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Last shit ima do befor i go. gunna try to get a deal. ha! if i don't i'll come back here check it out -- Serial, 19:44:18 02/24/03 Mon
- You need alot of work......One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil, 19:51:00 02/24/03 Mon
- THE START WAS OFF.. KINDA WORDED BORING. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:52:21 02/24/03 Mon
- U SUCK -- DLASTER, 20:26:03 02/24/03 Mon
- my niggaz right.......you succ fat donkey kong dicc (NT) -- droop, 21:28:08 02/24/03 Mon
- U SUCK -- In$aiN, 14:43:56 02/25/03 Tue
YOOOOOO... INTROVERT... peep the lyrics for that joint... and send me your verse... this beat is dope as frrrrruck. -- INTOX... anyone who wants to peep this, dont get frustrated if you cant stay with it in the beginning cause by the end your head will spin, 20:52:45 02/21/03 Fri
- Holy shit...when is this audio coming in? (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:34:03 02/21/03 Fri
- DAMN this was long as hell...some nice shit in here ...I'm interested in seeing how you gonna flow this...stay up ...one hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:37:59 02/22/03 Sat
- Ya right, I wasnt really feeling the 2nd and 3rd bars but the rest was pretty ill the end was nice.PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:34:56 02/22/03 Sat
- just stop replying to this... all of your replies suck. nobody points out any parts that they liked or disliked or goes any deeper than "yeah this was nice. peace" for the most part... probably because you fucks don't even read anyone else's posts... you just need to give three replies so your wack bang bang shoot em up shit won't get deleted... peace to INTRO, SUNSET, Fly, Swordz, Hex, and whoever else ACTUALLY contributes to the creative process....i fart in everyone else's general direction! (NT) -- INTOX, 18:12:23 02/22/03 Sat
- I hear what your saying bout people not cotributing to the process, but, you've got it man. The words are there, the message flows, I think your next step is to spit it on audio. I can't say that this or that part needs work. This is your thing. It's really good, take it to the next step, it's ready. "Yea, this was nice, peace." (NT) -- Blueprint, 01:03:20 02/23/03 Sun
jus' a lil' flow -- Digits, 14:26:16 02/28/03 Fri
jus' a lil' flow -- Digits, 14:24:31 02/28/03 Fri
SOME REAL SHIT (took 1 hour to write Quite tight) -- DLASTER AKA THE FUGITIVE from New Zealand, 21:52:41 02/24/03 Mon
- cool -- white Knight, 22:52:19 02/24/03 Mon
- tight bars, keep elevatin, paaaaaaazzzzzeee (NT) -- profaci_aka_kazz_tha_untouchable, 23:27:37 02/24/03 Mon
- This was kinda nice.. You're honest to yourself, i really like that.. Stay on that path, and just work up your skills.. Im also glad to see you're willing to put some time and effort into it.. No one gets better without that... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 02:59:02 02/25/03 Tue
- nice -- black 4 poun, 10:37:55 02/25/03 Tue
- nice -- black 4 poun, 10:40:24 02/25/03 Tue
- swords pretty much summed it up, not much i can say....keep writin though (NT) -- Vision, 10:59:02 02/25/03 Tue
- This is alright, good to see you spent your time on your work. stay up! (NT) -- Spector, 12:33:45 02/25/03 Tue
- this was just my kind of drop... no flaws in my perspective... nice piece (NT) -- the dark spitter, 12:49:38 02/25/03 Tue
Main Loop Presents: Attack of the 50 ft. Beats - pt. 2 "Astronaut Hell"
-- ===||Swords--->, 02:55:02 02/25/03 Tue
Is this beat up for grabs????? Cause I'm working on another audio today should be finished by this after noon if I get a beat soon (NT) -- Lyrikil, 08:59:09 02/25/03 Tue
how can u almost be done with an audio if u looking for a beat?? lmaoo..gonna do a warchild and record ur voice and throw the beat over it? (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Wonder How You Would Pronounce WheelChair backwards..., 09:26:42 02/25/03 Tue
naH MAN...i DIDN'T SAY i WAS ALMOST DONE.....I said I'm working on a new one..and if I find the right beat ..it'll be done by this after noon... (NT) -- Lyrikil, 09:45:03 02/25/03 Tue
beat was pretty nice..kinda like smooth and mellow..some shyt to chilly chill 2 lol..not something i would use...but nonetheless..its pretty nice..no offense lyrikil..but this doesnt sound like something u should use..doesnt match up wit ur voice and style..watch u say something stupid for me being HONEST..cuz remember..u dont beef with anyone who gives u criticism right?..now dat i think of it..this is like some beat from like the original shaft soundtrack lolol.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Is There Any WheelChairs On Ebay??, 09:31:02 02/25/03 Tue
Actually...All I was gonna say is thanks for the tip and I'll take it into consideration...cause you might be right...and why is it you feel you have to be an ass all the time??? (NT) -- Lyrikil, 09:48:55 02/25/03 Tue
i just say wat i feel..not TRYIN to be an ass...i say wats on my mind..dont like holding things in i guess..i guess its up to the person on how to take it... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Why do Wheelchair People Wear SHoes?, 10:10:01 02/25/03 Tue
peep -- Lyrikil...sorry for cluttering up you post Swords, 10:30:24 02/25/03 Tue
yea this kinda tight...dont think i would use either, but it sound like something similar shit pharcyde's been on (NT) -- Vision, 10:49:41 02/25/03 Tue
Sorry I can't hear it, computer must be fucked up (NT) -- Spector, 12:28:01 02/25/03 Tue
New Audio.....Link inside.....Peep and Critique....One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil, 19:48:27 02/24/03 Mon
SORRY CAN'T PEEP AUDIO'S MY EARS IS PLUGGED DO TO A DOWNER! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:54:07 02/24/03 Mon
didnt work kid.....and probably wont even BE in the city till friday because of classes...and that just visiting this female on pulaski....Oooo "K town" (NT) -- Vis......FIX THAT LINK....whats ya email again?, 11:15:25 02/25/03 Tue
The link works...I just went to it....hahha K-town...if you see twista fat ass ask him what happened to psycodrama....lol...it's lyrikil@hotmail.com (NT) -- Lyrikil, 11:18:30 02/25/03 Tue
tried to open it in windows media.....cause thats all there is on this comp and it said invalid file.....iono......what DID happen to psychodrama...they was tight (NT) -- Vision, 11:31:13 02/25/03 Tue
I have no idea ...last I heard was when young buck and Syde.went to suave house Twista got mad and dissed them...I'm bout to put it on the sound click link above...give me bout five minutes...wassup with a collab since I can do audios now(for a limited time only..lol). (NT) -- Lyrikil, 11:38:06 02/25/03 Tue
ITS......................whateva (NT) -- Vis, 11:39:35 02/25/03 Tue
it's up there.... (NT) -- Lyrikil, 11:46:57 02/25/03 Tue
A OLDEN VENT.. SPACE TRIPS SENT FROM OPTICAL TENTS, PATHOLOGIST FLEE THE MOMENT AND LEAVE THE GIST OF DOMINANCE IN MEANS OF TEXT, FLEX THIS PRINT AND TIP THE WAITERS AND DODGE THE DEBATORS, CROSS THE TABLES AND LEAVE SCRATCHES ON THE LOOSE FADER! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:50:31 02/24/03 Mon
your shaolin is very strong but channel your massacre on someone or something! thats how i think you could do tha damn thang--ghost (NT) -- droop a.k.a mossburg a.k.a the profit (leavin tri-athletes exhausted), 21:26:07 02/24/03 Mon
wasn't feelin it..flow wuz nice but wasn't feelin it (NT) -- profaci_aka_kazz_tha_untouchable, 23:34:41 02/24/03 Mon
HAHA.. This was dope.. Very nice... flow was wierd in the beginning but i caught it later.. Some good battle shit.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:04:42 02/25/03 Tue
i agree wit swords.couldnt catch a flow in the beginning but den i picked it up..some dope lines...a few of dem had me rollin 2 haha...nice shyt as usual.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..How Come No Shaolin Movies Had Wheel Chair Fighters??, 09:39:27 02/25/03 Tue
yo good shit for real...this one of the very few times i caught the flow all the way through except onnnnnnn..um....one or two lines...the mushrooms line had me like, damn, its like that? liked the archetype line and how it ran into the next...there are a couple lines in here you could have reworded, like that second line sound to me like it coulda been worded better than what it was....but i still got the idea (NT) -- Vision, 11:24:33 02/25/03 Tue
droopyloc poke ya hoes throat wit magnum coats!!! -- aka,mossburg, 21:21:01 02/24/03 Mon
flow was real nice.. dope drop man! (NT) -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 21:47:41 02/24/03 Mon
nice try -- White Knight, 22:02:32 02/24/03 Mon
Loved it...U got flow playa...keep tha shit up... (NT) -- profaci_aka_kazz_tha_untouchable, 23:31:09 02/24/03 Mon
Hmm i dunno u got potential i guess.. I still aint feeing the drugs n thugs thing on the net... (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 03:00:50 02/25/03 Tue
keep it up -- black 4 poun, 10:44:35 02/25/03 Tue
3 min freestyle (peep) -- 4 poun, 11:35:41 02/24/03 Mon
yo...u are so amazingly wack..kid why bother posting this..and twice for that matter..a 3 min freestyle on gun clapping bullshiiiiiet lmao..yo ur wack kid...go run off a cliff and scream "i wanna be a toys r us kid" on the way down..hahah fukkin beecho.. (NT) -- ull never fukkin guess..and u dont wanna fukkin know...buhahaha, 13:11:03 02/24/03 Mon
hahahahahahahahahahh..i know who u r ..hahahaha..holy shyt...cant believe ur back bwhahahaah (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.i..Just Bough Christopher Reeves WheelChair on Ebay, 13:15:10 02/24/03 Mon
i stopped reading when you spelled KNEE..."nee"..:shakes head::...another person who needs a new hobby..go play basketball at ur local boyz and girls club or something.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Waitin For Christopher Reeves To Throw First Pitch At A Baseball Game.., 15:24:40 02/24/03 Mon
i stopped reading after he spelled "pound" wrong in his name which is after a form of european currency. what a true fukkin ass clown..yo get a triple double for me at that club to dawg.. (NT) -- 3 yin..or whatever chinese money is called, 15:31:35 02/24/03 Mon
This is ridiculous....you need to stop watching so much TV!!!....No matter what advice someone gives you...keep doing you....I could tell you to try out different sets of rhyme schemes, rhyme patterns, word usage, wordplay....WORD PLACEMENT....all sorts of different directions to take when it comes to lyricism...BUT DO YOU....THAT'S ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�.....the nerve of you kids...., 16:11:16 02/24/03 Mon
hmm you either need to practice alot or you need to wait until real inspiriation hits you (did you force this or did it just come to you) (NT) -- nemesis, 16:32:29 02/24/03 Mon
LMAO @ you two.. Fuckin hilarious.. Who is he anyway? Kilwa? (NT) -- ===||Swords---->, 17:44:10 02/24/03 Mon
kilwa?!?!?!??!!??....hmmmm....maybe maybe not...i doubt hes prolly surfing or recording reruns for his new show doogie howser 3d, which should hit IMAX theatres real soon, well i dun wanna be wasting thread so ima shit on this crak head again, yo ur wack...haha (NT) -- Ted Debiasee (the money man, however the fuk u spell his name) cmon 4 lb lets form a crew me and you, whadda ya say beecho? we can jack "AM" be like "yo we ABZENT MONEY", 07:52:44 02/25/03 Tue
(((AUDIO))) Brand New! "VALKYRIE" Did this today.. I think its my best yet... -- ===||Swords--->, 17:39:01 02/24/03 Mon
i dont know if its ur mic or my speakers..but u sound weird lol..its like i cant understand most of the things u say unless i put headphones on or like put my ear next to the speakers and shyt lol..i cant critique this right now..i'll hit u up later on aim and let ya know wat i thought of it..gonna have to peep this later cuz i couldnt understand most of it .. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...can Wheelchair Kids Own bikes??, 18:34:16 02/24/03 Mon
It might be you.. Cuz i played this through my bro's $300 speakers and it sounded like i mixed the vocals too loud.. I thought my pronunciation was pretty good on this one though.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 23:04:13 02/24/03 Mon
my ears are cut off as of late sorry! (NT) -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 19:33:18 02/24/03 Mon
Damn ...can I get one of these beats...lol..flow kinda reminds me of Kwali Talib mixed with ...Damn I cant even think of the cats name ...but this was ILL....This is bout the best Audio I've seen in the lounge in a while...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil, 20:06:36 02/24/03 Mon
AN ALL-NEW POST........SEE IF YOU CAN FIND THE RHYME SCHEME...."One Man's Spirit" Part 4....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Hebraisms May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 17:46:09 02/24/03 Mon
once again..sounds cool..just have fukin clue wat i read..how about rhyming from like the year 2003 rather den like 1637 A.D. and shyt lol..very few times have i understood ur post....its like gibberish but with ur wordplay it seems dope to read..just cant get no understanding of it..it makes me wonder wat type of beats u would use for this if u made this into audio..have some like zelda beats or something lol...keep doin u though yo.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Was there wheelchairs back in 1637 A.D.??, 18:39:15 02/24/03 Mon
u have like aim or yahoo messanger or something so u could explain ur shyt to me sometimes? lol.so i dont feel so lost..and i did read ur shyt even though the times of my reply to u and swords are close..i actually read urs first and then peeped swords..anywayz..let me know if u have aim or yahoo messenger..peace.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..#1 Fan of Wheel Chair Rock Climbing.., 18:44:44 02/24/03 Mon
I AM separated from the generated hatred...............damn, peep! -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 19:31:28 02/24/03 Mon
miss-quote.. my bad peep! -- Warpath, 19:40:15 02/24/03 Mon
I agree with Dlusional...your good with the word play but...it's like alot of the words you use aren't supposed to be used like that...and some of those words I'm not even sure the exist but I could be wrong but basically ..I dunno...I just don't be feeling it...keep doing you if it works for you..One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil, 20:01:00 02/24/03 Mon
Battle of the Boards -- F.I.A.B - Damien, 14:16:14 02/24/03 Mon
Battle of the Boards -- F.I.A.B - Damien, 14:24:33 02/24/03 Mon
Revamped even?.......My vote goes to "MyStA-ReE"....for that one line about syphillis....... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:49:35 02/24/03 Mon
ok good i dunno who i think won though but still good (NT) -- nemesis, 16:25:25 02/24/03 Mon
ok good i dunno who i think won though but still good (NT) -- nemesis, 16:26:42 02/24/03 Mon
Vote = Mysta - Rae (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:41:59 02/24/03 Mon
Mysta-Rae! (NT) -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 19:36:02 02/24/03 Mon
i am kacc -- droop, 00:24:20 02/24/03 Mon
This was nice flow (NT) -- Young Aviator, 00:31:59 02/24/03 Mon
DAS TIGHT...BUT ILL STILL DROP BOMBS ON YA -- R.U.C, 04:47:03 02/24/03 Mon
this was honestly like some middle school rap shit..very weak shit..fuk was dat bout u droppin so many tracks people nickname u roller coaster? lmaooooo..wow dat was sad..change ur rap name..change ur style..change ur life..do something else wit it..cuz right now..ur a failure ... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded.O.M.N.i...Replyin To This Sittin On A Wheel Chair..., 15:37:20 02/24/03 Mon
HAHA.. You are Kacc...caca...just cheesy.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:50:04 02/24/03 Mon
3 min freestyle (peep) -- 4 poun, 11:35:40 02/24/03 Mon
why'd u post it twice? still whack dawg (NT) -- nemesis, 16:37:19 02/24/03 Mon
Nothin Nice Just Stupid Flow.... -- Young Aviator, 00:28:00 02/24/03 Mon
AAAAAAAA...YEA WHAT EVA B...U GOT FLOW -- R.U.C, 04:43:22 02/24/03 Mon
HOW THE FUCK YOU GOAN STEAL EMINEMS RHYMES, THAT IS THE WEAKEST SHIT YOU CAN DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- dip, 11:38:41 02/24/03 Mon
wow..this fool so wack..he couldnt put up his own wack rhymes..so he put someone else's...u could tell he peeps ohhla.com every once in a while...go stick ur foot in a toilet u ass inspector... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Leader of Wheel Chair Crime Prevention Unit.., 15:30:38 02/24/03 Mon
I hope Em burnt "his" rhymes when he wrote this.....HAHAHA.....Hey, it's not THAT hard to bring something new to your mind and showcasing the "mental work" to us....try it....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:22:18 02/24/03 Mon
My Question for God. "Will I ever be able to afford a decent car?" No Blueprint, I'm sorry...... -- Blueprint, 18:19:03 02/23/03 Sun
Yo this shit was tight. nice beat an everything. good rhymes didn't seem simple and shit man... it was just good keep it up -- Serial, 18:58:04 02/23/03 Sun
fuk u talkin bout "nice beat" ..there was no beat..u OBVIOUSLY didnt peep dis..go back to watching ur favorite show dat u rhyme over the theme song.."home and gardens" hahaha (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I....Wheelchair Families Love Casino's cuz they always get to "roll", 15:55:27 02/24/03 Mon
yo this was iight...pretty decend in most parts....yo stay up (NT) -- NOFLOW...to battle is to battle, but to Rap is to SING..., 19:30:51 02/23/03 Sun
lmfaoooooooo@ur title..u just admitted ur broke lololol..out of all the questions to ask god..u ask him if u could finally afford a decent car..pawn ur pc or somethin for a down payment on a better car ..hahaha..sorry yo..just the wrong thing to put ... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Pawned My Bike To Get A New Wheel Chair.., 15:49:22 02/24/03 Mon
ILL-LITERATE NIGAS.. Straight imaginary, constant flow, True depth of Nonsense Fiction, to the pits of insanity tittled "ART OF MAGICAL WAR" feedback aint finished -- Noflow The un-finished, 19:48:08 02/23/03 Sun
okay????? -- droop, 21:33:08 02/23/03 Sun
yo this was weird..? it was good but the subject got me confused... keep rollin -- Serial, 21:40:06 02/23/03 Sun
Nice flow i like it (NT) -- Young Aviator, 00:40:13 02/24/03 Mon
TIGHT SONG B....FLOW IS DEF -- R.U.C, 04:49:40 02/24/03 Mon
i bet $20 dat u watched lord of the rings b4 writin this lol...this shyt was crazy...couldn't put it all together but it was definitely dope...sick multi's everywhere...i like how u use ur words...nice imagery in this...dunno y u put a chorus in it..?..fuk puttin it in verses...just make it one long ass verse...keep it up yo...1ne (NT) -- DiAtRiBe.., 05:07:55 02/24/03 Mon
CHEcK MY NEW AUDIO OUT. a small file. takes less than 5 mins to dl -- N'finite, 16:38:32 02/22/03 Sat
noT BAD SON, FLOW WAS FRESH AND CONTENET WAS NICE FROM WHAT PARTS i COULD HEAR, SOUND WAS IFF AT POINTS BE MORE COHERRANT WHEN U SPEAK OR MAYBE IT WAS THE PLAYBACK DISTORTED THIS WAS STRAIGHT KEEP WORKING IT SON peace (NT) -- PAt D.A.W.G, 19:38:40 02/22/03 Sat
First off, I don't think they were "hating" on the beat...they were simply telling you their opinion(I would say it's the truth)...IMO, I think you could put a little more enthusiasm into your delivery...hey, maybe it's just me...but it sounds like you're falling asleep in certain parts of the audio..if that's your steez, then do you...I just couldn't really get into it...keep on working at it...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 23:03:21 02/22/03 Sat
link doesn't work... get a Soundclick account or somethin... and don't bitch about me not liking your beats... i'm not gonna give you props for making your own if they sound shit... not many artists make their own beats these days anyway... learn to accept critique and you'll elevate faster... (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 07:41:07 02/23/03 Sun
couldn't get this to come up. oh well. i'll try later and by the way why the fuck you gonna post some shit and ask people what they think then get upset when they critique it. keep your shit to yourself if you feel that subconcious. people are not gonna a (NT) -- starks, 11:29:06 02/23/03 Sun
fixed for peeps it dont work for -- N'finite, 21:27:06 02/23/03 Sun
Dem Feelings Left for Awhile and now I'm Back This shyt is real to me! -- Young Aviator, 17:41:55 02/23/03 Sun
This shows promise, would of liked it to be longer, "self" doesn't rhyme with "left". Good post, flow was on, and you stayed on track. Peace. (NT) -- Blueprint, 18:04:10 02/23/03 Sun
yea all around decent...but ya attitude and scheme was felt..but lyrics were iigh..keep postin one (NT) -- Noflow...BACK RECLAIM HIS THROWN.., 19:33:31 02/23/03 Sun
that shit is on point -- droop, 21:20:06 02/23/03 Sun
okay...im reloaded!!!!! -- droopy loco, 16:14:45 02/23/03 Sun
i don't know man has anybody ever told you your gangster styles played out. try being more creative.Concepts are key to extend the creative process and oh yeah reply to three or be deleted. Peace stay up (NT) -- starks, 16:32:27 02/23/03 Sun
I liked the flow, that line with "dump slugs" was cool. Think starks is right though- that mad at the world, down to kill anyone - gangster shit is wearing thin at this point. I don't think your going to say anything that hasn't been said before. If that's what your all about though, Good luck. (NT) -- Blueprint, 17:40:35 02/23/03 Sun
This shyt was ill -- Young Aviator, 17:46:41 02/23/03 Sun
it was IIGHT..BUT NIGAS IM BACK! (NT) -- NoFLOW infested with words to literally SPIT LYRICS, 19:35:55 02/23/03 Sun
The Nibiru Theory........( the answers lie within).........PEEP The creation of mankind and it's extinction in the same frame of mind!. -- Starks (the mouth of madness), 16:13:26 02/23/03 Sun
In the beginning - are you talking about Atlantis or somekind of Alien race that spawned humanity. They have said the next big natural disaster will come from a landslide in Europe that will send a 200 meter Tsunami towards the coast of North America. Anyways, there were some cool names in this piece, you should write something about just a couple of those people- to explain who they are. That'd be interesting. (NT) -- Blueprint, 17:46:42 02/23/03 Sun
Its was cool some of the parts in this post was tight for real!!! (NT) -- Young Aviator, 17:50:23 02/23/03 Sun
Its was cool some of the parts in this post was tight for real!!! (NT) -- Young Aviator, 17:51:30 02/23/03 Sun
Quick Keystyle.. Wassup to all my fans?! lol -- ===||Swords--->, 15:55:12 02/21/03 Fri
This was nice.....I don't why you got all "bent out of shape" over my reply below....that was kind of dumb you know?....And NO, "multisyllabicism" isn't a "real" word....Thanks for your opinion....Anyways, this key was....Had a little bit of a broken-rhyme pattern going on....Keep up and stay up.....You loud-mouth paper bag.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:33:56 02/21/03 Fri
hahahaha... pop culture sent the flies.. nice man... ill drop (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:52:30 02/21/03 Fri
you got skillz..no doubt about that...But...I wasn't feeling ya style...But Im down in the Dirty..south Texas ya know (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:36:29 02/21/03 Fri
haha... what! this shit was doooope... mad quotables... peep inside mayne -- INTOX, 21:05:40 02/21/03 Fri
Nice post, content was nice some parts I fell off on but overall was dope stay up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.AW.G, 21:20:48 02/21/03 Fri
Dope shit...I rather hear this in audio because I barely like reading text, but this had stand out lines...Ima read it again...lol (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:43:33 02/21/03 Fri
I was gonna read this but I gotta go I'll check it out when I get back...One Hun'ed...oh yeah...the only fan you got has a broke cord and one blade...lol (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:54:02 02/22/03 Sat
Ha back again check it out -- Serial, 18:14:16 02/20/03 Thu
This was wack (NT) -- Maimus, 18:18:40 02/20/03 Thu
yea i agree....wack...try to think a little more..u didnt put much thought to this did u? (NT) -- styliztik,,,aka,,quote, 20:27:41 02/20/03 Thu
bACK 2 THE LAB MAN, THINK B4 U SPEAK .....PEACE (NT) -- PAT d.A.w.G., 21:24:59 02/20/03 Thu
Reply to three... (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 23:27:43 02/20/03 Thu
simple rhymes, rhymed the same words a lot (NT) -- dip, 11:38:29 02/21/03 Fri
you suck -- DLASTER, 17:12:45 02/23/03 Sun
What up lounge...Da AbZtRaKt AsSaSsiN presents: 'Now That I'm Gone'...just keyed this up, dunno if its been done before or not...all feedback is appreciated...enjoy! -- Versetyle Da AbZtRaKt AsSaSiN of Abzent Minded Inc., 17:00:39 02/15/03 Sat
Nice concept.....Whether you took your own life or not in the first line...I don't know, but the idea of being able to look back (and yes, you can when you leave this Earth) was well thought out....Sometimes, it's good to take a break from all the "multisyllabicism" and just let the subconscious speak for you...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:38:55 02/15/03 Sat
this was dope, kinda reminded me of sixth sense, how he didnt know he was dead, but still lived life, well, the life he thought he was still in...but you flipped it nicely, i enjoyed this..stay up James...peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 19:20:04 02/15/03 Sat
GRIME (NT) -- HYGH, 03:52:57 02/16/03 Sun
DAYM nice real nice (NT) -- GoNzo the 16 year old boy wonder, 11:03:57 02/16/03 Sun
Dat was Hot -- ACE, 12:39:10 02/23/03 Sun
Just peep ...that's all...Just open the DAMN post...Not that post ...this post...that's it just press the button -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:30:02 02/22/03 Sat
The 33rd line is supposed to say..."Will cause me to drop more bombs than Gradius, " (NT) -- That's all enjoy, 00:59:21 02/22/03 Sat
This was alright some content was okay but I wasn't feeling the whole thing PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 11:14:40 02/22/03 Sat
nice rhyme scheeme -- N'finite, 17:22:30 02/22/03 Sat
nice post all around. sort of wandered off on this lyrically. word usage was on point. i liked this shit. peace (NT) -- starks, 11:55:55 02/23/03 Sun
Haven't been coming up wit a tight post lately heres a lil somethingkeystyle ta keep my grey matter moving.PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:27:17 02/22/03 Sat
shits hot sons -- N'finite, 16:54:57 02/22/03 Sat
there were alot of ups and downs in this one D.A.W.G . but i'm feeling the majority of it for the most part. not your best post. keep it real son. i think your tryin to hard son. just open your mind and let it spill on the keyboard.peace Stay up! (NT) -- starks, 11:51:10 02/23/03 Sun
"BITCH YOU DID ME SO WRONG, AND I DONT WANT TO GO ON, LIVING WITHOUT YOU!" I swear to GOD the worlds against me!! DAMN IT!!! -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 21:39:05 02/14/03 Fri
REPLY -- C-WALT, 21:55:11 02/14/03 Fri
I dunno man.... I couldn't get into it....couldn't catch the rhyme easy so it sorta stopped me from readin further...kinda devide into the bars and all...cause the format is pretty intimidating....repost it or somethin and I'll try to finish it....peace (NT) -- Nakixem of Abzent Minded Ink of OMNI, 23:10:20 02/14/03 Fri
AYO MAN....get at me ASAP....hit me up at (wordy48214@yahoo.com).....lost your number when I got back from ATL....but I want you to come to one of the Binary shows Im doing.....hit me up man..Im worried about ya fam.....and by the looks of this post things aint goin too good for ya right now....it aint worth it man and I can only imagine how bad you gotta be feelin right now....hit me up..."but dont end up in some sh!t over some hips"...peace (NT) -- WORDSMITH aka FINALE, 16:21:15 02/17/03 Mon
i guess he could change the bar form but then it would lose impact, not gain it...this hard because all the emotion hits at once, rather than being parted out for gradual absorbance...i like the way it's organized, not only does it give that feeling of confusion and anger, chaotic, but it makes you read it more than once to catch the rhyme scheme so you catch more of the meaning in those extra readings...the topic's pretty crazy man...sorry to hear that shyt is such a jumble...can't say that i've been there...good luck (NT) -- Mental ILLness, 14:51:01 02/18/03 Tue
DAMN!!!...Things are going haywire between you and "the woman in your life"....I hope she didn't blame you for what happened close to a week and a half ago....Hey, keep those prayers up and just avoid contact with the heifer until things settle down....E-mail me if things get REALLY crazy.....You hear me???.....Keep up and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�.....�� h��-o-thetical/|_uminary, 15:59:23 02/19/03 Wed
I guess I caught the gist of this... I thought I did at first, anyway, then the middle kinda fucked with me... seemed like you started off talking about your girl, then you suddenly flipped it and started talking to the dude she with now or whatever the situation is... then back to her? I still dont know what happened that got you so amped tho... she fucked some other dude, I got that. But she killed your kid? Now I'm lost... (NT) -- INTOX... oh, the rhyme scheme and coherency was hot, too... i never seen you use that type of scheme in text before. pz, 18:19:53 02/22/03 Sat
*****AUDIO!! MY DEBUT! CHECK ME OUT******thanks -- N'finite, 03:19:29 02/22/03 Sat
beat is horrible.. did you make that on your casio dogg?? intro/hook is corny, not feeling it... your flow is decent, needs to be louder tho... overall i dunno, its a starting point... get some better beats of MP3.com and make more tracks... over time you'll improve....peace (NT) -- Versetyle, 13:32:25 02/22/03 Sat
Ehhh, beat needs work lyrics were all right but content needs work PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.AW.G, 16:36:56 02/22/03 Sat
**AUDIO** -- INTOX, 20:00:38 02/13/03 Thu
yeah...finally...this kid...lol...nice work...i like the flow...this is the first audio i heard from your stankin rastafari ass...lol @ your still mouthing the damn hook...nice beat too what is it...lol @ the adlibs and the falsetto voices...flow is dope full of multis...good to see some audios from you...i gotta jump back on this train....nice jobby job tox (NT) -- INTROVERT of ABZENT MINDED, 21:31:02 02/13/03 Thu
here are the lyrics for it if you want to read along with it -- INTOX... I go kinda fast sometimes, might be useful, 21:40:20 02/13/03 Thu
dunno what the fuck is up but my shit keeps buffering, "FROM WHAT I HEARD"...flow and multiples were mos def on point...the cage beat is dope, but i dont think it really fits with the content of ur verse, it calls for more of the content cage spit about or maybe im just used to hearing cage on it, overall from what i heard was nice...peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 22:00:54 02/13/03 Thu
YO I NEED A LO-FI LINK WITH THIS 56K YA HEARD ME...HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MI$TA MAC, 01:57:46 02/14/03 Fri
same thing thats happening to sunset is happening to me... but from what i heard it was good... but if you could get a better link I'd appreciate it (NT) -- GuTTy... why even try to make a cd?, 12:31:18 02/14/03 Fri
this is one of the best audios i've seen on the lounge....the beat, flow, enthusiasm, quality...yo everything was on point, sickness displayed here throughout...keep it up TOX...drop more of these audios....yo gutty..get at me on AIM about the collab, peace.. (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 14:46:14 02/14/03 Fri
This only played up to 21 secs....but what I heard was pretty hot........nice clear quality and flow was on point......Id like to hear it all (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:22:35 02/14/03 Fri
anybody wants me to send the actual file to them so they can hear it, send me an e-mail and i'll give you my aim name (NT) -- INTOX, 18:06:12 02/14/03 Fri
"3 minutes and 40 seconds?"....You should have turned this into a song...with a hook or something instead of just spittin' "50 bars" or how ever many you had in this audio....Besides that, you indeed have my favorite voice on the Lounge as far as audios go.....Keep this up and stay up.....That Cage-beat was alright.....I'll say again, keep this up and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:11:15 02/15/03 Sat
Nice, flow followed the beat well. I didn't like the voice u had for the hook, still a dope audio nice job wit the fresh lyrics too PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:30:12 02/21/03 Fri
lol... well i never claimed it was professionally produced... and I didnt have any kids hanging around my dorm room at the time to do the ad-libs for me... but thanks for the feeds... pz (NT) -- TOX, 04:39:14 02/22/03 Sat
A COLLECTIVE-CYPHER FROM YESTERDAY.......SHOWCASING THEIR EFFORT ARE.....The Dark Spitter....Darknodin.....JC The Eternal Student....reppin' for the UK...and ΜικΜαQ of Κa�a�l�zm.....featuring a guest appearance by none other than....tH� h � k �-A-c��t�....BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING..... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h....aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 16:22:20 02/21/03 Fri
got damn yall on some higher elevation type vibe on here..my boy B-Will aka blaza tried to tell me...but nice though..but if you recorded it I wouldn't bang it (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:39:33 02/21/03 Fri
i scrolled through and read the first few lines of each entry and if they didnt catch my attention, I skipped it and moved on to the next one... and MikMaq was the only one whose shit I read fully each time... sorry, everyone else... (NT) -- INTOX... his flow was just way easier to pick up on in text format... and darknodin... what the fuck? you've been here too long to suck so badly, 20:59:38 02/21/03 Fri
Read most of this yesterday...Mik snapped ..the rest of ya'll did ya thang..I guess.. really wasn't feeling alot of this but keep doing ya'll thang (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:52:05 02/22/03 Sat
cypher.... warning.... dangerous vocab,metaphors and word usage contained... wack emcees beware of the knowledge -- the dark spitter, 17:05:05 02/21/03 Fri
too too Short....I an't even trying to read this mae....But nice attempt (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:41:06 02/21/03 Fri
Some cats just don't get it.. -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:48:43 02/22/03 Sat
What up lounge keystyle ta stay up PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:17:31 02/21/03 Fri
this wasn't bad for a freestyle i guess... simplistic as all hell with the rhymes, but coherent which is always a good thing... my favorite line, flow-wise, was "we all say thug but forget our reasons ta fight/ I'am out ta eat emcees like I aint never had a meal in my life. (NT) -- INTOX, 21:34:40 02/21/03 Fri
I agree with Intox on this.....keep practicing..you can't help but get better..I hope (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:32:16 02/22/03 Sat
Dear Death.......................................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:28:05 02/21/03 Fri
I don't know what you're going through in Life....or are you just being stupid?.....Anyways, there was no "multisyllabicism" in this post like there was in the one above...But it still had proof of lyricism in it.....You should have just connected the two together....anyways, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....You can stop writing letters to your mom now....., 15:36:52 02/21/03 Fri
Man, christ Hex, WTF is it with you and "multisyllabicism" (if thats even a word)? get off everyone's back with that.. you dont hafta use them to flow.. Every fuckin reply is like "use more multis" blah blah.. shut up... Anyways i read this before too, basically felt the same way as the first one.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 16:00:43 02/21/03 Fri
Read this before it was alright,PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:27:21 02/21/03 Fri
Dear Death prt.2.....................................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:30:54 02/21/03 Fri
This was okay....I'm not really into "overlooking" the grip of �eatH all too much.....This was nice though....A little bit of hints of "multisyllabicism"....Keep this up and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:31:29 02/21/03 Fri
I read this one before.. Not bad, though ive seen you drop way better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:56:47 02/21/03 Fri
real spine tingly kind of shit.. ok drop (NT) -- spitter, 16:54:19 02/21/03 Fri
Read this before, switch it up still nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:24:19 02/21/03 Fri
first ish i've ever posted, not shure if i wrote the flow right -- dip, 11:21:53 02/21/03 Fri
Not feeling this yo (NT) -- Maximus, 14:24:12 02/21/03 Fri
Try stretching your bars' length...instead of having "lines" with just four of five words in them...<<<<..That shit's annoying!!!....Other than that, try concentrating on bringing originality to the table...Try trisyllabic....nah, you're not ready for that yet....Try "creating" different rhyme schemes, different rhyme patterns, add wordplay, word usage, word PLACEMENT....etc....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:45:20 02/21/03 Fri
this was real weak... sorry (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:56:05 02/21/03 Fri
Brink of Insanity............................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:21:30 02/21/03 Fri
Now this is something that I enjoyed....rather than reading some dumb shit about "writing letters to the spirit of �eatH".....This is a much better showcase of lyricism than the two above....Now...Keep THIS up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:41:40 02/21/03 Fri
This was the best of the three BUT... Did you know you owe more than 3 replies cuz you posted three times? 6 more to go kid... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 16:02:58 02/21/03 Fri
All right been busy everybody just let me tell you how I feel on this thing we call hip hop and efforts we need just feel me on this loungePEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:54:46 02/20/03 Thu
this was ok but i couldnt catch the flow that good, tell your mom's i said happy birthday, oNe (NT) -- maximus, 19:26:30 02/20/03 Thu
To be honest I start reading and after bout half way down I gave up...keep building (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 23:25:08 02/20/03 Thu
that was aight, lost flow in some spots. like the topic though (NT) -- dip, 11:31:42 02/21/03 Fri
No offense, but it's getting kind of "played out" how people rhyme about how "ill" they are......That's just how I feel on that....This was okay though, nothing that really makes a person attentive though...Keep building up those thought-blocks....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:52:00 02/21/03 Fri
Warmaster........... it's been a long time since i posted... so i'm like... uh well rusty? something like that i guess... but anyways... this is a small keystyle... -- Darknodin, 14:54:08 02/20/03 Thu
This was str8......your honesty in this was good and it came across in yer emotions...flow was a bit choppy like a key or summit but its coo....keep ya head up......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 17:38:11 02/20/03 Thu
Wasn't really feeling this...keep building (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 23:30:00 02/20/03 Thu
tight rhymes, but the first part didn't go with the second (NT) -- dip, 11:35:53 02/21/03 Fri
lil something i keyed up this morning for them fake cats from that wack site to peep ''Distruction of the Freestyle Fortress'' -- starks (the mouth of madness), 11:25:04 02/18/03 Tue
LMFAO!!! Nigga please... -- ~*{ FuLLCLiP}*~ C-LO **~{ Career-Ender }~**, 13:02:59 02/18/03 Tue
good but kinda boring (NT) -- Tactics, 13:59:46 02/18/03 Tue
how many times can you rhyme "line" with "line"? i dunno... i wasn't feelin this as a battle verse... "lyrical litter"... riiiiiight. (NT) -- INTOX, 18:43:29 02/18/03 Tue
For a quick key, this was nice. seen u get iller but for a quickie it was dope fuck these other wack haters, I peeped that guys post and boy was it stupidPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:12:58 02/18/03 Tue
I agree with vis... why did you use the word "line" many times in a row.. cmon man stop that and drop some real hiphop aiight? (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:26:56 02/19/03 Wed
please don't confuse me with R. Kelly's protege ever again (NT) -- INTOX, 10:32:49 02/21/03 Fri
JOIN IN........CYPHER.....Warning: Intrinsic Metaphors and Hebraims May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 12:47:43 02/20/03 Thu
reply -- the dark spitter, 13:08:42 02/20/03 Thu
My turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 13:17:49 02/20/03 Thu
Again....my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 13:43:43 02/20/03 Thu
AIIGHT heres summit....I been playing chess by tha way !!!!! -- JC the Eternal Student (UK), 14:21:29 02/20/03 Thu
reply... -- Darknodin, 15:20:44 02/20/03 Thu
My Move -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:29:01 02/20/03 Thu
AIIGHT CHESS IT IS THEN -- JC the Eternal Student (UK), 17:17:39 02/20/03 Thu
My Move Again "Patzer" ? -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 04:17:11 02/21/03 Fri
...again....it's my turn..... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�, 14:10:08 02/20/03 Thu
....again....it's my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:36:58 02/20/03 Thu
....again...it's my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:19:03 02/20/03 Thu
....again..it's my turn..... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:53:46 02/20/03 Thu
CHECK THIS SHYT OUT STARKS U BOUT TO GET FUCKED UP -- Desi Souljah, 09:38:37 02/20/03 Thu
I can tell that I need to start a cypher or something........Look, this was way under par for lyricism....I'm not knockin' your rhyme, just your rhyme style......Elevate, concentrate on originality, word usage, wordplay, different rhyme schemes and rhyme patterns.....then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up.. (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:16:24 02/20/03 Thu
who's tha target? personally i didn't like it... there were some parts that didn't make sense... (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 15:02:10 02/20/03 Thu
ha ha nice try. dude you suck give it up.thanks for the laugh. (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 17:04:30 02/20/03 Thu
fuckin die sandscum.............................. (NT) -- GOD the almighty father (the original hater of you stinky fuckers), 17:09:59 02/20/03 Thu
maN Iaint racist but you are more of a camel jockey than a lyricist, starks would harm u son elevate then try againPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 17:23:03 02/20/03 Thu
Yo check this shit out. newcomer here. try it -- Serial, 10:18:28 02/19/03 Wed
Most of the time I'm not feeling this paragraph form....but your verbalistics made this an exception....Content-wise, I wasn't feelin'...but it was keystyle.....Work on original-content, word usage, and wordplay....and probably a different aspect on being introspective....Whatever you do....DO YOU....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 14:07:34 02/19/03 Wed
wow... this is confusin... you should change your format... this is not my style either... but i agree with what the guy above said... elevate... but always be yourself... that brings originality (NT) -- Darknodin, 17:58:31 02/19/03 Wed
ehhh...content to me...........was horrible, just iono, not...uhh...good to me and yea change that format (NT) -- Vis, 09:19:30 02/20/03 Thu
keep elevatin, change ure style a bit good content (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 09:41:25 02/20/03 Thu
*revise of "President Bush" the flow is better has some new parts -- GoNzO the 16 year old boy wonder, 00:46:43 02/19/03 Wed
not feeling this sorry bro. Keep postin and elevation is inevitable. peace. By the way i say bomb the fuck out of them motherfuckin sandpeople. all of them! (NT) -- starks, 07:45:24 02/19/03 Wed
It seems that you have a sort of "anger arrow" pointed at the topic of a President who indeed needs to be impeached.....Try to focus on YOUR reason for "not liking Bush".....To me, it seems that you watch just a little bit too much TV....You do know that the "news" is bias right?....Other than that, keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:47:06 02/19/03 Wed
I wasn't feelin this shit to much -- Serial, 18:53:31 02/19/03 Wed
Its a good message but u need to work on the flow, try to get another rhymin scheme, keep elevatin, and by the way FUCK U STARKS IF U GOT HATE TOWARDS THEM "SAND PEOPLE" COME BATTLE ME MOTHA FUCKA (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 09:29:24 02/20/03 Thu
been a while what up yall, club cancelled freestyle competition cus people wouldn't get off the stage, the whole party sucked except for one cat rhyming the rest was bull like these new cats on the lounge . Quick keystyle ta elevate'em with.PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G.==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:47:20 02/18/03 Tue
You know i respect you Pat D.A.W.G. I respected your rhymes sence i was T- ayalis and still do.But wasent feelin this one. Nothing at all caught my eye. Just seemed like a bunch of words put together. I know you got dope shit so keep your head up (NT) -- Tactics, 19:37:53 02/18/03 Tue
Yo i thought the shit was pretty good . it had it's parts where you lost me but, overall shit was nice. peace (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 21:21:56 02/18/03 Tue
Good shit though majority of it (NT) -- GoNzO the 16 year old boy wonder, 00:50:26 02/19/03 Wed
D.A.W.G...to be honest I wasn't feeling this...probably in audio but not text...but yeah speaking of clubs...P.E.A.C.E..to all those who lost some one in the E2 tragedy the other night...Just show and proves the actions of one effects everyone ...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 00:51:22 02/19/03 Wed
this was tight man...i wouldnt have thought so by seein that name..it really dont fit you...you dope anyway..one (NT) -- PERSONAL TRADGEDY OF GROUP THERAPY, 17:03:43 02/19/03 Wed
It was good but to be truly honest i couldn't find a beat. -- Serial, 00:54:31 02/20/03 Thu
BITCHES RESIDE IN DIS ROOM COME TO THE FORTRESS AND RAP WIT SUM REAL RAPPAS (NT) -- J QUICK of FREESTYLE FORTRESS, 00:10:54 02/18/03 Tue
Whatever you post is going to be deleted anyway...why don't you use this time instead of posting and start off by first, looking for a better name... (NT) -- YOUR DAD..., 01:12:20 02/18/03 Tue
i went to the "fortress"...yaul niggas suck...YOU YOURSELF...even bit 50 Cent's whole hook to back down and put YOUR name in it...and even used the opening line...ya niggas is garbage (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics, 12:08:57 02/18/03 Tue
LOL @ you going to the Fortress.. My respect for you has dropped.. (NT) -- ===||swords--->, 01:25:04 02/19/03 Wed
Some shit i made called (Shutin yall up) -- Tactics, 13:57:01 02/18/03 Tue
Peep homiie -- ~*{ FuLLCLiP}*~ C-LO **~{ Career-Ender }~**,, 14:08:18 02/18/03 Tue
This was allright, reminDed me too much of I "dont give a fuck" with the chorous and some of the flow. some content was fresh but keep spittingPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:00:28 02/18/03 Tue
ok wordplay... the rest... I dont know... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:23:13 02/19/03 Wed
Freestyle -- Georgia Boy, 11:58:24 02/14/03 Fri
this shit is really weak... plus your rhyme style sucks (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:21:06 02/14/03 Fri
biter -- dlar new zealand, 14:47:00 02/14/03 Fri
Spend time in the lab man cus this aint nothing new, focus (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:16:07 02/14/03 Fri
U can't be serious -- Venum, 15:05:08 02/18/03 Tue
Questions and answers...quick key...kinda rusty...(in the spirit of the NEW lounge of lyricism)YO CHECK THIS SHYT OUT HOT GANGSTA GARBAGE DROPPIN SLUGS ON YA GARDEN HOLMES...FUKK Y'ALL IS Y'ALL WHITE OR BLACK HOLLA HOT SHYT MUTHAFUKK -- Big Mental ILLness Dogg, 17:07:26 02/17/03 Mon
this was nice, made me think, had some creative lines in it...keep dropping, stay up..peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 18:03:35 02/17/03 Mon
that was dope. nice wordplay. the beginning was definitely the better but overall a sick post .stay up (NT) -- starks, 11:30:39 02/18/03 Tue
nice topic. But it seemed like most of the words didnt ryhme. I didnt get to much sleep last night so its probly just me reading it wrong.GOOD POST (NT) -- Tactics, 14:22:35 02/18/03 Tue
key...just keying some thoughts...Peace -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 17:53:51 02/17/03 Mon
hey look -- steve, 19:26:40 02/17/03 Mon
mention repentance in every piece to keep thyself humble leap over giant bundles of reality when I stumble my footing is aligned to the sun, right left and so on I walk in awkward directions as my Essence gets its stroll on,...... nice yo (NT) -- maximus, 19:38:52 02/17/03 Mon
that was cool. nice post liked the word usage. stay up. (NT) -- starks, 11:10:30 02/18/03 Tue
Good post. The First couple of lines, are most felt by me. But the whole ryhme was good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:10:41 02/18/03 Tue
just some shit i keyed up this morning between jobs at work.PEEP -- starks (the mutherfuckin mouth of madness), 13:42:35 02/17/03 Mon
DNA strans showered with forms of deviant sciences,stole the heart of a lion and cloned an army of tyrants, dope line, nice work, (NT) -- Maximus, 13:49:27 02/17/03 Mon
you did nice work keeping the rhyme scheme man...overall a pretty decent piece...keep it up... (NT) -- Mental ILLness, 17:25:31 02/17/03 Mon
Some simple verse for upcomin audio shit! Peep and critique! hate if you want, I dont care! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 21:48:53 02/16/03 Sun
. -- maximus, 23:28:38 02/16/03 Sun
100 percent wack hoe wut grade you in boy (NT) -- rezzarecta tha blankman, 02:25:27 02/17/03 Mon
PEEP THIS I NEED FEED BACK -- black 4 poun, 10:46:27 02/25/03 Tue
(((AUDIO)))Main Loop Presents = "Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats" pt. 1 - Mike's Birthday -- ===||Swords--->, 17:15:46 02/16/03 Sun
Sorry, I wanted to check em out but this is a crappyass pc and I cant check any audio on it! my bad! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 21:53:03 02/16/03 Sun
this was dope... one of the best beats you have ever made... keep doing ya thing... and thanks for being one of the VERY few who came through for my "attempted" CD... appreciated (NT) -- GuTTy.. had a similar vibe as "worst come to worst" by dialated..., 23:16:35 02/16/03 Sun
REPOST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET ....."One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 17:40:05 02/15/03 Sat
interesting post... your rhyme scheme seems to have gotten so complex i can't grasp it anymore! the lines that made sense to me were nice but the flow was missing in some parts... overall it was nice, but still most of it is over my head... keep doing you....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 17:48:43 02/15/03 Sat
To TRIPPY FOR ME but it ill (NT) -- Gonzo, 11:01:22 02/16/03 Sun
Werent you gonna do audios soon? I really need to hear one of yours... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:30:22 02/16/03 Sun
....THE DEMONIC ONE SHALL BE SILENCED....FINALLY...IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I'VE POSTED AN AUDIO....It's official, this will be the last demonic type of rhyme I'll write...never again shall I mock God...I call this piece...-=In The Beginning...=-...lyrics posted as well...***CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 23:25:50 02/14/03 Fri
i feel ya nigga!!! (NT) -- plural, 23:33:32 02/14/03 Fri
dayum beat is sik..lyrix nice...ill trak..notin wrong wit it man...all i got to say is..why stop usin a style that made u get this far?..1ne... (NT) -- Lucian0, 23:42:10 02/14/03 Fri
*Shakes head at bullshit reply above*...I found this very interesting...especially when you said you would end mocking God in the title...but this audio I felt THOROUGHLY...quality, lyrics, flow and beat...the verse, despite it having large words...it was simple...I don't know if you can understand that but it was...and I could grasp the concept behind this easily...I wished it would've been longer but I enjoyed what I heard...thanks for the listen (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 23:42:33 02/14/03 Fri
Peep inside.. -- ===||Swords--->, 00:16:35 02/15/03 Sat
tried to reply a little while ago, but my comp froze...so imma summerize what i said then....better flow, nice lyrics, beat ehh to me but still managed to set the mood and stuck to the theme, wordplay and multi's got better also....PEACE (NT) -- Vis, 00:55:15 02/15/03 Sat
this is dope yo, i like it (NT) -- maximus, 01:05:37 02/15/03 Sat
sick audio... the first sample is dope, beat is nice... lyrics are very dope... your flow could be better, too many pauses... i like ur style of lyrics but i unerstand the need to change.... a nice drop... peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 09:33:29 02/15/03 Sat
Nice beat.......nice multis........delivery is pretty good.......dark topic.......I wish this was longer.......maybe a hook........but its tight tho.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 09:55:13 02/15/03 Sat
ya flow shouldve been more rapid on this shit...I personally didnt like anything about it.... just honest with my thoughts... flow wasnt fluid enough and the lyrics were too expected... so the audio lagged in the "interesting" field.... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 12:10:39 02/15/03 Sat
I don't know where in the world you get "mocking God" from.....At least, I don't see any "mocking" in your lyrics....It could be something else but I'm not going to stir-up any trouble...Couldn't peep the audio, but the lyrics had the "multisyllabicism" in it....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...I have heard your voice before....It's decent to me....., 16:38:37 02/15/03 Sat
ehhh sample was nice....lyrics were nice...the way you spit em "Wasn't"....just didnt feel it...that demonic one shall be silenced crap, sounds corny and 4th gradish...lol...anyway stay up....peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 16:47:54 02/15/03 Sat
not bad man... not bad at all... FOR THIS BEAT, your delivery was pretty much on point... but with ANY OTHER BEAT... it probably wouldn't have sounded as good... that dark sounding, demonic type voice shit i mean... but lyrics were nice... you repped right. stay up. pz (NT) -- INTOX, 17:45:02 02/15/03 Sat
Im Back Im Back and i got some stuff to express.....much feed back please....key style -- insignificant, 01:34:17 02/15/03 Sat
other then it could be longer, it was on point, keep spitting it (NT) -- maximus, 01:41:08 02/15/03 Sat
You need to have a fixed, centered-idea, original rhyme patterns, creative rhyme schemes...different types of syllabic-structures.....You know, whatever you do just DO YOU....Keep up and stay up.....and utilize corrective-spelling..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....., 16:31:58 02/15/03 Sat
this was all over the place... you have some nice lines, and some garbage ones... think more about what ur saying... focus and you could be dope....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 17:13:48 02/15/03 Sat
raw03'... wrote it last night... -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:40:13 02/14/03 Fri
Nice i like allot lines this was FResh liked the flow. (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:49:35 02/14/03 Fri
pretty tight man.. (NT) -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 21:56:17 02/14/03 Fri
Great vocab -- Mista Uneek, 12:07:36 02/15/03 Sat

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