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now i aint replied to three but since its a battle is it different rules? any way my verse for the battle against [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc so everyone peep cause im gonna rip this kid -- nemesis, 01:39:31 03/11/03 Tue
- needs more punches man...but not bad...we'll see what this bitch writes back (NT) -- MID, 02:12:27 03/11/03 Tue
- It's still a MESSAGE POSTED...and every "Message posted" requires 3 replies (NT) -- WHYMSICK, 02:45:50 03/11/03 Tue
- wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:08:18 03/11/03 Tue
- yo i posted twice jus incase... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:15:45 03/11/03 Tue
- decent, ur rhymes could have more seperation, but i'm feelin it still, no hatin -- INS, 11:38:14 03/11/03 Tue
- too damn short... and yo... dont listen to WHYSMICKAL.... HE'S JUST A MAREGONG SITO..... THATS LITTLE MUTHERFUCKER IN SPANISH... but come out with longer rhymes... aight? peace (NT) -- the dark spitter aka WHYSMICKAL's A LITTLE PINCHE VATO, 12:49:31 03/11/03 Tue
  - lol no it's not.. that looks more like chinese or something.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 14:41:27 03/11/03 Tue
    - lol i thought it was maricon...i could be wrong too (NT) -- Vis, 16:13:02 03/11/03 Tue
      maricon means faggot (NT) -- who this?, 18:20:31 03/11/03 Tue
- Yo u got style, but i agree on that u should maybe try to write some longer lines. Still need some devolopment, no hatin ,but u gonna make it, i´m convinced, PEACE! (NT) -- chromenine, 04:21:07 03/12/03 Wed
THE DARK SPITTER PRESENTS... "UNVIELED"... PEEP AND CRITICIZE -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA HATERS LIKE WHYSMIKAL DONT REALLY HAVE TALENT, 13:20:30 03/11/03 Tue
- ...You call yourself the vocabulist or some corny shit and you still misspell shit like crazy....you wack man..... (NT) -- «‡†¤N.a.K.I.X.e.M.¤†‡» aka Ðamien Christ, 13:49:28 03/11/03 Tue
- Fuck caps.. dont do that anymore.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:23:59 03/11/03 Tue
- cough cough, sorry, ok, rhyme was ok but i hate it when people type in capitals (NT) -- nemesis, 15:03:43 03/11/03 Tue
  to all repliers... sorry for the caps.. and to the first replier... I guess you love beef and want to be rip to smitherines... dont fuck around man..... FUCKIN FAGGOT!!! and yo if you want a battle I'm all ready bitch.... fuckin haters!!!! (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:10:00 03/11/03 Tue
  hahahahahhahahah....he said....he said........hahaha ......oh boy smitherines.....lol......im sorry, that just tickled me a little (NT) -- Vision, 16:08:36 03/11/03 Tue
- yo first off man this wasn't bad. it had a few good lines but overall was kinda hard to follow but keep doin you. and instead of taking negative critism to the heart use it to influence yourself to create some off the wall new shit! after all it's music (NT) -- starks, 15:24:47 03/11/03 Tue
- I can't believe I read this with those caps.. it was pretty good.. but never write a whole verse in caps.. it's just wack and hard to read.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:48:06 03/11/03 Tue
- HAHA@you even THINKING about battling Diz...WHO the FUCK battles in TEXT now days???...it's like...fuckin' HISTORY...I ain't gonna waste my time with YOU boy...I gave criticism and you react like a BITCH...so a bitch YOU ARE...nuff said. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL..., 20:58:23 03/11/03 Tue
- you still a bitch arse hater when will you ever learn, your not as good as you think you are, so dont step to DLAR (NT) -- DLASTER, 22:46:19 03/11/03 Tue
- Was not bad at all except these stupid caps. CAPS ARE ONLY USED TO MAKE READING MORE EASY INSTEAD OF DIFFICULTdon´t wanna bother u, but there is a certain concept behind the way things written, and how ur eye percepts visions.... U givin me a fuckin headache readin yo shit but it was coo anyway.... (NT) -- chromenine, 04:03:11 03/12/03 Wed
Yooooo! Yall go peep my audios! I want some feedbacks! positive, negative! whatever! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:06:08 03/11/03 Tue
Im at school now so Ill peep three a lil later! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:11:48 03/11/03 Tue
Pretty Awsome -- Lil' Lucky, 11:56:53 03/11/03 Tue
I listened to the first one really feeling it man.. very nice delivery.. keep dropping your shit.. very dope! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:41 03/11/03 Tue
wooah peeped em all most of them was off the hook still got that u aint shit to me in my head tigt shit (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:43:43 03/11/03 Tue
when the hell did you plan on posting this??..shit was sick...I rather you post it individually so we can get into details with each...drop some info on em too...Coldest of Bars was niiiice... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:26:24 03/12/03 Wed
ure right! Ill post em individually! I was just in a hurry and everything! thanx though! one (NT) -- GT, 00:57:46 03/12/03 Wed
Hex if you come in my e-mail address is back up, but its new.. Raishawn_7@hotmail.com D-lusional oops I mean Phil get at me.. too! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:55:20 03/11/03 Tue
I haven't dropped anything for months...(A U D I O)...check $hit out and tell me what you think -- MIDEVAL, 01:37:13 03/10/03 Mon
waddup, u now a place to get my shiat for u niggas to listen posted. At work, cant listen to your stuff o` here tho.... (NT) -- chromenine, 03:20:12 03/10/03 Mon
x-cuse, i overlooked the post below!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- chromenine, 03:26:47 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! hot rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:26:16 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! cool rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:27:38 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:01:25 03/10/03 Mon
oh yeahhh (NT) -- Tactics, 19:20:02 03/10/03 Mon
pretty good man.. the content was iight though.. not really my type of shit.. the beat was fire though! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:27:27 03/11/03 Tue
(nemesis Vs. [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc)its time for the people to decide who won our little battle (no beef & sorry for wastin a thread) (NT) -- nemesis, 14:59:24 03/11/03 Tue
just reply under this (NT) -- nemesis, 15:49:52 03/11/03 Tue
ima post it twcie i dunt know the rules to ur lounge sorry....this ish is fo nemesis....enjoy lounge -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:00 03/11/03 Tue
this was a battle rhyme??? it sounded not very good please elevate god. (NT) -- dark spitter, 12:43:50 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:41:03 03/11/03 Tue
yo, i dont know anything about my lines bein eminems and if they were i didnt know about it, and no-one sucks my cock other than sexy bitches (NT) -- nemesis, 14:45:35 03/11/03 Tue
dont really have a name for this..............Just spittin shit -- Tactics, 19:08:32 03/10/03 Mon
Yeh -- Cu-jo, 20:23:17 03/10/03 Mon
Good Shit (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 23:06:44 03/10/03 Mon
i liked (NT) -- nemesis, 01:28:47 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:19:04 03/11/03 Tue
I like your flow, i think u got madd potential -- INS, 11:34:37 03/11/03 Tue
a keystyle to get the morning started... peep and critcize -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA SUPREME VOCABULIST, 13:25:44 03/10/03 Mon
wad up??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:50:32 03/10/03 Mon
if this was a keystyle, i can understand but use your talent better (NT) -- nemesis, 14:49:29 03/10/03 Mon
I saw your battle response but it was weak so I didn't respond cause you wasting my weekend but im gonna rip you today cause you a bitch that will never make sense brace yourself be ready cause its a real lowblow (NT) -- dlaster, 15:44:56 03/10/03 Mon
Not bad (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:14:52 03/10/03 Mon
eeh........it ryhmed (NT) -- Tactics, 19:18:56 03/10/03 Mon
You shits wacked, you call yourself the supreme vocabulist but tht shits corny it wouldn't even make a 400 pound pig ugly virgin horny... Get off this site your ruining some sick shit from real Emcees (NT) -- White Knight, 19:40:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked it! Shit was cool dawg! keep spittin! keep elevatrin and shit! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:52:22 03/11/03 Tue
i call it *questions for father* peep -- nemesis, 15:10:22 03/10/03 Mon
thats some real shit im feeling it can tell you didn't make that shit up cause you seem very emotional Im kinda the same with my dad I can feel your pain and please do me a favor rip this kid that wants to battle you (NT) -- dlaster, 15:35:16 03/10/03 Mon
I FUCKIN FEEL DAT SHYT BRO! (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:05:14 03/10/03 Mon
damn.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 19:13:36 03/10/03 Mon
Its good stuff. I really cant be a critic on this rhyme cause your words are your words that come from you feelings.It was deep. (NT) -- Tactics, 19:15:13 03/10/03 Mon
Good, Understand it all. I know what your getting at?... -- Lil' Lucky, 23:00:32 03/10/03 Mon
I feelu nugg! mine left when I was five! I feel u dawg! shti was definetly hot! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:50:27 03/11/03 Tue
**~~**Brand New Real Audio/mp3**~~**”**~~**I did a little something cause various people asked me to**~~**”…””Entitled : Whether Or Not””..I haven’t recorded or spit anything in 2 months ON THIS DATE…so If its wack it is..i just did it for the various few who wanted to hear some Dunn Shit….PEACE -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:01:41 03/10/03 Mon
in the beginnin sounded like you no effort or u didnt feel like doin this shyt lol..not wat i expected..was expecting str8 punches and shyt like usual..dont know wat was more surprising..you actually posting an audio or u spittin in this style.. the flow was nice..beat was like chilly chill..good to see an audio from ya..nice post fool.. (NT) -- PhiLoSo..O.M.N.I...wheelchair kids cant move without effort.., 00:15:44 03/10/03 Mon
*Listening*...Beat is tight...I think it's my earphones, but the vocals are a tad bit drowned out by the instrumental so I had to replay it a few times over again to catch words...WORD@"much bigger things to worry about" line...thought "write or not back at you" line was nice...this wasn't up to your usual, but you said yourself that you didn't spit in 2 months...honestly, I didn't even think this was that bad for that period of time, not spittin'..Overall, I thought this was tight...refreshing shit...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:24:21 03/10/03 Mon
yea this was pretty kew, i liked the flow, and i was wondering where did all your punches go?...i got a few in here but its all good, coming back is a lil rust (NT) -- NoFlow, 00:27:44 03/10/03 Mon
i actually like the fact it wasnt all punches...now i know you can do more than battle...cant believe everything you hear...good shit (NT) -- Vision, 01:16:44 03/10/03 Mon
Yo you are a straight battle emcee...man you should try to expand a lil, not saying that you aren't ill...but a lil variety is good. NICE PUNCHES! (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:42:53 03/10/03 Mon
Hmm its like the spark has dimmed out.. Still some dope lines in there.. Last line was great.. Good luck in the future, whatever it is you do.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->Did you peep me and D's audio?, 02:17:33 03/10/03 Mon
To be honest yo.....I wasn't feeling your old stuff too much but it was way better than this...I wasnt even feeling the beat...but hey do you if it works for you...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:40:07 03/10/03 Mon
despite the lil delay between the voice and the backvocals, I found this pretty hot, yo! Nice flow! loved teh rhyme patterns! liked ya voice too! hot shit, nigga! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:36:30 03/10/03 Mon
good to hear you again.. really mellow.. I liked it.. I wouldn't call you rusty just kinda bored.. good to see you care about kids enough to drop a audio on their behalf.. all in all I was feeling this it was a nice piece! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:04:06 03/10/03 Mon
BaTTLe??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:47:54 03/10/03 Mon
soon just not yet, i will just need to take care of family shit (NT) -- nemesis, 14:44:22 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:08:13 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:09:39 03/10/03 Mon
yea man I'm up for a battle... hit me up at the provided email adress... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:10:15 03/10/03 Mon
Im good to go thanx fer askin (NT) -- ODe-Masta-oDD, 18:09:59 03/10/03 Mon
Audios for yall to peep! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:16:05 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios righ now..im at A-squela, peep later (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:32:48 03/10/03 Mon
PEEP this its good shit...nice production (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 13:06:43 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:53:06 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios dawg (NT) -- nemesis, 14:58:42 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** -- INTOX & Liquid X... i'll be back later to give three replies. pz, 17:01:13 03/09/03 Sun
yo gotta give it up for ya'll. shit was most definitely a hot track. nice lyrics, sick beat, overall fuckin nice. (NT) -- starks, 17:42:12 03/09/03 Sun
Quality is crystal... lyrics are nice from X.. best part of your part.. I always thought your flow was a bit slow for my liking, but its definitely on-point... Intox's quality aint as good.. Flow and breath control aint as polished as X.. lyrics good but didnt stick as well to my memory.. last part of his verse was the best.. Really feelin what u said.. Chorus nice.. So is the beat.. Yours right? this was very well put together.. Much props deserved.. (NT) -- ===||Swords---> hahah @ soundclick name.., 17:50:52 03/09/03 Sun
yeah i recorded my verse a while ago... before I discovered the wonder of punch-ins and stop-start technology... also, when i spit this, originally it was over the beat a little differently so that is why it sounds off at some parts... but thanks for checking it out. pz (NT) -- TOX, 20:26:10 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now, bet its tight though..pz (NT) -- essence....AM, 21:07:02 03/09/03 Sun
Liquid ripped that shit Intox your shit was pretty dope then got better towards the end.. very good quality.. well up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:28:55 03/09/03 Sun
nice beat... props to whoever made it... x, definetely came ncie.. flow and lyrics on point... tox, i can tell you didn;t spit to this cuz some lines are off.. but your many multi's still keep your flow on point... this was a good audio collab tho... keep it up... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:59:40 03/09/03 Sun
got the preview from X on this...beat was aight..kinda boring and repititive......X friggin killed that beat though cause that his realm of beats....LYRICS FROM BOTH OF YALL WAS VERY MUCH ON POINT...x's flow was on point ....tox...ur flow was good..but it does sound like its offbeat...could be either ur spitting too fast...or the mixing was mixed wrong for ur verse....ur lyrics were ill as hell and the connection of them was nice...nice work from both....i hate that beat though..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:26:58 03/10/03 Mon
SIckest audio Ive heard so far! hot, definetly hot, nuggaz Specially Liquid X! loved ya flows adn schemes, both yall! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:31:52 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** first audio, got a sound click page..titled STRUGGLES How hard do you get down...do you still fight? the struggles one man delt with but still aimed for his goal..Deep thoughts -- NoFlow, 00:59:10 03/10/03 Mon
you sound like that one cat from Nappy Roots that was rappin on the hill....ya flow aint bad, you stayed on beat...but the levels of ya vocals was.....shitty youngsta...not bad for a first (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 01:24:49 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics are ok, but the vocals need to be a lil louder so that you have more impact (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:39:13 03/10/03 Mon
couldnt listen, but your scemes look a little like eminem style,but as i said i haven´t heard it....Other then that ; dis is not bad (NT) -- chromenine, 03:25:03 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics were hot but work on flow and attitude a lil more! overall, it was nice to listen to! 1st audio? nice! keep doin it! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:20:52 03/10/03 Mon
(((AUDIO))) "Lyricism Squared"......THE REMIX!! .......now the beat Doesnt Suck! lol -- Philoso & Swords OMNI-MAIN LOOP Production, 03:13:48 03/09/03 Sun
lol, the audio has been Swordsified! j/p... i was pleasently suprised at how well this worked... the jazzy beat brings a completely new feel to the audio... feelin it... to be honest i liked the original better but i'm sure most people will feel this more....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 07:08:27 03/09/03 Sun
You liked that other beat better? blah.. i thought it sucked lol.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:58:44 03/09/03 Sun
yea i like this, sounded much better than the original, the beat is not something i would use but you guys flowed real good over it...overall dope audio..btw this is the best that i've heard D sound..peace (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 10:36:26 03/09/03 Sun
Listening.... reply later.... when i's done........OH.... LOVIN THE BEAT.... Your verse is better than the first guy's... mostly cuz it's clearer... tight shit tho... holla!!! (NT) -- that nigga SKORP, 16:37:00 03/09/03 Sun
thought i'd let you know the 1st dude is D-lusional... (NT) -- Verse, 16:46:06 03/09/03 Sun
LMAO... shit!!! hahaha.... well now I know.... lmao.... statement still stands... (NT) -- thanks for fillin me in.... ***still ****.... FUCKIN-SKORP-I, 17:02:24 03/09/03 Sun
checked this out when it was first posted... swords did u ever post this beat?? real nice man... Phil... lol, i can't believe i just called you phil..haha anyway, this is probably ya best work, you have improved on basically all of ya audios... good shit... swords ya flow sounds real nice on this.. liked the word usage it made the verse come real smooth... good job (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:10:15 03/09/03 Sun
the first cat was nice but the second cat was off tha charts..original voice ...lyik content was ill..beat was fuckiin dope!!..peace yall (NT) -- AKI-RAH, 04:57:09 03/10/03 Mon
Shedding light so those can relate to my life OK this isn't quite finished BUT have a look and see what you think... I appreciate EVERYONEs' CRIT......PeAcE -- Eternal Student, 13:07:21 03/09/03 Sun
this was nice... the content isn't my kind of thing but its well written... some nice lines in here, i liked the centipede one... worse thing about this was the last line, very conry ending... i'd definately change that... other than that it was dope... peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 14:44:32 03/09/03 Sun
this is nice... content... very smooth flow... relaxed... not too simple... not too complex.... Very nice. I agree with Versetyle on the ending... but I'm no good with ending MY verses so... no complaints there... HOLLA! (NT) -- SKORP-I..., 16:19:41 03/09/03 Sun
Basically i agree with them but i dont think the ending woulda bothered me if they hadnt pointed it out.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:57:05 03/09/03 Sun
I agree with swords.. but this was pretty tight.. nothing over the edge.. but it was good! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:40:11 03/09/03 Sun
fuk...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:01 03/10/03 Mon
Elastics and Path, collabo.. THE SICKNESS REAL AUDIO.. peep it out! -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!" & Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:12:46 03/09/03 Sun
ewwwww, you killed it.....i always liked this beat...lyrics is ill yea, i do wanna collab sometime in the future, lol you sound like a skinny cat like myself...quality is still bowel movement status, but it cool...an enjoyable piece (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I........ShapeShifter, 22:08:01 03/09/03 Sun
This nice...I feel it. Beat is HOT...I forgot who ish it is though. Nice verses from both. HOlla back (NT) -- Kariz...........*came in on this site at age 14.....17 now..and finna be outta HS* FO SHOOO, 22:34:49 03/09/03 Sun
Like vision said, quality is doo doo... but flow and mic skills are edvident... real nice work... keep doing shit... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:07:26 03/09/03 Sun
ish was nice and hyped...very ill lyrics...doing oddjobs like james bond....hmm im noticing when u do ur audios...u spit alot of metaphors and punches....alot different than your text....quality sounds like thsi was recorded in 92....haha...nice work though...flow was nice also...good luck with ur career.... (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:16:07 03/10/03 Mon
lol i liked dis, dem punches lyrics were dope, the energy and the lyrics behind the music make it sounds something you can chill too, quality wasnt...ehbla, haha, but allaround,, i felt it..peace (NT) -- NoFlow So Much Flow ITs Like I Got None At All, 00:41:20 03/10/03 Mon
nice everything - except quality (NT) -- mid, 01:49:28 03/10/03 Mon
NEW AUDIO! CHECK IT. also looking for peeps to collab wit. i amke my beats. :) -- N'FINITE, 23:19:50 03/09/03 Sun
I wanna preview this. but my comp wont let me. damn soundclick wont work:( -- N'finite, 23:22:20 03/09/03 Sun
shit aint that bad man..i see some potential....hook was aight...nice and simple...beat I WAS NOT FEELING AT ALL...keep it up..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:12:48 03/10/03 Mon
hmm..flow i was feeling..beat..was kinda..ehh...lyrics were decent...yea..."everyones trying to push you? to something you dont wanna be" it was nice..but from my standpoint i just got into AUDIO (NT) -- NOFLOW everybody seems to be POSTING audios..lol guess whos next.., 00:36:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked the beat man, it was nice (orchestra)...there is definatelly some potential ~peep inside~ -- MIDEVAL, 01:46:16 03/10/03 Mon
Hey Lounge... I'm back... new flow... new beats... new me... small sacrifice----> Lyricism for flow... I'm finding the balance...****AUDIO***** **** AUDIO**** ****AUDIO**** -- Skorpione, 16:13:59 03/09/03 Sun
Another fuckin sick audio. Good show man.Stay up Peace (NT) -- starks, 17:44:06 03/09/03 Sun
Has a Southern Underground feel, definitely... Dope quality.. Not exactly my style, but this is pretty good.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:53:08 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now...damn, Wassup Skorp, long time no see...pz (NT) -- essence, 21:08:57 03/09/03 Sun
damn look at the audios up tonight.. thats good.. just waiting on the audio now.. iight feeling this shit man.. you sound like my boy stacks.. you made the beat huh? hooks energetic.. feeling that.. good job man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:36:00 03/09/03 Sun
ok.. firstly, ya quality was nice... flow was good, no problems with it really... but not feelin the beat... sounds like a keith sweat slow jam..lol you need somethin a lil harder... from a mic aspect you came nice tho... (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:03:48 03/09/03 Sun
ayo, i aint been in here for ages but i was wondering if any vets know the whereabouts of trans p these days? i think he mighta died or some shit, but whatever, anybody know? (NT) -- invalid, 15:46:32 03/09/03 Sun
Good question, i was wondering the same thing a while ago.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:54:35 03/09/03 Sun
(((NEW AUDIO)))...yeah i know its about time i dropped another audio...this is a verse i did for a collab but i'm sick of waiting for the others...just a freestyle type verse called 'Art of War'...all feedback is very appreciated...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 10:04:48 03/08/03 Sat
hate the beat...just doesnt seem to fit you right...feeling the lyrics from what i cud HEAR...you sound kinda distant...quality's a lil shaky, interesting voice...nice imagery, you mite wanna just add a lil more emotion...this beat is giving me a headache....good effort Verse...i'd prolly like to hear you over a different beat and with a faster flow though...haha peace... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 12:13:52 03/08/03 Sat
i wish you would've used another beat, the verse was cool... it seems it was a cut and paste verse for the beat, which made it hard to swallow (NT) -- ?, 12:23:26 03/08/03 Sat
nice work dog keep it gangsta (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:28:28 03/08/03 Sat
nice -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:22:31 03/08/03 Sat
To be honest with you, I'm pretty sure I've heard better from you...in terms of beat selection and running with the beat itself...but I felt the lyrics...maybe it's just us, who knows...but it seemed like the reason why I couldn't really feel it that much...your voice, "interesting" like Xitizen said...it actually makes me want to see what you do with that voice, you know?...but props on the audio... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:20:48 03/09/03 Sun
yeah, the beat aint bad as an instrumental, but for you it doesnt suit you as well as someone else like Mr. Lif or something.. Lyrics were tight, Freestyle? nice.. Flow was ok, but you woulda felt more at home on a slower beat.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:27:01 03/09/03 Sun
every time I hear you... I forget about your accent... could bearly understand the lyrics but that's prolly cuz of the speakers on this computer.... I wouldn't doubt that they were pretty tight.... I agree with Swords and xiti on the rest... (NT) -- Skorpione, 16:44:29 03/09/03 Sun
This is some real deep shit right here....you might need some knowledge of Biblical scriptures, and I mean DEEP, spirit-led knowledge of it, if your third eye isn't open, this rhyme isn't for you, a lot of niggas don't know who they really are and get caught up in worldly pleasures, well I'ma shed some truth on all that, I call this shit "JUDGEMENT DAY".....YAHAWAH BA YA SHAM YAHAWASHI (All praises due to God and His Son Jesus Christ)......SHALOM! -- Novakane, 04:13:06 03/09/03 Sun
reply to the 3 beneath you first... i gave this a quick read... and seeing as i don't believe in God this didn't do much for me... and do you really think this will confuse Lounge heads when we have our own resident perplexing biblical-emcee in the form of Heksagon Lavish? (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 07:16:30 03/09/03 Sun
Well i thought this was hot. .. the content is tight and you stayed on point here BUT i didnt think it flowed consistently to start with but then it picked up........so Russia is considered to be the bear right ? Good work and God bless (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:48:22 03/09/03 Sun
Yea this is deep... being christian, I follow you... I'm glad to see someone can do what I can do what I can't as far as the Christian rap goes.... Nice... keep it up son... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:29:07 03/09/03 Sun
what up lounge...here's a brand new keystyle called: 'Tales from a §inful §oul - Part 1' ...just devloping a new sort of style...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 10:04:27 03/09/03 Sun
this was cool, i thiught the flow was good and wordplay was excellent! keep it up (NT) -- nemesis, 11:56:34 03/09/03 Sun
WOAH, this is heat....I really enjoyed this piece, the flow was spot on and some real nice thought here (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:54:05 03/09/03 Sun
Nice ass flow... I was able to flow right through this... No problem... hellatight piece.... I like the wingless angel thought.... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:24:42 03/09/03 Sun
Introducin ODe-MastA-oDD a.k.a Whitey Wildman a.k.a The Vanilla Thrilla!!...jus a lil fuckin around to give u a feel of my flow and style, u can diss me all u want but u aint gunna stop me -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 15:55:44 03/08/03 Sat
Props.. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 17:33:28 03/08/03 Sat
really cool... your one bad ass gangsta my homie! (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 18:09:48 03/08/03 Sat
just awesome man! why arent you signed? now just spit this over a beat so producers and record companies can hear you and you'll be rollin in the green...if 50 Cent can do it...you can too..and never put down that Rhyming for Dummies book (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:26:57 03/08/03 Sat
cool -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:20:06 03/08/03 Sat
da mad hermit shakes his head (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:09:26 03/08/03 Sat
ok (NT) -- nemesis, 12:03:48 03/09/03 Sun
Ay man, he's so wack, it just might come true! (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:15:15 03/09/03 Sun
hummmmmmmmmmm........pretty comical if you ask me (NT) -- Eternal Student, 13:13:24 03/09/03 Sun
introducing my keystyle as your busting a written freestyle -- dlaster aka the fugitive, 16:07:54 03/07/03 Fri
this was a waste of your time man... were you under the influence when ya typed this bullshit? elevate or be elevated upon.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:58:24 03/07/03 Fri
i second that notion ^^....... (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:04:13 03/07/03 Fri
fuck new zealand. you here me! fuck your whole fuckin country.and as far as rap goes fuck you to. go find something to do with your life instead of postin these dumn ass rhymes. better yet strap a few bombs to your chest and suicide bomb a few fellow new zealand faggots so theres less when i get there t o wipe you fuckers out. (NT) -- Colin Powell, 17:57:40 03/07/03 Fri
humm not really feeling this !!! (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:13:51 03/07/03 Fri
there's a word for you...itz called "poser"...just quit trying to be sumthin your not and get back to jacking off... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:00:54 03/08/03 Sat
wack, elevate, 1 (NT) -- Novakane, 04:10:52 03/09/03 Sun
do you listen to D-12 alot? (NT) -- nemesis, 12:15:35 03/09/03 Sun
been a lil since i posted a key, so i sat down and came up with this lil piece...i dont call it anything, just releasing some stress....peace -- Essence.....AM, 17:56:58 03/03/03 Mon
yo that was madd nice -- INS, 18:24:52 03/03/03 Mon
decent (NT) -- flowmasta, 19:03:30 03/03/03 Mon
Nice.. Not my favorite one of yours tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 02:03:34 03/04/03 Tue
nice. nothing spectacular but a definate good read. stay up . (NT) -- starks, 09:19:17 03/04/03 Tue
keep posting so i can read more.stay up (NT) -- a.k., 10:53:56 03/04/03 Tue
not to bad -- gollum, 11:29:30 03/04/03 Tue
this was a nice drop.... keep postin and stay up (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:55:53 03/04/03 Tue
I know this is far down the page so you probably won't see it but i was feelin it... how are the audios coming along? (NT) -- Verse aka §inful §oul⁷ of Abzent Minded, 15:11:23 03/06/03 Thu
nice, I liked the wordplay and complexity (NT) -- Novakane, 04:03:23 03/09/03 Sun
revisiting one of my finest...consider this a lesson in the art of expression and storytelling through lyrics...*** Victim *** love is twisted, unreal, and some people go to the limits no man is allowed to pass...especially not with his blood... -- XitiZeN, 01:38:51 03/08/03 Sat
Um...damn...how the hell am I suppose to react to this?...this was well thought out...it shows...so descriptive man...it's been a while since you've posted and this truely brings the essence back...wow...very interesting concept...I don't know what else to say...I enjoyed reading this...so appropriate word usage...sure was an interesting twist at the end...it saddens me that things like this actually happen and probably still is...you wrote it out well...dope piece right here X..appreciate the read, Peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:20:21 03/08/03 Sat
damn... this was ill... to be able to write so well about such a disturbing topic is quite a talent... nice imagery all the way through but the piece really came alive near the end... glad you reposted this coz this was real nice, post more often...peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 09:44:55 03/08/03 Sat
wow...pure sickness dude...wow..i'm speechless, this was an excellent piece, everything about it was on point...and the end was just like whoa..not many people i know can write like this, an overall gem of a post..keep it up kid, peace (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 09:59:04 03/08/03 Sat
truly a gifted writer here... i really was caught off guard with the continuity... i havent been here in a minute and its nice to see the lounge is still breathing. (NT) -- ?, 12:04:18 03/08/03 Sat
Very Moving Piece -- ODe- Masta- oDD, 15:09:41 03/08/03 Sat
Yeah, i remember this one.. Didnt you get POTM for this? Very vivid, graphic, emotional.. Only problem to me was that i have no idea how this is supposed to flow... but other than that, its good reading, if you have the patience.. This makes me wanna go back and look for the topical stuff everyone used to drop..I might just do that soon, well at least mine.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:33:34 03/09/03 Sun
World War 3 -- Lil' Jay, 15:25:02 03/08/03 Sat
Respond if ya feel or not (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:31:16 03/08/03 Sat
hummm -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:21:16 03/08/03 Sat
I thought it was gonna be decent but i stopped at "Take the towel off your head" I mean im all for persecuting the bastard, but this is a lyricism site.. Gotta come with more of a mind than that.. Stay up.. dont give up yet tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:19:40 03/09/03 Sun
Up Hill Battle -- Digits, 11:35:58 03/07/03 Fri
yea, this was pretty nice, cept for your rhyme scheme...was pretty weak, but your thoughts are felt,nice thoughts, but flow wasnt all there, kinda lost it, but yea, elevate in your Rhymescheme, like using Multis or something that will make a reader stop and say..."WOW" (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:47:01 03/07/03 Fri
yeah man thats whats up..nothin bad about that (NT) -- beans, 12:28:52 03/07/03 Fri
That was straight. -- Lil' Lucky, 12:40:24 03/07/03 Fri
hella short and hella weak...damn man quit coming with that stupid bullshit and come with the real hiphop... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:54:05 03/07/03 Fri
i know exactly what ya mean dawg, everything seems to be just to so ..... arrrrggghhh (NT) -- nemesis, 13:08:39 03/07/03 Fri
I don't know what Dark Spitter is talkin about over here...you're iller than him, atleast you don't FORCE your lines....but yo....I see potential, we all have to start somewhere....scheme was somewhat simplistic but you delivered your thoughts well....keep writin yo and bring up ideas you think no one else can conjure....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:34:08 03/07/03 Fri
i thought this started off strong as hell, around the level you'd expect most vets writing poetic type depressed shit to come off with...flow was pretty nice too...but about halfway through it just kinda fell off...you were just making sure the words rhymed by then...potential yes, and plenty of it, just take critiques well and keep on... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:09:28 03/08/03 Sat
pimp shit dog (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:27:20 03/08/03 Sat
NEW POST!!......somethin i wrote out real quick this mornin....."Yin and Yang".......any critique or feedback welcome......Enjoy! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:01:53 03/07/03 Fri
This had some nice concepts the flow was a bit patch but it was still heat ......hey check mah post up top....cus I havea problem with your first 2 lines hahaha....nah its all love....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:19:12 03/07/03 Fri
Homie i dont get the concept, but i think you got a lot of things do say... that ned to be heard... the flow was nice tough -- MARYTREMCEE, 19:37:09 03/07/03 Fri
i like tha shit! (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:29:03 03/07/03 Fri
truthfully i thought the concept was the weakest thing about this post...everything else, vocab, flow, etc was on point...but the whole race card and society card have been used more than punches involving the word "come/cum"...the post was well written, complex, just think you shud find some newer subject matter... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:58:43 03/08/03 Sat
Mayhem's Idea and WTC Anthem -- Darknodin, 22:19:34 03/07/03 Fri
haha you sound alot like Dlusional, you guys shud collabo, damn iight, first, emotion? or lack there of...i dunno sounds like you just talking for alotta this, almost like you carrying melodies at other points, i dunno overall, i thought this was a pretty solid effort, oh and i only listened to Mayhem's Idea...grr...turn down your vocals, they making me deaf... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:45:46 03/08/03 Sat
the revolution is comin -- Oracle, 01:48:43 03/08/03 Sat
lmao, you do sound like Philoso... anyway i'm listening to Mayhem's idea... beat is decent, your flow is quite good... you need some more emotion tho...dunno why you made the vocals so loud at that one point, but for the rest of the time they were too quiet...overall its quite nice.... wtc: strange beat, not feeling it at all... flow is alright... not as good as the other one... overall i'd say there's lots of potential... just fix up the quality and use more emotion...peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 10:00:16 03/08/03 Sat
This is for the haters, Im gona try. So come comment, -- Lil' Lucky, 00:17:28 03/06/03 Thu
Seriously it's like you keep sayin the same shit over and over again. Like Teddy Ruxpin when you ain't change his tape.......Hahahahahaha ya'll remember that shit (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:36:53 03/06/03 Thu
YO LOL, this reminded me of some EMINEM steeze here, but i was feeling it...as far as your rhyme scheme was pretty decent, keep posted kid..and try rapping about something thats worth rappin about..no one cares about HATERZ (NT) -- NOFLOW, 01:39:33 03/06/03 Thu
this was iight man.....u did kinda repeat yourself over and over but oh well (?) umm im feelin the message u were trynna get across but content was kinda lacking...but it was iight, stay up and building, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 01:45:31 03/06/03 Thu
no matter what anyone says about this i thought it wasn't that bad. we can all relate to the haters and cock blocks out there.keep posting and stay up. one (NT) -- a.k., 08:18:58 03/06/03 Thu
keep it up -- chromenine, 08:24:42 03/06/03 Thu
Ya big homie keep it playa up (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 09:19:37 03/06/03 Thu
man like I hate your fuckin rhyme scheme (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:35:35 03/06/03 Thu
how was this a freestyle if its not an audio? And my favorite line was: "but im a us my head"... irony? (NT) -- INTOX, 10:35:16 03/07/03 Fri
A N.a.K.I.X.e.M. DIZASTERPIECE…I’m settlin down more…lots of shit been happenin so keyin and all that doesn’t fit in my agenda…so this is a keystyle to elevate my content…I choose to call this -= Incoherent Ink Coherence=-…quite abstract…I was just on some shit when I keyed this….***ALL REPLIES AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:50:00 03/07/03 Fri
dident feel this at all.... fuckin short too... I know your capable of iller shit kidd.... comon with that 18 bar bullshit and come iller and show these emcees real hiphop shit... nice vocab tho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab, 17:02:51 03/07/03 Fri
yo i was feeling this. well done (NT) -- mad hermit, 17:04:12 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:07:47 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:08:54 03/07/03 Fri
don't even listen to that hater dark spitter I liked your shit but your not GOD (NT) -- dlaster fuck all these fake emcees, 17:46:18 03/07/03 Fri
this was aight....what stuck out to me more than anything as how well it flowed...nice word connection..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 19:37:25 03/07/03 Fri
i dunno Diz...just hit me as "decent"...flow was evidently sick as Dunn mentioned, i thought the content was 'not bad' but you really did cut back this time...why so short? you also just kinda jumbled random imagery together and gave it almost a 'forced message'...whatever Jesus, good to know you still exist...positive work... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:04:10 03/08/03 Sat
you know what I think about this already... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:22:15 03/08/03 Sat
well i was definately feelin this... when people see a post from you they expect it to be outstanding everytime, this wasn't one of those but it was still ill... and i guess in a way ur still adjusting to a style change... anyway, keep em coming Diz....peace (NT) -- Versetyle, 08:55:28 03/08/03 Sat
PEEP this SCRIPT...OK, you might have missed my audios for valid reasons, Miss this and YOU'RE CRAZY !!!!!this is going audio as soon as possibleSo have a proof read and ENJOY this peace ALL you newbies take notes.......... -- Eternal Student, 18:30:52 03/07/03 Fri
man that was mad nice... like the flow of it (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:19:59 03/07/03 Fri
nice post. on some apocalypitic shit (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:26:20 03/07/03 Fri
oh yo... this is mad nice dawg! (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 22:26:07 03/07/03 Fri
dark, religious undertones...positive flow...overall very nicely done, not that long though, and just cause you use big words doesnt make a post 'complex' (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:53:46 03/08/03 Sat
**HOLY SHYT!!A MOTHAFUKIN SWORDS AND DLUSIONAL AUDIO COLLAB!!..SICK LYRICS...NICE BEAT..FUKIN PUNCHES AND QUOTES ALL UP IN THIS..ENTITLED "LYRICISM SQUARED"..BUT WAIT...WANT THE TWIST OF THIS??..LAST EVER POST AS DLUSIONAL..OH..AND NOW ITS NO LONGER AM/OMNI..PEEP OUTRO TO SEE WHAT I'M TALKIN BOUT!!..THIS IS HOW U END AN ERA HAHAH! -- A Guy Wit Wheelchairs ...Swordspenz..OMNI&Penz Inc. Collab.2 dope fuka's on 1 collab..we should do dis more often eh?, 14:22:20 03/05/03 Wed
Well, I'm glad I finally got a chance to hear you D-Lusional (Philoso...whatever)...you remind me of a slower MC Paul Barman....Swords reminded me of The Introvert.....a little....The beat sounded like something Edan would spit on....but it was still good to finally hear from the both for the first time...for me at least....No more Abzent Minded for you huh?....I bet Kilwa is laughin' his ass off right now....HAHAHA...Just playin'....Stay blessed....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h £ k §/|_ A \/©....., 16:35:14 03/05/03 Wed
iight.. beat is nice.. D you remind me off SUNSET.. SO MUCH.. the voice and the style.. you've gotten alot nicer.. SWORDS very nice stance much more on point... very nice audio.. I'll prolly listen to this alot more times this week.. SWORDS you silly.. D you sound this Arab kid I know at the end talking.. but it's all gravy.. nice job yall! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:52:21 03/05/03 Wed
this was an ill audio..lyrics from both of you was sick...flow was dope too...Dlusional ur flow got faster at times but it sounded right..like it fit..hope that makes sense...swords ur flow was just bangin...dope audio yo...lol@ da outro...u sound mad n shyt..lookin like joe millionare talkin bout a twist haha...hopefully u two collab again in da future...1ne(NT) -- DiAtRiBe....oh yeah...dat kennedys/aaliyah line was just wrong yo lol, 18:12:23 03/05/03 Wed
cool ass collab, D ya flow is coming along....Swords your shit is dope, nice beat too....bout the AM shit....oh well, do you, although i dont agree with the reasons...cant say i rep shapeshiftaz more than AM cause i only dropped two audios, last one two months ago...i've dropped a FEW text posts with AM and OMNI in the sig since (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of OMNI...just remember less people in OMNI post than AM, 19:27:27 03/05/03 Wed
Dope shit..dope shit...Philoso..sometimes, I think you were holding that flow back or something...because it was almost instant after we told you about your flow that it got better...good work on that bro...lyrics are tight...Swords...tight shit also...always enjoy your audios...lyrics are nice..it's ALL good to me..LOL@the outro...something about it made me laugh...maybe how you talked fast...lol...OVERALL, DOPE SHIT...enjoyed it..I'll listen again :-) (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:53:22 03/05/03 Wed
Thanks yall.. Replies are always apreciated.. it keeps this place worth it.. considerign how rare replies are these days.. Hopefully someone can answer me this: How come i hafta collab with someone to get more than three replies? shit bugs me.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:52:47 03/06/03 Thu
haha wassup with yall fukkin bamas!? haha damn been a minute...ne wayz...yo man this was fresh, i really liked this collab...yall sound pretty crazy haha..but yea man i dunno what else to say cept "tight" haha flows were on point, delivery was nice...everythings been sed, stay up fellas, hopefully we can work together on somethin in the future...keep reppin correct ~oNe~ (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR THE ENLIGHT N ONE O.M.N.I., 01:42:11 03/06/03 Thu
this took me forever to download on this shit PC... beat is pretty nice... Phil - your flow is improving a lot, still needs work tho, need to get a bit more comfortable on the mic... Swordz ripped this shit, ur flow is sick on this one, you should use this type of beat more often... nice lyircs too... as for the AM shit, well i haven't been active much but i'm gonna keep reppin... i understand ur reasons tho... well anyway, good job Swords and Phil! (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 08:59:07 03/06/03 Thu
I didn't get to hear it....I'm at school and all....can somone fill me in on what he said in the outro?....lol.....Philoso huh?...cool.....I'll try and listen when I get to the house and drop a real reply....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of Abztract Atrocitiez of Horror-core Affiliates of Abzent Minded Ink. of O.M.N.I...haha., 11:55:28 03/06/03 Thu
dope track, nice work from both...but just cause Dlusional changed his name and dropped his crew doesnt make him look or sound like any less of a dipshit... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:18:01 03/08/03 Sat
"Feel the Wrath"...been a while..sup -- ViRTuaL, 18:52:55 03/05/03 Wed
you dont sound so much like Eminem anymore...ya flow's elevated even moreso...feelin this here...dont like the hook a whole lot, but its catchy....and you ride the beat well...good ass quality (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of OMNI, 19:35:41 03/05/03 Wed
ya dog pimp shit (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 20:45:56 03/05/03 Wed
pretty sick *listenin*.......nice beat and i'm feelin tha chorus...sick verses.nice drop overall. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 22:00:22 03/05/03 Wed
I pretty much agree with Vision..I think there's still a little something about your voice that has a resemblance to Eminem...lyrics are nice...I seriously think I've heard better FLOW-wise from you...but other than that...I liked this..."catchy" shit...drop more raw shit...on some Mighty V shit.. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 22:16:51 03/05/03 Wed
of course this was nice, but i've heard better from you...haha at the hook, liking your voice with the beat, lyrics pretty dope, same with flow...blah peace (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:15:24 03/08/03 Sat
lunch time key... was dissapointed at the reply from my previous post... wanted to come back and make sense this time... my bad if my lines dont make sense... -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab, 17:26:30 03/07/03 Fri
u suck more than a hoe except you dont get payed for sucking bro your shit will never make sense you illiterate mother fucking bitch (NT) -- dlaster, 17:37:18 03/07/03 Fri
This was ok..pretty short...it weren't as bad as he's saying tho^^but elevation is needed (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:26:20 03/07/03 Fri
to the first replier... shut the fuck up and drop dead or somthing... go kill your self ho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:10:47 03/07/03 Fri
... actually... this is average i'd say. .. elevate dawg (oh and dlaster shouldn't talk) (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:33:44 03/07/03 Fri
this was solid. it kept my attention (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:44:35 03/07/03 Fri
...just comes out like your trying way too hard... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:55:28 03/08/03 Sat
early morning keystyle... think that my keys are better then my writtens when I post them up... just peep and criticize -- the Dark spiTTER, 13:24:49 03/07/03 Fri
well...uhh...rhyme scheme was awful....I mean...don't try crammin so much shit in one line...split it up and get vivid with every line...instead of havin to cram one thought into ONE line....Armor I Gedden?..uhh...I dunno bout that man....keep writin and FREESTYLE....a rhythm should stick to your head when you wanna key so the rhyme structure will be a lot better....just...elevate man...don't try too hard.....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism, 13:42:00 03/07/03 Fri
what ever man.... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 17:05:42 03/07/03 Fri
hmm...flow seemed real choppy in here to me...some of this did seem forced..and the Armor-I-Gedden?!...that was lame....but ya had some nice lines in here too.....but definitely seen better from ya kidd...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:13:02 03/07/03 Fri
your keystyle sucks like your freestyles if you believe me your in denile (NT) -- dlaster, 17:50:14 03/07/03 Fri
umm I thought this was ok, I was feeling some of the lines (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:05:28 03/07/03 Fri
Imaginary concepts, and Value flow, newest lyric tittled GOD vs. SATAN The long lasting battle streaming for ever now commences, in a GROWING WAR -- NoFlow Save your Spirit, 02:25:15 03/06/03 Thu
Thats da shit -- chromenine, 08:13:32 03/06/03 Thu
crazy but good (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 08:23:10 03/06/03 Thu
i liked it but what is it with all of this abstract rap shit that you'll rap about. the only ones that rap about real shit that i've read is lil' jay,digits,lil' lucky,and c dawg.so big ups to all of you.one (NT) -- a.k., 08:26:58 03/06/03 Thu
Some of the Tightest shit, iv seen. Ever. -- Lil' Lucky, 09:10:06 03/06/03 Thu
i though this was dope all the way through (NT) -- nemesis, 13:39:46 03/06/03 Thu
This was dope.....I was listening to the track "Julia Set" by Noah23 off the "Quicksand" LP while reading this...and it didn't go with the beat....But, what I read is indeed a total amazement....Breaking it up into stanzas kind of got on my nerve, but you changed the imagery with each one...so it's understandable...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h £ k §/|_ A \/©...., 15:49:28 03/06/03 Thu
wad up....... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 17:07:36 03/06/03 Thu
wow (NT) -- madhermitt, 20:02:22 03/07/03 Fri
and another one, hope u feelin it; its a little abstract( 36 lines!) -- chromenine, 07:05:26 03/07/03 Fri
Sawry!I messed up one line at the end it goes: the massive LYRICAL hydro chemical voodooman...... (NT) -- chromenine, 07:11:29 03/07/03 Fri
Again. Decent. (NT) -- Digits, 11:40:49 03/07/03 Fri
haha "yo girl is fuckin groase, but im glad she aint a ghost, in this show of my debris" didnt understand dat one tho, but your first start was good, but you lost it after your first 4 lines...ELEVATE? (NT) -- NoFlow..I got so much flow, its LIKE I DONT HAVE ANY AT ALL, 11:54:38 03/07/03 Fri
Was Fresh... -- Lil' Lucky, 12:33:52 03/07/03 Fri
a lil short its called "Reincarnation" more of my own lil poem -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:35:14 03/06/03 Thu
WTF is this..lol..I hope it was a joke... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:08:08 03/06/03 Thu
^ i'm wit him.......pure garbage. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:30:59 03/06/03 Thu
What the hell is this? A nursery rhyme? (NT) -- Digits, 11:49:51 03/07/03 Fri
LOL, the the dog went RUFF and the cats went Meow, delete this Dr suese rhyme, Tizza posted Foul (NT) -- NoFlow LMAO im gonna pork u like a pig sizzle ur shit till i turn to bacon, 12:08:14 03/07/03 Fri
just to sharpen skills up a notch bout to bust a key.... vocab spreme for the two-zero zero-three.. -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 16:17:57 03/06/03 Thu
This was good......It's good to see you're starting to elevate at a good pace...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h £ k §/|_ A \/©...., 17:04:31 03/06/03 Thu
hmm..this was a pretty good piece...the word usage was nice...some nice metaphors and imagery...but the flow did seem kinda 'thick', like to slow-draggin along..and there were a couple spots that i felt ya was tryin too hard to be abstract or somethin..just didn't seem natural...but nonetheless, an aight piece...stay up kidd, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:33:40 03/06/03 Thu
coo -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:40:46 03/06/03 Thu
yeah the start did it for me (NT) -- treyz1, 07:57:21 03/07/03 Fri
it was good. but do you guys ever try to set an overall idea of something you write. everything i read just goes all over the place. decent though. PEACE! (NT) -- Digits, 11:55:31 03/07/03 Fri
and another short (16lines) again, cuz im bored (!!contents is No offence to noone!!) -- chromenine, 07:19:56 03/07/03 Fri
its alright you up for a battle (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 07:46:32 03/07/03 Fri
This was decent. It didn't flow through the whole thing though. (NT) -- Digits, 11:38:13 03/07/03 Fri
eeehh....sortaaaa decent, wasn't feeling it, this wasnt all there, you shouldt post battle verse, or something that looks like your trying to battle anyone who reads this..but ..eh..w/e (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:41:52 03/07/03 Fri
shit aint hard at all...not feelin this at all (NT) -- beans, 11:52:05 03/07/03 Fri
Repost.....*Terminal Illness*.....a post from a longwhile back.........*keystlye from other site included(sorry bout tha caps on tha keystyle.) -- BaZiC BaRz aka Ceno, 20:19:43 03/06/03 Thu
i like that -- chromnine, 06:09:01 03/07/03 Fri
i liked it a little. It needs to rhyme more. (NT) -- Digits, 11:46:38 03/07/03 Fri
NEW AUDIO!! HAVE GOTTEN SUM GOOD FEEBACK SO FAR -- N'finite, 00:21:54 03/07/03 Fri
yo, this was pretty ill, i liked it, was feelin the beat..cept for that churus or whatever, but lyrics were smoothe and on beat, and yea, liked this one, all around DOPE (NT) -- NoFlow, 01:34:10 03/07/03 Fri
Not bad .... -- chromenine, 06:13:01 03/07/03 Fri
yeah nice kinda morbid but you coo wit it (NT) -- treyz1, 08:06:05 03/07/03 Fri
New Audio...LYRIKIL & OV@KIL..Link inside.....Peep and Critique....One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil and Ov@KiLof G3n@$yD3, 19:06:40 03/06/03 Thu
It was aight but i can't really tell what y'all was sayin........from wut i could hear both rode tha beat well tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 20:25:59 03/06/03 Thu
I'm feelin the beat. This sounded nice delivery wise, I don't know if ya'll using a shitty mic or what but the sound quality isn't great. It's kinda hard to hear what ya'll sayin. Other than that this was nice. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:51:40 03/06/03 Thu
ok ,but -- chromenine, 06:16:41 03/07/03 Fri
AN ALL-NEW POST.....ANOTHER DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET...."One Man's Spirit" Part 6....Warning: h £ k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Imagery, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h £ k §-A-g Ø ñ/|_ A \/ ¡ § h...aka tH£ ƒ l e § h øƒ |Ð e § § ¡ £| J©, 17:05:32 03/06/03 Thu
this was nice Hex...the same high-grade piece we've come to expect from ya....just ya word usage, and structure and rhymin and the flow of your work is DEFINITELY always enough to make up for the fact that half ya shit goes over my head....which is cool in this piece..cuz we actually get the "clift notes" at the end haha......as always, enjoyable read Hex...peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:29:09 03/06/03 Thu
tight -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:38:09 03/06/03 Thu
NIce ... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:14:50 03/06/03 Thu
i liked this one really nice, even tho some of the vocabulary went straight in one ear and out the other "Vanity's Shit slips off the lips of Humanity's Wit..leaving me with the moldy-leftovers of simple thoughts" that line caught my eye, i liked this very much, nice post..but i got a question..with all these metephores and Very Intesnse Vocabulary, you ever get people involved around you that doesnt understand you?...cuz i do... (NT) -- Noflow... ill look into that Noah23, 21:53:53 03/06/03 Thu

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