't very impressive. It seems like you were rambling on about nothing. I think if you focus on what you're writing about you'll come up with something (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:32:58 03/05/03 Wed
Weedolution- this is a true rendition of history -- gollum, 02:00:55 03/05/03 Wed
Interesting.. But tell me this, if the US is so evil for killing off ecosystems that grew it, why are you supporting it by smoking it? Aint that "HIPHOPCRACY" as you say? Guess you bought the "propergander".. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:42:42 03/05/03 Wed
This was alright, the flow was real weak though. I know its hard to throw facts into a rhyme scheme and make the shit go together. I like the fact that you did try to drop some knowledge though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:16:26 03/05/03 Wed

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