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The combination of Knowledge and clever wordplay combined............... Word usage like Confucious mind as sharp as Lucifer's
-- Brail Optiks...........TOX......E-mail's there if you still wanna get at me about a collabo
, 11:16:22 01/17/03 Fri
you got a mic? (NT) -- INTOX, 11:49:12 01/17/03 Fri
Nah I don't have a mic, haven't got to the audio stage yet (NT) -- Brail, 18:22:52 01/17/03 Fri
nice post kidd,..some real good similies on display here. The flow was tight too and some strong visuals come into play.Good drop and a nice read...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ and drop me some mail, tell me where shit's at, 12:20:53 01/17/03 Fri
Those long i's got my head spinnin, but you came strong with this. Those similes just caught me off guard, they were so good. Keep that shit up. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, 12:34:58 01/17/03 Fri
this was pretty dope... for text..lol flowed pretty well, liked the word play in this.. good job (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:26:18 01/17/03 Fri
Brail.....you have mastered the flow and your lines are dope "With my mind in kind alignment I shine like grinded diamonds" but I think you NEED to get recording some of this....FOR REAL (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:38:09 01/17/03 Fri
this shit is hot, the posts ive read from you show great diveristy in style and subject. and you've shown a shitload of talent on all your posts (NT) -- da mad hermit, 14:44:55 01/17/03 Fri
ill shit.<---------------not much else to say about it. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:20:22 01/17/03 Fri
Yes...... really good.One of the better one ive heard in here (NT) -- Tactics, 15:01:16 01/18/03 Sat
your living with the sims -- da mad hermit, 19:37:15 01/17/03 Fri
i don't see much of a concept but it was a nice flow. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:12:01 01/17/03 Fri
the title had me confused...I agree with BaZiC about the concept, the flow was nice in some areas and I think you could expand the lines a little ( some of these two liners could be one) but not bad, some decent vocab...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:55:05 01/18/03 Sat
Not really feelin this.. your multis dont work, cuz you're throwing in words that dont go together to make sense, but just to have the syllables in there.. like "My rotors shoulder odors"..?? Just dont do that and itll be straight.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:07:45 01/18/03 Sat
i dont know..........its just......hmmm...???its not bad not good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:57:24 01/18/03 Sat
lil keystyle,nothin big -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:08:14 01/17/03 Fri
I know this was a key...but I didn't realy feel it, it flowed alright but it didn't do much for me. nothing stood out...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 06:06:21 01/18/03 Sat
I liked it.. If the flow was better, itda been a real nice peice, but i dig the whole battle stance.. Keep droppin.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:04:24 01/18/03 Sat
nothing really stood out for me either.But it sounded good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:52:44 01/18/03 Sat
A keystlyle... because I haven't done one in a while...it's called "Ryhme disease"...please peep with imunity -- MikMaQ, 12:51:59 01/18/03 Sat
Im peeping, dont know if with immunity..Got better as it went on.. pretty tight piece.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:02:03 01/18/03 Sat
{{{AUDIO-INSTRUMENTAL}}} "FALLEN STAR" CHECK IT OUT... contact me for use or purchase -- GuTTy JaCoBz ... A.M., 14:29:55 01/17/03 Fri
Feelin the chorus part the most.. I like the main melody too, except those two rising piano keys.. they seem outta place.. I'da liked something of a lower key in there.. This is a nice beat never the less.. ida probly spit on it for that ccompilation if it was available back then.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:35:54 01/17/03 Fri
i can't check audios out (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:38:46 01/17/03 Fri
it's a pretty tight beat but nothin that i'd spit to tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:16:00 01/17/03 Fri
couldn't peep...program didn't support the protocol, whatever that means. (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:59:35 01/18/03 Sat
how to start a war -- con, 04:38:48 01/15/03 Wed
nice post son. definitely worth the read. peace. (NT) -- starks, 08:16:33 01/15/03 Wed
DAMN!!! this was a very ill read if not for flow then for content...I've started to notice this type of shit happening and the motives for it seem the same each time it's done: to bring the nation out of economic crisis, or at least pile all sorts of media "war coverage" over it so it goes unnoticed...illness guy... (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:21:25 01/15/03 Wed
I'm tired of war damn it...but this is exactly what Bush is doing...him and his shady ass brother....and he happens to be our governor...ain't that a bitch? Anyway....radio wise, probably wouldn't get play, but otherwise nice thoughts....had some powerful points in here but it's a bit boring...something like this I would have myself made it into a story-line....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:39:54 01/15/03 Wed
I'm tired of war damn it...but this is exactly what Bush is doing...him and his shady ass brother....and he happens to be our governor...ain't that a bitch? Anyway....radio wise, probably wouldn't get play, but otherwise nice thoughts....had some powerful points in here but it's a bit boring...something like this I would have myself made it into a story-line....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:56:12 01/15/03 Wed
i LIKED THE FLOW AND GOOD MESSAGE IN THE SONG (NT) -- FAROUK, 11:00:57 01/15/03 Wed
strong and powerful post, message truly there and felt, War is something that will never end, shits messed up, It's like do what america says or there will be war and they say this is a free country, anyways ill post, content was ill, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 11:37:32 01/15/03 Wed
damn.....yo....niggaz didnt give enough props.....can we have another round of appplause for the...CON......(((((CLAPPPPPING))))))....this was a great post......id copyright this shit dawg.....inspirational....fo real... (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 05:32:12 01/18/03 Sat
DOWN TO A SCIENCE AND I'M POUNCIN LIKE LIONS IF YOU ANNOUNCE AN OUNCE OF DEFIANCE-={AUDIO}=-Lemme know whatcha think??? -- Souliberty, 08:08:32 01/15/03 Wed
OOOPS THE HI-FI DON'T WORK!!! click in here fer the link... -- Souliberty, 08:10:19 01/15/03 Wed
whoooooooooooo......im FEELin this....fuk what anybody say...this was hot.....like that last line....look at my lips cuz my insides is fillin up.....HA....damn.....yo other than gettin ur voice levels equal to the beat or a smidgen more....this was liquid....loved (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 05:19:18 01/18/03 Sat
the beat has some suspense about it, uhm now you sound like an old head that used to be here....Magic....you should post the words once so we can actually read wtf you're talking about....this beat to me is not for you....not feelin the hook either......don't know...i don't want to be negative but I'm not feelin your flow....fast pace gets tiresome after a while unless you're listening to someone like Twister.....or my homegirl AthenA for that matter at least we understand them occassionally.....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:34:23 01/15/03 Wed
Yo soul I'm peeping right now it's just my media playa is mad slow, it buffers for like mad long so I'll leave my fee when it's done buffering (NT) -- Grotesque, 11:32:01 01/15/03 Wed
Im not liking this beat at all..Sounds WAYYYYY too "CASIO" for me.. Not liking your flow on this.. Your flow is way off.. its like youre going off beat but covering it up by going so fast... Dope Multis tho heh.. Lyrics were good, i just wish you would make them more understandable by slowing it down.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:27:13 01/15/03 Wed
Attention: There is a hot pink 1985 cadillac with two donuts, three broken windows, and five tickets illegally parked outside of the lounge..Oh yeah keystyle..One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 21:23:19 01/16/03 Thu
this was nice...the flow was ill and there was some real nice lines...I liked the one about the "clowns" most ...nice drop , peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 03:56:51 01/17/03 Fri
haha, ill imagery in this and the vocab was sick but the flow was hard to catch, I caught it, but it was hard...nice shit, piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:10:52 01/17/03 Fri
Ay yo I liked this one........had some nice multis and some real nice lines....Keep doin what you do. (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:29:44 01/17/03 Fri
aight, this was cool.. but where are ya audios?? u haven't made in in months, but u always asking to use beats and whatnot..lol drop an audio.. even a short one.. text is so 1999..lol (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:36:26 01/17/03 Fri
well done, i agree with above i liked the clown line. (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:51:40 01/17/03 Fri
Text}~'(Project Redeemer)'~{Peep -- Souliberty & Mahatma, 08:56:02 01/17/03 Fri
I'm soory dawg ...maybe it's the light in this room but I can hardly see that...peace (NT) -- MIkMaQ, 09:22:00 01/17/03 Fri
This was pretty nice. storytellin was on point and the imagry was intense. Keep doin what yo doin (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:21:25 01/17/03 Fri
This was good....Really good. Just short of great, in my opinion. I think I just got confused as time went on. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, 12:38:49 01/17/03 Fri
word.. i cant even see this... post this up in a easier to read font color and i'll peep.. long as fuck too..lol (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:31:43 01/17/03 Fri
reposted fer those who're blind as bats...CLICK HERE!!! -- Souliberty, 16:10:45 01/17/03 Fri
this post was tight, strong story telling and it was well written. interested in why you chose that subject. well done (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:45:10 01/17/03 Fri
(((AUDIO))) ITTTTTTTTTTS NOWWWWW OVAAAAAAAA............Collab with davictor -- ===||Swords--->, 13:48:53 01/16/03 Thu
my bad.. didnt know this would post twice.. delet the other one.. (NT) -- swords, 13:53:23 01/16/03 Thu
Hey yo your vocals sounded better on this......nice lil verse too........it was straight ....other kid's killing it tho....heat......his flow is ill......over all a nice audio.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student(UK), 15:14:31 01/16/03 Thu
DOPE....a lil shorter than usual, but yall both came ill..haha...his new fan...naw, just kid has skillz....you came nice too Swords, vocals were louder which made it sik....keep droppin like you always do...payce (NT) -- S-ENSE....AM, 16:10:22 01/16/03 Thu
It comes on ill ass hell...WTF...not feeling the first guys delivery...aight lyrics...TheThe second guy sounded tight needs a new mic....could've been better ...but it was tight (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 21:32:46 01/16/03 Thu
Nice lyrics and I really like the beat and that crazy flow just before it finnished ...some words I couldn't make out like they were slurred or something...the beat was banging though, nice drop Peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 04:57:12 01/17/03 Fri
hmm the beat started out ill but got REAL wierd when the verses dropped, yer words are a whole lot easier to hear on this tho, DAMN!!!! the victa flow is sick!!! but 'it's now ova so... nice drop, short but sweet, piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:02:54 01/17/03 Fri
I'm lovin the voice sample and the beat. You slowed you're flow down a little which makes it easier to understand what you're saying. The second dude slaughtered the beat. I mean his flow was homicidal. This was nice, keep doin what you doin (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:41:47 01/17/03 Fri
i peeped this yesterday... who made the beat? pretty tight work... swords.. i dunno i've heard better from you.. just seems like u weren't 100% into this... the other dude came crazy hype.. a lil loud.. but he was pretty nice... overall good work.. peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:33:48 01/17/03 Fri
Beat was mine.. i thought i said that.. whoops.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:29:29 01/17/03 Fri
Last words -- Tactics, 13:08:29 01/16/03 Thu
I could tell this shit was deep, damn sorry to hear that, this was from the heart so I relly can't come correct, all I can say is "keep on" (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:29:35 01/16/03 Thu
Nice Display of creativity! if you fixed the misspelt words it'da been better.... But still pretty dope, feelin the concept.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:06:02 01/16/03 Thu
This is just what i would say if i died today.Its ment to be deep but not that deep(its not a cry for help or anything)..Say what you gotta say.Just dont be brutal..(sorry if thats spelled wrong swords lol) (NT) -- Tactics, 14:26:27 01/16/03 Thu
deep shit sonn,...message definately felt. this was wierd because it didn't rhyme but it flowed nice as hell, a strange scheme you have here but the content was nice...100 (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:48:18 01/17/03 Fri
the flow was real easy to catch and some of the words you rhymed were real origional, this is mosdef a heartfelt piece, not any of that high as a kite keystyle shit but true feeling and emotion...piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:07:20 01/17/03 Fri
PEEP The art of spitting aka making it look easy -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:17:56 01/15/03 Wed
"filled the bowl deep wit corrosive explosives and within a breath i lit it" this was the illest line I saw based on the multi's and near perfect flow, the rest of the rhyme sorta switched between realy dope flow and a couple bars that threw it off, sylibles are important, but all in all the imagery and the multi's made this a good read... (NT) -- Souliberty, 06:37:30 01/16/03 Thu
good rhymes. but just didnt get into it (NT) -- Tactics, 13:20:14 01/16/03 Thu
my mouths on fire, ill shit, that corrosive line stuck out to me too, nice post, no downers here, Keep On (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:38:08 01/16/03 Thu
yeah one or two nice lines...bullshit flow, no offence kidd but your lines are too long,..it hits nice on that already mentioned line and also the "dipicted written lyrics" line was tight...fix the flow and it's dope...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 06:06:39 01/17/03 Fri
-={TEXT COLLAB}=-Cult Phenomenon-={PEEP}=- -- Souliberty & Dockspitz, 06:33:18 01/16/03 Thu
Sounds preety good.Where you guys from (NT) -- Tactics, 13:14:02 01/16/03 Thu
shit was pretty ill, content was hellah ill, I liked the subject, nice thoughts, nice length, nutin bad about this post,Keep On (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:34:22 01/16/03 Thu
Wasnt Dockspitz the kid that kid that got kiced outta enemiez for biting? like one of his names? i dunno.. Aight now for this.. mulits nice on the first one but lines way too long..content pretty cool.. i used to be more into this kinda stuff.. i liked 2nd verse tho.. dope flow and content.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:10:35 01/16/03 Thu
Hey, Im feeling this text right here......nice wordplay in the second and conecpts birthed from both were tight (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 19:25:58 01/16/03 Thu
the vocab and usage were good but I didn't feel the content...i think you both left the topic to talk about how dope you are...some lines were kinda blah, but some were nice the first cat came nicer but the second had a nicer flow...decent..peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:58:18 01/17/03 Fri
Song titled "Were all Different" ain't finished it yet, but heres a sneak -- Grotesque, 13:43:10 01/16/03 Thu
First verse = good.. Second Verse = not so good.. Flow was nice on the first one.. second verse was all over the place.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:02:45 01/16/03 Thu
It's like I can imagine you thinking.."now what rhymes with that?" ...and just selecting the first thing that you think of. The vocab was kinda drab and elementary and the first verse bored into not reading, but the flow was cool and that is something to build on ...keep writing Peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:40:20 01/17/03 Fri
keystyle...*They call it Destiny*....random acts of the mind....embeded threwout eons of time....PEACE -- Essence...Abzent Minded..., 16:42:21 01/15/03 Wed
This shit was ill, I liked that whole atlas hit, damn content was there, nice 1, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 17:45:17 01/15/03 Wed
Yo that was EPIC Lounge shitt.... (NT) -- OV@...yo this is OLD LOUNGE TYPE SHIT...some AGEL FIRE Lounge type shitt..Take em back DUHNN..Holla, 18:19:44 01/15/03 Wed
that's what i'm talikin about. pure fire. nice read. and keep em coming like porn stars fuckin 500 dudes in a row (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:33:49 01/15/03 Wed
Ehh i think we can do without Starks's punches.. You're always on some other shit.. pretty tight tho.. a decent read.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:13:20 01/16/03 Thu
anybody need beats? -- synical, 18:57:58 01/15/03 Wed
I do.. But then i make em.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 19:10:50 01/15/03 Wed
warchild does.. he said holla at him.. his addy is ihavenofriends@kmart.net (NT) -- GuTTy, 01:02:18 01/16/03 Thu
I'd actually hafta KNOW if you make ill beats or not...you got a soundclick or d music with that shit on it? (NT) -- Souliberty, 06:38:47 01/16/03 Thu
yeah ill take some.........Where can i find a 6 pin midi plug to hook my keyboard up to my cpu (NT) -- Tactics, 13:24:50 01/16/03 Thu
Who Needs A Hook? 3 MINUTES OF SPITTIN PeeP & Critique Me Please!!! -- Souliberty, 15:32:44 01/14/03 Tue
ITS XITI-BOY!!!!!!!!!! at least it sounds like it...oh my goodness.....the flow the flow.......he fuckin snapped! lyrics are nasty, rode the beat nicely.....damn i wish i could spit fast again, you got good breath control...quality is pretty nice (NT) -- Vision, 15:48:31 01/14/03 Tue
Whoa.. This was cool.. Didnt like the beat... but the rest is ill.. if this was mixed a bit better, it be evn nicer.. damn you're killin it.. I dont think this is Xitizen tho.. might be but i doubt it.. Shit.. this was sick... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:54:52 01/14/03 Tue
damn, does sound a lil like xitizen... very nice... rode beat real nice... real nice audio (NT) -- GuTTy JaCoBz, 16:07:20 01/14/03 Tue
uhm well i'm the rebel in this bitch..lol...always gotta disagree with shit...aiight so...this does sound like Xitizen...fast ass flow....connection was nice except with a few words...just didn't fit...other times you seemed forced and breath-less...emotion lacked on some parts but other than that this was pretty cool kid...oh yeah didn't like the beat either...but that's not me...i'm picky as shit when it comes to beats....aiight .....my opinion in....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 16:48:24 01/14/03 Tue
kinda XITI-ish....nah though...kidd rode beat aight....Kinda,,,nah very forced (NT) -- OV@...I would have to hear spitt aloud..seems forced..Nice though...connects now and then....beat not my style..too qwik...tyte though...hard to hear, 16:54:00 01/14/03 Tue
couldn't really follow it cause it was too fast to understand what the hell you were saying... some things seemed forced, but overall I'd say you rode this beat very very nicely... since I stopped really listening to the words and concentrated on the flow, it seemed like you repeated the same thing over about twenty times... beat sucks. Nice audio tho... If I had made it, I'd play it in my car. But I didn't, so I wouldn't. Feel me? Pz. (NT) -- INTOX, 17:04:51 01/14/03 Tue
eh...i guess this coulda been me...but i cud never spit that fast...i've tried...well this was nice, truthfully i dont think it sounds ALL that much like me, i think this dood sounds better...good to know my voice has some competition... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:24:28 01/15/03 Wed
I didnt have any problem understanding you after listening to PSYCH for so long now...youre quick but not that bizzy...it sounds more like your just saying it fast...its not melodic tho which makes that style good in my opinion...this was good tho...not to take anything away...look fwd to more shit from you... (NT) -- INTRO, 11:26:48 01/16/03 Thu
Just a lil keystyle letting the underpar emcee's know who they are -- Brail, 00:28:36 01/14/03 Tue
Nice, great key, thoughts from "Brail" see's it so clear dope Peace (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 00:38:28 01/14/03 Tue
ayo... peep -- INTOX, 02:11:59 01/14/03 Tue
ha hands of time line had me cresing boy (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 11:16:28 01/14/03 Tue
unlike "Brail" I feel ya... without my hands (NT) -- LenzD1, 11:22:42 01/14/03 Tue
ill, some hot lines...the bladder of a cute kid scenario was clever, keep it up (NT) -- Vision, 12:06:37 01/14/03 Tue
This was tight.. nice to see you can switch your stance if needed.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:14:58 01/14/03 Tue
I noticed a few 'MikMaQisms' here, I hope that inspired the keystyle and not the title...lol nice drop..peace (NT) -- MikMaQ...Changing like 'Manamal', 03:55:24 01/16/03 Thu
(((AUDIO)))They tell me this BLOWS AWAY all the other audios ive done so far... "WHAT I SAY" Dictionary Rappers this is your heaven lol.. This one is HYPE! -- ===||Swords--->, 12:10:36 01/15/03 Wed
sounds like you got a problem pronouncin yer words, great vocab, the begining's flow was WAY off, but the rest you rode it well, can't realy grasp what this is about and alot of yer words are lost cuz it sounds like you gotta stuffy nose, beat sounds alot like blackaliscious and the flow is a little reminiscent of him as well, quality was a bit under what it coulda been... ill flow though...piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 13:24:49 01/15/03 Wed
I finf it hard to hear what your saying man, got better as it went......sounds like you need to turn your vocals UP a lil........beat overpowers your words...........the flow sounds aiight and what lyrics i got sound coo'......but for real try and convey your voice over a bit better......towards the end it got better......If you can do that it will be a vast improvement (for me as a listener).........Nice beat (NT) -- Eternal Student, 14:20:42 01/15/03 Wed
yeah..beat is dope, but we both know you got that shit down pact....you coming hyped yo....content is sik, like always....i wasnt expecting anything less than ILL.....i like the bulb line, shit is Hot....ha...boat line is tight...damn beat is sik Swords....vocals could be a lil higher, but nothing for me to complain about.....im glad to see you coming up....imma start on that verse for our collabo....im doing a lil research first....keep dropping b...PEACE (NT) -- Essence...AM, 16:30:37 01/15/03 Wed
I forgot to respond to this earlier, I downloaded it , the shit takes so long on my Mp, I hate it , not your rhyme the MP, as for your audio, DAMN Vocab stuffed like a Peter, shit was off the top, like everyone said your vocals need a little pitch, I loved the beat, it all fit , nice 1 , keep on (NT) -- Grotesque.....P.S. anyway to make the buffing on an MP3 faster ofr does it take everyone 10 to 15 minutes just to download, thanxx, 17:52:53 01/15/03 Wed
Beat lvely...flow off at beginning...then rode beat...vocab,...off chain..pa!! (NT) -- OV@...hella tyte..meybe not ur best to me..definattley one of the best iv'e heard...keep it gangsta!!, 18:16:14 01/15/03 Wed
yo, the beats cool but yeah the beginning was way off. you caught up though and over all a nice audio. (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:38:51 01/15/03 Wed
fuck... been a while since I've been to this website.... gonna do a keystyle.... criticism accepted -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 17:03:10 01/15/03 Wed
um...this was ok....forrealz, i think you could come better than this...i mean for a key it was coo, but...i want to se you come with some ill written shit?..feel me?....surpirse me if you will...pz (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:26:35 01/15/03 Wed
I agree....this was aight for a Key...i know ya can come iller topical??? heh?? (NT) -- OV@...This was tyte though...effective for a key...nothing outstanding,...Peace!!, 18:05:01 01/15/03 Wed
this was alright .i guess nothing really stood out but keep posting. we all come for one reason to rhyme. stay up (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:28:17 01/15/03 Wed
Keyed ment@lz-......OV@KIl....keep it hood like the neckline of sweat suit's -- OV@KIL......Dizzubble Dizeeeeetch...Bizzubble Dizeeeeetch!!!, 18:01:11 01/15/03 Wed
this was sik...i think me and you have the same type of thoughts just expressd differently, like, how i beleive in the fatcs of telepathic answers that HAVE been around since pre-historic days...now us as humans evolving can finally speak our thoughts instead of simple gestures...this was a nice key...keep droppin OV@, turn them heads.....PEACE (NT) -- Essence....AM, 18:38:07 01/15/03 Wed
Hot spit Definetly worthy of the mic keep spittin one (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:24:19 01/15/03 Wed
Being Hated on and Discriminated -- Grotesque, 11:22:47 01/15/03 Wed
Went downhill real quick.. I thought you were actually gonna rhyme about being hated on or discriminated, well you kinda did in the beginning but changed after two lines.. got ADD or something? no attention span.. You dont focus on anything.. i think you'd do a lot better if you focused on something.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:22:21 01/15/03 Wed
haha..ADD...haha..naw this was aight, flow was the best part about it, and that was a lil choppy, but who am i, nothing more than a fellow writer who has his own opinion...all i can say was this was cool, i was expecting something different, but you ran with it how you ran with it....keep on and stay up....UNO (NT) -- Essence...AM, 16:38:37 01/15/03 Wed
Kid can flow...nice structure minus backslashes (NT) -- OVA..taht is all, 18:23:45 01/15/03 Wed
Any tips on how to improve my style -- Abraham, 11:38:21 01/15/03 Wed
Rhyme scheme is hella simple.. And if you're gonna rap about this shit at least make or believable.. Or even more important, make it INTERESTING.. after all, all we're doing here is reading at our computer.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:18:09 01/15/03 Wed
ok, i can see your new and trying to elevate...all i can say is read others posts and really try and find what kind of style you like, focus on that, and begin to re-develop your own word patternz...just stik around and keep writing, thas how eveyone here has done it...peace (NT) -- Essence....AM, 16:34:03 01/15/03 Wed
I agree with all both above said..i have one thing to say like ESSE said...BE Yurself..Find the style taht fit's yur liking find ya own niche. (NT) -- OV@..took me a while just flow with what best suit's yu..., 18:18:37 01/15/03 Wed
KEYSTYLE...i'll be surprised if ANYONE can make any sense outta this one.........cause i cant -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded w/ O.M.N.I., 11:57:57 01/14/03 Tue
When you use Multis you gotta make sure they actually connect to make sense lol.. But you know tthat soooooooo... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:43:43 01/14/03 Tue
if u hadn't had said that not even u understood it..everyone woulda replied sayin shyt like "DAMN DAT WAS ILL" lol...sounds dope as fuk when u spit it aloud...just makes no sense lol...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 12:53:05 01/14/03 Tue
Nice key..I don't know about interpreting it but I enjoyed reading it...I don't know it's just my kinda shit...but yo ...the G.O.D.s got a show on the 22nd of February at South Suburban College..I dont know how many of us is gonna get on stage..hell I might get up there by my damn self if I got to..come check us out....email me I'll send you a ticket they're $15 so we'll have to work something out..but yeah uhmm uh huh One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil....a.k.a...The Alpha The Omega and the Lindenburg baby all in one, 13:24:46 01/14/03 Tue
yo i actually thought this made sense.....tight shit....loved da flow...what up my nicca?....how u been dawg.....? chi-town treatin u good, im fis ta head back to cali in april for good.....but umm im a holla (NT) -- styliztik...aka..q.uote, 13:42:00 01/14/03 Tue
....WOW....you flowed dope with no clue about what you were talkin about....dogg...YOU REMIND ME OF ORKEN....**YO, TO GUTTY, XITIZEN AND VISION.....MY COMPUTER'S POWER SUPPLY DIED ON ME RECENTLY I HAVE TO GO GET IT FIXED...SO AUDIOS ARE POSTONED FOR NOW......MY BAD.....I'm at school right now...but I'll get back to yall***....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 14:11:48 01/14/03 Tue
might as well been written in chinese but hey, not everyone is gonna feel it right? (NT) -- LenzD1, 14:46:38 01/14/03 Tue
on a scale of 1 to 10 adolescent ass rapings, 1 being the best, 10 being the worst (or vice versa, depending on how you look at it), I give this a 5. (NT) -- INTOX, 14:57:11 01/14/03 Tue
uhm well...where'd that come from? heavy ass vocab but it stayed on point kid...nice connection...came short but I'm with you I can't really make sense of this...maybe it's personal..sometimes I sit and just type or write and whatever comes comes...guess that's what happened here....One (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 16:18:13 01/14/03 Tue
"you paint a picture with words i spit terpentine drips" <---fuckin ill imagery and concept right here and I was feelin the multi's of this alot, very flowable,whodafuck cares if it's about somethin though...it was ill on it's own... (NT) -- Souliberty, 16:37:25 01/14/03 Tue
damn flow was fuckin smahing.... no one can diss this piece dunny...one (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:39:28 01/15/03 Wed
Keyed ment@lz...entitled...."The pain in my life is sorta like chewing on thumb-tacks"....Peep and whatev@ man!!! -- OV@KIL...One'Huned..G3N@$yDe.., 16:42:02 01/14/03 Tue
"HOLD YA HEAD" (NT) -- -HiDDEN-, 16:58:10 01/14/03 Tue
umm...this was aight for a key....nothin that really stood out to me, except for the Bin Laden's wives was kinda funny....but yo, keep up...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 19:33:19 01/14/03 Tue
this was nice Ov@....feeling it..nice lil stance on the last part of the piece....stay outta trouble..haha..keep ya head up...peace man~ (NT) -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:26:48 01/14/03 Tue
this was some pretty hot shit, keep writing (NT) -- ir8te, 22:16:37 01/14/03 Tue
eh... was kinda bummed that in the first bar you rhymed corrections with corrections...the rest was a bit mediocre and lacked a good flow base...eh... (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:25:45 01/15/03 Wed
holy shit I like the second verse by genesyde... just dope (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:33:25 01/15/03 Wed
keystyle....Live to Dream, or do you Dream to live?.....PEACE -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:08:33 01/14/03 Tue
tight composition -- ir8te, 22:09:37 01/14/03 Tue
dopest post i read today...deep stuff man...too many ill lil things here and there to highlight just one...nice drop yo...keep 'em comin(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...wonderin how many other ways u can come up with to spell "essence", 23:27:57 01/14/03 Tue
At first I was like its okay......and stop reading.......but the middle of the verse caught my attention........and I began to feel it more.........with each reading.............nice poetic work yo..............Ghost (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:58:45 01/15/03 Wed
i liked this. it made me feel like my existence is completely useless. this is poetry fitted perfectly in rap format (NT) -- con, 04:34:01 01/15/03 Wed
To tell the truth I'm not at all sure I like this, I mean it was tight when it comes to concept and there are some very ill next level ideas displayed but the flow was wierd to me in many places and sorta threw the poetics of it all off, but like I said I can grasp the concept it's just not packaged as neatly as it coulda been...pz (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:16:40 01/15/03 Wed
nice, well processed thinking with ill usage of words... nice drop kid (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:28:27 01/15/03 Wed
a little something for the drunk one's out there -- ir8te, 22:31:28 01/14/03 Tue
shit (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:42:36 01/14/03 Tue
It was to short to get a feel, come longer, 1 (NT) -- Grotesque, 23:39:35 01/14/03 Tue
It was straight,,,,,,,,,,,,I know how these days go by dog...........I feel your struggle..........it gets worse though.......trust me (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:52:30 01/15/03 Wed
listen to "book of life" by common (NT) -- con, 04:26:53 01/15/03 Wed
uhm...your thoughts so you can't really be judged on what you think, as an writer/emcee though...I would have made it longer and more interesting....keep tryin though...hell I'm facin the same probs right now, but it'll get brighter.....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 10:09:36 01/15/03 Wed
i liked this one, all be it a little short but hey this spit reminded me about my fights wit my mom so,keep practicin' dawg (NT) -- rusty, 15:39:04 01/15/03 Wed
tell me what i need to do to improve....Its a short Rhyme about all the shit ive been threw with my mom.. -- Abraham, 21:54:39 01/14/03 Tue
what you need to do is something completely different than this... the whole "tortured soul" and "manically depressed" shit?? TIRED! I don't understand why, when someone sits down and says "ok i'm gonna do some deep shit now"... it always comes out depressing as fuck!! Focus on some more positive shit, then write about it, and I probably still won't like it. But it won't be this, which is improvement. (NT) -- INTOX, 22:01:03 01/14/03 Tue
Like I said,,,,,,earlier I feel your pain but I dont feel the verse.........Step it up man.................Ghost (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:55:47 01/15/03 Wed
ok topic but it didnt really rhyme that well (NT) -- con, 04:29:43 01/15/03 Wed
I know what it's like to be in a Moonwalk bouncing from house to house, it messes with your emotions hard, freinds last as long as a month, but your verse was way to short and needs some work, expand your thoughts, shit was aight thou, keep on, (NT) -- Grotesque, 11:43:55 01/15/03 Wed
"Scars of Seperation"......sorry Mod, delete the one below, my high ass forgot to include the damn story....here it is...peep and give me some feedback ya'll...... -- J£:The®ealist, 19:25:59 01/14/03 Tue
I thought it started out simple cuz you was speakin as a child but whole thing was that way, not feelin this at all, needs to be on the Lifetime channel or somethin, Peace (NT) -- LenzD1, 19:55:56 01/14/03 Tue
dang it...haha..that sounded funny to me...i think he mighted said Damn it..or Fuck it..but,,haha..this was good to me...nice lil concept, i like how you retrospected into three different characters...good ish..keep on...peace (NT) -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:18:48 01/14/03 Tue
i liked it cuz its an origional idea. if u work on it it would be sick (NT) -- con, 04:36:48 01/15/03 Wed
O.M.N.I. PRESENTZ -- THE MUTHAFUCKIN ACCENT IN..."BEEN IN IT"...*** REAL AUDIO PRODUCTION *** -- LYRICS INCLUDED INSIDE -- Also Includes Props To My Mans Intox.... -- Flymizess * 1st Lady of O.M.N.I. -- The Accent of Tundra and Camelions', 16:34:44 01/14/03 Tue
feelin the intro...DAMN TURN DOWN THE LYRICS!!!! I HEAR YOU SPEAKIN!!! jeez... lol...yer one of the illest femcees I've ever heard though...nice multi's...skips a bit...feelin the beat all the way through...kinda deepness...nice shit!!! (NT) -- Souliberty, 16:42:37 01/14/03 Tue
Yo Mah Feel ya most def...Loove ya Singin!! ha ha//j/k..I hear yu Ma (NT) -- OV@..Yo I feel this..been in it..Epic piece..Love the realness of it..I felt ya Speaking knowledge...Peace, 16:49:53 01/14/03 Tue
FLow was weird on this one.. I've liked other flows of yours.. I dont think the beat suited you as well as others.. chorus was akward to me.. lryics always on point tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 16:55:22 01/14/03 Tue
yo....can't peep audios ma, but the text was pretty hot....read like it would flow real nice...nice rhymes and good use of multi's and word usage was simple yet powerful, which is how i prefer it, rather than one's who use all the big words all the time, but that's just me......but yo, stay up Fly...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 19:41:23 01/14/03 Tue
no doubt. truth is truth... WHOA!! shorty got the NICE ASS SINGING VOICE!! WOOOOO... i didnt know you had it like THAT, ma! damn! You should SING YO! Alicia who?? Other than that, the third verse, IN MY OPINION, was the hottest, flow wise... damn... i'm still kinda stunned by the voice... i would like to hear a whole track of you just singing, on a more R&B tip... good work! (NT) -- INTOX, 20:16:06 01/14/03 Tue
dope.. seems like u flow is a lil slower... but still on point... not totally feelin the chorus... like the way u come in on the 2nd verse tho.. nice work on this... (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:33:50 01/14/03 Tue
yea turn ya vocals down a lil...lyrics were nice, always something to think about...actual substance, flow its on point....i liked the beat at first but it called old real quick for me...keep bangin em out (NT) -- Vision, 23:29:27 01/14/03 Tue
learning how to freestyle -- kelvin, 17:41:35 01/14/03 Tue
WORD OF ADVICE: if you wanna try to freestyle....well besides the fact that you can't type it......you gonna actually have to put some work into it other than just postin some line beggin for help (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 19:29:40 01/14/03 Tue
you might wanna learn how to WRITE ya thoughts first, then try and free some shit...1 (NT) -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:21:47 01/14/03 Tue
at least write a rhyme for motherfuckers to look at` (NT) -- ir8te, 22:12:39 01/14/03 Tue
NEW STORY!!!!!...."Scars of Seperation"....still needs a lil work but wanna get some feedback so far, so ya'll tell me what ya think......story told from three different perspectives (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 19:21:42 01/14/03 Tue
a lil work?...i think it needs ALOT of work..lol...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...lookin at a blank screen, 19:23:56 01/14/03 Tue
(((AUDIO)))More energy and better flows on this one.."Collected...Respected" WARNING: Beat's EXTREMELY funky on this one... -- ===||Swords--->, 12:39:50 01/14/03 Tue
Must be a beat by you, lol I can tell...your flow is more fluent now, the only thing is that it isn't clear....guess cuz your voice is kinda low. Other than that I'm likin what I'm hearin..sounds like a rap someone woulda done back in the day but with a taste of today's flavor. Nice audio kid....One (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 14:12:56 01/14/03 Tue
cant peep this yet (NT) -- styliztik,....aka..quote, 14:33:41 01/14/03 Tue
lovin the beat...i love how you make that old feel to em, you flowed better on the second verse...sounded a little off on the first like you were trying to keep up at times, but the rest sounded solid...lovin the whole thing lyrics was ill only thing was that the quality wasnt all that good, but decent enough...dope work (NT) -- Vision, 14:48:45 01/14/03 Tue
now this was coo.....just work on shortenin those bars dawg.....sounds like u runnin outta breath....ur adlibs are what give that emotion....emphasize those words in ur adlibs that make up ur rhyme pattern, its hard at first but it becomes second-nature if u persevere...one (NT) -- styliztik....aka....quote......just wait till i drop an audio, 14:48:54 01/14/03 Tue
Stylistik, not sure exactly what you mean by the adlibs.. Yeah, vision, i actually did that on purpose with the longer lines so i can spit em quick like that, just trying that out.. Yeah i didnt notice the quality was like that until after i mixed it.. Oh well, i got Sound Forge now, so i can make shit super clean now.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:03:00 01/14/03 Tue
YO, Beat is funk central..........liking that beat.........flow was tight and lyrics were nice.......your vocals need to be turned up tho...cus I have to listen REAL careful to hear what your spitting...........PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 15:42:38 01/14/03 Tue
was definately feelin the flow on this but it was a bit low, beat had a nice old school feel to it that kinda through me off in the begining then matched yer flow realy well, all in all a superb quality piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 16:33:22 01/14/03 Tue
Ha ha suhn ...Illness.....Beat got me over here steppin (NT) -- OV@..Yo suhn this is madd tyte...bars a lil long ...,bet hey ...effective...flow on point..nice beat...POeace kidd...One Hun'ed, 17:04:05 01/14/03 Tue
Ha ha suhn ...Illness.....Beat got me over here steppin (NT) -- OV@..Yo suhn this is madd tyte...bars a lil long ...,bet hey ...effective...flow on point..nice beat...POeace kidd...One Hun'ed, 17:04:06 01/14/03 Tue
Hahaha... beat is dope! You should post the text with it cause I can't really understand what you're saying. Beat is dope tho! pz (NT) -- INTOX, 17:08:00 01/14/03 Tue
Everybody tell me what you think of this little rhyme -- Abraham, 13:29:20 01/14/03 Tue
Everybody tell me what you think of this rhyme -- Rella G, 14:59:05 01/14/03 Tue
dude above me MUST be a friend of yours or something... cause he being generous as all hell... this shit was not good at all, my man. If I ever heard this on the radio, I'd swear that Cash Money had seiged the white house and taken over the airwaves... you didnt really say SHIT in this. (NT) -- INTOX, 15:04:13 01/14/03 Tue
wow, even my first rhyme ever was better than this (NT) -- Vision, 15:54:08 01/14/03 Tue
why would we "need some medical attention for da prevention of gettin injured by ur rhymes"..?...wouldnt we need da medical attention after gettin injured..not before?.....u didnt make sense...stupid....(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...lol..i'm bored, 16:18:27 01/14/03 Tue
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (NT) -- OV@KIL ...Has Spoken..BOOOOOO!!!, 16:56:54 01/14/03 Tue
keystyle-damn i aint post here in like a year or 2 -- synical, 09:24:02 01/14/03 Tue
this was aight...short, not much to critique on, i dont remember you (NT) -- Vision, 12:01:22 01/14/03 Tue
This was nice.. i like this style.. Keep it up, and maybe come longer too.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:54:25 01/14/03 Tue
This was nice.. i like this style.. Keep it up, and maybe come longer too.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:56:20 01/14/03 Tue
thanx for the replies yall~1~ -- synical, 14:28:47 01/14/03 Tue
CYPHER TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!........enjoy this right here....and all ya'll participate, have fun wit it.........oh yea, this is twisted as hell....everyone else come 'crazy' wit it too...HAHAHA...have fun!! -- J£:The®ealist, 20:33:36 01/13/03 Mon
uh...ok. dirty dirty. (NT) -- peter FILE, 20:53:18 01/13/03 Mon
ok..ill add on..why not -- Essence....AM, 21:10:46 01/13/03 Mon
keeping it going.... -- //Trojohn\\, 21:12:19 01/13/03 Mon
my story -- LenzD1, 12:48:14 01/14/03 Tue
Pat DAWG jocks me secretly -- P-dawg...formerly known as peter FILE, 23:35:15 01/13/03 Mon
Sheer Brilliance...Pulitzer worthy...i liked the "CHuuuuuummmmpppp!!!" at the end...talk about a "go home" line...ouch...right on the nose... (NT) -- Jiffy Pop...if he stops...well Biff he's not...Cheers! that's Cliffy's spot..., 23:58:32 01/13/03 Mon
This is nothing short of garbage (NT) -- Brail, 00:33:10 01/14/03 Tue
I don't need 2 reply cus I think u and jiffy pop are the same guy and I wouldn't waste my time battling some mutherfucker like u son, get off ya ego, you sound like some from MTV'S Scratch & Burn (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 00:34:59 01/14/03 Tue
lol, whats this (NT) -- Vision, 12:10:43 01/14/03 Tue
Yo we'll call this: Fed Up with all the Commercial Bullshit. let's keep it underground. where the real shit dwells PEEP! -- STARKS (THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 13:49:22 01/13/03 Mon
yo u brought it on this....but i see u caught up in a lot of hating.....dont hate the next man....work on self.....but who am i to tell u....just keep bangin those out...this was nice (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 14:03:57 01/13/03 Mon
HAd its ups and down.. hmm i dunno about the topic.. it's been done by everyone and their mama.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:07:03 01/13/03 Mon
I wasn't sure what it was about...you sound angry..lol this was nice I liked a lot of the word usage in your vocab and the flow was ok ,...but too tight in areas that made previous and following lines flow weaker. Still a nice read and some good sounding lines...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 14:35:33 01/13/03 Mon
yo...like Swords said...had it's ups and downs...and umm..seemed to change topic a couple times in here.......just wasn't too interestin to me, but overall not too bad....stay up..peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 20:46:12 01/13/03 Mon
title and post had no correlation really but...ok. (NT) -- peter FILE, 21:01:36 01/13/03 Mon
Personally I thought the first half was real nice. You kind of lost your intensity when you flipped up the topic. If you wanna smash comercial emcees you got to come innovative cause it's been done before. You're comin along though. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- Brail, 00:40:34 01/14/03 Tue
keystyle/////Tryin to get it back -- styliztik.....aka...quote, 14:39:19 01/13/03 Mon
nice post liked the style very creative, keep comin like this. WORDS OF WISDOM;(Perfection is best left undetected. For when you feel you reached perfection your future elevation is neglected. stay up (NT) -- starks, 14:55:42 01/13/03 Mon
umm.....pretty nice for a key, nothin that really stood out.......flow was smooth as hell in a few parts from the way i read it.....didn't seem to have much direction though, but keep up...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 20:39:57 01/13/03 Mon
cool dude. (NT) -- peter FILE, 20:57:00 01/13/03 Mon
This was alright. Flow was kind of hard to follow in places, or at least I thought so. Not really fond of paragrah format. Peace (NT) -- Brail, 00:36:27 01/14/03 Tue
Roots - (A repost, replied to three directly below. Peace) -- LenzD1, 11:00:19 01/13/03 Mon
peeped before...tight (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 12:56:48 01/13/03 Mon
Read this before.. Replied before.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:59:11 01/13/03 Mon
not bad but why the repost son. keep the new shit comin stay real peace (NT) -- starks, 13:21:21 01/13/03 Mon
^^^word... but yo there was nice lines showing here and there,...I think you know which the weaker ones are...fix them but write something new or cats will get bored, not bad tho'...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 14:25:59 01/13/03 Mon
yea i peeped this first time..didn't reply, but this was prolly about average.....seemed a bunch of filler lines in it.....but yea, post new shit, keep writin-that's the key to elevatin....and learn from others...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 20:53:37 01/13/03 Mon
(((AUDIO))) "MAGIC" This one's a beauty.. I dunno about me getting more hype or whatever.. That's about as hyped as i get before i start runnin outta breath real easy.. -- ===||Swords--->, 12:43:03 01/13/03 Mon
this was actually coo.....what ???? u from the bay????....yo hit me up dawg.....u werent monotone this time, only thing is try to take ur deepness and make it more simple......that way ull hit twice as many cats.....cuz all u do when u hit me, is sharpen me....but u might cut someone assunder with that shit....hhaha....one love dawg (NT) -- styliztik.....aka....quote, 13:02:00 01/13/03 Mon
LOL i cant come simple if i tried... Yeah im from the bay.. i think you said you were once too.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:03:50 01/13/03 Mon
Yo, beat was cool, your flow matched it nicely. I'm from So. cal but lovin my RAIDERS, too bad about ya niners though.Peace (NT) -- LenzD1, 13:18:49 01/13/03 Mon
can't peep right cause i'm at work. will check out later (NT) -- starks, 13:42:57 01/13/03 Mon
nice...I was realy feeling the last verse because of the flow with those hot lyrical twists , nice work the beat was aight too...but the lyrics were nice...good drop peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 14:17:16 01/13/03 Mon
can't peep audios (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 20:49:26 01/13/03 Mon
ill Mitch! -- ???, 15:52:51 01/13/03 Mon
just a short spit for my first time(i want lots of opinios) -- rusty, 15:24:58 01/13/03 Mon
just a short spit for my first time(i want lots of opinios) -- rusty, 15:18:57 01/13/03 Mon
HEY CAN SOME BODY TELL ME WHAT THEY THINK OF MY SHIT< I'VE BEEN ELEVATIN -- VENOM AKA POISON, 01:06:58 01/13/03 Mon
zzzz....you summed it up in the first line...weak...i don't think your elevator works kid...try the escalator... (NT) -- INTRO, 01:54:22 01/13/03 Mon
ehhh interesting -- siic, 04:23:20 01/13/03 Mon
Yo, you got some skillz but its the topic choice that keeps you from elevatin, keep up .Peace (NT) -- LenzD1, 10:48:38 01/13/03 Mon
/Damn yo shit stank/............ur words ......boooooo (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 12:44:01 01/13/03 Mon
"Some niggas say I got weak punch lines/" I think i fall into that category.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:06:18 01/13/03 Mon
yo in all honesty i'm feeling this about as much as a quadrapolegic would feel if he stubbed his toe. in other words. keep tryin. but this definitly wasn't it. (NT) -- starks, 13:38:37 01/13/03 Mon
Sorry to interrupt you textcee nerds (hahahaha) but I was wondering if anybody (ie. SUNSET) has an addy I can DL Cool Edit full version, Frooty Loops full and an MP3 converter thingymajobby? In other news, Intox sucks a dick. (NT) -- INVALID of OMNI, 13:52:19 01/12/03 Sun
mp3 convert- www.musicmatch.com... you can find fruity loops and cool edit on kazaa or morpheus, or any other file sharing program... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 15:15:03 01/12/03 Sun
Yeah you can get everything off Kazaa even Soulseek if you have that (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:32:11 01/12/03 Sun
ok, that being said, you may now return to writing Mike Skinner love letters... after all, it's more of a restraining "suggestion" than an order, right? He'll love you back someday. Keep at it, slugger! (NT) -- INTOX, 21:39:03 01/12/03 Sun
.................................... -- VENOM AKA POISON, 01:14:45 01/13/03 Mon
DB Power Amp is a good converter too.. real easy to use.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:38:35 01/13/03 Mon
quick keystyle -- siic, 03:37:01 01/13/03 Mon
ummm, kinda simple for my taste but was able to follow the story. keep elevatin. Peace (NT) -- Lenzd1, 10:43:37 01/13/03 Mon
i likes..... (NT) -- styliztik....aka..quote, 12:47:27 01/13/03 Mon
Was kinda nice.. flowed pretty good.. maybe lines were toooo short, but that might be your style.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:01:54 01/13/03 Mon
story was cool and a guess it flowed well but it just wasn't my style. that's me you do you, stay up. (NT) -- starks, 13:25:03 01/13/03 Mon
*****************FUK em/IT**************** the upcoming solo track from yours truly -- styliztik.....aka...quote, 22:37:23 01/12/03 Sun
I DON"T KNOW DAWG, I"M NOT REALLY FEELING THIS (NT) -- VENOM AKA POISON, 01:09:25 01/13/03 Mon
id rather hear this in audio...whats the point of posting the text...no ones gonna feel it the same anyway... (NT) -- INTRO, 01:55:28 01/13/03 Mon
aight -- siic, 04:24:49 01/13/03 Mon
not bad but flow could have been tighter, might sound better on audio. keep up, Peace (NT) -- LenzD1, 10:52:23 01/13/03 Mon
I thought this was pretty good for text, but im gonna wait for the audio.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 13:11:40 01/13/03 Mon
real emkeez ha ha -- treyz-wan fka novice, 12:10:58 01/10/03 Fri
It's not that Cold up here you know. (laughing) (NT) -- Brail, 12:22:26 01/10/03 Fri
Haha at brail.. You tell that hoser ey? This was pretty wack id say.. (NT) -- ====||Swords--->, 14:40:16 01/10/03 Fri
I don;t know what to tell you man PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:47:11 01/11/03 Sat
that shit is week but keep written (NT) -- csc, 12:10:21 01/13/03 Mon
Tha Confused,....KeyStyle -- Prozperous of SMP/ArmadA, 00:52:43 01/12/03 Sun
i like this ,, it flows well strong multi's (NT) -- da mad hermit, 02:31:30 01/12/03 Sun
your flow was good but there is improvement to be done here good try though -- rusty, 05:16:02 01/12/03 Sun
This shit was tight, I liked that line Went from a basket case , encased in a casket of flames, don't why really, but it stuck like elmer, keep rising 1 (NT) -- Grotesque, 05:28:02 01/12/03 Sun
definitly liked the word play. nice text connection keep up peace (NT) -- starks, 16:23:59 01/12/03 Sun
Nic elfow and word play was hot.......keep it coming......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:49:01 01/12/03 Sun
yeah yeah captured my mood right now to (NT) -- treyz-wan fka noivice, 21:27:00 01/12/03 Sun
either im dumb, or i didnt know where the fuk u were comin from.....this was i guess straight spittage, not conventional tho...i like the wordplay, n punches, but this shit was too deep for me (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 22:55:17 01/12/03 Sun
that shit was sick dawg, keep writen (NT) -- csc, 11:40:19 01/13/03 Mon
You are a fudgitive wanted by the government for assainating the secritary of defense. they turned your family members and friends against you. They're hot on your tail. Who can you trust? Where can you go? Do they catch you?..........THIS IS JUST A LIL TOPICAL SPIT !!!!!! Ending is a lttle bit abrupt but its aiight.......see what you think.........PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:57:49 01/12/03 Sun
yeah its bullshit to hide behind religions to justify murder or whatever other actions boneheads enact in the Name of their God...this was nice tho...well written ...pz... (NT) -- INTRO of abzent minded, 18:50:13 01/12/03 Sun
someone shot rumsfeld? -- INTOX, 21:46:14 01/12/03 Sun
ummm....this was ill....i liked the wordplay, flow was liquid, and message was presented and felt....nicq (NT) -- styliztik....aka....quote, 22:45:11 01/12/03 Sun
NICE STYLE I LIKE THIS DAWG KEEP IT UP....WORD (NT) -- VENOM AKA POISON, 01:10:43 01/13/03 Mon
pretty tight....interesting flow... -- siic, 04:26:32 01/13/03 Mon
I'm starting a series called Hard Hitters....Trying to elevate from my last post...so here Hard Hitters num1 -- Grotesque, 05:22:44 01/12/03 Sun
s**t, this by far was one of da best spit on here so far , i like your shit dawg -- rusty, 05:42:05 01/12/03 Sun
honestly not really feeling this. you got potential but you need to focus your thoughts on one thing and go with it . you were all over the place with this (NT) -- starks, 16:27:09 01/12/03 Sun
I was feeling some of this but it seemed like a half a$$ed key to me.....but if your new to this then it was aiight...just keep elevating with yer scripts......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:44:18 01/12/03 Sun
shit was coo, a lil basic tho (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 22:52:31 01/12/03 Sun
NICE -- VENOM AKA POISON, 01:15:49 01/13/03 Mon
lil keystyle I call The infiltration -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:42:49 01/11/03 Sat
this was ehh...kinda simplistic in some parts..bnot bad over all... (NT) -- Prozperous, 00:31:29 01/12/03 Sun
right not bad overall, i think you should tightin up some of your lines. some weren't that good (NT) -- da mad hermit, 02:16:37 01/12/03 Sun
yeah ok -- rusty, 05:20:54 01/12/03 Sun
To me this shit was aight it had it's uppers and downers, 1 line I really liked was It ain't funny so I don't laugh when I'm forced to toe tag, ill line, keep rising 1 (NT) -- Grotesque, 05:31:57 01/12/03 Sun
not bad. at least your lines were more than 3 words long. proper post dog keep it coming (NT) -- starks, 16:33:33 01/12/03 Sun
facts remain like false pride and big chains/...................wha????????...u need to focus on punches dawg, since thats where u need the most pin pointin (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 22:59:15 01/12/03 Sun

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