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CLOSED~*~

The Birth Of Kataklysm, The Newest Crew To Join The Lounges Hierarchy
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Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:48:52 01/20/03 Mon
- Don't delete this, I responded to posts with my name (NT) -- �r�il:The√�s��η�rψ of Κa�a�l�zm, 12:52:22 01/20/03 Mon
- oh no...it's begun...a new crew...im fuckin shaking...haha, well this was nicely done, i knew eventually the four up and comers would unite in an alliance, i just didnt know when...but seriously, dont hype this shit out as much as you did, i mean if it was an AUDIO collabo like Abzent Minded did last time, i could see hype, but a basic text collabo announcing your a crew? yawn...well good luck to yas, all of ya, hopefully yours will stand the test of time... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 12:56:07 01/20/03 Mon
- very nicely done....all came good....like xitizen said.....try to hype up a text collab too much....still overall it was nice...good luck wit ya crew (NT) -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 13:22:31 01/20/03 Mon
- another crew in the lounge..hopefully this one will last ..just dont recruit warchild..then the crew will go downhill ..anywayz..this was nicely put together..would be nice if eventually all ya'll turn into audio heads..would hype things up more..nice flow and shyt from everyone..good lucks wit da crew... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL ...Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productionz...HahaHah!, 14:55:23 01/20/03 Mon
- I remember the time when you'd have to go through Bennidiction to get a crew in the Lounge... (NT) -- ..., 15:08:14 01/20/03 Mon
- finally,a new crew....this shit was tight...all of u came nicely...i figured JRock and Sleepy would eventually start a crew or be in one together....heh...like everyone else said...hopefully u guys last longer than other crews...1ne (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 15:27:26 01/20/03 Mon
- Hmm took me forever to get through the first two cuz the flow was so jerky.. LAst 2 were smooth.. Next time you do a long collabo try to maintain your fluidity through the whole thing.. it'll make it much better to read.. The content in this was real tight tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:41:06 01/20/03 Mon
- yea, this was pretty sik...Agreed with Swords on the fluid part, but overall this was Ill...very nice content displayed...this should be a strong crew...i see Brail holding yall together strong in the long run...dont know why i said that, but i unno....keep dropping yall...peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 15:58:01 01/20/03 Mon
- Nice......y'all should try and drop some auds eventually.....but on a text level you all have real nice talent.......lets look forward to some decent work.... good luck on the crew thing.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:39:22 01/20/03 Mon
- I had a feeling this would happen...good luck...go start trouble and win or your gonna be Mendacious Prophets Part II...unless your just hear to hang out and give each daps on your text posts...do some audios...challenge some fuckas...tell them they suck and attack them like kamikaze terrorists...DO AUDIOS... (NT) -- INTRO of AM, 22:01:01 01/20/03 Mon
- fuck text, this was pointless, work on audios (NT) -- //Trojohn\\, 23:13:24 01/20/03 Mon
- you guys should join forces with lyrikil and set up a 800 man text collab (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:56:21 01/20/03 Mon
- LOl -- willsty, 13:31:10 01/23/03 Thu
DLUSIONAL BEING HIS CRAZY SELF..RHYMING OVER THE COLLEGE GAMEDAY INTRO THEME SONG USING MASCOTS AS THE SUBJECT..THEN SWITCHING IT OVER TO DO A RHYME BOUT SPORTSCENTER..THIS IS STRICTLY FOR ENTERTAINMENT..FUK A FLOW AND WORDPLAY ON THIS SHYT..JUST PEEP AND ENJOY.. -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...wheelchairs? ..yea..i could rhyme bout dat.., 14:36:35 01/21/03 Tue
nice idea man.. I felt what was going on.. trojan line was dope.. pretty nice shit man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:48:48 01/21/03 Tue
lmaoo this shyt was mad funnie...cornhuskers,tar heel,and buck eye lines were my favorite...had to volume up all da way and that chris berman "whoooop" scared da shyt out of me haha....it's funny da audio u did fuckin around had da best flow i've heard from u lol...one luv for Dick Shaap R.I.P......(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Rich Eisen of da lounge, 14:49:09 01/21/03 Tue
horrible horrible.. wtf man.. this has seriously gotta be the most corniest thing Ive heard online since I've been peeping audios ONLINE.. pathetic.... (NT) -- Morbid Armor, 14:57:10 01/21/03 Tue
THAT'S RIGHT TAR HEELS! WHOO! Erm...nm. Funny shit...I was gonna do something like that, but...not sports like...maybe if I have time, I'll drop it. Good shit. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, the EPIC of Kataclyzm, 15:00:28 01/21/03 Tue
well.....I found it comical but I dunno if that is a good or bad thing.....hummm......I dont understand a lot of tha jokes cus Im from tha UK.......but I got the jist of it......could have been done better......but I dunno if its meant to be THAT serious !!!!!...lmao.......C R A Z Y (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:08:46 01/21/03 Tue
ehhh... not really feeling this... u should have done this over real beats... sound quality was a major flaw too.. just my opinion (NT) -- GuTTy, 18:14:03 01/21/03 Tue
LOL you're crazy man.. yeah shoulda been done over a real beat..itda been dope if there was a drum beat that went with songs but oh well.. haha.. reminds me of when i made a beat out of the austin powers theme song and the power rangers one.. lmaooo those are hilarious..anyways, drop some real shit.. nice lines though, but you need the text for them.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:03:08 01/22/03 Wed
i think the writing was good...some witty stuff in here...i dont think the way you layed it in audio form worked tho...that shit should be sampled and looped OVER a beat so you can know when to start and stop your flow plus it gives the listener somethin to bounce their head to...i dunno...crits can be helpful or just deflating depending on your ego...just keep pluggin away and listen to yourself...try and create shit you would think was dope if you heard it but had NO IDEA who made it...gl...pz... (NT) -- INTRO abzent minded, 01:43:55 01/22/03 Wed
yeah definatly feelin this shit ....some sick similies... u definately know how to spit your shit (NT) -- Native Brute, 08:32:14 01/23/03 Thu
My understanding on overstanding of creation and creating.. the since of matters is mostly misunderstood.. yet to try is the first step to failure.. so in turn thinking would only result in insainity.. so my brothers and sisters just know what is present and never look for truth because truth is always evident..there-for it in front of you at all times.. just be.. exist! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" Feat. Warpath, Eminent, Horrid, and ELaSTiCs, 15:04:56 01/21/03 Tue
Nice........real strong imagery here....nice word usage and flow......hey you should peep mah audio^^^ PATH cus you might like that.....PeAcE tho and good work (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 16:13:12 01/21/03 Tue
WHAT THE FUCK IS THE DIZZEAL!?!??!!!!!.....man you need to get at me (wordy48214@yahoo.com)....iight....back to the flow....niceness I see sh!t aint changed you still spittin that real shit....had me hooked from the opening lines all the way through......get at ya boy..peace (NT) -- WORDS, 16:31:44 01/21/03 Tue
Aint seen you post in a long minute.. aint lost a step.. this is standard Pathologist brain food for the kiddies.. A nice read as always.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:58:42 01/22/03 Wed
(((AUDIO BATTLE)))SWORDS vs VISUAL OPTIKSThis is from a diff site.. How he got even 2 votes, i dunno..But peep it, my shit's quality, heh.. -- ===||Swords--->, 00:33:26 01/22/03 Wed
well i peeped urs already..before u posted..i'm cool like dat lol..jk..dat shyt u said bout his name before u started spittin had me rollin...golden glove line was mad funny 2..alot of lines had me rollin..u've elevated on punches..flow was nice..u got into it and shyt.and hyped up while spittin..beat was unusual..not my kinda thing..but its all good..other dude had to many clips..and they werent even funny..anwayz..swords..u know u got this..lol.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL....Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I....Proud Sponsor of Da D-luSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 00:52:39 01/22/03 Wed
"Attention"...Some body driving a 73 Monza sittin on 21in hubcapps......Ya shitts being Towed..........{Feel OV@ in FuLl ThroTtEl} -- OV@....."WahTcHut@WkiNboUtWyLliZ", 17:31:55 01/21/03 Tue
damn look how gully you done got.. lol.. I can't say I was really feeling the style in text.. prolly dope in audio.. peace sun! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:15:09 01/21/03 Tue
Gangsta Gangsta lol.. Yeah im with path on this one.. I could listen to it in audio, and enjoy it more.. but this was still a nice read, at least you make it interesting.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:41:50 01/22/03 Wed
Damn!! its been FOREVER since I been in here! Whats up Lounge.. how everybodies NEW YEAR? I'm rusty as shit taking care of my seed.. yall peep it out and be safe.. Whats up SUNSET? FLY? TOX? WORDSMITH? DAMN TO MANY TO SHOT OUT... PEACE LOUNGE!! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:27:14 01/21/03 Tue
yea..u rusty lol...welcome back i guess..maybe the lounge could come back alive since another vet is back..flow was pretty coo..some lines i wasnt feelin but nice read nonetheless... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL....Official Sponsor of Da Dlusional Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 14:41:58 01/21/03 Tue
OK..........humm some of this I was feeling....but it was a bit loose....definetly talent there.....keep writing man....PEACE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:25:02 01/21/03 Tue
I am History -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:32:03 01/21/03 Tue
were you mentioning that people don't know Jesus real birthday in that one part.. if you were I give you real props on that knowledge.. over all I dug this .. pretty good shit man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:31:26 01/21/03 Tue
Still coming down from the lyrical high yo! Deep spit very well done again Brail PEACE (NT) -- PAt D.A.W.G, 16:04:09 01/21/03 Tue
NEW POST!!!!!!!.....just finished writin...."The Grace of Failures"....one of my best works...packed wit stimulatin rhymes, engulfin the essence of the art of hiphop.....ENJOY!!!!! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:18:28 01/20/03 Mon
From what I read was straight but make it into bars not paragraphs I learned that shit real fast.peace.. (NT) -- mike, 17:32:36 01/20/03 Mon
damn, this shit was sik...kinda long, but well worth the read...damn, glad to see you got it like this man..you came ill, now its time for you and ya crew to drop some audios....im anticipating yall shit...its gonna be dope...just keep shining b...you got the skillz, pursue destiny within pen..stay up...PEACE` (NT) -- Essence.....AM, 17:56:23 01/20/03 Mon
Can we say long? well worth it though man nice ass post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:38:18 01/20/03 Mon
I thought you would of got more props for this sonn...which is a shame because it's ill and also your best work...maybe worth a repost in a grip for sleeping cats...very nice work...stay up (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ, 12:35:01 01/21/03 Tue
very vivid .. You thought this out as you wrote.. very nice man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:44:46 01/21/03 Tue
i was going to wait till tommorrow to post this, but fuck it.....*~*~AUDIO*~*~......i call it (DESTINY)....peep and leave some feedback....PEACE -- Essence....AM, 17:41:51 01/20/03 Mon
yea man, peeped this early man, good lookin out giving me the link to this earlier, loved your switch up style wise, good to see others trying new things, very strong work man, nice beat, deep lyrics, good stuff man, nice seein ya with back on the audios Essence... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:06:15 01/20/03 Mon
i like the beat, but its a little TOO mellow for me...ya flow is getting better, but you were off some...dog you gotta do something more hype man, i have not heard anything hype from you at all...but nice to see you at them audios again, keep droppin em (NT) -- Vision....oh yea the singing was straight too, 18:13:36 01/20/03 Mon
You sound like Slug when you sing.. not a bad thing.. Beats tight, it remnds me of this Latin Freestyle song they used to play (All the asians in Cali love that shit lol..) But anyways, nice lyrics, i remember this key.. Flow is decent, woulda been way better if you wrote it to the beat tho.. at first i didnt know what that heartbeat thing was gonna be.. but the beat drops again.. its tight.. Nice audio man.. 1 (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:32:25 01/20/03 Mon
wzup wit the name of ur audio? destiny? sounds like a name of a stripper..lol..anywayz..the beat was nice..mellow stuff..made me wanna go to sleep considering i'm mad tired..oh shyt..u singing..lol.xitizen jr..flow was nice..chorus wasnt dat bad...nice audio...just do a hype one next time lol... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...no...i aint really on a wheelchair.., 20:33:09 01/20/03 Mon
this sounds like an r&b beat... im waiting for ashante... ur singing.. super... ok, u need a new mic... not a bad flow tho... cant hear some of ur shit, volume keeps going up and down.... but keep droppin.. peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:44:42 01/20/03 Mon
Im feeling this......oldskool type joint........got me thinking......your flow is a bit patchy and your levels vary.....but keep doing it and elevating.....PeACe (NT) -- Eternal Student, 14:12:23 01/21/03 Tue
damn it can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:12:28 01/21/03 Tue
YEA YEA..I'M BACK..POSTING A NEW AUDIO..BLAH BLAH BLAH...AINT HYPIN SHYT UP CUZ I'M RUSTY AND SHYT AND STILL GOT WORK TO DO ON MY MIC SKILLS...ITS ALL GOOD THOUGH..ANYWAYZ..FOR THOSE WHO CARE.I'M BACK..PEEP AUDIO AND REPLY WIT W/E THE FUK U WANT.. -- D-luSioNaL..yea..its me..the wheelchair guy..., 19:56:50 01/20/03 Mon
i like the beat....ya flow is getting better...not rusty, but you still do that fast spit then slow up at the last word thing every now and then...parts sounded nice with that choppy kinda flow, but others would of sounded better if you were more fluent into the next line....lyrics were nice, no real critique there...just keep workin with ya flow, it started out pretty good but then started back to that fast ish...got hard to understand what you were saying...stay with what you were doing at the beginning and elevate on that (NT) -- Vision, 20:13:35 01/20/03 Mon
Maybe you should of kept reading my post, not Bad but I wouldn't be too harsh about other people's post though (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:51:51 01/20/03 Mon
flow has improved, just needs to be polished, you sound much more comfortable on the mic, beat fit you will, lyrics from what i could pick up sounded dope, better than most of your audios, good effort Dlus... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 21:00:39 01/20/03 Mon
hmmm.. not bad... dope beat... u definetly say words too fast, its like i cant understand what u saying sometimes... but from what i remember, and improvement... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:38:35 01/20/03 Mon
i liked this audio...had some dope lines in it...beat was cool...flow is gettin better...it got a lil fast towards da end but i understood ur words newayz...i wanna hear some new AM collabs already yo...keep this shyt up...peace out u oriental urkel with carlton from fresh prince of bel air's wardrobe and samuel L jackson's hair from da movie 'unbreakable'...haha...1ne(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Robitussin fiend, 00:45:02 01/21/03 Tue
The flow was aight yeh.....i enjoyed it..lyrics were tight....words were mumbled though but yeh i enjoyed it...lyrics ya strong point huh! niceness though (NT) -- Truth, 06:05:05 01/21/03 Tue
I aint heard your audios before..Nice flow in areas and the lyrics were cool, you sounded quite relaxed which was good but I thought you could of come harder at certain points...but a good listen anyways peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 11:56:36 01/21/03 Tue
damn can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:50:33 01/21/03 Tue
New Audio......"Str8 Rappin" -- Truth, 06:10:21 01/21/03 Tue
Honestly I thought this was pretty good. Better than some I have heard. Flow was choppy at some parts but other than that it was straight. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:30:56 01/21/03 Tue
can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:32:59 01/21/03 Tue
shyt was buffering alot for me..so i didnt get to hear it str8 through and shyt but i did peep it all..hard to understand some of the things u were saying cuz of your accent..flow fell off at some points..beat was pretty coo..not bad..i'll try and peep a lil later to listen closer to see if i pick up on the shyt i couldnt understand..piece.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I....Proud Sponsor Of Da DluSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 14:48:37 01/21/03 Tue
Got a new job yall, been a minute, it's kind of sketchy but eh..... call it "Lanslide" PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:05:37 01/20/03 Mon
"I'm coming back to reallign these wheels.."..i honestly stopped reading after dat..didnt catch my attention.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..dlusional walk...sponsored by superman remote controlled wheelchairz.., 20:44:12 01/20/03 Mon
it was aight...but i dunno simplistic and been said before....the message cool.....maybe put a twist? i dunno it didnt really catch me either.....but could go on to be summin good (NT) -- Truth, 06:00:39 01/21/03 Tue
Try and flip the topic with some type of an angle or somehing. The more time you spend at you craft the better you'll become (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:37:58 01/21/03 Tue
this was speaking on the condition of hip hop on a off balanced stand-point.. I felt you man.. just keep writing.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:45:16 01/21/03 Tue
"Those who spoke on the Truth of this choked on their Eucharist"... (IN BAR FORM)... delete the shit below, Stice... -- INTOX, 20:27:40 01/20/03 Mon
i felt like i was reading a hexagon verse for some reason..some parts i understood perfectly..others just a lil lost..cant really see i feel ya on wat ur saying..considering i didnt understand 100% of it..dope though how u dropped ur thoughts like this..keep droppin..maybe when it read it again a lil bit later i'll undderstand it.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...i got wheelchair people doing the dlusional walk.., 20:39:57 01/20/03 Mon
this was complex and thought provoking as hell...flowed nice as hell too...i couldnt tell if you were questioning God or questioning people who look to him...i prolly missed the message on alot of this though...different side of you Intox, did not think you ever delved this deep...would like to see more of these tastes from you...outstanding work from what i picked up... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 21:07:28 01/20/03 Mon
This doesnt really surprise me from you...you seem like the kinda person who can write like this (not that i would know you from a hole in the wall) but this was a really nice read...flowed sick as usual...youre good at speaking in multis...ok now excuse me while i go back to my laser disc and devil worship...pz donkey lips... (NT) -- INTRO from Camp Anawanna...we hold you in our hearts...and when we think about you it makes me wanna FART..."it's i hope we never part now get it right or pay the price!", 21:33:00 01/20/03 Mon
this was about my stance on organized religion... basically, I feel that it is a man-made institution and an arrogant one, at that. Humans are not the MOST important beings on Earth, they are just part of a larger entity in which all components are equal in importance, in terms of contribution to the whole of that larger entity. In other words, if humans vanished, the Earth would not cease to exist, nor would other forms of life. -- INTOX... peep for more, 00:09:05 01/21/03 Tue
i felt this.made you really look into it deep and made you had to think bout it proper...real nice flow was good aswell....i found it hard to understand some but i liked it a LOT -- Truth, 05:56:38 01/21/03 Tue
Some of this I understood, the rest I didn't comprehend. It flowed nice as hell though. Really feelin the opening line. Your second bit of commentary makes me think you've taken a few philosohphy courses (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:44:29 01/21/03 Tue
I wasn't sure exactly what your point was..but you made me think and that's why I liked it...it had nice multis too but some of the lines took a second reading so it was difficult to catch the flow in areas...but it was still intelligent and thought provoking and well worth a read...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:09:49 01/21/03 Tue
very well done TOX, you based alot of sense on what I already think.. I think you pulled this style off very good.. the cross.. is pagon.. I wonder if you know why I say so.. or if you even really care? lol.. but I give you props for your diversity.. peace dunny! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:40:35 01/21/03 Tue
For Faith...For Race...For Power...For Oil...brand new audio...the first since the tournament...***REIGN OF TERROR*** political ramblings and protests...onward to Iraq...praise Freedom of Speech... -- XitiZeN, 17:06:22 01/20/03 Mon
..i was gonna d/l this beat to use it on an upcoming audio..there goes dat idea..unless i do a remix or some shyt lol...nice lyrics ..flow was coo...the chorus was coo and all..just didnt like the way u said the chorus..dont know wat the fuk u were on when u did ur ending lol..keep droppin fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Originator of Da D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I., 17:22:14 01/20/03 Mon
sorry, can't peep audios (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:24:30 01/20/03 Mon
this was a very powerful post Xiti...feeling everything about it...you came very nice with the flow, and your content was superb...glad to see you dropping ill shit, and shining like this....you killed it man..absolutely...keep on.....PEACE (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:34:11 01/20/03 Mon
Lyrics were good.. flow nice for the most part, the chours flow was the best part to me.. Some words you stretched to fit the beat, but not too many.. Some parts your voice wavered too, which hurt your delivery... Beat is pretty tight, good selection.. LOL i agree with DL about the last part haha.. Decent drop.. worth a listen.. Oh yeah, ill go first on that Gutty collabo.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:01:38 01/20/03 Mon
ok.. this was kinda weird... content was good.. could work on quality... otherwise.. nice work (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:53:03 01/20/03 Mon
i like this, this was different but real good..keep up dude..holla at me (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 23:15:15 01/20/03 Mon
Beat is hot........your flow suits it well.........nice hook........reminded me of a 'Pschyco Realm' track........the last bit was doing mah brain in tho... apart from that .....good work.....pretty deep.......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 13:57:50 01/21/03 Tue
(((AUDIO))) BEAT IS MURDER!! "THE FIGHT SONG" I kill it... Drop a reply -- ===||Swords--->, 15:25:06 01/20/03 Mon
i tried to dl it, and it said 404 not found..we had this problem last time, but then it eventually worked...ill keep trying...peace... (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 15:47:08 01/20/03 Mon
I like it...it has a sick flow at the start and that's where the best lyrics were..the loop is nice and I like the double voiced parts..it gives it a good 'drama' ...nice audio peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:59:13 01/20/03 Mon
Yeeeeah.........thats better.........the levels are perfect on this one.......nice lyrics and flow.....beats tight too.........nice work.......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 16:47:08 01/20/03 Mon
alot of adlibs ...some were off..sounded like an echo adlib..wasnt feeling dat..beat is mos def nice..props on dat..lyrics were nice as well as flow...overall good audio..just a few adlibs were kinda ehh 2 me..nice shyt though..and the voice and volume was exactly right ..i been peeping ur latest audios and the beat seemed louder then ur voice which made it hard to hear..dont know if dats cuz i'm peepin it on Lo Fi..but it was perfect now..keep droppin fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL Da Originator of Da D-luSioNaL Walk..Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions .., 17:00:18 01/20/03 Mon
sick man, im loving your style and voice on this one, just rippin your own beat...adlibs were nice at most times, loving how hype you are...damn, good work there Swords, we (i) need to get crackin on our comp audio... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 17:17:35 01/20/03 Mon
soundclick is doo doo... sorry.. i tried (NT) -- GuTTy.. i'm still a Yao Ming fan, 23:45:04 01/20/03 Mon
Living life on borrowed time CHI Style -- Mike, 17:13:17 01/20/03 Mon
ummm...."To Be Continued"?!?!?!......please just save us and yaself the trouble and DON'T continue it....this was weak as hell sonn...way too elementary (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:21:57 01/20/03 Mon
just elevate kid, youll see if you stik around what kind of shit lounge heads are on....just read a grip of posts and try and find what you like about them...then apply it to your style...stay up..peace (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:36:07 01/20/03 Mon
Elevate man, might make a better self poem instead MAYBE? (NT) -- Pat DA.W.G, 20:43:24 01/20/03 Mon
"Those who spoke on the Truth of this choked on their Eucharist"... this is some spoken word type shit. You may or may not take kindly to this... feedback APPRECIATED -- INTOX, 19:03:24 01/20/03 Mon
im sorry Intox, but i cannot read this...why would you of all people post in paragraph form? it blinded me as soon as i opened the thread... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 19:23:18 01/20/03 Mon
Deep on tha mental plain, nice post (NT) -- Pat DA.W.G, 20:40:22 01/20/03 Mon
Introverted diction exerted with acurate understandings...many words make up our lives, here are some taken from the excerts of My time embeded mind...PEACE -- Essence...........AM, 15:44:42 01/20/03 Mon
Content nice as usual but ehh im not feelin these types of posts right now.. I need some hardcore tear-heads-off type shti right now.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:48:09 01/20/03 Mon
gotta agree wit swords on dat need some hardcore ish lol..like right now i'm just not into the deep thought provokin type shyt..nonetheless..this was a nice post..flow is tight..and the way u express shyt is dope...when da fuk u gonna do an audio u ass engineer... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Da Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions.., 17:07:22 01/20/03 Mon
yo this was pretty nice...flow was good for the most part, some lines seemed a lil choppy though...rhymes were nice and content was good...nice job at expressin yaself...just nothin that really stood out to me here...butoverall it's good...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 17:07:55 01/20/03 Mon
gotta agree wit swords on dat need some hardcore ish lol..like right now i'm just not into the deep thought provokin type shyt..nonetheless..this was a nice post..flow is tight..and the way u express shyt is dope...when da fuk u gonna do an audio u ass engineer... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Da Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions.., 17:09:06 01/20/03 Mon
very positive and powerful expression of thoughts, the standard Essence i've come to expect from your posts, feelin that audio you gave me even more though...post that man... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 17:13:04 01/20/03 Mon
LUNAR -- RAIF, 12:26:28 01/20/03 Mon
LMMFAO This cat threw a chorus in after droppin SIX bars. (NT) -- Brail, 12:58:14 01/20/03 Mon
"Im the man who's got the honies with the nice tits and ass man"...hahaha wtf ? must peep! (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:20:05 01/20/03 Mon
honestly...seek another hobby or something..cuz this rhyming stuff aint for you..a chorus for a text drop? not to mention..a SHORT text drop..this is sad..shyt like this makes me think twice about respecting everyone who is in hip hop.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL Da Orginator Of Da D-lusional Walk ...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I Productionz..HaHaHa!, 14:59:12 01/20/03 Mon
LMFAO hahaha...holy shyt...this was FUCKIN WAAACKKK lmaoo....i think Puffy is startin another hip hopp group...go try out....lol..GOD DAMN U SUCK..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe.....lmaoo haha, 15:31:21 01/20/03 Mon
LMFAO.. Does Kris-Kross make you jump? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:44:40 01/20/03 Mon
LMAO!!!!! (like everyone else).......Sonn, Step away from the Pen and Paper, before ya hurt yaself...hahahaha (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 16:31:28 01/20/03 Mon
a lil something to see if ya'll are feelin me. kinda of a different flow. PEEP -- STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 15:15:44 01/19/03 Sun
This was kind of short and the flow was hard to catch. A couple of nice lines here and there (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:30:21 01/19/03 Sun
in case you were wondering, I wouldn't do some corny shit like leave "youd like to know" as my name... so that was not me (NT) -- INTOX, 09:59:41 01/20/03 Mon
It's alright -- Mike, 01:12:02 01/20/03 Mon
It's alright, seemed like you didn't have the greatest focus in the rhyme though (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 10:58:00 01/20/03 Mon
!!!!!AUDIO!!!!!....repost........old Abzent Minded collab...Vision and Dialect....."Heated Conversation"......peep and enjoy....jus some older shit for the new cats to peep... -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 14:41:09 01/19/03 Sun
Beat is nice, the first dudes flow was nice, second dude came correct too. (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:34:37 01/19/03 Sun
yeah shit was coo......beat was nice.....visions flow could have been tighter....dialect shit was tight... (NT) -- styliztik.....aka,,,,quote, 22:13:49 01/19/03 Sun
damn,...the only thing I wanted to peep here today and I couldn't...'figures. (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:10:29 01/20/03 Mon
Listened to this yesterday, was feelin it in every aspect. peace (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 10:53:31 01/20/03 Mon
Not sure about this one.So tell me. Its called "Rap fiend" -- Tactics, 14:47:19 01/18/03 Sat
ehh....not that good...actually not good at all...oh yeah..Kurt Cobain was on heroine,not cocaine..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 01:52:13 01/19/03 Sun
this post was not that good, the concept was tight, but your lines just didn't line up, it stryggled to rhyme, the good thing about was the kurt kobain line, it was aight tho, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 12:59:26 01/19/03 Sun
its aight -- Ben, 13:55:36 01/19/03 Sun
what is wrong with you people who don't understand the "3 replies rule"...DELETE this wack shit (NT) -- MikMaQ, 04:58:39 01/20/03 Mon
that was aight still, need to work on the rhymin though, tight storyline (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 08:12:01 01/20/03 Mon
Tell me wat yall think bout diz... -- Ben, 13:42:02 01/19/03 Sun
very simplistic....u needa elevate alil more kid...throw some knowledge in ya rhyme scheme.....u needa spit non played shit..."sting like a buble bee"... ??? (NT) -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 14:43:22 01/19/03 Sun
yeah like dialect said above, way to simplistic. definitely need to step it up.but keep postin and peeping other posts and you'll do fine. (NT) -- starks, 15:18:36 01/19/03 Sun
This wasn't very good, but don't get discouraged, take it all in stride one step at a time, elevation will occur if you devote the proper time (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:37:34 01/19/03 Sun
reminds of what J was saying about "doctor suess"...hahaha whatever dude (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:06:57 01/20/03 Mon
The Drunk off of a 6 pack of Natural Ice keystyle I call "My Life" -- Grotesque, lounging waiting for the buccs and eagles game, 12:45:40 01/19/03 Sun
ILLMATIC!!! -- Bianca, 13:45:03 01/19/03 Sun
hott shyt -- Ben, 13:50:58 01/19/03 Sun
honestly......this flowed sick as fuck...i like this....real issue type shit.....keep em comin (NT) -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 14:45:35 01/19/03 Sun
proper post....nothing real catchy but the message was recieved....keep postin (NT) -- starks, 15:21:44 01/19/03 Sun
I liked this one -- Mike, 01:26:18 01/20/03 Mon
(((AUDIO)))JUSTICE AND VENGEANCE...The Epic.. -- ===||Swords--->, 12:59:46 01/18/03 Sat
*listening* ..this is nice, dope beat ill flow, ... it would be nice to read the lyrics with it,..like the double tracked parts,,it's nice where the beat stops and you keep flowing..yeah it's dope nice drop peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 13:10:13 01/18/03 Sat
beat is nice... lots of things going on in it but i like it... your flow is good, but you're a little hard to understand at times... damn this shit is long, lyrics would have been nice coz its hard to follow... overall i liked it tho, you sound more comfortable on this one than usual... good drop...peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 13:31:08 01/18/03 Sat
agree about tha lyrics being posted but i like tha flow and tha beat....ill drop. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 17:34:21 01/18/03 Sat
This is aiight man......keep working on your delivery....because you use a lot of words your annunciation needs to be spot on....but this is tight tho......good lyrics.....the break in the beat is when your lyrics sound the best (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 19:40:04 01/18/03 Sat
Swords the beat was ill as fuc, your vocals were on point but I would like it better if you posted them along with your post, because sometimes I can't understand you, but if not your shits still ill, Keep On and on and on shit was llooonnnnggggg (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:05:27 01/19/03 Sun
this was very nice...nice beat yo...flow was nice....pronounced some words odd....buit still nice (NT) -- -��`�...��`Dialec� of A.M.��`�...��`�-, 14:51:54 01/19/03 Sun
The combination of Knowledge and clever wordplay combined............... Word usage like Confucious mind as sharp as Lucifer's -- Brail Optiks...........TOX......E-mail's there if you still wanna get at me about a collabo, 11:16:22 01/17/03 Fri
you got a mic? (NT) -- INTOX, 11:49:12 01/17/03 Fri
Nah I don't have a mic, haven't got to the audio stage yet (NT) -- Brail, 18:22:52 01/17/03 Fri
nice post kidd,..some real good similies on display here. The flow was tight too and some strong visuals come into play.Good drop and a nice read...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ and drop me some mail, tell me where shit's at, 12:20:53 01/17/03 Fri
Those long i's got my head spinnin, but you came strong with this. Those similes just caught me off guard, they were so good. Keep that shit up. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, 12:34:58 01/17/03 Fri
this was pretty dope... for text..lol flowed pretty well, liked the word play in this.. good job (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:26:18 01/17/03 Fri
Brail.....you have mastered the flow and your lines are dope "With my mind in kind alignment I shine like grinded diamonds" but I think you NEED to get recording some of this....FOR REAL (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:38:09 01/17/03 Fri
this shit is hot, the posts ive read from you show great diveristy in style and subject. and you've shown a shitload of talent on all your posts (NT) -- da mad hermit, 14:44:55 01/17/03 Fri
ill shit.<---------------not much else to say about it. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:20:22 01/17/03 Fri
Yes...... really good.One of the better one ive heard in here (NT) -- Tactics, 15:01:16 01/18/03 Sat
your living with the sims -- da mad hermit, 19:37:15 01/17/03 Fri
i don't see much of a concept but it was a nice flow. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:12:01 01/17/03 Fri
the title had me confused...I agree with BaZiC about the concept, the flow was nice in some areas and I think you could expand the lines a little ( some of these two liners could be one) but not bad, some decent vocab...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:55:05 01/18/03 Sat
Not really feelin this.. your multis dont work, cuz you're throwing in words that dont go together to make sense, but just to have the syllables in there.. like "My rotors shoulder odors"..?? Just dont do that and itll be straight.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:07:45 01/18/03 Sat
i dont know..........its just......hmmm...???its not bad not good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:57:24 01/18/03 Sat
lil keystyle,nothin big -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:08:14 01/17/03 Fri
I know this was a key...but I didn't realy feel it, it flowed alright but it didn't do much for me. nothing stood out...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 06:06:21 01/18/03 Sat
I liked it.. If the flow was better, itda been a real nice peice, but i dig the whole battle stance.. Keep droppin.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:04:24 01/18/03 Sat
nothing really stood out for me either.But it sounded good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:52:44 01/18/03 Sat
A keystlyle... because I haven't done one in a while...it's called "Ryhme disease"...please peep with imunity -- MikMaQ, 12:51:59 01/18/03 Sat
Im peeping, dont know if with immunity..Got better as it went on.. pretty tight piece.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:02:03 01/18/03 Sat
{{{AUDIO-INSTRUMENTAL}}} "FALLEN STAR" CHECK IT OUT... contact me for use or purchase -- GuTTy JaCoBz ... A.M., 14:29:55 01/17/03 Fri
Feelin the chorus part the most.. I like the main melody too, except those two rising piano keys.. they seem outta place.. I'da liked something of a lower key in there.. This is a nice beat never the less.. ida probly spit on it for that ccompilation if it was available back then.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:35:54 01/17/03 Fri
i can't check audios out (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:38:46 01/17/03 Fri
it's a pretty tight beat but nothin that i'd spit to tho. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:16:00 01/17/03 Fri
couldn't peep...program didn't support the protocol, whatever that means. (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:59:35 01/18/03 Sat
how to start a war -- con, 04:38:48 01/15/03 Wed
nice post son. definitely worth the read. peace. (NT) -- starks, 08:16:33 01/15/03 Wed
DAMN!!! this was a very ill read if not for flow then for content...I've started to notice this type of shit happening and the motives for it seem the same each time it's done: to bring the nation out of economic crisis, or at least pile all sorts of media "war coverage" over it so it goes unnoticed...illness guy... (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:21:25 01/15/03 Wed
I'm tired of war damn it...but this is exactly what Bush is doing...him and his shady ass brother....and he happens to be our governor...ain't that a bitch? Anyway....radio wise, probably wouldn't get play, but otherwise nice thoughts....had some powerful points in here but it's a bit boring...something like this I would have myself made it into a story-line....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:39:54 01/15/03 Wed
I'm tired of war damn it...but this is exactly what Bush is doing...him and his shady ass brother....and he happens to be our governor...ain't that a bitch? Anyway....radio wise, probably wouldn't get play, but otherwise nice thoughts....had some powerful points in here but it's a bit boring...something like this I would have myself made it into a story-line....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:56:12 01/15/03 Wed
i LIKED THE FLOW AND GOOD MESSAGE IN THE SONG (NT) -- FAROUK, 11:00:57 01/15/03 Wed
strong and powerful post, message truly there and felt, War is something that will never end, shits messed up, It's like do what america says or there will be war and they say this is a free country, anyways ill post, content was ill, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 11:37:32 01/15/03 Wed
damn.....yo....niggaz didnt give enough props.....can we have another round of appplause for the...CON......(((((CLAPPPPPING))))))....this was a great post......id copyright this shit dawg.....inspirational....fo real... (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 05:32:12 01/18/03 Sat
DOWN TO A SCIENCE AND I'M POUNCIN LIKE LIONS IF YOU ANNOUNCE AN OUNCE OF DEFIANCE-={AUDIO}=-Lemme know whatcha think??? -- Souliberty, 08:08:32 01/15/03 Wed
OOOPS THE HI-FI DON'T WORK!!! click in here fer the link... -- Souliberty, 08:10:19 01/15/03 Wed
whoooooooooooo......im FEELin this....fuk what anybody say...this was hot.....like that last line....look at my lips cuz my insides is fillin up.....HA....damn.....yo other than gettin ur voice levels equal to the beat or a smidgen more....this was liquid....loved (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 05:19:18 01/18/03 Sat
the beat has some suspense about it, uhm now you sound like an old head that used to be here....Magic....you should post the words once so we can actually read wtf you're talking about....this beat to me is not for you....not feelin the hook either......don't know...i don't want to be negative but I'm not feelin your flow....fast pace gets tiresome after a while unless you're listening to someone like Twister.....or my homegirl AthenA for that matter at least we understand them occassionally.....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 09:34:23 01/15/03 Wed
Yo soul I'm peeping right now it's just my media playa is mad slow, it buffers for like mad long so I'll leave my fee when it's done buffering (NT) -- Grotesque, 11:32:01 01/15/03 Wed
Im not liking this beat at all..Sounds WAYYYYY too "CASIO" for me.. Not liking your flow on this.. Your flow is way off.. its like youre going off beat but covering it up by going so fast... Dope Multis tho heh.. Lyrics were good, i just wish you would make them more understandable by slowing it down.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:27:13 01/15/03 Wed
Attention: There is a hot pink 1985 cadillac with two donuts, three broken windows, and five tickets illegally parked outside of the lounge..Oh yeah keystyle..One Hun'ed -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 21:23:19 01/16/03 Thu
this was nice...the flow was ill and there was some real nice lines...I liked the one about the "clowns" most ...nice drop , peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 03:56:51 01/17/03 Fri
haha, ill imagery in this and the vocab was sick but the flow was hard to catch, I caught it, but it was hard...nice shit, piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:10:52 01/17/03 Fri
Ay yo I liked this one........had some nice multis and some real nice lines....Keep doin what you do. (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:29:44 01/17/03 Fri
aight, this was cool.. but where are ya audios?? u haven't made in in months, but u always asking to use beats and whatnot..lol drop an audio.. even a short one.. text is so 1999..lol (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:36:26 01/17/03 Fri
well done, i agree with above i liked the clown line. (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:51:40 01/17/03 Fri
Text}~'(Project Redeemer)'~{Peep -- Souliberty & Mahatma, 08:56:02 01/17/03 Fri
I'm soory dawg ...maybe it's the light in this room but I can hardly see that...peace (NT) -- MIkMaQ, 09:22:00 01/17/03 Fri
This was pretty nice. storytellin was on point and the imagry was intense. Keep doin what yo doin (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:21:25 01/17/03 Fri
This was good....Really good. Just short of great, in my opinion. I think I just got confused as time went on. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, 12:38:49 01/17/03 Fri
word.. i cant even see this... post this up in a easier to read font color and i'll peep.. long as fuck too..lol (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:31:43 01/17/03 Fri
reposted fer those who're blind as bats...CLICK HERE!!! -- Souliberty, 16:10:45 01/17/03 Fri
this post was tight, strong story telling and it was well written. interested in why you chose that subject. well done (NT) -- da mad hermit, 19:45:10 01/17/03 Fri
(((AUDIO))) ITTTTTTTTTTS NOWWWWW OVAAAAAAAA............Collab with davictor -- ===||Swords--->, 13:48:53 01/16/03 Thu
my bad.. didnt know this would post twice.. delet the other one.. (NT) -- swords, 13:53:23 01/16/03 Thu
Hey yo your vocals sounded better on this......nice lil verse too........it was straight ....other kid's killing it tho....heat......his flow is ill......over all a nice audio.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student(UK), 15:14:31 01/16/03 Thu
DOPE....a lil shorter than usual, but yall both came ill..haha...his new fan...naw, just kid has skillz....you came nice too Swords, vocals were louder which made it sik....keep droppin like you always do...payce (NT) -- S-ENSE....AM, 16:10:22 01/16/03 Thu
It comes on ill ass hell...WTF...not feeling the first guys delivery...aight lyrics...TheThe second guy sounded tight needs a new mic....could've been better ...but it was tight (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 21:32:46 01/16/03 Thu
Nice lyrics and I really like the beat and that crazy flow just before it finnished ...some words I couldn't make out like they were slurred or something...the beat was banging though, nice drop Peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 04:57:12 01/17/03 Fri
hmm the beat started out ill but got REAL wierd when the verses dropped, yer words are a whole lot easier to hear on this tho, DAMN!!!! the victa flow is sick!!! but 'it's now ova so... nice drop, short but sweet, piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:02:54 01/17/03 Fri
I'm lovin the voice sample and the beat. You slowed you're flow down a little which makes it easier to understand what you're saying. The second dude slaughtered the beat. I mean his flow was homicidal. This was nice, keep doin what you doin (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 11:41:47 01/17/03 Fri
i peeped this yesterday... who made the beat? pretty tight work... swords.. i dunno i've heard better from you.. just seems like u weren't 100% into this... the other dude came crazy hype.. a lil loud.. but he was pretty nice... overall good work.. peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 14:33:48 01/17/03 Fri
Beat was mine.. i thought i said that.. whoops.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:29:29 01/17/03 Fri
Last words -- Tactics, 13:08:29 01/16/03 Thu
I could tell this shit was deep, damn sorry to hear that, this was from the heart so I relly can't come correct, all I can say is "keep on" (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:29:35 01/16/03 Thu
Nice Display of creativity! if you fixed the misspelt words it'da been better.... But still pretty dope, feelin the concept.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:06:02 01/16/03 Thu
This is just what i would say if i died today.Its ment to be deep but not that deep(its not a cry for help or anything)..Say what you gotta say.Just dont be brutal..(sorry if thats spelled wrong swords lol) (NT) -- Tactics, 14:26:27 01/16/03 Thu
deep shit sonn,...message definately felt. this was wierd because it didn't rhyme but it flowed nice as hell, a strange scheme you have here but the content was nice...100 (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:48:18 01/17/03 Fri
the flow was real easy to catch and some of the words you rhymed were real origional, this is mosdef a heartfelt piece, not any of that high as a kite keystyle shit but true feeling and emotion...piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 09:07:20 01/17/03 Fri
PEEP The art of spitting aka making it look easy -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:17:56 01/15/03 Wed
"filled the bowl deep wit corrosive explosives and within a breath i lit it" this was the illest line I saw based on the multi's and near perfect flow, the rest of the rhyme sorta switched between realy dope flow and a couple bars that threw it off, sylibles are important, but all in all the imagery and the multi's made this a good read... (NT) -- Souliberty, 06:37:30 01/16/03 Thu
good rhymes. but just didnt get into it (NT) -- Tactics, 13:20:14 01/16/03 Thu
my mouths on fire, ill shit, that corrosive line stuck out to me too, nice post, no downers here, Keep On (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:38:08 01/16/03 Thu
yeah one or two nice lines...bullshit flow, no offence kidd but your lines are too long,..it hits nice on that already mentioned line and also the "dipicted written lyrics" line was tight...fix the flow and it's dope...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 06:06:39 01/17/03 Fri
-={TEXT COLLAB}=-Cult Phenomenon-={PEEP}=- -- Souliberty & Dockspitz, 06:33:18 01/16/03 Thu
Sounds preety good.Where you guys from (NT) -- Tactics, 13:14:02 01/16/03 Thu
shit was pretty ill, content was hellah ill, I liked the subject, nice thoughts, nice length, nutin bad about this post,Keep On (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:34:22 01/16/03 Thu
Wasnt Dockspitz the kid that kid that got kiced outta enemiez for biting? like one of his names? i dunno.. Aight now for this.. mulits nice on the first one but lines way too long..content pretty cool.. i used to be more into this kinda stuff.. i liked 2nd verse tho.. dope flow and content.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:10:35 01/16/03 Thu
Hey, Im feeling this text right here......nice wordplay in the second and conecpts birthed from both were tight (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 19:25:58 01/16/03 Thu
the vocab and usage were good but I didn't feel the content...i think you both left the topic to talk about how dope you are...some lines were kinda blah, but some were nice the first cat came nicer but the second had a nicer flow...decent..peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:58:18 01/17/03 Fri
Song titled "Were all Different" ain't finished it yet, but heres a sneak -- Grotesque, 13:43:10 01/16/03 Thu
First verse = good.. Second Verse = not so good.. Flow was nice on the first one.. second verse was all over the place.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:02:45 01/16/03 Thu
It's like I can imagine you thinking.."now what rhymes with that?" ...and just selecting the first thing that you think of. The vocab was kinda drab and elementary and the first verse bored into not reading, but the flow was cool and that is something to build on ...keep writing Peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:40:20 01/17/03 Fri
keystyle...*They call it Destiny*....random acts of the mind....embeded threwout eons of time....PEACE -- Essence...Abzent Minded..., 16:42:21 01/15/03 Wed
This shit was ill, I liked that whole atlas hit, damn content was there, nice 1, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 17:45:17 01/15/03 Wed
Yo that was EPIC Lounge shitt.... (NT) -- OV@...yo this is OLD LOUNGE TYPE SHIT...some AGEL FIRE Lounge type shitt..Take em back DUHNN..Holla, 18:19:44 01/15/03 Wed
that's what i'm talikin about. pure fire. nice read. and keep em coming like porn stars fuckin 500 dudes in a row (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:33:49 01/15/03 Wed
Ehh i think we can do without Starks's punches.. You're always on some other shit.. pretty tight tho.. a decent read.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:13:20 01/16/03 Thu
anybody need beats? -- synical, 18:57:58 01/15/03 Wed
I do.. But then i make em.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 19:10:50 01/15/03 Wed
warchild does.. he said holla at him.. his addy is ihavenofriends@kmart.net (NT) -- GuTTy, 01:02:18 01/16/03 Thu
I'd actually hafta KNOW if you make ill beats or not...you got a soundclick or d music with that shit on it? (NT) -- Souliberty, 06:38:47 01/16/03 Thu
yeah ill take some.........Where can i find a 6 pin midi plug to hook my keyboard up to my cpu (NT) -- Tactics, 13:24:50 01/16/03 Thu
Who Needs A Hook? 3 MINUTES OF SPITTIN PeeP & Critique Me Please!!! -- Souliberty, 15:32:44 01/14/03 Tue
ITS XITI-BOY!!!!!!!!!! at least it sounds like it...oh my goodness.....the flow the flow.......he fuckin snapped! lyrics are nasty, rode the beat nicely.....damn i wish i could spit fast again, you got good breath control...quality is pretty nice (NT) -- Vision, 15:48:31 01/14/03 Tue
Whoa.. This was cool.. Didnt like the beat... but the rest is ill.. if this was mixed a bit better, it be evn nicer.. damn you're killin it.. I dont think this is Xitizen tho.. might be but i doubt it.. Shit.. this was sick... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:54:52 01/14/03 Tue
damn, does sound a lil like xitizen... very nice... rode beat real nice... real nice audio (NT) -- GuTTy JaCoBz, 16:07:20 01/14/03 Tue
uhm well i'm the rebel in this bitch..lol...always gotta disagree with shit...aiight so...this does sound like Xitizen...fast ass flow....connection was nice except with a few words...just didn't fit...other times you seemed forced and breath-less...emotion lacked on some parts but other than that this was pretty cool kid...oh yeah didn't like the beat either...but that's not me...i'm picky as shit when it comes to beats....aiight .....my opinion in....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 16:48:24 01/14/03 Tue
kinda XITI-ish....nah though...kidd rode beat aight....Kinda,,,nah very forced (NT) -- OV@...I would have to hear spitt aloud..seems forced..Nice though...connects now and then....beat not my style..too qwik...tyte though...hard to hear, 16:54:00 01/14/03 Tue
couldn't really follow it cause it was too fast to understand what the hell you were saying... some things seemed forced, but overall I'd say you rode this beat very very nicely... since I stopped really listening to the words and concentrated on the flow, it seemed like you repeated the same thing over about twenty times... beat sucks. Nice audio tho... If I had made it, I'd play it in my car. But I didn't, so I wouldn't. Feel me? Pz. (NT) -- INTOX, 17:04:51 01/14/03 Tue
eh...i guess this coulda been me...but i cud never spit that fast...i've tried...well this was nice, truthfully i dont think it sounds ALL that much like me, i think this dood sounds better...good to know my voice has some competition... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:24:28 01/15/03 Wed
I didnt have any problem understanding you after listening to PSYCH for so long now...youre quick but not that bizzy...it sounds more like your just saying it fast...its not melodic tho which makes that style good in my opinion...this was good tho...not to take anything away...look fwd to more shit from you... (NT) -- INTRO, 11:26:48 01/16/03 Thu
Just a lil keystyle letting the underpar emcee's know who they are -- Brail, 00:28:36 01/14/03 Tue
Nice, great key, thoughts from "Brail" see's it so clear dope Peace (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 00:38:28 01/14/03 Tue
ayo... peep -- INTOX, 02:11:59 01/14/03 Tue
ha hands of time line had me cresing boy (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 11:16:28 01/14/03 Tue
unlike "Brail" I feel ya... without my hands (NT) -- LenzD1, 11:22:42 01/14/03 Tue
ill, some hot lines...the bladder of a cute kid scenario was clever, keep it up (NT) -- Vision, 12:06:37 01/14/03 Tue
This was tight.. nice to see you can switch your stance if needed.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:14:58 01/14/03 Tue
I noticed a few 'MikMaQisms' here, I hope that inspired the keystyle and not the title...lol nice drop..peace (NT) -- MikMaQ...Changing like 'Manamal', 03:55:24 01/16/03 Thu
(((AUDIO)))They tell me this BLOWS AWAY all the other audios ive done so far... "WHAT I SAY" Dictionary Rappers this is your heaven lol.. This one is HYPE! -- ===||Swords--->, 12:10:36 01/15/03 Wed
sounds like you got a problem pronouncin yer words, great vocab, the begining's flow was WAY off, but the rest you rode it well, can't realy grasp what this is about and alot of yer words are lost cuz it sounds like you gotta stuffy nose, beat sounds alot like blackaliscious and the flow is a little reminiscent of him as well, quality was a bit under what it coulda been... ill flow though...piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 13:24:49 01/15/03 Wed
I finf it hard to hear what your saying man, got better as it went......sounds like you need to turn your vocals UP a lil........beat overpowers your words...........the flow sounds aiight and what lyrics i got sound coo'......but for real try and convey your voice over a bit better......towards the end it got better......If you can do that it will be a vast improvement (for me as a listener).........Nice beat (NT) -- Eternal Student, 14:20:42 01/15/03 Wed
yeah..beat is dope, but we both know you got that shit down pact....you coming hyped yo....content is sik, like always....i wasnt expecting anything less than ILL.....i like the bulb line, shit is Hot....ha...boat line is tight...damn beat is sik Swords....vocals could be a lil higher, but nothing for me to complain about.....im glad to see you coming up....imma start on that verse for our collabo....im doing a lil research first....keep dropping b...PEACE (NT) -- Essence...AM, 16:30:37 01/15/03 Wed
I forgot to respond to this earlier, I downloaded it , the shit takes so long on my Mp, I hate it , not your rhyme the MP, as for your audio, DAMN Vocab stuffed like a Peter, shit was off the top, like everyone said your vocals need a little pitch, I loved the beat, it all fit , nice 1 , keep on (NT) -- Grotesque.....P.S. anyway to make the buffing on an MP3 faster ofr does it take everyone 10 to 15 minutes just to download, thanxx, 17:52:53 01/15/03 Wed
Beat lvely...flow off at beginning...then rode beat...vocab,...off chain..pa!! (NT) -- OV@...hella tyte..meybe not ur best to me..definattley one of the best iv'e heard...keep it gangsta!!, 18:16:14 01/15/03 Wed
yo, the beats cool but yeah the beginning was way off. you caught up though and over all a nice audio. (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:38:51 01/15/03 Wed
fuck... been a while since I've been to this website.... gonna do a keystyle.... criticism accepted -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 17:03:10 01/15/03 Wed
um...this was ok....forrealz, i think you could come better than this...i mean for a key it was coo, but...i want to se you come with some ill written shit?..feel me?....surpirse me if you will...pz (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:26:35 01/15/03 Wed
I agree....this was aight for a Key...i know ya can come iller topical??? heh?? (NT) -- OV@...This was tyte though...effective for a key...nothing outstanding,...Peace!!, 18:05:01 01/15/03 Wed
this was alright .i guess nothing really stood out but keep posting. we all come for one reason to rhyme. stay up (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:28:17 01/15/03 Wed
Keyed ment@lz-......OV@KIl....keep it hood like the neckline of sweat suit's -- OV@KIL......Dizzubble Dizeeeeetch...Bizzubble Dizeeeeetch!!!, 18:01:11 01/15/03 Wed
this was sik...i think me and you have the same type of thoughts just expressd differently, like, how i beleive in the fatcs of telepathic answers that HAVE been around since pre-historic days...now us as humans evolving can finally speak our thoughts instead of simple gestures...this was a nice key...keep droppin OV@, turn them heads.....PEACE (NT) -- Essence....AM, 18:38:07 01/15/03 Wed
Hot spit Definetly worthy of the mic keep spittin one (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:24:19 01/15/03 Wed
Being Hated on and Discriminated -- Grotesque, 11:22:47 01/15/03 Wed
Went downhill real quick.. I thought you were actually gonna rhyme about being hated on or discriminated, well you kinda did in the beginning but changed after two lines.. got ADD or something? no attention span.. You dont focus on anything.. i think you'd do a lot better if you focused on something.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:22:21 01/15/03 Wed
haha..ADD...haha..naw this was aight, flow was the best part about it, and that was a lil choppy, but who am i, nothing more than a fellow writer who has his own opinion...all i can say was this was cool, i was expecting something different, but you ran with it how you ran with it....keep on and stay up....UNO (NT) -- Essence...AM, 16:38:37 01/15/03 Wed
Kid can flow...nice structure minus backslashes (NT) -- OVA..taht is all, 18:23:45 01/15/03 Wed
Any tips on how to improve my style -- Abraham, 11:38:21 01/15/03 Wed
Rhyme scheme is hella simple.. And if you're gonna rap about this shit at least make or believable.. Or even more important, make it INTERESTING.. after all, all we're doing here is reading at our computer.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:18:09 01/15/03 Wed
ok, i can see your new and trying to elevate...all i can say is read others posts and really try and find what kind of style you like, focus on that, and begin to re-develop your own word patternz...just stik around and keep writing, thas how eveyone here has done it...peace (NT) -- Essence....AM, 16:34:03 01/15/03 Wed
I agree with all both above said..i have one thing to say like ESSE said...BE Yurself..Find the style taht fit's yur liking find ya own niche. (NT) -- OV@..took me a while just flow with what best suit's yu..., 18:18:37 01/15/03 Wed
KEYSTYLE...i'll be surprised if ANYONE can make any sense outta this one.........cause i cant -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded w/ O.M.N.I., 11:57:57 01/14/03 Tue
When you use Multis you gotta make sure they actually connect to make sense lol.. But you know tthat soooooooo... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 12:43:43 01/14/03 Tue
if u hadn't had said that not even u understood it..everyone woulda replied sayin shyt like "DAMN DAT WAS ILL" lol...sounds dope as fuk when u spit it aloud...just makes no sense lol...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 12:53:05 01/14/03 Tue
Nice key..I don't know about interpreting it but I enjoyed reading it...I don't know it's just my kinda shit...but yo ...the G.O.D.s got a show on the 22nd of February at South Suburban College..I dont know how many of us is gonna get on stage..hell I might get up there by my damn self if I got to..come check us out....email me I'll send you a ticket they're $15 so we'll have to work something out..but yeah uhmm uh huh One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil....a.k.a...The Alpha The Omega and the Lindenburg baby all in one, 13:24:46 01/14/03 Tue
yo i actually thought this made sense.....tight shit....loved da flow...what up my nicca?....how u been dawg.....? chi-town treatin u good, im fis ta head back to cali in april for good.....but umm im a holla (NT) -- styliztik...aka..q.uote, 13:42:00 01/14/03 Tue
....WOW....you flowed dope with no clue about what you were talkin about....dogg...YOU REMIND ME OF ORKEN....**YO, TO GUTTY, XITIZEN AND VISION.....MY COMPUTER'S POWER SUPPLY DIED ON ME RECENTLY I HAVE TO GO GET IT FIXED...SO AUDIOS ARE POSTONED FOR NOW......MY BAD.....I'm at school right now...but I'll get back to yall***....peace (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 14:11:48 01/14/03 Tue
might as well been written in chinese but hey, not everyone is gonna feel it right? (NT) -- LenzD1, 14:46:38 01/14/03 Tue
on a scale of 1 to 10 adolescent ass rapings, 1 being the best, 10 being the worst (or vice versa, depending on how you look at it), I give this a 5. (NT) -- INTOX, 14:57:11 01/14/03 Tue
uhm well...where'd that come from? heavy ass vocab but it stayed on point kid...nice connection...came short but I'm with you I can't really make sense of this...maybe it's personal..sometimes I sit and just type or write and whatever comes comes...guess that's what happened here....One (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 16:18:13 01/14/03 Tue
"you paint a picture with words i spit terpentine drips" <---fuckin ill imagery and concept right here and I was feelin the multi's of this alot, very flowable,whodafuck cares if it's about somethin though...it was ill on it's own... (NT) -- Souliberty, 16:37:25 01/14/03 Tue
damn flow was fuckin smahing.... no one can diss this piece dunny...one (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:39:28 01/15/03 Wed
Keyed ment@lz...entitled...."The pain in my life is sorta like chewing on thumb-tacks"....Peep and whatev@ man!!! -- OV@KIL...One'Huned..G3N@$yDe.., 16:42:02 01/14/03 Tue
"HOLD YA HEAD" (NT) -- -HiDDEN-, 16:58:10 01/14/03 Tue
umm...this was aight for a key....nothin that really stood out to me, except for the Bin Laden's wives was kinda funny....but yo, keep up...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 19:33:19 01/14/03 Tue
this was nice Ov@....feeling it..nice lil stance on the last part of the piece....stay outta trouble..haha..keep ya head up...peace man~ (NT) -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:26:48 01/14/03 Tue
this was some pretty hot shit, keep writing (NT) -- ir8te, 22:16:37 01/14/03 Tue
eh... was kinda bummed that in the first bar you rhymed corrections with corrections...the rest was a bit mediocre and lacked a good flow base...eh... (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:25:45 01/15/03 Wed
holy shit I like the second verse by genesyde... just dope (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:33:25 01/15/03 Wed
keystyle....Live to Dream, or do you Dream to live?.....PEACE -- X-SINCE...Abzent Minded, 21:08:33 01/14/03 Tue
tight composition -- ir8te, 22:09:37 01/14/03 Tue
dopest post i read today...deep stuff man...too many ill lil things here and there to highlight just one...nice drop yo...keep 'em comin(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...wonderin how many other ways u can come up with to spell "essence", 23:27:57 01/14/03 Tue
At first I was like its okay......and stop reading.......but the middle of the verse caught my attention........and I began to feel it more.........with each reading.............nice poetic work yo..............Ghost (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:58:45 01/15/03 Wed
i liked this. it made me feel like my existence is completely useless. this is poetry fitted perfectly in rap format (NT) -- con, 04:34:01 01/15/03 Wed
To tell the truth I'm not at all sure I like this, I mean it was tight when it comes to concept and there are some very ill next level ideas displayed but the flow was wierd to me in many places and sorta threw the poetics of it all off, but like I said I can grasp the concept it's just not packaged as neatly as it coulda been...pz (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:16:40 01/15/03 Wed
nice, well processed thinking with ill usage of words... nice drop kid (NT) -- the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms, 16:28:27 01/15/03 Wed
a little something for the drunk one's out there -- ir8te, 22:31:28 01/14/03 Tue
shit (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:42:36 01/14/03 Tue
It was to short to get a feel, come longer, 1 (NT) -- Grotesque, 23:39:35 01/14/03 Tue
It was straight,,,,,,,,,,,,I know how these days go by dog...........I feel your struggle..........it gets worse though.......trust me (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:52:30 01/15/03 Wed
listen to "book of life" by common (NT) -- con, 04:26:53 01/15/03 Wed
uhm...your thoughts so you can't really be judged on what you think, as an writer/emcee though...I would have made it longer and more interesting....keep tryin though...hell I'm facin the same probs right now, but it'll get brighter.....Peace (NT) -- The Accent of O.M.N.I., 10:09:36 01/15/03 Wed
i liked this one, all be it a little short but hey this spit reminded me about my fights wit my mom so,keep practicin' dawg (NT) -- rusty, 15:39:04 01/15/03 Wed

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