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diss -- a.k., 14:31:48 02/28/03 Fri
- Dark Spitter -- Lil' Lucky, 14:59:10 02/28/03 Fri
- what the hell is this? your really getting a bad reputation.. quit wastin thred fag (NT) -- the spitter aka tired of weak emcees+, 15:00:03 02/28/03 Fri
- if this is effort than find a new outlet for your uncreative talents (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:37:58 02/28/03 Fri
- not good not bad (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:22:11 03/05/03 Wed
How it USED to be done.. This is like 1 1/2 years old.. Id even forgot about it till the dude showed me it.. Long Cypher but full of quoteable.. Definite good read.. -- ===||Swords--->, 13:35:13 03/03/03 Mon
- your right this was a good read and worth my time. i would recommend this to anyone who likes tight shit. stay up (NT) -- a.k., 14:19:46 03/03/03 Mon
- damn this was raw ill shit.... I loved it.. keep doin what ya doin.... (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:54:14 03/03/03 Mon
- omg, what pure fire, shit was blazing indeed, both emcees came wit energy and complamented the other's style perfectly, mos def a true gem right here, word life, respected!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 14:59:28 03/03/03 Mon
- fucking ill Swords, Joe came very nice too, i neva even seen anything from that fool, maybe i just neva noticed him or something, but kid has talent...you both shined on this collabo, way too many quoteables for me to pick just one or two, so ill say that this piece was full of nice vocab, superb content, and had me vibing with both flows...nice drop, glad you posted this...peace (NT) -- Essence.....AM, 17:17:08 03/03/03 Mon
- pretty good rap just needs a little more (NT) -- Aaron G., 08:28:56 03/04/03 Tue
- mad shit (NT) -- gollum, 01:42:48 03/05/03 Wed
Struggles -- Digits, 13:36:16 03/04/03 Tue
- real dope (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:40:37 03/04/03 Tue
- the rhyming itself was pretty blah..but since shyt was feelings from YOU and wat YOU feel..cant critique dat..so stay up.. (NT) -- Some Guy From OMNI...wheelchair kids have feelings too!!..just not on their legs..., 14:23:10 03/04/03 Tue
- comin from a broken home i know what you mean pimp.keep posting and stay up (NT) -- a.k., 15:39:28 03/04/03 Tue
- This was like a 1/4 alright the other percentage wasn't. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:29:32 03/04/03 Tue
None -- D-Formed, 14:54:22 03/04/03 Tue
this colab was a nice attempt... still a little weak and the misspells... dont worry I spell very bad to.. never was the friend of the english catogory.. peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:03:38 03/04/03 Tue
Yo Dark Spitter. Collabe with Lil' Lucky -- D-Formed, 15:06:15 03/04/03 Tue
nice collabo (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:24:25 03/04/03 Tue
tight collabo.stay up.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:43:28 03/04/03 Tue
I hope ya'll are like 11 years old, cause this rhyme was elementary. I'm not tryin to knock you I'm just lettin you know the truth. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:27:07 03/04/03 Tue
pissed off freestyle not alot of time -- Lil' Jay, 15:22:29 03/04/03 Tue
i dont know why you call out abcent minded at the end but i thought it was still pretty dope.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:46:44 03/04/03 Tue
pretty decent i liked it. (NT) -- Digits, 16:09:15 03/04/03 Tue
Nice -- D-Formed, 16:17:50 03/04/03 Tue
This was really simple. You'll get more feedback when you post something with more substance (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:23:26 03/04/03 Tue
Main Loop Presents: Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 5 "Calm Under Pressure" -- ===||Swords--->, 03:25:00 03/03/03 Mon
Listening.....nice lil intro....beats OK... yea actually this is kind of funky....feeling it Swords....reminds me of some Ninja Tunes beat....keep it up ...PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:36:51 03/03/03 Mon
Ohh...this is that shit...that last shit I wrote flowed perfectly to this...can I use this or you keeping it for self???? (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:33:24 03/03/03 Mon
this belongs on a shaft soundtrack... I like it... only advice i could give would be to cut the "duh-duh... duh-duh... duh-duh-duh" bass out more in the beginning like you did at about 2:30 of the way through... dope shit swords! (NT) -- INTOX, 18:35:42 03/04/03 Tue
Midwest Ballin' _____________Lil Lucky is a pimp -- Lil' Jay, 12:43:13 03/01/03 Sat
NOT BAD RYHMIN -- A.K., 12:53:15 03/01/03 Sat
kinda good! (NT) -- nemisis, 13:23:18 03/01/03 Sat
Are you fucks serious? (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 13:54:27 03/01/03 Sat
ya im serious y u thank i wrote it keep pimpin there only one (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 16:12:14 03/01/03 Sat
Yo man, this was Pimped out -- Lil' Lucky, 23:51:37 03/01/03 Sat
that was aight but check this...... -- Chi-Towns #1 Playa, 15:52:44 03/04/03 Tue
life -- stoney, 13:13:58 03/04/03 Tue
midwest is dope (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:30:46 03/04/03 Tue
nice (NT) -- Digits, 13:44:23 03/04/03 Tue
fukin sad..go skydive with a wheelchair kid or something..i rather see a wheelchair kid like try and jump into the crowd den see a rhyme from u...this was weak..elevate..or just stay on the ground..who cares.. (NT) -- Imagine wheelchair kids like in the X-games going off them ramps...., 14:40:53 03/04/03 Tue
midwest is the shit.one (NT) -- a.k., 15:36:17 03/04/03 Tue
yo... just was litening to a JUICE freestyle with eyedea... made me want to post a key with that ill mobb deep beat... peep and critcize -- the dark spitter... sorry it might be short I'm capable of longer post..., 13:26:35 03/04/03 Tue
pimp work homie (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 13:29:32 03/04/03 Tue
good (NT) -- Digits, 13:43:06 03/04/03 Tue
this was decent for a key i guess..dont capitalize like every main word..if people truly emcee's..they'll understand the line regardless feel me?..re-read ur shyt before to pick up on a few spelling errors..kinda ruins the flow of reading when u come across a word mispelled..keep posting..keep elevating..at least your a few steps ahead of most of the other newbie.. (NT) -- I Wonder how coaches congratulate wheelchair kids who play sports.cant pat demm on their back or on their azzt..fuk dey do? pat dem on their head??slap 'em over da head?, 14:36:48 03/04/03 Tue
Tha Plot______________Different tha normal style -- Lil' Jay, 13:28:27 03/04/03 Tue
yeah i liked this. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 13:39:35 03/04/03 Tue
yeah i liked this. keep flowin'. (NT) -- Digits, 13:41:42 03/04/03 Tue
ok...this was like blah..nothing interested me at all..it was just there ...not even a good read..elevate kid...be more desciptive..more details..give us more to pick up on and shyt..use bigger vocab to add something to it and shit u know? just keep elevating.. (NT) -- This Guy..Who Like..Stole Shoes From Christopher Reeves..i wonder how many wheelchair people could fit in a normal size elevator.., 14:26:58 03/04/03 Tue
4 ever we ball -- Lil' Lucky, 10:50:40 03/01/03 Sat
this was dope, can you remember the first spit you ever did on here, and i took the piss out of you a little bit well, i take it back this was tight (NT) -- nemesis, 12:42:19 03/01/03 Sat
lil lucky is a pimp dog -- Lil' Jay, 12:44:59 03/01/03 Sat
nigga this shit was wack as fuck..fuck you and your wannabee pimp ass nigga..with your lame ass concept..you suck (NT) -- P.T. from GROUP THERAPY, 17:13:06 03/01/03 Sat
HoLLa fo' tha dirty..dirty -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 12:01:39 03/03/03 Mon
I liked this. Finally something that sounds like it didn't come out of the 17th century poetry on here. (NT) -- Digits, 18:35:11 03/03/03 Mon
Thankz -- Lil' Lucky, 13:23:59 03/04/03 Tue
Off count -- Lil' Lucky, 14:56:47 02/28/03 Fri
the only part about feeling "lucky" was when i finished reading this...this was very weak shyt..i hope u were like playing around and pulled out ur pad from like 5th grade and typed up some of ur old rhymes or something..cuz if not..then wow..please elevate..and dont know why u trying catz up in here..if ur not nice urself.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..i wonder if christopher reeves gets lucky when he bets on horse races.., 16:20:58 02/28/03 Fri
I want you to read the VERY last THREE words in this post....here it is:..."....it's fuckin' sad...."Well, you said it yourself....."It is fuckin' sad!!!"<<<<<...Referring to this post.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:07:08 02/28/03 Fri
A lil basic yo, dont try taking a cat whos better than u cus i leraned that this week no matter how strong u feel inside its better left alone, the like the thread u used for this post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:35:53 02/28/03 Fri
This wasnt me -- Lil' Lucky, 23:41:19 02/28/03 Fri
i didn't think it was that bad even though it was about me. you can do better. one (NT) -- a.k, 14:39:04 03/03/03 Mon
nice work (NT) -- stoney, 13:20:58 03/04/03 Tue
This is a production I'm going to recite for a 600-level "Cultural Trauma" course about the effects of cataclysm on social narratives and the contexts in which these memories are encoded. It's not meant to be spit, but said. Any comments are welcome. Sorry about the length. Thanks. -- Blueprint, 19:37:09 03/01/03 Sat
feeling this, intellectiual spoken word type ish, makes analyze shit more deeply, pretty deep ish blue much respect here!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:07:35 03/01/03 Sat
hmmm...this was nice...definite nice word usage...flow was cool...and it was real shit, mixed wit some knowledge...i liked that.."Nurture over nature, Blank canvases, we humans consume variant narratives, that - like legs - carry us through precarious areas."..my favorite line..just stood out to me...the flow of it..and internal rhymin..and just the content of that one line...nice....overall a nice piece...long though...but who am I to complain about long shit haha...anyways, a fairly enjoyable read...stay up kidd, peace. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:33:16 03/02/03 Sun
Inner content, nice Blue, i remember a deep one u did bout ya buddy wrecking in a car. wordplay was nice flowed well i loved bars 5-8 allot. THis was a nice job, good luck with this in ya class id give u an A. Stay up (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:58:24 03/02/03 Sun
real long but nic -- stoney, 13:19:46 03/04/03 Tue
found this in an old book from a year or 2 ago and thought i'de post it -- a.k., 11:22:54 03/04/03 Tue
actually in my view... this was kinda nice... keep droppin pieces like this and you'll see.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:09:24 03/04/03 Tue
nice (NT) -- stoney, 13:18:17 03/04/03 Tue
Repost ta get a lil more feedback on this PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G., 11:33:49 03/02/03 Sun
Peeped this the first time...work on your wordplay and multi's more because that's seems to be the direction you headed in anyway ...other tthen that what can I say but keep writting ..no matter if it's garbage or not eventually it'll get better...I hope (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:17:38 03/02/03 Sun
im sure this was good but im really not in the mood to read shit this long now but i'll read it later dawg. PEACE! (NT) -- nemesis, 16:22:25 03/02/03 Sun
Sick Shit -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:21:12 03/02/03 Sun
this was my first time reading this post and i'de read it again cause it was some dope shit.keep posting one (NT) -- a.k., 13:06:49 03/04/03 Tue
any one in the mood for a cypher.. reply... -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:08:44 03/03/03 Mon
I guess....I'll add on.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:30:43 03/03/03 Mon
...my turn...again.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�..., 17:51:02 03/03/03 Mon
my turn -- BaZiC BaRz, 19:26:55 03/03/03 Mon
Going on -- Lil' Lucky, 23:29:41 03/03/03 Mon
guess ill drop a few lines -- ===||Swords-->, 02:10:25 03/04/03 Tue
my reply -- the dark spitter, 13:05:18 03/04/03 Tue
HUDDWAH -- Gollum, 11:10:17 03/04/03 Tue
yo first of the rhyme was pretty basic. step it up a notch. second your the type of person who fears confrontation so you sit back and wait until it hits home. then you ask how could this happen. i say kill them all be for they kill us. (NT) -- starks, 11:22:16 03/04/03 Tue
keep tha flow going better (NT) -- Lil G, 11:57:29 03/04/03 Tue
not that bad of a flow.keep posting and stay up (NT) -- a.k., 13:00:45 03/04/03 Tue
Am i crazy???????---- Gimme the truth -- C4 aka str8 jacket, 18:56:35 03/02/03 Sun
I be likin dat crazy shit -- Ode Masta Odd, 22:52:18 03/02/03 Sun
This had it's Up parts.. More downs then ups, sorry to say.. Shoulda kept it clever throughout.. "Hannibal lecter met jeffery dalmer in jail Hannibal dropped the soap, 9 mos later he was like what the hell/Out popped me Doctor was so scared he fuckin dropped me/" HAHA..That made me laugh.. peace.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:29:41 03/03/03 Mon
Yea some aiight lines but I weren't really feeling this tho.. a bit simplistic PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 07:25:53 03/03/03 Mon
Not bad NOt thaaaa best (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:30:32 03/03/03 Mon
SkRaTe -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 11:50:15 03/03/03 Mon
thats FUCKED UP but on a 1-10, its a 6 -- Digits, 12:12:45 03/03/03 Mon
as Digits said thats FUCKED UP I would probably give you a 4 to 5 (NT) -- Lil G, 11:52:53 03/04/03 Tue
just a lil' flow -- Digits, 12:04:02 03/03/03 Mon
this had some ok flow... but over all I dident like the word usage or that " down south mentality... this was wack.. please elevate (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 12:52:12 03/03/03 Mon
No comment.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:54:32 03/03/03 Mon
not that bad. "i make giants look migits" was my favorite line (NT) -- a.k., 14:14:34 03/03/03 Mon
off tha hook -- BaBy RiZa....Tha DiRtY SouTh QueeN, 14:54:06 03/03/03 Mon
not bad (NT) -- Lil G, 11:42:11 03/04/03 Tue
I was tired of gettin bitches ta for not being lkyrical, so here i switched my style up -- INS, 18:22:41 03/03/03 Mon
ok (NT) -- flowmasta, 19:00:53 03/03/03 Mon
i honestly didnt read all of this..if someone put the title u did..would u peep it? u cant even spell LYRICAL..wow..as far as the rhyme..it was ok for the most part..ur rhyming structure was HORRIBLE...dats all.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...ur steps to success are going slower den wheelchair kids rock climbing..., 22:39:15 03/03/03 Mon
Aint no way in hell im gonna read all this bullshit.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 02:01:55 03/04/03 Tue
this is the most stupidest rap i h;ave ever heard (NT) -- Aaron G., 08:25:31 03/04/03 Tue
not feelin anything i just scanned through. another waste of space and time. go volunteer somewhere and make a difference. (NT) -- starks, 09:14:49 03/04/03 Tue
you wrote some dumb shit and need to rethink your rap. (NT) -- a.k., 10:47:47 03/04/03 Tue
tough guy...Jay Z suxs tooooo -- gollum, 11:23:03 03/04/03 Tue
''Raps Ominous Rage''. Peep -- starks (the mouth of madness), 10:47:27 03/04/03 Tue
this was pretty dope (NT) -- a.k., 10:50:50 03/04/03 Tue
pretty typical-about being tough -- gollum, 11:17:27 03/04/03 Tue
classic performence -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 15:02:21 03/03/03 Mon
damn this was nothin but that raw hip hop shit very ill..... ps you wanna maybe cypher with the dark spitter? are colab will include highly intensive vocab, word usage and on of the illest forms.... reply back to this and I'll have my e-mail ready for you.. aiight? peace (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:15:48 03/03/03 Mon
this was tight, i like the whole paintbrush thing you got going, i also have similar thoughts...well done, it flowed nicely and the content was straight...nice drop...unO (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:59:28 03/03/03 Mon
that was f@@king dope -- INS, 18:31:18 03/03/03 Mon
yeah nice. you had some good word usage here. stay up and keep postin. (NT) -- starks, 10:54:23 03/04/03 Tue
I really feel like a ASS-HOLE for how many times this shit has been up here.. BAD QUALITY and all .. but fuck it the LYRICS and BEAT sound so nice.. so for the last time.. "EMINENTS DANCE!" REAL AUDIO of-course! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 21:23:25 02/28/03 Fri
wow...lol.some sick shyt..flow was dope..lyrics were nice..beat was pretty cool 2..some nice shyt..mos def a nice audio yo..should drop more often..about the program..i use cool edit..got the crack from SET...and how could i get at you if ur email is down?!..u dont have yahoo messenger or even MSN messenger? lol...holla back.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..i should do an audio called "wheelchair dance", 21:39:35 02/28/03 Fri
Right now, I could give a shit about the quality...honestly, this was entertaining to listen to...the beat was nice...that's actually a soothing type of instrumental which I dig...the flow ran well with the beat...you got a real professional sound to it...I played it over a few times and I really feel the sound...dope ass lyrics...imagine if the quality was top notch!...If you need a Cool Edit Pro 2.0 Program(Registered)..hit me up at my email...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:40:23 02/28/03 Fri
not cool -- Lil' Jay, 12:47:35 03/01/03 Sat
illness...ur very few i heard on the net that can rhyme intense wordplay and big words and actually make it sound Nice as hell Hotshyt 1ne (NT) -- Lucian0, 14:21:33 03/01/03 Sat
WHERE IS THE FLOW AT (NT) -- A.K., 15:58:02 03/01/03 Sat
Nice shit Path...uhm yeah the quality is a bit low, but that doesn't take away from the skills any. Nice to finally hear you again in audio. Do you have any cds made that you're giving away? If so you gotta hit me with one yo. Anyway I'll holla back atcha kid....One (NT) -- The Accent of Tundra and Camelions', 09:05:08 03/04/03 Tue
Main Loop Presents --- Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats pt. 6: "Tunnel Vision"...Missed the last 5? Betta' ask somebody! -- ===||Swords--->, 02:00:36 03/04/03 Tue
[I wonder what would happen if I mixed the regular ingredients with some gutter???].....The lyrics to my next audio..should be done within the next few days if every thing goes as planned...caution:some gutter shit -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:14:07 03/02/03 Sun
I'm Feelin it...... -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:14:17 03/02/03 Sun
Rhyme scheme was nice in this.. Feeling it.. Some good lines.. Nice imagery.. Has a Street-feel to it, you got that conveyed well.. I can hear a calm but rugged beat to this here.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-Almost didnt see this.. Gotta do something with the colors sometimes kid.., 03:34:57 03/03/03 Mon
hey that was good -- Digits, 12:16:12 03/03/03 Mon
Last Level,game over!(part 2) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:05:23 02/28/03 Fri
I don't know man, this is def a new concept that ive seen like this allot of wordplay was nice in here. Flow was lost a lil here and there but its different. i gotta say this alright though nice job wit it PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 21:15:03 02/28/03 Fri
lmao this was dope as HELL I was feeling the creativity.. very nice drop.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:33:01 02/28/03 Fri
yo..this shyt was very dope..entertaing..a lil long but entertaining..reminded me of some shyt i did back in the day ..like some shyt like i was i was jumping from each nintendo system..like from atari to nintendo to gameboy to supernintendo,etc..and explaining wat game i was in and shyt lol...and i called it "GAME OVER" lol..dope dope..nice shyt yo.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...how come there is no games about wheelchair people??!, 21:46:55 02/28/03 Fri
For some reason, your format and rhyme scheme sorta reminds me of IronMonk...the wordplay and CAPITALIZATION... anyways, this was a tight read...I enjoyed how you did this...I haven't seen this type of shit done in a while...yes, entertaining to read...I'm going to check out some of those old school games that was mentioned in here...brought back memories man...heh..keep on writing. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 22:06:54 02/28/03 Fri
Yo at first you don't even notice the wordplay and puns on games,shit like this got me thinkin on the lounge we don't read each other shit enough,illest i've seen from you,you've kept that street ebonic/polyslyllabic scientific shit tight all around wordplay and conceptualism off the hook,post of the mont material this is the stuff i'd guage myself by (NT) -- Sinister aka T>HM<, 13:37:48 03/01/03 Sat
thugged out (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 16:13:25 03/01/03 Sat
i have one phrase to say about this. "the shit" this was one of the best post i've seen on this motha fucka yet. and the subject matter was original (NT) -- a.k., 11:25:52 03/03/03 Mon
''The Nibiru Theory''.....some deep shit to make you think. We all came from the same mass. And we will all die when it again comes to pass! scary ain't it -- starks (the mouth of madness), 10:48:19 03/02/03 Sun
Fresh, a prophetical twist ta how we ignore the truths of our own destructive worth. I remember talking ta ya about this before STarks, this was nice.bars 11 -15 hit the nail on the head about what lies really are son nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:50:02 03/02/03 Sun
this was sick, critique wise, i cant really say anything negative about it, flow was on, and the content was very nice...i have neva heard of this theory before, but it definetly holds truth to someone with an open mind who isnt already caught up in one directing belief....keep dropping the knowledge, peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 14:08:48 03/02/03 Sun
Damn!!! what is everybody at the library today...Naw I agree withEssence..this was sick...That sounds like some Holy Tabernacle type shit..Where did you get that from??? (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:33:47 03/02/03 Sun
hey, i loved this shit, it was dope cause of flow, wordplay and language used. keep writin shit this interesting (NT) -- nemesis, 16:19:48 03/02/03 Sun
Damn.......... -- C4 aka Str8 Jacket, 18:25:18 03/02/03 Sun
Damn...I read some shit on this subject by a poster on BET.com's forums, they said blackness (the color and state of mind) was the essence of all that shit, kinda scary when you think about it (NT) -- Novakane, 20:22:34 03/02/03 Sun
liked the subject matter. nice ryhmes too (NT) -- a.k., 08:17:29 03/03/03 Mon
NIce work (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:32:39 03/03/03 Mon
NEW POST!!!!!....yes i know-it's been a LOOOONG time since ya read somethin from me..but here it is...a song i just finished up earlier today..."The Wonders of Meaning"...all critique and feedback is appreciated...kinda switched up styles in each verse too...hope ya'll enjoy! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:17:59 03/02/03 Sun
yo this was cool man. nice imagery and followthrew with word play. all you need is a dope beat to make this into a sure shot audio .peace (NT) -- starks, 07:30:22 03/02/03 Sun
Yo, i feel u big time on this piece yo. Content made make mentals work. The first bars really locked me in nice job wit those. The rest feel right inta place. Very nice job PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 11:53:50 03/02/03 Sun
To be honest I wasn't feeling this...I started reading and it just lost my attention..but hey do you..One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:37:15 03/02/03 Sun
pimp shit -- a.k., 08:09:04 03/03/03 Mon
every day ontology -- Monochid, 11:09:29 03/02/03 Sun
Some lines were long but this was dope. THe content was on point for ya subject of metaphysics and our state of being, i think this is the first post I've checked by you nice job stay up (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:45:19 03/02/03 Sun
DAMN!!!!I'm glad I checked this shit out...In the beginning I wasn't really feeling it ..but after the fourth line..the shit just got erupted... (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 14:26:16 03/02/03 Sun
This is the kinda stuff I like to see in here. On track, well said and interesting. One suggestion....I was having trouble finding out where to start and stop in spots. That doesn't mean anything need changed, but you'd be even more destructive with a, more, user-friendly format. Sweet post. Looking forward to the next. (NT) -- Blueprint, 14:38:43 03/02/03 Sun
This was very hard to read due to the fact that the scheme is just not there.. Work more rhymes between the lines to help the reader move along..Or learn to convey your thoughts in a more graspable way, so that you dont hafta make these erratic verses.. After all, we are just trying to read it.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:39:12 03/03/03 Mon
MILL' N' MAC ON THE M-I-C -- MAC MI$TA, 19:41:13 03/01/03 Sat
first dude..shyt was like boring 2 me..i hope dat was a freestyle..cuz if not..then wow...it flowed tight..just no like..intensity or emotion..it like dragged and shyt..it was like blah blah blah and shyt..mac's shyt was nicer ..flow was nice..lyrics werent my style and shit but it was iight..not too bad of a audio.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...christopher reeves is gully..., 22:50:25 03/01/03 Sat
LET ME ASK YOU A QUESTION..WHAT ABOUT WHAT IM SPITTIN AINT YOU FEELIN'.....GIVE A REAL CRIT TRIC'...HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 05:34:51 03/02/03 Sun
sorry....still can't peep audios ya'll. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:27:19 03/02/03 Sun
yo even if that first verse was afreestyle i'd be embarrassed. sounded like an adult with a mental structure of an ignorant street thug attempting to rap. Mac your verse was decent though not really into that southern shit. peace (NT) -- starks, 10:44:02 03/02/03 Sun
ive had some writers block and this shit popped into my head, probably not the best but peep anyways -- nemesis, 13:32:21 03/01/03 Sat
You do have writers block...........But I know what you mean about the battlin shit like its too hard to elevate like the other kats on this bitch..like i couldn't put up a lyrical fight against some of 'em (NT) -- Sinister, 13:57:19 03/01/03 Sat
nemisis keeps it g -- Lil' Jay, 15:49:52 03/01/03 Sat
Yea, I really can't stand "fine chicks with eight inch dicks" either. That's the worst. I think we can all agree. (NT) -- Blueprint, 19:50:43 03/01/03 Sat
MIDWEST -- A.K., 13:02:42 03/01/03 Sat
there is something you need to learn if your white (are you) ya aint aloud to say "nigga" in a spit dawg but still good spit though (NT) -- nemesis, 13:21:30 03/01/03 Sat
NO I AINT WHITE -- A.K., 13:31:35 03/01/03 Sat
Ak is my big homie Midwest Boys dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:52:24 03/01/03 Sat
Shut da fuck up...yall niggaz aint runnin shit...CINCINATI nigga..hey..dont rep the midwest if you just gonna embarass us with those wack ass rymez...peace (NT) -- P.T OF GROUP THERAPY, 17:24:45 03/01/03 Sat
Capitol Sin The Self Conflicting conspiracy theory tyranny's near me and barely can hear me..I see the Lounge benefited from my Metaswords stage..I'm The Mimic (HOPE YOU ENJOY) -- Sinister a.k.a. T.H.E.M. the Self-Contrasting Theorem(What up Verse,Hex,and Swoon)I been readin too much Nostradamus bullshit, 13:26:44 03/01/03 Sat
this was hard to read cause you wrote it in paragraphs so i didnt get it all , so ok (NT) -- nemesis, 13:43:02 03/01/03 Sat
NOPE..fix ur lines...break em up...HOW DOES YOU POSTING A RHYME ON A PUBLIC BOARD IN PARAGRAPH FORM "MAKE YOU FLOW BETTER?"...WHEN THE READERS HAVE TO READ IT?...thats retarded......so lets say i give u the benefit of the doubt....that still doesnt mean u cant break up into lines..."SO IT CAN FLOW FOR THE READER"....if it helps YOU flow....then it should only help WHILE UR IN THE PROCESS OF WRITING IT at that time...peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 13:57:40 03/01/03 Sat
Dunn,when is your album coming out? .....and this rhyme was horrible.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:09:44 03/01/03 Sat
dope shit -- Lil' Jay, 16:10:28 03/01/03 Sat
IS THIS IN PARAGRAFH FORM YOU FUCKING DUMBASS (NT) -- A.K., 16:35:25 03/01/03 Sat
**SOME REAL LYRICAL SHYT NOT NO FAKE THUG SHIT DATS BEEN POSTED HERE LATELY..**PLEASE ONLY CRITIQUE FLOW,LYRICS,&DELIVERY.I KNOW MY MIC IS WACK & MY SOUNDCARD IS BLAH..JUST LOOKING 4 CRITIQUES ON WHAT I MENTIONED..SINCE DATS SOMETHING I COULD CONTROL ON MY OWN...ENTITLED.."MENTAL VISIONS"..LYRICS INCLUDED INSIDE...KINDA RUSHED THIS FOR SOME REASON..WANTED TO WORK ON OTHER BEATS ALREADY LOL -- D-luSIoNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Fast and the Furious 3 will be based on wheelchair races.., 16:05:01 02/28/03 Fri
no offense... but this was horrible... never in a million years would this shit get any CEOs attention... I hope you intend on starting ya own record company and new form of music... probably named cRap... horrible (NT) -- Morbid Armor, 16:35:12 02/28/03 Fri
This computer won't allow me access...but from what I read in the lyrics...I would've enjoyed the accompaniment of a beat to it.....Keep this up.....Coming from me, your content seems somewhat "deep".....Don't take offense to that...I'm just stating my opinion....click the name for the e-mail you've been in want of lately.....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�......Do you have the new "Murs" album yet?......, 16:51:42 02/28/03 Fri
Forgive my stupidity.......now click.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�, 17:20:31 02/28/03 Fri
ill wordplay and style is hype, feeling the flow and content alot, not bad work at all!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:00:07 02/28/03 Fri
BEAT was sick man.. lyrics was dope man.. the flow was kinda slow starting in energy.. topic was dope fit the beat well.. kinda sound like a Young sunset with a knowledge base-strickly for the purpose.. I enjoyed this.. what audio program did you use.. my cool-edit was a trail version.. so I can't make audios till I get a new program any ideas? "ONE! GET AT ME!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:03:52 02/28/03 Fri
Nice approach, my audio is on the fritz but this is just real wit the content. The intro was real nice wit the first bars. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:21:08 02/28/03 Fri
Flow is much improved.. Still a few lines here and there that you gotta rush.. Some of the syllables arent as clear as others.. Lyrics were nice.. Beat was ill.. nice selection.. not much else to say.. Good improvement.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:12:13 03/01/03 Sat
This was a pretty tight audio...when you compare this to your first, MUCH improvement on the flow...I think you still have to pronounce some words better, but other than that...I just think you've elevated overall...I like the instrumental...some smooth shit...and you rode it pretty well...but what am I to say???..lol...can't wait for the new shit...keep on gradually improving and you'll prove to be up there real quick...dope shit..peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 01:11:51 03/01/03 Sat
YOUR FUCKIN DUMB -- A.K., 16:03:12 03/01/03 Sat
REAL NOT FAKE(ONLY HAD A COUPLE MIN) -- A.K., 13:29:46 03/01/03 Sat
kinda tight post not ya best (NT) -- nemesis, 13:37:33 03/01/03 Sat
AK keeps it g -- Lil' Jay, 15:51:00 03/01/03 Sat
What a world we live in yall. thoughts for the lounge PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G., 21:10:35 02/28/03 Fri
I really tried to get past the first 5 lines but the timing was off.. a little to long I guess with the completion of the sentence long-winded with liitle focus.. keep spittin' though.. (NT) -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 21:29:45 02/28/03 Fri
I agree with Eminent it didn't strike me hard like some other shit posted...think about yours compared up with theirs..you sounded bored (NT) -- Sinister aka T.H.E.M. The Herald of Extreme Metaphors, 13:43:03 03/01/03 Sat
to jay the hustler and the rest of ya fags that want some of this... -- the dark spitter, 15:14:34 02/28/03 Fri
why even waste ur time yo? dont give them attention like they deserve a battle rhyme or something..u know u nicer den dem..just leave it at dat..only bad thing...try and use spellchecker next time..::pats ya on the back and walks away:: (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..wheelchair kids are nicer then lil kids on carriages.., 16:12:51 02/28/03 Fri
***Listening to "Callarama Gala" by Sonic Sum***..........yeah, I agree with D-Lusional on this....It was alright, which is to say that the rhyme was more than enough ammo for the cats you were aiming the pistol of lyricism at.....Sway yourself from perverse sayings of "wack emcees" and continue your journey on the rocky roads of elevating.....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:02:27 02/28/03 Fri
Ehh dont say wack so much a lil time on ya thoughts it will come much clearer PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:25:41 02/28/03 Fri
you do have sum talent that needs developing. elevate! (NT) -- nemesis, 13:18:22 03/01/03 Sat
God please forgive me .. DON'T LEAVE ME! I need your light to see.. I LOVE YOU, DON'T FORSAKE ME! Please walk with me and HOLD your IMAGE. -- Raishawn - the ENIGMA of ELOHEIM I lead the pack!, 21:55:50 02/28/03 Fri
you and hex should start a game show called "can u understand me?" ..and just have dudes like u 2 say some shyt and make everyone figure out wat the fuk they saying..lmaoo..cuz damn!..some of the lines i'm like "dope shyt!" then another one i'm like "wtf this fool just say??"..this was..a ...interesting piece?..dont know how to explain it..lol...::shaking head in confusion::..i hope u find an audio program soon..to do audios rather den these LONG as fuk post lol...stay up yo.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...wheelchair kids who say they can walk the talk..is dat shyt confusing too?, 23:05:53 02/28/03 Fri
::If God is for us, then who could be against us::: don't look the other way anymore. peace. (NT) -- ThE INTroVERT of Abzent Minded Inc., 00:00:35 03/01/03 Sat
Yo, I liked that illuminating thresholds of resistance line I Can relate to to that in a sense (NT) -- Sinister aka T.H.E.M., 12:45:11 03/01/03 Sat
good job -- Lil' Jay, 12:46:09 03/01/03 Sat
CONFUSSING AS HELL -- A.K., 12:50:17 03/01/03 Sat
Trying ta stay up and regain movement to this pen PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:50:30 02/27/03 Thu
STILL lmao ... ahahahahhahahahhahahah! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:08:53 02/27/03 Thu
why haven't you killed yourself yet? I must not have tried hard enough last night... (NT) -- INTOX, 22:09:58 02/27/03 Thu
I don't know what these two up here are talking about but, about this post, I thought it was creative as hell. Keep up. You've been prolific lately. (NT) -- Blueprint, 22:51:35 02/27/03 Thu
This was alright. I couldnt tell if the lines were too long or not long enough, you kind of jumped around a bit with that. If you gonna use Bimbo in a rhyme you got to flip that better. Keep doin what you doin though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:46:40 02/27/03 Thu
NOT BAD -- A.K., 12:41:24 03/01/03 Sat
to dark spitter -- Jay Tha Hustla, 14:17:56 02/28/03 Fri
nice -- a.k., 14:48:39 02/28/03 Fri
dont waste your breath there buddy... your just a hater like the rest of you wacks.. QUIT WASTIN THRED PUNk.... THE HELL OUTTA HERE>> (NT) -- the dark spitter, 14:57:30 02/28/03 Fri
This has got ta be the GAYEST BEEF in here, why dont u two kiss and make up do go create a stupid ass post together, its like the ambiguosly gay duo meats Scratch and Burn LOL (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:41:24 02/28/03 Fri
spittaz a sippa -- c-dawg, 15:24:46 02/28/03 Fri
wtf is this? ur wack as fuk kid...go jump off ur moms head with a parachate u midget tosser...fuk was this?..get a hobby..go fishing or something..stop rhyming.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...want a new hobby?..try and put some chrome rims on ghetto kids wheelchairs.., 16:08:41 02/28/03 Fri
WHORE-ABLE... damn... this was weak (NT) -- Morbid Armor, 16:41:36 02/28/03 Fri
Please...do not disrespect the honorable art of lyricism with tripe rhymes such as this......Bring something intelligent, if not original, to the table.....Play around with word placement, word usage, wordplay, end-rhyme, internal rhyme, etc....There's many different ways to make yourself stand out besides "picking fights" with cats on a website...unless you're up to par with your "opponent"....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:57:02 02/28/03 Fri
oh my gosh this was a waste of time to read.. plus it seems you used somone elses lines... WHAT BITCH YOU REALLY WANNA BATLLE ? (NT) -- the dark spitter, 17:14:28 02/28/03 Fri
pretty weak flow, wack content, lack of insperation it seems, or in lame terms, blah! (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 20:02:38 02/28/03 Fri
Dont waste threads man if u serious about being a lyricist, hit the lab PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:23:09 02/28/03 Fri
just a free written I wrote... to sharpen skills... peep and critisize -- the dark spitter, 13:30:16 02/27/03 Thu
not bad -- Begotten child, 14:59:16 02/27/03 Thu
Great free -- Lil' Lucky, 16:45:45 02/27/03 Thu
This was aiight...2 things thou...1..this is a keystyle not a freestyle...you don't write freestyle...2. a M-16 is a rifle not a gun..big difference...like I said this was aiight.. (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 18:47:46 02/27/03 Thu
naw man this was pretty dope man.. keep spitttin' peace! -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!", 20:22:11 02/27/03 Thu
Not bad, i liked the first few bars but u said it was just ta sharpen up so stay up big manPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:58:37 02/27/03 Thu
I was expecting a little more in terms of your lines cause this was pretty slim. It seems like you were writing something to spit outload. It was cool but short thats all. Peace (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:54:22 02/27/03 Thu
fag -- c-dawg, 15:11:07 02/28/03 Fri
a dark spitter early morning post... a key to sharpen the ill skills... -- the dark spitter... sorry if the post is mad short... ya'll know I'm capable of postin more, 13:10:32 02/28/03 Fri
better den the previous post i've read..some lines looked like u tried too hard..this wasnt bad..but nothing special either..keep droppin though..maybe those other newbies will leave once they see a somewhat of a newbie like urself actually has potential and they dont.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..wheelchair kids have no potential climbing up stairs.., 14:03:17 02/28/03 Fri
ur a piece of shit -- Jay Tha Hustla, 14:19:30 02/28/03 Fri
not bad but your still a bitch -- a.k., 14:21:06 02/28/03 Fri
bitch -- c-dawg, 15:01:21 02/28/03 Fri
wrtie your own shit -- c-dawg, 15:07:00 02/28/03 Fri
Gangsta -- Chock, 08:29:23 02/28/03 Fri
uhh..it flowed? dats about it...as far as this being entertaining..i seen more excitement in old people's faces when their lunch comes out in a nursery home..i dont know yo..with lyrics like this..i'm suresure it would sound cool rhyming out loud.but reading da text is kinda wack..get a mic...cool edit..and record the damn shit..until then..please refrain from posting every again..thank u.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..Wheelchair kids playing tag is more entertaning ...., 10:37:40 02/28/03 Fri
decent -- k masta, 10:46:19 02/28/03 Fri
pimp shit -- Jay Tha Hustla, 14:22:33 02/28/03 Fri
not bad -- a.k., 14:34:47 02/28/03 Fri
jus' a lil' flow -- Digits, 14:26:16 02/28/03 Fri
jus' a lil' flow -- Digits, 14:24:31 02/28/03 Fri
3-strong -- k masta, 11:16:24 02/28/03 Fri
pretty good -- a.k., 11:19:23 02/28/03 Fri
orgasm -- bubbly cum, 12:39:59 02/28/03 Fri
dingle -- berry, 12:41:16 02/28/03 Fri
another wasted piece of text... damn like I'm sick of these wack asses comin in here dropin nonsense... FUCK OUTTA HERE FAGS!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:49:11 02/28/03 Fri
another wasted piece of text... damn like I'm sick of these wack asses comin in here dropin nonsense... FUCK OUTTA HERE FAGS!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:50:28 02/28/03 Fri
this is good dark spitter eats dick email me pussy if u wanna say sumthin come to my house i dont give a fuck u stupid bastard -- Jay tha Hustla, 14:09:04 02/28/03 Fri
to dark spitters faggot ass -- Jay Tha Hustla, 14:11:13 02/28/03 Fri
Diss -- D-Formed, 22:20:15 02/27/03 Thu
"IM gona take on dlaster and that lil lucky;tear you both up, like a rubber ducky;"..ROTFLMFAOOOO!!!! (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.i...wheelchair kids are "too big" for rubber duckiez.., 23:01:23 02/27/03 Thu
damn.......yeah..........just damn.... ='( ......(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...feels sorry 4 u, 23:17:24 02/27/03 Thu
Ray Blaster? Who the fuck are you Marvin the Martian (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:41:56 02/27/03 Thu
lmao.. ahahha... omg I can't stop laughing.. ahahhaha! (NT) -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!", 00:13:26 02/28/03 Fri
pimp -- k masta, 10:53:26 02/28/03 Fri
good -- c-dawg, 10:54:32 02/28/03 Fri
Fine -- Lil' Lucky, 11:21:34 02/28/03 Fri
D-Formed.. cblmdm65-221-33-25.buckeye-express.com / 65.221.33.25..Lil Lucky..cblmdm65-221-33-25.buckeye-express.com / 65.221.33.25..ya dumb fuckin' herb..u forgot about da IP Addresses..u throwin battle verses at urself..lmfaoo..fuk outta here wit dat..and since i'm havin fun exposin u..those two fags dat replied to this piece of shyt post.."k masta" and "c-dawg"..they got da same IP too.is dat ur gay lover u got to reply to ur posts to make urself feel better? u r officially da biggest loser on this lounge(NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe..feels sorry 4 u..., 12:37:23 02/28/03 Fri
Oh -- D-Formed, 13:15:28 02/28/03 Fri
HAHA -- D-Formed, 13:23:40 02/28/03 Fri
How the days seem to slowly fade as the thoughts and intentions of men seem to evade a right or just phase.. let us birth a thought in reasoning and overstanding! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 23:12:14 02/27/03 Thu
god damn kid...shyt was crazy..some parts i was confused as reading a hex post..but others were fukin sick..kobe line was hott..alot of niceness up in this piece..ur style mos def like on another level den most cats i've ever peeped..u on some shyt for real..like u sniff clue and smoke a blunt the size of a broom stick before u lace rhymes and shyt lol..ur mind is whoa! lol..nice drop though yo..yo..u have AIM or yahoo messenger? ...gotta holla at ya bout something.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Professor X is proof dat some wheelchair people have dope minds.., 23:18:31 02/27/03 Thu
I'm gon be honest, I found this really hard to follow. Your word association was nice and your vocab was intense, to the point where I just got lost. You seem to have a different type of style where you rhyme words that end sentances with words in the middle lines and such of the next. I'd love to hear it spit cause it would sound hot with this style.......Rembrandt/Gillette line was killin it...Keep doin you fella. Peace (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:40:31 02/27/03 Thu
yo dunn felt the last line of ya piece... nice vocab and ill format (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:53:14 02/28/03 Fri
I had to do it Pt 2. (Once again it's on) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:06:32 02/27/03 Thu
yo this was the best drop I've seen from you ever... real good! (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 14:44:00 02/27/03 Thu
ONE the creative tip, Its one of the best Ive seen -- Begotten child, 15:03:56 02/27/03 Thu
phat shit I really liked it (NT) -- Dlaster, 17:51:26 02/27/03 Thu
One of the best iv ever seen -- Lil' Lucky, 18:03:14 02/27/03 Thu
Now this is what I'm talking bout...drop some knowledge on these cats...and that Adolf Hitler quote...that's bout the only truthful thing he ever said...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 18:56:38 02/27/03 Thu
wow .. very impressive man.. very nice.. imformative.. great drop man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:39:04 02/27/03 Thu
Knowledge is power and this spit makes u a very powerful man, I was wondering why I aint seen u in a minute. The crowd questions was a nice twist, the last verse was dope (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 21:01:32 02/27/03 Thu
Just the fact that you've organized all of this information, and brought it full circle is impressive. This is excellent. This is what I would like to do someday. With your ablility to relate facts you could apply yourself to bigger projects?????? Looking forward to the next. (NT) -- Blueprint, 22:58:37 02/27/03 Thu
tight ass ryhme -- k masta, 10:59:29 02/28/03 Fri
Elastics the rubber-band luva man has returned.. get ready for the curtain! -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!", 20:18:08 02/27/03 Thu
u suck do u know how to rhyme (NT) -- white knight, 20:48:57 02/27/03 Thu
There is potential if u switch up the rhyme scheme and elevate, maybe ya trying too hard nothing really caught my eye stay up (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 20:55:28 02/27/03 Thu
God just shut up already, you get one comment and you run all over the lounge saying shit like a bitch in high school little girl (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:19:58 02/27/03 Thu
Hahahaha If you ain't put your name I would swear this was Kool Keith. Kind of reminded me of him on his Black Elvis/Lost in Space joint. It was different but I liked it......Just for the record how many different names do you go by? (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:51:44 02/27/03 Thu
real -- c-dawg, 10:57:14 02/28/03 Fri
20 bars......This don't really stay on topic, I haven't wrote in a while so it's more like an exercise gettin me back in routine -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:43:37 02/26/03 Wed
just a reply -- chromenine, 08:14:17 02/27/03 Thu
nice flow man.. peace! (NT) -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!", 20:42:17 02/27/03 Thu
Nice exercise wit the wordplay, I feel ya PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G., 21:03:42 02/27/03 Thu
This is nice too. (NT) -- Blueprint, 23:03:14 02/27/03 Thu
Keyed mentalZ...entitled Wh@t If????????? -- Ov@kil.....PropaGanDuh.....g3n@$yDe....one Hunned, 17:17:38 02/26/03 Wed
Aye...so uhmm what happened to coming to smoke a blunt...huh???...Aye I think I found out what's wrong with the whip..holla atcha boi...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3.....Oh yeah tight key, 17:44:04 02/26/03 Wed
This was okay.....I've seen better......I see a sort of different rhyme scheme in this one....The "What If" was kind of "iffy" to me....but that's just from my perspective.....Stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:48:10 02/26/03 Wed
Random thoughts, cool u gotta get it off some how, seen you come better though PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:15:50 02/26/03 Wed
LOL dlusional had me crackin up, so i wasnt in the right mood to read this, i dont think.. i know youve come way better though.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 19:52:37 02/26/03 Wed
different style and mood.. well up on the change.. keep your mind open sun.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:53:22 02/27/03 Thu
AN ALL-NEW POST....."One Man's Spirit" Part 5....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Intensive Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, and Hebraisms May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h....aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 17:46:46 02/26/03 Wed
Okay, i'am not up as you are on religion but I dig this. i was pissed cus there was no sonnet, i couldn't feel a flow but ya vocab definetly makes up for it.The beginning bars were cool for us laymen good post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:12:07 02/26/03 Wed
Lyrics lost me.. and it didnt help that i did not catch the flow at all.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 19:37:31 02/26/03 Wed
No Comment....... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:44:38 02/26/03 Wed
i read this before replyin to swords..yo..seriously..i need like some footnotes when reading ur shyt..i cant even like pronounce some of the words u use and shyt..most of us dont understand wat the hell u writing..TRY and break it down for us or something cuz whoa...shyt is crazy..and yea..no flow in here at all..but then again i doubt u care..at least put like a lil paragraph in like 2003 terms so we know wzup lol...u still havent answered my question if u have AIM or Yahoo messenger.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..KIds In 2003 have better wheelchairs then the ones in 1637 A.D., 20:03:24 02/26/03 Wed
that paragraph up top was fire... even though i have ABSOLUTELY no idea what you're talking about half the time... the rhyme scheme kept me interested... then, I dunno... kinda... stopped rhyming. My favorite bar was the one that started out like "You dont have to tell me Satan hates me" and ended with "speak so innately" or something like that... I'm a fan of intelligence in rhymes. why dont you do audios? (NT) -- INTOX, 21:01:15 02/26/03 Wed
i love this shit, it takes time and energy to deciper everything, but this is my kind a ryme (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:41:53 02/26/03 Wed
I really enjoy reading your shit. Your word-connection is fuckin crazy and you usually do have something to say in each post despite how confusing it comes off. This was basically what I expect to see from you........Oh yeah that line about the sold souls/ticket stubs was sharp too. Stay Up (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:37:38 02/27/03 Thu
that crazy unbelievable rhymes -- Lil Jay, 12:51:40 02/27/03 Thu
damn I don't know why peeps find it so hard to understand you.. nice shit.. different stance I see.. man thanks for the wishful thinking foreal.. I never said so.. be safe and keep kicking the truth from Gods of men.. or men of GOD's it's whatever really.. get at me.. my shit's been down, wanted to holla at you about another theory! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:48:31 02/27/03 Thu

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