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CLOSED~*~

At school... just ridin the vibe -- INS, 11:33:04 03/13/03 Thu
- YO MAH BAD, i DOUBLE CLICKED PLEASE DISREGARD -- INS, 12:56:13 03/13/03 Thu
At school... just ridin the vibe -- INS, 11:33:59 03/13/03 Thu
- subsequently your vocab failed to catch my attention, however the continuity flowed well... with the vocab, escavate. (NT) -- pacific trails., 12:02:08 03/13/03 Thu
- at least it some wordplay... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:43:03 03/13/03 Thu
Gotz some crazy shi, wrote it while i had a headache.... peep and critique i think its a little unstreight but also the flow ain�t easy to figure out sometimes -- chromenine, 05:35:27 03/12/03 Wed
- yeah not bad subject matter was kinda chopy but flowed kinda cooo (NT) -- treyz1, 10:45:51 03/12/03 Wed
- nice man I enjoyed this (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:26:58 03/12/03 Wed
- good i like it, it was raw, not as unreal as alot of posts -- INS, 13:37:25 03/12/03 Wed
- This was aiight...work on rhyming words..content and your word usage...some words just didn't fit (NT) -- Lyrikil, 14:56:03 03/12/03 Wed
  - I ain�t tryn to holla at u, and i can understand yo point, but wait for the audio post of this, and THEN tell me what didn�t rhyme. No hate, No front, as i said don�t take this wrong. I�m not trying to degrade your critique.... (NT) -- chromenine@gmx.net, 03:56:19 03/13/03 Thu
treyz-wan fka novice -- a battle type key just tryin to sharpen up, 00:46:13 03/13/03 Thu
- Nice spit kid...I liked "Ill leave the average lyricist like a winter Olympian wit a down hill career " hahaha good shit for the length (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:24:58 03/13/03 Thu
- Maaannn....this could have been longer...much longer....at least 16 bars...at least you sound like a kid with promise unlike all the 50 Cent wannabes roaming around here...1 (NT) -- Novakane, 01:48:42 03/13/03 Thu
- this was iight man...like man above me said it does show promise...thought it could've been longer as well, but it was coo...keep expandin ya mind, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE O.M.N.I., 01:52:35 03/13/03 Thu
- feelin dis too and i also agree wit dem 2 peepz above, was too short but good! keep it up....novakane: i hope wasn�t aimin that shit at me, callin me 50 cent wanna be?! no front jus aksin.... (NT) -- chromenine, 03:48:53 03/13/03 Thu
key...trying out some new things, no real topic but if i had to call it something, i would call it, Dying to Exsist......peace
-- essence.....Abzent Minded, 21:03:11 03/09/03 Sun
- That bird part was nice the high-light to me.. nice post! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:15:47 03/09/03 Sun
- nice I liked it big props for the story telling alround good post able to read without getting bored (NT) -- dlaster, 22:38:59 03/09/03 Sun
- holy peigons preaching with broken beaks sptting falacies...that line stuck way out to me..just different..very nice lyrics...damn shit feels weird reading text and seeing some different ish..nice post man..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:20:11 03/10/03 Mon
- Fo real, thats some nice! Enjoyed readin it. Real nice rhyme scemes and flow, respect! (NT) -- chromenine, 03:36:54 03/10/03 Mon
- super ill man.... that line with the bird and shit was really abstract... neva heard that before... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:52:06 03/10/03 Mon
- "i underline thought patterns with highlighted ink streched across" the holy piegons line and "kissing the essence of fate to demostrate the beatuy of death" were the lines that stuck out to me...this was poetical in a sense of mood, tone of the rhyme....this was a very nice piece tho man, i really enjoyed this, seems like you've elevated nicely...stay up, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 02:31:16 03/13/03 Thu
Petition to Bring Back Lyricism............. -- ===||Swords--->, 17:43:39 03/09/03 Sun
this was dope, alot of fresh lines....you always kill it with text, i enjoy reading ya posts...stay up...peace (NT) -- essence....AM, 21:05:31 03/09/03 Sun
dope was the right word.. dope shit man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:18:38 03/09/03 Sun
hoot son. mad fire. -- N'finite, 00:02:56 03/10/03 Mon
I'll admit, my percentage of effort's been lessened as progression of time kept up...now im ready to get the agenda to ressurecting the past's splendor!!...that right there summed it up...nice ass post man....liked it alot....i hope this place can pick up and live on.. (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:23:23 03/10/03 Mon
feeling the same line as S.T.G.E. this was very refreshing man....good to see something from an accomplished individual as yourself ....good to see you still doin ya thing too! keep at it man,and oh yea, i feel you on the whole topic too....stay building, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 02:24:52 03/13/03 Thu
Main Loop Presents: "Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats" Riverside County -- ===||Swords-->, 18:36:31 03/12/03 Wed
Well it had a different type of vibe. I liked it better when it had the extra keys being played. The rest of it sounded kind of country. Wasn't really my type of thing but do your thing (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 21:26:19 03/12/03 Wed
feeling it...nice tho (NT) -- Akromatic ! NEW EMCEE, 00:20:24 03/13/03 Thu
yo...this is hella nice swords...this has a sorta salvation army santa claus on acid vibe to it...thats whats i picture anyway...nice work money...ill kill this thing if its aight with you...pz out west coast killa... (NT) -- INTROVERT, 00:32:35 03/13/03 Thu
maybe its just me but just caught the start but coudnt really get into it (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 00:53:30 03/13/03 Thu
cant peep audio right now but will peep this as soon as i can....good to see u still here tho, stay building, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 02:13:56 03/13/03 Thu
peep and criticize -- Dlaster, 17:52:28 03/12/03 Wed
This started out ok, but then it started going off topic... a lot of lines were in there just cuz they rhymed with the one before.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:40:49 03/12/03 Wed
I think its alright. Its starts out good and ends good, it just needs some work in the middle. It also could be a little longer (NT) -- Psilocybe, 19:46:14 03/12/03 Wed
Wasn't really feelin this. All I can say is keep writing and you will see improvment (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 21:31:37 03/12/03 Wed
Wheres your post man are you voting (NT) -- dlaster, 21:45:14 03/12/03 Wed
Look at this little bitch...asking all these other people if they voted on the battle...LIKE IT WAS THAT GOOD... (NT) -- WHYMSICK, 21:53:07 03/12/03 Wed
yo..if you keep at it you will get better (NT) -- Akromatic New Emcee, 00:21:55 03/13/03 Thu
it was nice just need a few more har hittin lines (NT) -- treyz-wan, 00:58:14 03/13/03 Thu
yea i agree with swords, startin off iight but started to just throw random words around so that it would rhyme...the flow was iight content was ehhh, it was IIGHT...im sure u can do alot better tho,keep expanding man, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 02:00:14 03/13/03 Thu
2nd effort -- Psilocybe, 20:06:57 03/12/03 Wed
some nice lines keep posting (NT) -- dlaster, 20:24:01 03/12/03 Wed
Never seen you here before, this was alright for one of your're first couple times. Keep at it (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 21:17:51 03/12/03 Wed
Dlaster or Dark spitter what do you think are you voting (NT) -- White knight, 21:24:11 03/12/03 Wed
nice..magnifecent.was feeling it.. (NT) -- Akromatic! NEW EMCEE, 00:19:05 03/13/03 Thu
yeah was feelin this kinda nice (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 00:51:16 03/13/03 Thu
serious talent...keep it up...i was just flowing this to a beat...NICE! (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:31:13 03/13/03 Thu
this was real good shit, good theme, nice imagery, very realistic yo, keep it up black...1 (NT) -- Novakane, 01:53:24 03/13/03 Thu
yo man this is kinda different...i liked it, u show mad potential man, you could become real good at this thing yo...i liked the imagery in this as well, that really stood out to me the most (i love imagery haha) but yea, everything was pretty much on point, stay up and elevatin, one (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 01:56:49 03/13/03 Thu
any 1 up in here wanna battle now (NT) -- treyz1, 00:07:06 03/13/03 Thu
No...HOORAY for Elizabeth Smart and her Family... (NT) -- WHYMSICK, 00:30:02 03/13/03 Thu
drop something so you dont waste a spot brA... (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:29:00 03/13/03 Thu
How you gonna waste a thread like this....it ain't even a thread, a blank spot is what it is...I can't even say reply to three or be deleted....cause this shit needs to be deleted, that's whassup...1 (NT) -- Novakane, 01:50:34 03/13/03 Thu
AUDIO! "THE LAST BATTLE" AKaGEMix Productions, Akromatik first and Gem Second! PEEP AND CRITIQUE!! HOT TRACK!! 2 white boys!! PEEP!! AND ENJOY! -- Akromatic AKaGEMix Productions, 00:29:47 03/13/03 Thu
cant peep (NT) -- treyz1 fka novice, 00:47:39 03/13/03 Thu
the beats OK, i liked it...but there could have been more change-ups. The lyrics were tight, so was the flow, and the quality was seriously some good shit...all in all NICE DROP (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:27:35 03/13/03 Thu
the dark spitter vs dlastar... vote on this battle... nothing else -- the dark spitter, 15:42:24 03/12/03 Wed
winner is..... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 15:51:21 03/12/03 Wed
hmmmmmmmmmm. gotta be,.....................dlaster (NT) -- nemesis, 16:07:22 03/12/03 Wed
the spitter (NT) -- bones, 16:14:41 03/12/03 Wed
Whoaaa...Ohhh my gawd....Dlar...tore you a new asshole dark spitter (NT) -- OV@..G3n@.......yo taht kidd Dlar took his gloves off...Battle rap you�re the type of average Jack, who tried to Rap��. Sounded crap..ha ha likes kidd, 16:56:33 03/12/03 Wed
Dark spitter you should be a quitter. your raps areabout as dangerous as kitty litter. You should have knowen that when you battle dlaster it would end up in a disaster (NT) -- White Knight, 17:58:15 03/12/03 Wed
Vote = DS...those who vote differently, go right ahead...WHITE KNIGHT...did you vote for YOURSELF under a DIFFERENT NAME on PURPOSE??? (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 19:34:21 03/12/03 Wed
Okay...you made no vote...but you're still BULLSHIT...you played yourself right there... (NT) -- ..., 19:36:00 03/12/03 Wed
Yeah I know DLar but I don't know who the Hell you are, You call yourself Whymsickal is that because your always playing with your Testicals. I voted for DLAR cause I saw the work he put into this Rap not because I'm him are you that Dim Witted........... And I don't think you'd want to step to me so don't be dissin me. (NT) -- White Knight yeah thats right the WHITE KNIGHT, 20:31:18 03/12/03 Wed
You gay son of a bitch...How well do you KNOW him???...IP NUMBERS fool...I even corrected my wrong wording but you go on and say you VOTED...shut the fuck up you fuckin' peon... (NT) -- LMAO@I don't think you'd want to step to me..., 21:50:36 03/12/03 Wed
I know him very well Dlaster my little bother and hes posting his shit on my computer I know Dlaster ripped dark spitter I just wanted to know what everyone else thought anyway where are your rhymes oh thats right they got deleted. (NT) -- WHITE KNIGHT Don't step fag, 22:06:43 03/12/03 Wed
not easy but i reakon that dark just about did enought to me but both were close as hell (NT) -- treyz1, 01:16:31 03/13/03 Thu
Peep ...Some new shit i wrote for my sweetheart. Things are good now but we all know it ain't hard to fall apart -- Starks (The mouth of madness), 17:08:31 03/12/03 Wed
This was nice.. its more for her so i dont really feel like i need to critique, except, iono, stay positive? (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 18:45:37 03/12/03 Wed
I like the vibe. Stay positive. (NT) -- Psilocybe, 19:48:28 03/12/03 Wed
nice story liked it hey starks you voting dark spitter or dlaster what you think (NT) -- White Knight, 21:43:10 03/12/03 Wed
its coo mad nice but just wait till shes spending up all ya cash and starts getin to relaxed with you and starts talking about menstral cycles stopps makin such an efort and gains 20 pounds peace nice text though (NT) -- treyz1, 01:03:57 03/13/03 Thu
I could still remember when being and emcee wasn't part of my life--Ov@kil---Freeverse...no cake-ups..cat's know oV@'s flow is heavy contenders get ya weight-UP!!! -- OV@..G3n@....Ya'll know...Free shitt!!!!!!!!!!!!, 16:50:00 03/12/03 Wed
oh shit . this was fuckin nice son. that's the kinda shit i like to see posted. skills. peace. (NT) -- STARKS (the mouth of madness), 17:54:30 03/12/03 Wed
nice... (NT) -- WHYMSICK, 19:38:26 03/12/03 Wed
Good shit man. Keep goin with it next time (NT) -- Psilocybe, 19:54:13 03/12/03 Wed
round 2 of mine and [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc's battle peep! -- nemesis, 16:58:40 03/12/03 Wed
How fukkin Gay is thiss.....Get sonned then put up white flaggss...How gay..like pink font color (NT) -- OV@...Yo dawg this was very cake of you..I should pose a battle at ya for being SOFTT...Ha ha WROTE A VERSE AND SONNED Himself!!!, 17:05:15 03/12/03 Wed
for one i wasn't feeling this. and for two why the fuck you wastin your fuckin time battlin. elevate your skills. this ain't fuckin war . we're here as artists. take it to the streets (NT) -- starks, 17:46:36 03/12/03 Wed
LOL this had like no punches or real disses.. learn to battle.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:48:20 03/12/03 Wed
To all the haters in here a lil taste, i decided not to be as "gangsta" in ths one, changed my content up -- INS, 13:21:17 03/12/03 Wed
WTF....first you need to keep practicing I thought cats was picking on you but now I know thats not the case...and how you gone bite your name from Inspector Deck ( The Rebel INS) (NT) -- Lyrikil, 15:04:33 03/12/03 Wed
this kinda sounded like a battle verse, was it supposed to be? any way i liked this. (NT) -- nemesis, 15:05:29 03/12/03 Wed
this is a better structure then your previous ones... nice try kid (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:49:19 03/12/03 Wed
this was a little better then ya other posts (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:52:25 03/12/03 Wed
Diss cause you ain�t got no supreme vocab your living in a dream fag!�� I�ll chew you up and spit you out, even Novakane predicted it before I inflicted it. Don�t believe me peep your messages, I read this shit when you posted it. But it was weak and I was busy with you bitch but now I�m, gonna rip your weak shit. -- Dlarstar, 20:17:05 03/11/03 Tue
kinda weak from a battle stand-point.. but I don't know about your target so maybe this will be enough.. good luck! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:31:42 03/11/03 Tue
peep his verse down below if it hasn't been deleted, this wasn't no battle just givin him a rattle (NT) -- Dlastar, 21:08:23 03/11/03 Tue
Dis shit weak you little punk (NT) -- Anon, 22:48:19 03/11/03 Tue
Kinda aight, but its nuttin special. U didn�t use the whole capacity of potential illnes either. Put sommo work in yo arrangement ( line length, etc. .. ) (NT) -- chromenine, 03:48:37 03/12/03 Wed
u wanna battle.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:58:24 03/12/03 Wed
yo, dawg have you got beef wit me? cause if you have, what the fuck did i do? hit back (NT) -- nemesis, 15:19:50 03/12/03 Wed
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 15:44:18 03/12/03 Wed
oh my god man... this shit aint half as ill as my keys and writtens are... I gonna waste time on so I suggest you go take a knife and shove it where the sun dont shine... ps that fuck a latter I'l catch a elevator to the top was kinda nice man... but still you need more practice (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:52:20 03/12/03 Wed
i like it, peeps in here just hate if u don't do that fantasy land bullshit -- INS, 13:41:11 03/12/03 Wed
I agree with Path..battle stance was kinda weak....ya'llshould post the two together so people can vote on it... (NT) -- Lyrikil, 14:59:08 03/12/03 Wed
yo dlaster... you want beef... lets have a battle.... I"ll post mine up and you can post ya lame ass piece of shit... -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:41:13 03/07/03 Fri
This was OKAY..um, I don't know what Dlester, whatever his name is, will bring...I seriously think this would be better in audio...and you know..if you're going to BATTLE, try thinking of NEW punchlines and ideas...most of these lines are something any other MC would spit, naw mean??...but I'll assume this kid isn't going to post any better anyway...Regarding your other posts, "Don't try too hard" quote N.A.K.I.X.E.M...this was okay shit..DID YOU EVEN READ MY EMAIL???...understand it...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 20:58:14 03/07/03 Fri
this was good, solid battle rap. when dlaster responds I'll compare the two (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:01:40 03/07/03 Fri
coo... it looked chopped up a lil bit... but you should do an audio!... it had some nice lines... and yo name is dark sumthin! (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:23:27 03/07/03 Fri
Supreme Vocab? this read out like it was written by a 6th grader...and not a talented 6th grader at that... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:48:06 03/08/03 Sat
BWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA...ahem....BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA man why must you even battle...aint even worth it for such a sorry battle verse..LOL you need more PUNCHES, more MULTIS , throw in some METAPHORS THATLL split HIM IN 2 so you can kill dlaster while you still beating him TOO haha (NT) -- NOflow, 02:29:18 03/09/03 Sun
man, whoever you're battlin is gonna get at you somethin nasty if you don't up ya game, 1 (NT) -- Novakane, 04:08:13 03/09/03 Sun
keep workin at it. (NT) -- nemesis, 12:12:05 03/09/03 Sun
the dark spitter vs dlaster... vote on this battle... nothing else.... -- the dark spitter aka un jibaro de puerto rico, 15:35:48 03/12/03 Wed
New audio...."The reason".......peep and critique...Holla...Got class in a second so I'll leave my replies when I get back....One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 11:20:51 03/12/03 Wed
couldent peep... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:25:20 03/12/03 Wed
my sound doesnt work properly but from what words i caould here this was a pretty tight audio. keep it up (NT) -- nemesis, 15:08:10 03/12/03 Wed
yo i made this to release some anger, about this cat i'm beefing with -- INS, 11:28:18 03/11/03 Tue
yo INS you really need to change your rhyme style man... the lines in here are mad wack.... "need to take stacker cause your a skinny cracker"... damn comon man I know you can do better (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:41:17 03/11/03 Tue
hows my style wack? if anything i'd say my content is a lil out there for people who don't me or my situation, but i'd say the rhyming and the flow is on point, pay attention to the intricate rhymes there are quite a few -- INS, 12:51:02 03/11/03 Tue
you're wack...even if i HEARD you SPIT this...to my FACE...i'd still tell you you're wack and to get out the cypha...and BTW Stacker� is a fat burner...so why would a "skinny little cracker" use it? (NT) -- INTROVERT, 11:05:50 03/12/03 Wed
No id say your content is a little wack for everyone over 14.. Carck God Number one? please...the flow is ok, but thats about it.. everyone can rhyme like this.. intricate rhymes my ass..point out one that rhymes mroe than 2 syllables together.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:39:23 03/11/03 Tue
i liked this on the whole but i still agree with *the dark spitter* about the cracker line (NT) -- nemesis, 14:40:27 03/11/03 Tue
At least I don't spit queer shit, no one else besides the geeks in here would wanna read, my shits marketable, and for those of you who didn't get the memo, even kweli and mos def are doin shit for the public now, get off the make believe fantasy land bullshit, comwe with something real.. something from the heart.. thats where real music comes from (NT) -- INS, 16:47:04 03/11/03 Tue
Mos and Talib are doing them you do you don't diss an intelligent approach cause you mad people aint feeling you like you want them to.. this was ok.. the flow was there.. keep writing and search for a stance to elevate.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:53:40 03/11/03 Tue
I totally agree wit "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" for real, keep writin tho!! (NT) -- chromenine@gmx.net, 04:11:09 03/12/03 Wed
all i'm sayin is rap from the heart, if u've been hustlin since u were a kid, its kinda hard not to mention fake if ur rappin on the whole peaceful less voliate tip, but i mean i'm not a hypocrite, if u never spenta day smokin herb, slanging and ish.. u shouldn't be talking bout it either, i just promote doin for self, ya'll feel me... -- INS, 08:22:10 03/12/03 Wed
Wow........wow.......this is really bad. I agree the shit might be marketable (look at Missie and Fresh) but that doesnt meen its good. And Just cause i think its bad and very (very very) simple doesnt meen the next man will. I got alot of shit from people on my first couple post on the forum and still do, but FUCK 'em.....Fuck 'em all. Cause at the end of the day, Its your shit not theres. (NT) -- Tactics, 11:49:42 03/12/03 Wed
just some quick shit i threw together. peep and critique. I'll make my replies soon! -- STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 13:22:12 03/11/03 Tue
NICE.. (NT) -- THE DARK SPITTER, 13:24:59 03/11/03 Tue
Yeah! this is what im talking about.. i�m long gone instead born was the spawn of an awsome artist. Niiice line.. dope.. keep this up (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 14:35:56 03/11/03 Tue
tight, dope, whatever you wanna call it but it was (NT) -- nemesis, 14:52:34 03/11/03 Tue
for how short this was.. I was feeling it! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:43:44 03/11/03 Tue
I liked this, yo + i don�t think it was to short: is tight the way it is, feelin u (NT) -- chromenine, 03:44:38 03/12/03 Wed
short but a nice read (NT) -- treyz1, 11:02:30 03/12/03 Wed
(((AUDIO)))Dont think i posted this here.. "The Fight Song" BRICKHOUSE RMX FT. DAVICTOR! my verse is the same but he jumps on at the end.. -- ===||Swords--->, 14:22:11 03/11/03 Tue
thumbs up. (NT) -- nemesis, 15:01:21 03/11/03 Tue
Umm gee willikers thanks for the input.. you cant drop replies like this and expect people to want to peep your shit.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:53:15 03/11/03 Tue
nice beat.. hype as hell- you're getting way more comfortable on the mic.. I like that.. elevation, in example.. dope as verse Swords.. next dude.. equally as nice.. still listening.. this is very good man.. both of you fit eachother perfectly.. compliment I mean.. good job I mean it! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:41:17 03/11/03 Tue
Hmm..yeah, I peeped and replied to this one a while ago too...pretty much what Path said homie...dope...keep it up! (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:08:06 03/12/03 Wed
pretty tight channalin that agresion (NT) -- treyz1, 10:55:31 03/12/03 Wed
"The Greatest Spoken Word!" real audio, I did this for SUNSET.. you was right.. so I thought I'd drop my text style in audio for you.. everybody peep it .. KNOW YOU'LL KNOW HOW MY SHIT FLOWS.. when it seems to jump around in text.. LUV IS LUV! ONE! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" Feat. Warpath, Eminent, Horrid, and ELaSTiCs, 17:34:44 03/11/03 Tue
quality was a lil blah..lyrics were nice..beat was pretty coo..this was an iLLy iLL audio yo..mos def nice..gonna peep this shyt again later on fa sho..drop more audios den text..lol.u write alot..hate reading long text post..rather sit back and hear da shyt on audio haha..piece foo.. (NT) -- PhiLoSo..Da Verbal G Knee Us (Genius)..O.M.N.I., 19:52:40 03/11/03 Tue
I peeped this earlier...this was some dope shit...to be honest though, I can't stand the quality of your audios recently, but besides that...I enjoy the listens...lyrics are nice, as well as beat and flow...I agree with Dlusional on most of his reply...keep it up! (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:01:10 03/12/03 Wed
:shakes head: ....philoso fuka lol..2 yearz of postin wit dlusional ..guess even other people get use to saying it hahaha.. (NT) -- PhiLoSo..O.M.N.I., 07:10:19 03/12/03 Wed
Nice...alot better than other audio's I've peeped lately....don't have any thing bad to say about this except the quality but that's the same problem I have...keep doing ya thing boi...Knowledge Cipher Cipher......One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 09:35:22 03/12/03 Wed
Nice...alot better than other audio's I've peeped lately....don't have any thing bad to say about this except the quality but that's the same problem I have...keep doing ya thing boi...Knowledge Cipher Cipher......One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 09:35:32 03/12/03 Wed
Anutha one fo yall, still jus spillin it, nuthin really special -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 00:15:36 03/11/03 Tue
yo, this was tight , keep it up (NT) -- nemesis, 01:25:27 03/11/03 Tue
yo whoever the fuck Lil G iz MIDDLE FINGAZ UP 2 YA BITCH!! CALLIN ME A FUCKIN BITER SHIT LIKE THIS HAPPENS SUMTIMES MUTHER FUKER!!! (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 11:31:52 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:17:09 03/11/03 Tue
YOU BITCH ASS MOTHER FUCKER YOU STOLE MY SHIT AK-47 IF I KNEW WHO THE FUCK YOU WERE I'D FUCKING KILL YOU, YOU DUMB ASS!!! (NT) -- LIL G, 08:19:28 03/11/03 Tue
This iwas cool! it was nice! keep spittin (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:09:31 03/11/03 Tue
i think its hot, glad to see theres another rapper in here that ain't all about planets and stars -- INS, 11:32:27 03/11/03 Tue
feelin u, boy ,this is tight fo real, somethin i feel, shot at will! Phatt, peace, man, stay spitten (NT) -- chromenine, 04:27:25 03/12/03 Wed
now i aint replied to three but since its a battle is it different rules? any way my verse for the battle against [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc so everyone peep cause im gonna rip this kid -- nemesis, 01:39:31 03/11/03 Tue
needs more punches man...but not bad...we'll see what this bitch writes back (NT) -- MID, 02:12:27 03/11/03 Tue
It's still a MESSAGE POSTED...and every "Message posted" requires 3 replies (NT) -- WHYMSICK, 02:45:50 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:08:18 03/11/03 Tue
yo i posted twice jus incase... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:15:45 03/11/03 Tue
decent, ur rhymes could have more seperation, but i'm feelin it still, no hatin -- INS, 11:38:14 03/11/03 Tue
too damn short... and yo... dont listen to WHYSMICKAL.... HE'S JUST A MAREGONG SITO..... THATS LITTLE MUTHERFUCKER IN SPANISH... but come out with longer rhymes... aight? peace (NT) -- the dark spitter aka WHYSMICKAL's A LITTLE PINCHE VATO, 12:49:31 03/11/03 Tue
lol no it's not.. that looks more like chinese or something.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 14:41:27 03/11/03 Tue
lol i thought it was maricon...i could be wrong too (NT) -- Vis, 16:13:02 03/11/03 Tue
maricon means faggot (NT) -- who this?, 18:20:31 03/11/03 Tue
Yo u got style, but i agree on that u should maybe try to write some longer lines. Still need some devolopment, no hatin ,but u gonna make it, i�m convinced, PEACE! (NT) -- chromenine, 04:21:07 03/12/03 Wed
THE DARK SPITTER PRESENTS... "UNVIELED"... PEEP AND CRITICIZE -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA HATERS LIKE WHYSMIKAL DONT REALLY HAVE TALENT, 13:20:30 03/11/03 Tue
...You call yourself the vocabulist or some corny shit and you still misspell shit like crazy....you wack man..... (NT) -- ��N.a.K.I.X.e.M.�� aka �amien Christ, 13:49:28 03/11/03 Tue
Fuck caps.. dont do that anymore.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:23:59 03/11/03 Tue
cough cough, sorry, ok, rhyme was ok but i hate it when people type in capitals (NT) -- nemesis, 15:03:43 03/11/03 Tue
to all repliers... sorry for the caps.. and to the first replier... I guess you love beef and want to be rip to smitherines... dont fuck around man..... FUCKIN FAGGOT!!! and yo if you want a battle I'm all ready bitch.... fuckin haters!!!! (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:10:00 03/11/03 Tue
hahahahahhahahah....he said....he said........hahaha ......oh boy smitherines.....lol......im sorry, that just tickled me a little (NT) -- Vision, 16:08:36 03/11/03 Tue
yo first off man this wasn't bad. it had a few good lines but overall was kinda hard to follow but keep doin you. and instead of taking negative critism to the heart use it to influence yourself to create some off the wall new shit! after all it's music (NT) -- starks, 15:24:47 03/11/03 Tue
I can't believe I read this with those caps.. it was pretty good.. but never write a whole verse in caps.. it's just wack and hard to read.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:48:06 03/11/03 Tue
HAHA@you even THINKING about battling Diz...WHO the FUCK battles in TEXT now days???...it's like...fuckin' HISTORY...I ain't gonna waste my time with YOU boy...I gave criticism and you react like a BITCH...so a bitch YOU ARE...nuff said. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL..., 20:58:23 03/11/03 Tue
you still a bitch arse hater when will you ever learn, your not as good as you think you are, so dont step to DLAR (NT) -- DLASTER, 22:46:19 03/11/03 Tue
Was not bad at all except these stupid caps. CAPS ARE ONLY USED TO MAKE READING MORE EASY INSTEAD OF DIFFICULTdon�t wanna bother u, but there is a certain concept behind the way things written, and how ur eye percepts visions.... U givin me a fuckin headache readin yo shit but it was coo anyway.... (NT) -- chromenine, 04:03:11 03/12/03 Wed
Yooooo! Yall go peep my audios! I want some feedbacks! positive, negative! whatever! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:06:08 03/11/03 Tue
Im at school now so Ill peep three a lil later! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:11:48 03/11/03 Tue
Pretty Awsome -- Lil' Lucky, 11:56:53 03/11/03 Tue
I listened to the first one really feeling it man.. very nice delivery.. keep dropping your shit.. very dope! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:41 03/11/03 Tue
wooah peeped em all most of them was off the hook still got that u aint shit to me in my head tigt shit (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:43:43 03/11/03 Tue
when the hell did you plan on posting this??..shit was sick...I rather you post it individually so we can get into details with each...drop some info on em too...Coldest of Bars was niiiice... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:26:24 03/12/03 Wed
ure right! Ill post em individually! I was just in a hurry and everything! thanx though! one (NT) -- GT, 00:57:46 03/12/03 Wed
Hex if you come in my e-mail address is back up, but its new.. Raishawn_7@hotmail.com D-lusional oops I mean Phil get at me.. too! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:55:20 03/11/03 Tue
I haven't dropped anything for months...(A U D I O)...check $hit out and tell me what you think -- MIDEVAL, 01:37:13 03/10/03 Mon
waddup, u now a place to get my shiat for u niggas to listen posted. At work, cant listen to your stuff o` here tho.... (NT) -- chromenine, 03:20:12 03/10/03 Mon
x-cuse, i overlooked the post below!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- chromenine, 03:26:47 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! hot rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:26:16 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! cool rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:27:38 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:01:25 03/10/03 Mon
oh yeahhh (NT) -- Tactics, 19:20:02 03/10/03 Mon
pretty good man.. the content was iight though.. not really my type of shit.. the beat was fire though! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:27:27 03/11/03 Tue
(nemesis Vs. [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc)its time for the people to decide who won our little battle (no beef & sorry for wastin a thread) (NT) -- nemesis, 14:59:24 03/11/03 Tue
just reply under this (NT) -- nemesis, 15:49:52 03/11/03 Tue
ima post it twcie i dunt know the rules to ur lounge sorry....this ish is fo nemesis....enjoy lounge -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:00 03/11/03 Tue
this was a battle rhyme??? it sounded not very good please elevate god. (NT) -- dark spitter, 12:43:50 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:41:03 03/11/03 Tue
yo, i dont know anything about my lines bein eminems and if they were i didnt know about it, and no-one sucks my cock other than sexy bitches (NT) -- nemesis, 14:45:35 03/11/03 Tue
dont really have a name for this..............Just spittin shit -- Tactics, 19:08:32 03/10/03 Mon
Yeh -- Cu-jo, 20:23:17 03/10/03 Mon
Good Shit (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 23:06:44 03/10/03 Mon
i liked (NT) -- nemesis, 01:28:47 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:19:04 03/11/03 Tue
I like your flow, i think u got madd potential -- INS, 11:34:37 03/11/03 Tue
a keystyle to get the morning started... peep and critcize -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA SUPREME VOCABULIST, 13:25:44 03/10/03 Mon
wad up??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:50:32 03/10/03 Mon
if this was a keystyle, i can understand but use your talent better (NT) -- nemesis, 14:49:29 03/10/03 Mon
I saw your battle response but it was weak so I didn't respond cause you wasting my weekend but im gonna rip you today cause you a bitch that will never make sense brace yourself be ready cause its a real lowblow (NT) -- dlaster, 15:44:56 03/10/03 Mon
Not bad (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:14:52 03/10/03 Mon
eeh........it ryhmed (NT) -- Tactics, 19:18:56 03/10/03 Mon
You shits wacked, you call yourself the supreme vocabulist but tht shits corny it wouldn't even make a 400 pound pig ugly virgin horny... Get off this site your ruining some sick shit from real Emcees (NT) -- White Knight, 19:40:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked it! Shit was cool dawg! keep spittin! keep elevatrin and shit! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:52:22 03/11/03 Tue
i call it *questions for father* peep -- nemesis, 15:10:22 03/10/03 Mon
thats some real shit im feeling it can tell you didn't make that shit up cause you seem very emotional Im kinda the same with my dad I can feel your pain and please do me a favor rip this kid that wants to battle you (NT) -- dlaster, 15:35:16 03/10/03 Mon
I FUCKIN FEEL DAT SHYT BRO! (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:05:14 03/10/03 Mon
damn.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 19:13:36 03/10/03 Mon
Its good stuff. I really cant be a critic on this rhyme cause your words are your words that come from you feelings.It was deep. (NT) -- Tactics, 19:15:13 03/10/03 Mon
Good, Understand it all. I know what your getting at?... -- Lil' Lucky, 23:00:32 03/10/03 Mon
I feelu nugg! mine left when I was five! I feel u dawg! shti was definetly hot! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:50:27 03/11/03 Tue
**~~**Brand New Real Audio/mp3**~~**�**~~**I did a little something cause various people asked me to**~~**��Entitled : Whether Or Not��..I haven�t recorded or spit anything in 2 months ON THIS DATE�so If its wack it is..i just did it for the various few who wanted to hear some Dunn Shit�.PEACE -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:01:41 03/10/03 Mon
in the beginnin sounded like you no effort or u didnt feel like doin this shyt lol..not wat i expected..was expecting str8 punches and shyt like usual..dont know wat was more surprising..you actually posting an audio or u spittin in this style.. the flow was nice..beat was like chilly chill..good to see an audio from ya..nice post fool.. (NT) -- PhiLoSo..O.M.N.I...wheelchair kids cant move without effort.., 00:15:44 03/10/03 Mon
*Listening*...Beat is tight...I think it's my earphones, but the vocals are a tad bit drowned out by the instrumental so I had to replay it a few times over again to catch words...WORD@"much bigger things to worry about" line...thought "write or not back at you" line was nice...this wasn't up to your usual, but you said yourself that you didn't spit in 2 months...honestly, I didn't even think this was that bad for that period of time, not spittin'..Overall, I thought this was tight...refreshing shit...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:24:21 03/10/03 Mon
yea this was pretty kew, i liked the flow, and i was wondering where did all your punches go?...i got a few in here but its all good, coming back is a lil rust (NT) -- NoFlow, 00:27:44 03/10/03 Mon
i actually like the fact it wasnt all punches...now i know you can do more than battle...cant believe everything you hear...good shit (NT) -- Vision, 01:16:44 03/10/03 Mon
Yo you are a straight battle emcee...man you should try to expand a lil, not saying that you aren't ill...but a lil variety is good. NICE PUNCHES! (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:42:53 03/10/03 Mon
Hmm its like the spark has dimmed out.. Still some dope lines in there.. Last line was great.. Good luck in the future, whatever it is you do.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->Did you peep me and D's audio?, 02:17:33 03/10/03 Mon
To be honest yo.....I wasn't feeling your old stuff too much but it was way better than this...I wasnt even feeling the beat...but hey do you if it works for you...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:40:07 03/10/03 Mon
despite the lil delay between the voice and the backvocals, I found this pretty hot, yo! Nice flow! loved teh rhyme patterns! liked ya voice too! hot shit, nigga! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:36:30 03/10/03 Mon
good to hear you again.. really mellow.. I liked it.. I wouldn't call you rusty just kinda bored.. good to see you care about kids enough to drop a audio on their behalf.. all in all I was feeling this it was a nice piece! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:04:06 03/10/03 Mon
BaTTLe??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:47:54 03/10/03 Mon
soon just not yet, i will just need to take care of family shit (NT) -- nemesis, 14:44:22 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:08:13 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:09:39 03/10/03 Mon
yea man I'm up for a battle... hit me up at the provided email adress... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:10:15 03/10/03 Mon
Im good to go thanx fer askin (NT) -- ODe-Masta-oDD, 18:09:59 03/10/03 Mon
Audios for yall to peep! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:16:05 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios righ now..im at A-squela, peep later (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:32:48 03/10/03 Mon
PEEP this its good shit...nice production (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 13:06:43 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:53:06 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios dawg (NT) -- nemesis, 14:58:42 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** -- INTOX & Liquid X... i'll be back later to give three replies. pz, 17:01:13 03/09/03 Sun
yo gotta give it up for ya'll. shit was most definitely a hot track. nice lyrics, sick beat, overall fuckin nice. (NT) -- starks, 17:42:12 03/09/03 Sun
Quality is crystal... lyrics are nice from X.. best part of your part.. I always thought your flow was a bit slow for my liking, but its definitely on-point... Intox's quality aint as good.. Flow and breath control aint as polished as X.. lyrics good but didnt stick as well to my memory.. last part of his verse was the best.. Really feelin what u said.. Chorus nice.. So is the beat.. Yours right? this was very well put together.. Much props deserved.. (NT) -- ===||Swords---> hahah @ soundclick name.., 17:50:52 03/09/03 Sun
yeah i recorded my verse a while ago... before I discovered the wonder of punch-ins and stop-start technology... also, when i spit this, originally it was over the beat a little differently so that is why it sounds off at some parts... but thanks for checking it out. pz (NT) -- TOX, 20:26:10 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now, bet its tight though..pz (NT) -- essence....AM, 21:07:02 03/09/03 Sun
Liquid ripped that shit Intox your shit was pretty dope then got better towards the end.. very good quality.. well up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:28:55 03/09/03 Sun
nice beat... props to whoever made it... x, definetely came ncie.. flow and lyrics on point... tox, i can tell you didn;t spit to this cuz some lines are off.. but your many multi's still keep your flow on point... this was a good audio collab tho... keep it up... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:59:40 03/09/03 Sun
got the preview from X on this...beat was aight..kinda boring and repititive......X friggin killed that beat though cause that his realm of beats....LYRICS FROM BOTH OF YALL WAS VERY MUCH ON POINT...x's flow was on point ....tox...ur flow was good..but it does sound like its offbeat...could be either ur spitting too fast...or the mixing was mixed wrong for ur verse....ur lyrics were ill as hell and the connection of them was nice...nice work from both....i hate that beat though..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:26:58 03/10/03 Mon
SIckest audio Ive heard so far! hot, definetly hot, nuggaz Specially Liquid X! loved ya flows adn schemes, both yall! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:31:52 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** first audio, got a sound click page..titled STRUGGLES How hard do you get down...do you still fight? the struggles one man delt with but still aimed for his goal..Deep thoughts -- NoFlow, 00:59:10 03/10/03 Mon
you sound like that one cat from Nappy Roots that was rappin on the hill....ya flow aint bad, you stayed on beat...but the levels of ya vocals was.....shitty youngsta...not bad for a first (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 01:24:49 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics are ok, but the vocals need to be a lil louder so that you have more impact (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:39:13 03/10/03 Mon
couldnt listen, but your scemes look a little like eminem style,but as i said i haven�t heard it....Other then that ; dis is not bad (NT) -- chromenine, 03:25:03 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics were hot but work on flow and attitude a lil more! overall, it was nice to listen to! 1st audio? nice! keep doin it! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:20:52 03/10/03 Mon
(((AUDIO))) "Lyricism Squared"......THE REMIX!! .......now the beat Doesnt Suck! lol -- Philoso & Swords OMNI-MAIN LOOP Production, 03:13:48 03/09/03 Sun
lol, the audio has been Swordsified! j/p... i was pleasently suprised at how well this worked... the jazzy beat brings a completely new feel to the audio... feelin it... to be honest i liked the original better but i'm sure most people will feel this more....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 07:08:27 03/09/03 Sun
You liked that other beat better? blah.. i thought it sucked lol.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:58:44 03/09/03 Sun
yea i like this, sounded much better than the original, the beat is not something i would use but you guys flowed real good over it...overall dope audio..btw this is the best that i've heard D sound..peace (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 10:36:26 03/09/03 Sun
Listening.... reply later.... when i's done........OH.... LOVIN THE BEAT.... Your verse is better than the first guy's... mostly cuz it's clearer... tight shit tho... holla!!! (NT) -- that nigga SKORP, 16:37:00 03/09/03 Sun
thought i'd let you know the 1st dude is D-lusional... (NT) -- Verse, 16:46:06 03/09/03 Sun
LMAO... shit!!! hahaha.... well now I know.... lmao.... statement still stands... (NT) -- thanks for fillin me in.... ***still ****.... FUCKIN-SKORP-I, 17:02:24 03/09/03 Sun
checked this out when it was first posted... swords did u ever post this beat?? real nice man... Phil... lol, i can't believe i just called you phil..haha anyway, this is probably ya best work, you have improved on basically all of ya audios... good shit... swords ya flow sounds real nice on this.. liked the word usage it made the verse come real smooth... good job (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:10:15 03/09/03 Sun
the first cat was nice but the second cat was off tha charts..original voice ...lyik content was ill..beat was fuckiin dope!!..peace yall (NT) -- AKI-RAH, 04:57:09 03/10/03 Mon
Shedding light so those can relate to my life OK this isn't quite finished BUT have a look and see what you think... I appreciate EVERYONEs' CRIT......PeAcE -- Eternal Student, 13:07:21 03/09/03 Sun
this was nice... the content isn't my kind of thing but its well written... some nice lines in here, i liked the centipede one... worse thing about this was the last line, very conry ending... i'd definately change that... other than that it was dope... peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 14:44:32 03/09/03 Sun
this is nice... content... very smooth flow... relaxed... not too simple... not too complex.... Very nice. I agree with Versetyle on the ending... but I'm no good with ending MY verses so... no complaints there... HOLLA! (NT) -- SKORP-I..., 16:19:41 03/09/03 Sun
Basically i agree with them but i dont think the ending woulda bothered me if they hadnt pointed it out.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:57:05 03/09/03 Sun
I agree with swords.. but this was pretty tight.. nothing over the edge.. but it was good! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:40:11 03/09/03 Sun
fuk...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:01 03/10/03 Mon
Elastics and Path, collabo.. THE SICKNESS REAL AUDIO.. peep it out! -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!" & Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:12:46 03/09/03 Sun
ewwwww, you killed it.....i always liked this beat...lyrics is ill yea, i do wanna collab sometime in the future, lol you sound like a skinny cat like myself...quality is still bowel movement status, but it cool...an enjoyable piece (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I........ShapeShifter, 22:08:01 03/09/03 Sun
This nice...I feel it. Beat is HOT...I forgot who ish it is though. Nice verses from both. HOlla back (NT) -- Kariz...........*came in on this site at age 14.....17 now..and finna be outta HS* FO SHOOO, 22:34:49 03/09/03 Sun
Like vision said, quality is doo doo... but flow and mic skills are edvident... real nice work... keep doing shit... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:07:26 03/09/03 Sun
ish was nice and hyped...very ill lyrics...doing oddjobs like james bond....hmm im noticing when u do ur audios...u spit alot of metaphors and punches....alot different than your text....quality sounds like thsi was recorded in 92....haha...nice work though...flow was nice also...good luck with ur career.... (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:16:07 03/10/03 Mon
lol i liked dis, dem punches lyrics were dope, the energy and the lyrics behind the music make it sounds something you can chill too, quality wasnt...ehbla, haha, but allaround,, i felt it..peace (NT) -- NoFlow So Much Flow ITs Like I Got None At All, 00:41:20 03/10/03 Mon
nice everything - except quality (NT) -- mid, 01:49:28 03/10/03 Mon
NEW AUDIO! CHECK IT. also looking for peeps to collab wit. i amke my beats. :) -- N'FINITE, 23:19:50 03/09/03 Sun
I wanna preview this. but my comp wont let me. damn soundclick wont work:( -- N'finite, 23:22:20 03/09/03 Sun
shit aint that bad man..i see some potential....hook was aight...nice and simple...beat I WAS NOT FEELING AT ALL...keep it up..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 00:12:48 03/10/03 Mon
hmm..flow i was feeling..beat..was kinda..ehh...lyrics were decent...yea..."everyones trying to push you? to something you dont wanna be" it was nice..but from my standpoint i just got into AUDIO (NT) -- NOFLOW everybody seems to be POSTING audios..lol guess whos next.., 00:36:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked the beat man, it was nice (orchestra)...there is definatelly some potential ~peep inside~ -- MIDEVAL, 01:46:16 03/10/03 Mon
Hey Lounge... I'm back... new flow... new beats... new me... small sacrifice----> Lyricism for flow... I'm finding the balance...****AUDIO***** **** AUDIO**** ****AUDIO**** -- Skorpione, 16:13:59 03/09/03 Sun
Another fuckin sick audio. Good show man.Stay up Peace (NT) -- starks, 17:44:06 03/09/03 Sun
Has a Southern Underground feel, definitely... Dope quality.. Not exactly my style, but this is pretty good.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:53:08 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now...damn, Wassup Skorp, long time no see...pz (NT) -- essence, 21:08:57 03/09/03 Sun
damn look at the audios up tonight.. thats good.. just waiting on the audio now.. iight feeling this shit man.. you sound like my boy stacks.. you made the beat huh? hooks energetic.. feeling that.. good job man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:36:00 03/09/03 Sun
ok.. firstly, ya quality was nice... flow was good, no problems with it really... but not feelin the beat... sounds like a keith sweat slow jam..lol you need somethin a lil harder... from a mic aspect you came nice tho... (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:03:48 03/09/03 Sun
ayo, i aint been in here for ages but i was wondering if any vets know the whereabouts of trans p these days? i think he mighta died or some shit, but whatever, anybody know? (NT) -- invalid, 15:46:32 03/09/03 Sun
Good question, i was wondering the same thing a while ago.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:54:35 03/09/03 Sun
(((NEW AUDIO)))...yeah i know its about time i dropped another audio...this is a verse i did for a collab but i'm sick of waiting for the others...just a freestyle type verse called 'Art of War'...all feedback is very appreciated...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 10:04:48 03/08/03 Sat
hate the beat...just doesnt seem to fit you right...feeling the lyrics from what i cud HEAR...you sound kinda distant...quality's a lil shaky, interesting voice...nice imagery, you mite wanna just add a lil more emotion...this beat is giving me a headache....good effort Verse...i'd prolly like to hear you over a different beat and with a faster flow though...haha peace... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 12:13:52 03/08/03 Sat
i wish you would've used another beat, the verse was cool... it seems it was a cut and paste verse for the beat, which made it hard to swallow (NT) -- ?, 12:23:26 03/08/03 Sat
nice work dog keep it gangsta (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:28:28 03/08/03 Sat
nice -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:22:31 03/08/03 Sat
To be honest with you, I'm pretty sure I've heard better from you...in terms of beat selection and running with the beat itself...but I felt the lyrics...maybe it's just us, who knows...but it seemed like the reason why I couldn't really feel it that much...your voice, "interesting" like Xitizen said...it actually makes me want to see what you do with that voice, you know?...but props on the audio... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:20:48 03/09/03 Sun
yeah, the beat aint bad as an instrumental, but for you it doesnt suit you as well as someone else like Mr. Lif or something.. Lyrics were tight, Freestyle? nice.. Flow was ok, but you woulda felt more at home on a slower beat.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:27:01 03/09/03 Sun
every time I hear you... I forget about your accent... could bearly understand the lyrics but that's prolly cuz of the speakers on this computer.... I wouldn't doubt that they were pretty tight.... I agree with Swords and xiti on the rest... (NT) -- Skorpione, 16:44:29 03/09/03 Sun
This is some real deep shit right here....you might need some knowledge of Biblical scriptures, and I mean DEEP, spirit-led knowledge of it, if your third eye isn't open, this rhyme isn't for you, a lot of niggas don't know who they really are and get caught up in worldly pleasures, well I'ma shed some truth on all that, I call this shit "JUDGEMENT DAY".....YAHAWAH BA YA SHAM YAHAWASHI (All praises due to God and His Son Jesus Christ)......SHALOM! -- Novakane, 04:13:06 03/09/03 Sun
reply to the 3 beneath you first... i gave this a quick read... and seeing as i don't believe in God this didn't do much for me... and do you really think this will confuse Lounge heads when we have our own resident perplexing biblical-emcee in the form of Heksagon Lavish? (NT) -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 07:16:30 03/09/03 Sun
Well i thought this was hot. .. the content is tight and you stayed on point here BUT i didnt think it flowed consistently to start with but then it picked up........so Russia is considered to be the bear right ? Good work and God bless (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:48:22 03/09/03 Sun
Yea this is deep... being christian, I follow you... I'm glad to see someone can do what I can do what I can't as far as the Christian rap goes.... Nice... keep it up son... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:29:07 03/09/03 Sun
what up lounge...here's a brand new keystyle called: 'Tales from a �inful �oul - Part 1' ...just devloping a new sort of style...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka �inful �oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 10:04:27 03/09/03 Sun
this was cool, i thiught the flow was good and wordplay was excellent! keep it up (NT) -- nemesis, 11:56:34 03/09/03 Sun
WOAH, this is heat....I really enjoyed this piece, the flow was spot on and some real nice thought here (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:54:05 03/09/03 Sun
Nice ass flow... I was able to flow right through this... No problem... hellatight piece.... I like the wingless angel thought.... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:24:42 03/09/03 Sun

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