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HARLEM, WHAT !!! -- OMA, 06:48:32 02/07/03 Fri
- Kinda simple yo, nothing the lounge hasn't read before, take a little more time on each bar, u coulda put more descriptive words in some spots elevate PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 13:23:23 02/07/03 Fri
- i agree with pat D.A.W.G on this one it was kinda simple but youll get better (NT) -- nemisis, 14:32:22 02/07/03 Fri
- hmmm...i see bright spots in here....my advice?...keep ur bars at that length, but say more in them, learn to get the most out of one word, therefore when u flip it, someone might catch it a different way, but they'll still feel it... (NT) -- styliztik..aka..quote...says....elevator going up?, 15:16:17 02/07/03 Fri
- This was WAY too simplistic.....Try concentrating deeper on your words...increase wordplay and vocabulary usage....Think of imagery, abstract even....Whatever you do, do what you're good at....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:17:38 02/07/03 Fri
daylight's saving time -- xEnOiC, 01:08:55 02/07/03 Fri
WHAT STOOD OUT FOR ME ON THIS WAS YA RYME SCHEME!!!NICE ASS DROP! PROPS ON THIS JOINT!! -- LIPS, 01:46:47 02/07/03 Fri
First and only neg is paragarph form is hard ta read/ break it down inta lines, clean ass content nice lyrics and wordplay, first time I ever peeped ya post but i will definetly check the next PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:13:49 02/07/03 Fri
ehh...break into bars then I'll read...but anyway...YO DAVID DUNG.......WHEN YOU GONNA DROP THAT LP YOU WERE PROMOTING???......just curious.... (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 11:42:55 02/07/03 Fri
MY CREW-F.U.-FLOW UNLIMITED-COLLABO-"ANGER AND RAGE" -- LIPS, 01:52:37 02/07/03 Fri
Good job elaborating on the subject, not extremely ill and lay off the powder man, overall descent postPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:10:10 02/07/03 Fri
"Caveman Primitive" made me laugh. That middle section is the the best, the first one uses words for the sake of sylables. Good Post (NT) -- Blueprint, 10:41:33 02/07/03 Fri
He's Not A Felon -- Blueprint, 21:59:01 02/06/03 Thu
dope! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:34:01 02/06/03 Thu
Nice as concept, shit was very vivid, great discriptive wise, overall ill post (NT) -- GROTESQUE, 22:50:05 02/06/03 Thu
good storytellin' ability on this joint dog!! props! -- LIPS, 23:23:06 02/06/03 Thu
Nice, imagery was nice in begining and overall story's persona was nice good post blue. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:22:37 02/07/03 Fri
One Step To Go but Then The Last Step Snapped And I Went Through -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Big Boy, 23:51:11 02/06/03 Thu
I liked this.. the shit flowed like water.. your style is simplistic but orginal with you punch-lines and sims, I was feeling this, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:22:16 02/07/03 Fri
I LIKE YA FLOW, I THINK YOU SHOULD ADD LENGTH TO YA BARS THOUGH!!! PROPS! -- LIPS, 01:54:13 02/07/03 Fri
Nice flow, lines were ill and overall a nice post keep up, was your little brother on here man? PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:17:18 02/07/03 Fri
Oh My , Termites Ate George Washingtons Wooden Teethe..hahah, well anyways.." Freestyle Directed At Whoeva Wants it and Packrats" -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Boy Big BE SHORE TO PEEP MY OTHER RHYME BELOW BLUEPRINTS, 22:44:55 02/06/03 Thu
Micheal Jackson line had me rollling .. he looked hilarious when he did that like he aint human no more a over-grown elf or some shit.. this was equally as dope as the one above.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:25:56 02/07/03 Fri
Let the light from my subjects erect the truth we all most see, If we can't open our eyes we'll never just be. The thought of a end is truly the beginning lets spread love not war and reap our new surroundings! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 14:59:28 02/06/03 Thu
this was very deep, seems like every mc on this board writes like this!!! that shit is great man!!! this board is dope!! and that post was hot yo!!!! it would take hours to really peep it! props!! -- LIPS, 15:20:37 02/06/03 Thu
This was dope....although, the Black race didn't descend from the line of Ham....I'll explain in our collabo.....Other than that, this was well-structured and the content was deep too....Keep this up and stay up.....I'll be e-mailing you this Saturday on more info on the collabo.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š....I've already started on my verse.....HAHAHA....., 15:59:20 02/06/03 Thu
cool I'm interested in knowing what you have to tell me on this matter, because I thought we really did descend from HAM.. you got me curious as HELL.. lol and thanks for waiting lmao! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:12:27 02/06/03 Thu
I'll have to read it some other time.... it's been a while since i've gotten off into this.... nice though.... I just need to read it when I'v feelin it more..... peace (NT) -- SKORP-I....... *STILL IN THE LAB*.... P.S. HEKS..... I GOT SOME PROGRAMS FOR YOU..... BOUT A THOUSAND $$ WORTH.... holla, 17:04:55 02/06/03 Thu
haha...the science of Elohiem....yahweh..ehh?...this was poetic....tight....nothin u could spit over a beat though...less it was some syncopated shit (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 20:59:58 02/06/03 Thu
if you only knew me.. I don't write shit I can't spit.. I drop it just for you.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:31:47 02/06/03 Thu
This shit was ill, black history, good shit, concept was tight on point, ill (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 00:00:30 02/07/03 Fri
Smoking On Mic Wire as Christopher Reeves Stands Out His Chair -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Boy Big, 21:34:45 02/06/03 Thu
At first I was skeptic, but by the end I was smilin'. It's laid back and easy to spit, simple is not necessarily bad. This has that consistent carefree, not-to-serious vibe, Good post. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:48:55 02/06/03 Thu
"dictionary cats" any time cats say something like that it makes me smile.. I aint never picked up a dictionary.. I guess I feel what your saying.. just I like to be astounded when I read a post.. I hate reading boring shit.. that don't got no feel to it.. I've seen you way nicer then this though.. keep spittin' peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:38:26 02/06/03 Thu
path peep -- GRO, 23:04:57 02/06/03 Thu
got better as it went on! props!!! -- LIPS, 23:20:12 02/06/03 Thu
JUST A BATTLE VERSE -- LIPS, 15:08:32 02/06/03 Thu
iight I liked the collab.. better, your battle style kinda just drags on.. what board you said you was a 5 time champ at? I'd like to visit it.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:13:04 02/06/03 Thu
PATH PEEP............... -- LIPS, 15:29:50 02/06/03 Thu
my bad man I didn't mean to set you up like that.. thanks and sorry again.. I forgot about the advertising thing.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:06:03 02/06/03 Thu
it's aight..... keep it comin... (NT) -- SKORP-I....... *still in the lab*, 16:52:44 02/06/03 Thu
this was...coo..punches where kinda corny...tho... (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 20:53:28 02/06/03 Thu
WOW, shit was ill, punches like holyfeild for real, flowed like a drunks piss, it just kept going, made my eyes tired, shit was very good though (NT) -- GROTESQUE, 22:55:17 02/06/03 Thu
fellow emcees -- nick, 15:47:58 02/06/03 Thu
first off.....THIS NEEDS TO BE DELETED!...second, i would like to say that the next time you write something remember this are such things as periods. periods let the readers know when the sentence starts and then stops..third, DO NOT EVER IN YOUR LIFE, disrespect the emcee's that are in this lounge. I have nothing more to say. (NT) -- does it matter, 17:54:37 02/06/03 Thu
WHATS THAT? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:29:50 02/06/03 Thu
I'm sorry man, but if your older than 16, take some time out and decide whether writing is for you. If your younger than that, try to pick up some punctuation techniqes. There is a lot of good writing on this site, use it as a resourse to polish up what your doing. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:42:27 02/06/03 Thu
YOU CANT CUM HARD AT 10, D E L E T E (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:49:21 02/06/03 Thu
OLD BATTLE VERSE TO MAJESTIC -- LIPS, 17:09:37 02/06/03 Thu
this was iight....keep it up..knowledge = power. (NT) -- does it matter, 17:56:48 02/06/03 Thu
naw this had a constant flow to it, so it made it entertaining write some new shit man.. you had to have elevated past this.. I'm not dissing I'm just noting the fact that this was the best verse so far, so in turn writing something new is a way to chart your elevation.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:28:08 02/06/03 Thu
u got flow patterns down...just work on what ur sayin inside those patterns...peace (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 19:35:54 02/06/03 Thu
I like the way you edit, it compliments the way I like to flow. That Oprah line is nice, but i was lost on your direction. Most of your lines are scatter blasted with things that sound real nice but are difficult to discipher. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:38:38 02/06/03 Thu
Some good lines in here , I liked the apollow line the most, overall shit was intact,, wordplay and all, nice post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:45:10 02/06/03 Thu
D-LUXE AND LIPS COLLABO! "TRY AND FORGE OUR FLOW" -- LIPS, 14:58:44 02/06/03 Thu
this was dope man.. much better, way more on point, is this something yall did in the past? dope collab man, ONE! P.S I'm from DETROIT! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:08:27 02/06/03 Thu
aye man, my bad! i didn't mean to offend you before dog! i really like this board!!! peep....l -- LIPS, 15:13:28 02/06/03 Thu
i know sicilians that'll say they aint white at all (NT) -- Vis, 15:51:50 02/06/03 Thu
well, i'm not really!!! i just consider myself italian!!! sicilians decended from the moors!!!! peep...... -- LIPS, 16:08:43 02/06/03 Thu
All right yall, been kinda rusty a little bit bit. Keystyle I call "Mass of The Few" u betta know what side u on when the fake hip hop gets slayed PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:23:30 02/06/03 Thu
YO................... -- LIPS, 02:39:07 02/06/03 Thu
This was aight.. i liked the beginning more than anything.. I thought a lot of the lines were worded weird.. Keep workin at it tho, you're slowly getting better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:21:52 02/06/03 Thu
I liked reading through this...The flow was good for the most and some lines were kinda nice, like when you made the word 'rap' into an acronym. The content was kinda lacking to me, I know what you were saying but wasn't nothing new...find something to write about and you'll come nicer. You have improved tho' ,Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:26:26 02/06/03 Thu
Look inside -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:33:37 02/06/03 Thu
Look inside -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:37:29 02/06/03 Thu
iight, I was kinda getting bored while reading.. but it was pretty tight, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:50:40 02/06/03 Thu
Rememberence -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:59:52 02/06/03 Thu
YO, DOG, I LOST BOTH GRAND, MY FATHER, AND MY BROTHER, SO I WAS FEELIN' THAT A WHOLE NOTHER LEVEL! PEEP..... -- LIPS, 11:27:55 02/06/03 Thu
Yeah I noticed the 'switch' and I don't wanna crit this too much as it seemed real personal...however I can tell you it was fuckin' ill and probs the realest thing you've spit...message felt and God rest your all your peeps...Well done Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:57:18 02/06/03 Thu
It's good to get those emotions out......I'm still feeling the hurt from losing my grandfather back in December of 2001.....Keep those feelings up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 14:25:01 02/06/03 Thu
man I feel you I lost alot of friends in the streets.. I still carry the memory with me, I'll never forget what they were all killed for.. it's a shame the way we kill eachother.. and scream about "THE MAN!" we got to organize and build... -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:46:21 02/06/03 Thu
OK you slept on mah audioI suppose that figures cus this site is mostly textual. so here is some..H O T..text for everyone to have a peep..Just scripted this in tha morning PeAcE !!! -- Eternal Student, 14:26:19 02/05/03 Wed
Nice...pretty keen with the multisyllabic-structure......Don't worry about the audio....You probably just posted one a day that most were at computers that couldn't hook up the links or something like that....I should know, I tried peeping the audio yesterday.....but other than that....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 14:50:03 02/05/03 Wed
Flow was intense real steady.. tight drop man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:55:03 02/05/03 Wed
flow was sick as hell man...dunno how i passed up ur audio...musta not seen it...gotta peep it for sure tho...newayz this was nice...keep droppin em yo (NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 17:00:50 02/05/03 Wed
"Sometimes I'm lackin' the reaction to get things crackin'" I should have wrote that first. Nice post. (NT) -- Blueprint, 13:47:03 02/06/03 Thu
MY AUDIO!!!!!!!!!!!! PEEP OUT "CREEPIN'" AND "CHECKPOINT" THX Y'ALL! -- LIPS, 02:12:43 02/06/03 Thu
Sorry man, this cheap comp doesnt even have a soundcard.. it doesnt even have right-click.. so i cant peep it.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:23:11 02/06/03 Thu
you sound really ready for MTV.. I can't hate because you aint underground.. keep doing you, peace! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:28:08 02/06/03 Thu
I listened to checkpoint and I thought it was dope...you have nice style and I think you've been slept on...shit was nice, flow was on point...decent beat, only lacking lyrically in my opinion. Other than that it was nice...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:35:24 02/06/03 Thu
I listened to the one over the AZ beat, flow was alright, lyrically tou could step it up a little bit, but other than that it sounded alright (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:21:09 02/06/03 Thu
(((AUDIO)))This is the Last Solo Audio I have to post so savor it! "View From The Canopy" I think the beat mighta been too slow for me heh.. but at least you can understand me, right?? -- ===||Swords-->, 03:18:34 02/06/03 Thu
Ayo that beat is sick.. you should have got at me for a second collab lol.. hey if you turn off your speakers then record.. there would be no feed-back at all right? "pretty dope audio man, scratching was sick also!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:34:08 02/06/03 Thu
yo man, i havent really seen u online but i woulda gotten atchu.. i got more beats tho.. we'll see.. I dont record with the speakers on, but yeah thatd cut oout a lot of static,.. so would backing far away from any electronic equip, like the monitor will give you fat feedback.. hehe i sampled the scratching so that aint me lol (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:38:32 02/06/03 Thu
nice beat you got goin' here, yeah it kinda slower than usual but the flow sounded good to me and I like the fact that even though it was slower you still managed to flip it nice and quick...good drop man, Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:11:34 02/06/03 Thu
Beat was cool, flow was straight.......yeah it was nice. Keep doin you (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:09:27 02/06/03 Thu
YO.................... -- LIPS, 11:20:43 02/06/03 Thu
MORBID beyond Belief... MORBID beyond your average demented madman...MORBID Is I... MORBID Is Me... and MORBID is Myself.... Enjoy!!! -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:25:37 02/06/03 Thu
this was ill shit man..keep droppin shit like this man..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:30:31 02/06/03 Thu
I don't now about ill but it was pretty tight, you gotta spell your words right man it makes it hard to take you serious.. but keep writing, you can spit some real dope shit if you challenge yourself. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:44:55 02/06/03 Thu
my bad my eyes are tired.. you only spelled a couple words wrong.. damn I'm tired, peace! (NT) -- Path, 01:48:53 02/06/03 Thu
yo, dun............................. -- LIPS, 01:51:09 02/06/03 Thu
Short but for what it had was pretty fucking ill, nice post keep up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:38:28 02/06/03 Thu
I dont know man.. ive heard a lot of lines like this before.. doubt you were trying to copy or nothin, but make sure your punches stand out like "oh shit i wish i coulda thought of that" like "You're jsut a clown to kids that are sick, Like Patch Adams"(hope no one said that before me..) work on it.. be impressive! (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:35:08 02/06/03 Thu
Yeah the punches were nice just not great...but this was kinda ill and a nice post...but Jesus was crucifed to a "cross" y'see, that's why it was cross-shaped...it was a hint...lol Nice post man...Stay up (liked the M.Manson line, it was funny) Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:50:06 02/06/03 Thu
...eehh...flow was cool....2 out of the 3 nicest lines in here have been used already...the Down for the Count line could have been worded better.... the rest were pretty much filler, if it were to be an actual battle verse....pretty cool shit....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink. of O.M.N.I., 11:10:53 02/06/03 Thu
so as to not waste your thread.. I got a sick idea for a audio collab that will shock the lounge get at me.. Yusuke@devil.com save that and we'll work out the rest.. kick keystyle for ya.. -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:54:27 02/06/03 Thu
Nice, i liked the flow towards the end most of all and there was some real nice references in this piece...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 07:59:01 02/06/03 Thu
Nebulas line was crazy.......this had a different feel to it but that's cool cause it reflects originality. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:05:01 02/06/03 Thu
Another 20 bars -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:36:57 02/05/03 Wed
China hated Bruce Lee for sharing their secretive styles and idealisms within American markets of ENTERTAINMENT.. they looked at him as a traitor for a long time.. they say thats why he died.. he wasn't killed was.. he? hey come inside for a min. - -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:14:39 02/06/03 Thu
THIS was fuckin ill man..nice work..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:06:45 02/06/03 Thu
very layered flow and nice wordusage and displayed of talent in writing... get on the mic man. peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:30:08 02/06/03 Thu
Another 20 bars of the man who makes the BLIND see, nice thoughts yo PEACE (NT) -- pat D.A.W.G, 03:08:04 02/06/03 Thu
lol...I thought if I kept replyin' downwards I bump into you sooner rather than later...This was cool and i loved the "smooth criminal" line and I also noticed the fun you seem to be having with your posts these days, that's all good...I read the first part to this the other but I didn't reply...that one was nicer. This was cool tho' ...Stay up sonn ( I know you will anyway ) ..haha Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:08:34 02/06/03 Thu
.....IM STILL HERE MUHFUHKKAZ...AND IM LETTIN YALL KNOW....GUARD YA FACES WHEN YOU PEEP THIS SHIT..."WAVE TWISTERZ"... -- ~!~BLAk EARTh~!~, 00:57:34 02/06/03 Thu
just pure lines displayed here... raw as hell... nice flow and wicked arrogance... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:28:34 02/06/03 Thu
iight.. I'm coo' now just got some bad news.. I read this and the concept was don't fuck with me I'll shit on you.. pretty dope shit, it's like almost 2:00am I'm about to be out.. peace kid! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:41:07 02/06/03 Thu
WOAH!!!! DAMN SON!!! -- LIPS, 01:55:32 02/06/03 Thu
Yo this was nice...the flow was real nice in areas and in other parts it wasn't. I agree with Path about your content but I thought you managed without it on this ocassion...nice multis in parts too...Nice post Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:02:04 02/06/03 Thu
JUST A BATTLE VERSE I SPIT AT SOME DUDE! JUST AN INTRO TO THIS BOARD -- LIPS, 01:53:41 02/06/03 Thu
I'm surprised I kept reading even after the beginning.. you sounded like MA$E on tell me feat. TOTAL.. who won that battle? "the shit was iight I just was not really feeling it.. stick around kid you'll get way better watching kids in here, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 02:03:51 02/06/03 Thu
yo.................... -- LIPS, 02:07:01 02/06/03 Thu
Not bad, some allright punches in here you got possability ta get iller, dont let me down on that guess son PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:35:39 02/06/03 Thu
Hmm this was aight.. i dont like how you structure your lines, too long, break em in two and itll be easier to read.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:32:09 02/06/03 Thu
ok Repost, this is called CHEMICAL-WAR.. it's got alot of pops but just bare with me.. till I get a new computer.. shit sucks, the mic.. sucks.. I don't know and I dont post up album songs due to biters.. so enjoy.. over look the damn pops you babies.. lol.. peace!! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:59:02 02/06/03 Thu
YO, DOG............... -- LIPS, 02:09:52 02/06/03 Thu
LOL you know i like your shit man, but i cant peep audios on this shit comp.. ill keep the addy in memory..peace! (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:30:22 02/06/03 Thu
"POVERTY"-JUST ONE MORE SPIT FOR MY INTRO TO THE BOARD!!! -- LIPS, 01:59:30 02/06/03 Thu
The Cam'ron shit has got to go man, but this was way better then that last shit you posted up.. ummm you could have went into it more in-depth.. take your thoughts and let them paint the vividness of understanding a picture.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 02:09:01 02/06/03 Thu
YO, I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN BY CAMRON SHIT...... -- LIPS, 02:11:25 02/06/03 Thu
I see you really want this first post I read by you, hmmm, take more time on a post and dig deeper. You can get the feelings out yo, just flip it up and be more creative with ya thoughts and word choice keep up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G ==Despencing Amplified Words Geographically, 02:30:29 02/06/03 Thu
AYE, I APPRECIATE WHAT Y'ALL SAYIN BUT,............ -- LIPS, 02:36:43 02/06/03 Thu
Ha these news guys be shoutin at eachother.. but about the rhyme, this was pretty good to me, your scheme is nice, had some ok lines, feelin what you had to say, but speakin as a person and not just an emcee, what will you do to elevate yoru situation? not an easy qestion to answer.. but i dont think its just enough to say "this is what i go through"..you gotta say "how can i make it better?" I think that would be true elevation..So what im saying is.. How can you express yourself in a way that will put your mind above your situation therefore get you out of it? (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:29:05 02/06/03 Thu
....another post for your viewing pleasure.... -- Vis, 20:03:51 02/05/03 Wed
short and to the point pretty good lil' drop man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:09:31 02/05/03 Wed
This seemed like it flowed right off the last joint I read from you. Almost like it was a second verse to a song. The flow was nice, it had a different feel to it.....Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:45:07 02/05/03 Wed
THIS WAS pretty tight man..i was diggin the flow (NT) -- BLAK EARTH, 01:09:16 02/06/03 Thu
nice flow.. nice release of thoughts... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:31:42 02/06/03 Thu
Let the light from my subjects erect the truth we all most see, If we can't open our eyes we'll never just be. The thought of a end is truly the beginning lets spread love not war and reap our new surroundings! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 19:28:44 02/05/03 Wed
Why hasn't anyone givin this feedback? This was real nice content wise.......The flow was on point, more so in the first half......liked how you threw in different historical perceptions on things. Keep this up, Peace! (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:58:59 02/05/03 Wed
i hate the fact niggaz is sleepin on this ...man PATH..you get iller everytime i peep you..i loeved this shit..celebrate for knowledge..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:13:57 02/06/03 Thu
Hear go a sick ass KEYSTYLE SEE IF YOU CAN READ BETWEEN THE LINES.. and Blueprint and VISION if you still around I got something to say to you both.. -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:09:50 02/05/03 Wed
Good spit loving the topic illuminati lol yeah them cats is wild they arent controlled by Satan but they do beleive in the Sun god the light barer some people see's that as being Satan they're god share similar traits with some other religious figure for instance how Christians depict Jesus or Egyptians with Ra you know the whole hallow around the head deal the ressurection emaculate conception it's all tied together but most are either too blind deaf and dumb to realise the truth I see you've read Novus Ordo Seclorum Good book We should build sometime P.E.A.C.E Gomar Oz Dubar (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 01:19:15 02/05/03 Wed
lol @ Gomar Oz Dubar.. you got alot more knowledge then I would have ever gave you credit for.. the eyes are so decieving.. thanks for the feed back ... all of you, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:29:24 02/06/03 Thu
Loving the style you write with and the content you covered here...the ryme scheme was hot and switched up nicely too. You also killed it with the wordplay...Very nice post , Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:20:47 02/05/03 Wed
yo read this earlier too....nice ass key sonn....content was good for reals...luv how ya flip ya lines and switchin ya rhymes scheme.....gotta admit though, ya did have me a lil lost in places wit the content...maybe it's cuz i'm tired as hell...but i caught most of it....enough to know this was nice thought-provokin, intellectual shit.....good shit though Path, stay up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:16:57 02/05/03 Wed
A-yo PATH keep ur personal views of subjects like that to urself and if u wanna say it to other say it to them on a one on one basis...not everyone on this board agrees with ur statements (me being one of them)....but to keep this board on a hip hop posting balance basis.....can u refrain from stating stuff like that..thanks and peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 11:46:47 02/05/03 Wed
thats what hip hops about man.. but if your angered by my thoughts and understandings I'm sorry kid.. where you been at.. just been silently watching huh? Hip hop is about ones diversity, originality, or belief on certain subject matters, you know I'm in no way forcing my opinion on anyone just voicing how I feel, peep! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 13:23:04 02/05/03 Wed
if i was angered id be cursing...i wasnt angered at all......thats NOT HIP HOP...when ur writing a paragraph about it PREACHING.....if it was in rhyme form then i could kinda agree it was hip hop..but the way you did it, WAS WRONG...peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 18:58:57 02/05/03 Wed
Very invigorating and innovative with the wordplay and content.....Keep this up....Oh yeah, not trying to butt heads or get into anything that doesn't deal with me on the personal tip.....But I think David Dunn was just stating his opinion....Not trying to start anything with you....I could understand his standpoint from where it was coming from.....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:37:18 02/05/03 Wed
I THOUGHT I HEARD THAT SHIT!!!...thanks for clearing it up, no time to really read this now i was just peeking in but i'll come back (NT) -- Vis, 14:39:53 02/05/03 Wed
wordplay was off the meters...i felt it started out a lot more intense than what carried on...started to settle towards the middle, picked up towards the middle...flow, well...i wanna HEAR the flow, because with all the wordplay i read it to myself as if I MYSELF was flowing it with my own style...strong post and all uh that homie...btw thanks for that info again (NT) -- Vis, 16:22:29 02/05/03 Wed
i mean picked up towards the end (NT) -- ., 16:25:23 02/05/03 Wed
War -- Lil Lucky, 13:35:32 02/05/03 Wed
Just a quick 3 minute, freestyle, wanted to get it out there. My first spit ever. -- Lil Lucky, 13:40:28 02/05/03 Wed
You had a lot of ideas in this post that weren't even concentrated on correctly....Example, you started off talking about this upcoming "war"....Then threw in some lines about "platinum" this and "hoes".....C'mon man, center your thoughts....especially the ones you want to express on the Lounge.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:42:50 02/05/03 Wed
This was pretty simplistic even for a key but keep elevating and working on tha structure of things....PeAcE ! (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:24:10 02/05/03 Wed
umm.. it irratated me cause of how it was worded.. hex is right with what he said.. keep your focus on your topic don't stray from your plan.. keep steady man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:58:14 02/05/03 Wed
You both are right, and i knew right away, i got off the topic, and im sorry for teh inconvenianc. -- LIL Lucky, 23:17:35 02/05/03 Wed
keystyle........a piece i call.... *Positive words spoken in these times of Hardships*.....Enjoy....PEACE -- Essence...........AM, 17:46:40 02/05/03 Wed
loved the wordplay...thought it was a bit long, but still skillful...one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:57:26 02/05/03 Wed
whoa two black eyes are better then giving in to Satans reach.. loved that line.. dawg we have to collab as well, I remember first peeping you out, even from the start you had a nice way with words- you've only elevated since then.. nice post man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:40:56 02/05/03 Wed
nice keystyle yo...."linguistics smother me as I erect the twenty six letters incredibly"...ill line right there...liked da concept...dope message...it's hard to see da positive sometimes..but it's always there waitin for us to find it...keep this up and stay up (NT) -- ...DiAtRiBe..., 18:46:16 02/05/03 Wed
Felt this one throughly. Liked the line about erecting 26 letters, flipped that one nicely. Flow was bananas.....Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:08:11 02/05/03 Wed
A VERY QUICK FREESTYLE PLEASE READ....ONE -- does it matter, 17:49:31 02/05/03 Wed
reality bites don't it.. but hey writers block does exist.. it's when your stressed and only spurts can rise from the mind.. mostly feelings of regret for me.. but I liked this it was simplistic in a good way! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:46:52 02/05/03 Wed
"if your a real emcee words dont exist.just emotion"....favorite line...like Path said it was kinda simple but done in a nice way...dope key...uno(N) -- DiAtRiBe, 18:51:31 02/05/03 Wed
nice keystyle.......like the blank faces of faith when you walk in church durring a sermon staring at the filled rows.....""truth well spoken." (NT) -- SickNen, 19:02:07 02/05/03 Wed
This was alright, I didn't like how some lines had such huge differentials in word usage though, it kind of threw the flow off for me. I felt you content wise though. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:02:38 02/05/03 Wed
Real MC;s -- JBalla, 19:38:01 02/05/03 Wed
kinda played.. this sound real old it's time for some elevation. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:15:47 02/05/03 Wed
This rhyme sceme would work if your lines were slicker. If you don't have anything to say at least make it sound nice. Throw in some metaphors and punchlines or something. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:52:31 02/05/03 Wed
Freestyle, check it out and compare it to your own -- Kenny-D, 19:51:10 02/05/03 Wed
do you mean a keystyle? cause this is bad for a freestyle.. my freestyle has gotten rediculous over the last few years.. keep writing man this place will help you.. peace. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:13:21 02/05/03 Wed
I thought you connected words alright but at the same time it seemed like it was done simply to rhyme instead of have emotion or substance behind it. Plus it was mad short. Keep at iy though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:49:33 02/05/03 Wed
u wack -- matter, 20:11:30 02/05/03 Wed
delete. (NT) -- Path, 20:17:08 02/05/03 Wed
U said it (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:38:48 02/05/03 Wed
Anyone up for ah battle? -- SickNen, 18:56:49 02/05/03 Wed
heheh... naw man I'm not in the mood.. but don't waste space! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:30:35 02/05/03 Wed
hey -- u no, 20:14:37 02/05/03 Wed
O.K...let's try this again...G3N@$yD3 Collab.........For those who missed it ... -- Lyrikil & Ov@kil...G3N@$yD3 ...One Hun'ed, 00:55:34 02/05/03 Wed
read this earlier this mornin....pretty nice on both parts....think i liked OV@'s verse lil better though...just thought his flowed a lil better, and he switched up his rhyme scheme better....both verse were aight though....good metaphors and nice word usage on both parts....some nice multi's in each verse....ya'll got nice complimentin styles.....stay up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:13:25 02/05/03 Wed
Very attentive indeed......I like it now, just as much as I did when I first peeped it last week....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:32:34 02/05/03 Wed
OV@'s shit was fresh as HELL, you came dope with your shit man.. this was a nice collab.. well up Gentlemen, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:13:52 02/05/03 Wed
Word~Play...Iz mad science..."keystyle was type'd nice"..."thiz shit st8." (NT) -- SickNen, 19:10:41 02/05/03 Wed
i'll often speak of you but the you is always me..cuz when i speak of me it's me i ask of you..somethin straight from da heart...ain't concerned about da flow on this really..just thoughts i needed to get out..guess you can call it part one of an ongoing story.. -- DiAtRiBe.., 17:39:22 02/05/03 Wed
this was magnificent....i too hold that love deep inside of me...i too know how she breathes threw realizations of internal wants and needs, i too understand how powerfull she can be and how beatiful she can help us create...i wont say who she is, cause thall spoil it.....this was really dope man..imagery, flow-i caught very nicely, and just your useage of language were all very thought provoking...ill kid...one (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:53:03 02/05/03 Wed
loved the wordplay and message... from one to ten i rate this a nine and a half....one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:54:54 02/05/03 Wed
ahah... Nice! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:50:56 02/05/03 Wed
I'm the alpha and Omega, the Beginning and the End, the Dead and the Living, the Understand, the Truth... I am God!!! -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 16:39:39 02/05/03 Wed
yo this was hot son, ive written a sequnence of bars along this thought process but never a full composition, very creative peice!1 (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 16:57:18 02/05/03 Wed
yo man this was nice...i liked da concept and u brought some dope imagery with ur words...sick multi's in here...alot of cool lines...keep this shyt up yo..1ne (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 17:52:53 02/05/03 Wed
yea, this was superb...imagery and flow were way above par....you always surprise me with your posts Path..forrealz...glad to see you dropping a grip again....and about the muffled thing, i have no idea....maybe its your speakers??...i unno, but as for this, it was writing at its best..powerfull words laced this piece...nice job....keep dropping the realness...peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 18:02:57 02/05/03 Wed
The Ghost -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 17:04:04 02/05/03 Wed
tight shyt....didn't like dat u put in a chorus since it is a text..but still this was a good post...thought da first two verses were just sick...this is some good ish....keep it up (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 17:15:31 02/05/03 Wed
this would be a nice as audio man.. I was reading and this beat was kicking in my head cause of the flow you had.. make this a audio.. good job kid, dope drop! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:18:59 02/05/03 Wed
very nice, imagery was down pat, and the flow was very smooth...this WOULD sound ill as fuk in audio..you should try and do it....nice showing man..stay up..piece (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:57:05 02/05/03 Wed
knowledge equals power..and right now your a powerful man... (NT) -- does it matter, 17:59:05 02/05/03 Wed
REPOST......."The Categorical Imperative" Part 1: Immanuel's Speaking......Warning: h Ł k §-A-linguistics, Intensive Rhetoric, Vocabulary, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h Ł k §-A-g Ř ń/|_ A \/ Ą § h...aka tHŁ l e § h ř |Đ e § § Ą Ł| JŠ, 14:45:22 02/05/03 Wed
JESUS man!! This was sick as fuck the wordplay was amazing .. peep! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:52:12 02/05/03 Wed
very ill display of verbal,and excellent wordplay and usage! the Jesus Jefferson line was crazy also, nice work son! (NT) -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 17:01:15 02/05/03 Wed
damn...this was ill...sick multi's and wordplay..i liked da last 9 or 10 lines da most tho...when i peep ur shyt it reminds me of when i took psychology ..lol..nice drop man...keep bringin it..1ne(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 17:09:19 02/05/03 Wed
NEW STORY!!!!!just a lil somethin i sat down and wrote out real quick....."Sayin Goodbye".....hope ya'll enjoy!! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:27:01 02/05/03 Wed
Yeah, it's not easy being a "momma's boy"(at least, that's the aspect that I derived from reading the rhyme)......Nice short story....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:28:34 02/05/03 Wed
This was nice......had a bit of everything.....good read....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:14:48 02/05/03 Wed
damn Hex you picked that out too, I liked it though "NEVER disrespect my women cause I LOVE my MOMMA!" This had a nice loving feel to it.. the heart is important don't lose touch of it.. tight drop man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:08:48 02/05/03 Wed
HOW I GOT MY NAME........this has alot of thought put in it so i would appreciate everyones opinion..one -- does it matter., 11:12:52 02/05/03 Wed
I hear what you're saying about deadbeat teachers/parents, I tutor fourth graders in a poor area, their parents don't teach them anything, no multipication, words, nothing. I know what it's like to spend a lot of time on something and then get ripped up by people. So, your idea is deep, but try to say the same thing in less space, you can tighten it up. Thanks for the feedback. (NT) -- Blueprint, 12:38:38 02/05/03 Wed
Very interesting....although I would've preferred to read this in bar-form over paragraph...I'll make an exception this time.....This would've kept me more attentive if it was in figurative-form....But do you.....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:23:46 02/05/03 Wed
yea nice thoughts...more poetic....never really read anything like this in here....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:20:29 02/05/03 Wed
man.. I feel you but your trails and tribulations only make you stronger pointing at everyone including myself if you knew what I've been through you would be like "damn!" This post was informative.. I got to see how you feel not just how you think.. well up on expressing yourself.. pretty dope vent man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:03:50 02/05/03 Wed
PRE-WRITTEN...when you got 2 hr and 45 min classes....you tend to do things to keep your sanity...i been writing and this shit been coming out...here's a bit more length -- Vision...Thrice Optics Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 22:38:57 02/04/03 Tue
Man, I'm not sure exactly what your talking about, but I like it. "Undertow" is a good word. I'm going to steal that. Peace. (NT) -- Blueprint, 22:58:38 02/04/03 Tue
this was tight.. and longer.. lol.. keep it up man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 23:14:53 02/04/03 Tue
Tight joint I likes...aye you know they starting open mic at the Y on I think 111th ...gotta ask Ov@ to be sure but yeah every friday....holla atcha boi if you going...so you can see how G3N@$yD3 really gets down (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 01:23:24 02/05/03 Wed
not certain what it is you're saying either, but I rolled with it anyhow and it was nice ! The word connection was dope and it complemented the flow powerfully...nicest sounding flow I've read here for a while...Nice post. Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:28:00 02/05/03 Wed
yo...nice shit Vis....gotta agree...i have no clue what it was really about...hahaha....but i was likin it for sure....flow was smooth as hell, nice balanced use of multi's, nice line connection like Mik said, excellent word usage...and nice way of flippin lines and switchin up rhyme scheme...i always like to see it when people remember to pay attention to those factors too.....keep this shit comin, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:21:56 02/05/03 Wed
thanks for the replies...this was one of those posts that i was just lettin my thoughts go, but i couldnt necessarily put em in words EVERYONE could understand......but i understand it perfectly cause it came from me....sometimes it be like that (NT) -- Vis, 14:44:50 02/05/03 Wed
My end is coming but I fear for my son he's so young and innocent.. I'm so scared of the truth that I wont always be here to protect him.. i'ts so scary to think we truly are in the last days of this system of things! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:43:41 02/04/03 Tue
Dope, I feel like an end iS coming toO man. I have these visions like I see whats really happening in the world but no one cares, so concerned with themselfs. Thats why I spit and feel so passionate for hip hop. Sorry ta bum you out, its just that I'am sorta of manic depressant and lifes been hard no matter what I do. Nice thoughts much love and respect in these last days we will flow forever after the world awakes. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 22:01:30 02/04/03 Tue
trust me man I feel you I got the same problem.. always down my kid makes me smile though but it keep getting harder peace thanks for reading! (NT) -- Path, 22:07:17 02/04/03 Tue
dope as hell....i found the flow EASY except at times i had to read a little faster to catch where it rhymed at parts like you switched to a whole other scheme and then suddenly fell back to the recent.....definately feelin you on the content, the world is going to shit....soon to be hell on earth for real and it wont be pretty (NT) -- Vis, 22:53:29 02/04/03 Tue
I can invision you sitting down, outside, spilling this out. It carries a consistent mood, everything falls into place nicely. I like the way you write too, thankx for the positive feedback. Peace. (NT) -- Blueprint, 22:55:35 02/04/03 Tue
Too be honest G.O.D I'm tired ass hell ...so I'ma have to wait til tommorrow to peep this...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3 Nation.....19 million strong but lost in the wilderness with the wicked, 01:25:54 02/05/03 Wed
I truely enjoyed this...especially for the deep meaning behind every intricate sentence there possibly was...strong images along these words that I pick up when I read this because of my religious beliefs...being a subject to the JW, this post here reminded me of "the last days of this system of things"...and I felt how you sort of spelled out your devotion to your son...it's emotional... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 01:28:57 02/05/03 Wed
i cant relate to the love you feel for your child, because i havent felt that type of love seing that i dont haven't dropped a seed yet....but i have watched the youth over the years and it is sad to say that they aren't getting a fair chance in life..... but besides all the deep ish', let me say that the wordplay was wonderful. (NT) -- does it matter, 10:03:18 02/05/03 Wed
I know exactly what your stating. -- Lil Lucky, 12:53:02 02/05/03 Wed
Just some thoughts, Lifes a complete ride and at times I just wanna get off!! Nothing great or wonderful, its just been an ugly day again. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:29:47 02/04/03 Tue
iight .. man your depressing me.. damn man it's your birthday get off the net and get some pussy.. I feel your thoughts just to depressing.. and I got depression.. so when I read shit like this I reflect on it hard.. keep writing cheer up man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:50:14 02/04/03 Tue
ths was long.....i just couldnt read the whole thing.....the content.....i feel you for real, im going through the same shit....except the rich school and all that, but anyway...i see potential for flow, looks as if it really needs to be worked on, but iono...i dont know how you flow so it might be right for you, i just couldnt get into it....but caught the message well....from what i read (NT) -- Vis, 23:05:24 02/04/03 Tue
first i would like to say that this post was from the heart. many dont rap about the type of shit that realy matters to themselves anymore.. you did, and you did it well...second i would like to say that in a critical point of view, i thought it was a bit to long... clean post.. one (NT) -- does it matter, 09:57:51 02/05/03 Wed
Our Situation -- Blueprint, 21:04:06 02/04/03 Tue
I can feel u man, I don't have allot of faith in the system. I just don't want 2 become its next victim. Short and not allot of flow, but u had some nice thoughts in here. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:37:17 02/04/03 Tue
naw I cuaght the flow morst kids in here got see chew food new and groove to catch a flow, but I felt this I like how you write man peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:54:05 02/04/03 Tue
yea it flowed pretty nice, but im in one of them stages that reading ish like this really dont interest me anymore cause this country will never changed....it dont matter how hard people strive to make it better...someone even told me that they set up who will and wont be president and votes dont really mean shit from the people...its the electoral votes from some faction...i dont remember i stopped paying attention to politics a LONG time ago...i was kinda skeptic, but in this country who knows (NT) -- Vis, 23:20:38 02/04/03 Tue
i realy felt this post.....wish it were longer but all in all it was not only the truth but the truth written with skill.. one (NT) -- does it matter, 09:52:05 02/05/03 Wed
(}~{A couple keystyles}~{)FeedBack Please -- Souliberty, 07:26:23 02/03/03 Mon
What's this Supermarket 'shop while you listen' ?...lol maybe you were just spitting really quietly...These lines looked way too long and I wanted to hear you spit it, but instead I got 'Musak' ...The flow definately improved on the second verse though and it has to be said that the vocab was pretty ill...Nicely written in parts (you could of spit it over that beat and proved me wrong about the long lines) ...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:06:37 02/03/03 Mon
I couldn't hear the audio, but the lyrics seem decent....You just have to continue "doing you"....there's nothing wrong with long lines...it's just that a lot of people are use to sounding like everybody else......Keep this up and stay up.....and work on spelling...... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š....., 11:58:02 02/03/03 Mon
HAHAHA@muzak.. woulda been way better making it audio.. I know you're a hell of a spitter, so why didnt you make it audio? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:25:50 02/03/03 Mon
lmao at the music I felt like I was in a hip hop elevator with Talib as the door man "which floor kid?" the text was pretty dope man why didn't you make a audio..? get to it before I STEAL YOUR BEAT.. joke.. hmmm.. maybe not.. naw playing.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:39:54 02/03/03 Mon
good ish.. madd props -- INS, 14:54:01 02/03/03 Mon
Couldn't download but lyrics had decent contENt but cut down ya lines cus It's tireing ta interpret at times keep posting htough def. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 15:39:13 02/03/03 Mon
couldnt peep, audio......text was fullfillin.....a good read....tight lines in there....the last two bars of the second verse stood out...not believin he gave us the freedom to think cuz he needed to make sure we'd achieve and be greatness}"""". (NT) -- styliztik....aka....quote, 17:02:05 02/03/03 Mon
Thx Fer all the feed back, I didn't make this an audio because the beat isn't mine and I just keyed these up at a different site and figured ya'll'd like em... sry about only postin the Hi-fi version tho, It's the only one I can find...lol at it bein elevator music, sounded alot to me like some covert ops shit...anyway, thnx again...piece... (NT) -- Souliberty, 04:31:31 02/05/03 Wed
Its my 21 B-Day today and I just feel bumed out so heres a little slash hardcore slash vision. I call it "Overthrowing The Word"PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 15:54:11 02/04/03 Tue
nice post man i liked alot of this one. Happy Birthday bro.No lie mines is tommorrow i'll be 23.were getting old son....stay up peace. (NT) -- STARKS, 16:57:28 02/04/03 Tue
It was alright.....not as good as the one I peeped by you yesterday.....But anyways, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.......Have a good 21st......Try Smirnoff Ice.....you'll like it.....HAHA....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:27:04 02/04/03 Tue
Read this earlier but I didn't get a chance to reply.......liked this one, had some nice lines in there. Hope you enjoy the rest of your B-day.....peace (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:00:02 02/04/03 Tue
I thought I peeped this out.. I guess my critique didn't come out.. I thought it was tight.. keep doing it man peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:13:36 02/04/03 Tue
SHORT KEYSTYLE TO REMIND EVERYONE IM STILL BREATHINbored in my PowerPoint class so I felt like postin this.Peep yall.I call this piece, -=Keystyle in PowerPoint Class=-.**ALL FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS APPRECIATED** -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 14:36:14 02/04/03 Tue
flow was sik....very nice for a quik lil drop, i spit it to this rjd2 beat called *the proxy*, ish flowed like water...nice to see ya 'round...pz (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 14:52:58 02/04/03 Tue
tight, better than all that dark evil shit yo be droppin.....to me anyway (NT) -- Vis, 14:57:58 02/04/03 Tue
Nice keystyle, hope you get more time for the next post I'll peep it PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:04:57 02/04/03 Tue
Str8....well spoken (NT) -- SickNen, 16:10:11 02/04/03 Tue
Dope.....it was sort of what I expected from you......Semi-abstract ideals mixed phantasmagoria....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:34:27 02/04/03 Tue
This was real nice man.......my favorite lines were the first 2, they flowed real nice. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:10:04 02/04/03 Tue
this was a dope key..alot of nice imagery..last line was cool...uno (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 19:14:56 02/04/03 Tue
dope man.. pretty vivid for how short it was.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:10:38 02/04/03 Tue
PRE-WRITTEN....not near my best...but it was just what came out as i wrote....i been on this tip lately -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded w/ OMNI, 14:36:00 02/04/03 Tue
this gave me the thought of six degress of seperation...seemed kinda what you were getting at..i unno.. it was dope though...flow was coo, and the content was nice...nice to see ya dropping some text.....stay up Vis....peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 14:56:45 02/04/03 Tue
Kinda short but content was nice, I see possabilities if it was longer PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:08:48 02/04/03 Tue
Yeah, it was short.....But sometimes, you have to realize that your BEST ideas come out when you just let your mind take over your fingertips and type....This is an example of that...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:38:34 02/04/03 Tue
Although it was brief, the content really spoke to me. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:43:14 02/04/03 Tue
damn man this was short as Human mis-conception of time.. but I liked it. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:03:54 02/04/03 Tue
REPOST.........ANOTHER PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 1.......Warning: h Ł k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops....BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING.... -- h Ł k §-A-g Ř ń/|_ A \/ Ą § h...aka tHŁ l e § h ř |Đ e § § Ą Ł| JŠ, 17:28:13 02/04/03 Tue
Again that is a nice read.........last line was pretty true and clever......some of the names you choose from the Old testament are funny to read......be very hard to spit.....man I'm wondering if you can speak Greek or Hebrew......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:59:06 02/04/03 Tue
Wow. Looks like you spent some time on this. Full-credit for originality. (NT) -- Blueprint, 20:52:58 02/04/03 Tue
now jesus comes from hebrew original text nice I like that you have this knowledge down.. did you get my e-mail? this was nice man better then the second one to me.. just more substance to me.. more to chew on, peace brother! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:59:33 02/04/03 Tue
I would expect nothing less of you, another fine post. I feel u, I tried college but I felt like I was in a cage. Maybe I'll go back for music production who knows nice post ya knowledge is stunning yo pEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:54:57 02/04/03 Tue
THIS IS KIND OF SLOPPY COMPARED TO SOME OF THE STUFF I HAVE READ ON THIS BOARD. ITS ALSO JUST SOME THOUGHTS OF MINE....PLEASE READ......AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. MY FIRST TIME TO THE BOARD -- does it even matter????????, 19:27:56 02/04/03 Tue
I liked it.. The rhyme scheme doesn't always line up, but I dont' think you were concerned about that. Good topic, there's some truth in there. (NT) -- Blueprint, 20:46:51 02/04/03 Tue
very well thought out man.. I feel the same way.. I hate the fact of all the ignorance that goes on underneath the governments cloak.. I actually wrote a song about it on my 2000 album called "United Snakes Of America!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:02:38 02/04/03 Tue
Very nice thoughts in here man, check blueprints post, hes feeling it. (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:41:24 02/04/03 Tue
20 bars that I wrote this morning -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 16:06:40 02/04/03 Tue
haha..this was dope Brail...i really enjoy your posts..you got a nice style, and flow is impecable...keep dropping brotha...stay up...peace~ (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 16:10:48 02/04/03 Tue
Nice bars brail, the last lines were funny about nappy heads and hairbrushes. Not used ta seeing ya post short but still dope content like the rest of them> PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:13:14 02/04/03 Tue
iight...thiz was......str8 (NT) -- SickNen, 16:20:26 02/04/03 Tue
cool little flow. keep em comin. always a pleasure. one (NT) -- starks, 17:02:02 02/04/03 Tue
Good writing......keep up with the multisyllables....it'll help you grow into polysyllabic real quick....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:23:12 02/04/03 Tue
Man.....this was heat.....some of tha lines were pretty vivid and tha flow was smooth......nice work.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:53:40 02/04/03 Tue
dope flow man.. real smooth... audio? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:08:56 02/04/03 Tue
I'm jealous. That had to be fun to write. Keep it up. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:27:15 02/04/03 Tue
keystyle....I call this piece.....Exercising the Senses......reality is tanited by so many different things....i simply try to medium with them....peace -- Essence...........AM, 15:24:13 02/04/03 Tue
Yo nice spit, i'am feeling this, nice imagry in here essence!! Real dope post keep it up yo. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 15:59:17 02/04/03 Tue
Thiz shit iz nice....tha truth iz within each bar U type "kid." -- SickNen, 16:02:48 02/04/03 Tue
HOTT.....this was cool. definitly feeling you on this. stay up.peace (NT) -- starks, 17:11:34 02/04/03 Tue
Basically, you were describing the basic life of the "everyday men".....HAHA, Keep this up and stay up..... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:31:23 02/04/03 Tue
I liked this cause you focused on a lot of little things that don't usually get noticed.......nice post.......keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:04:59 02/04/03 Tue
this was nice as hell but Moses never decided.. he was choose by his creator.. I won't say his name as to bring about Controversy.. real nice post though I felt this to my core.. keep at it... and see if you can answer my question since nobody attempted on my thread.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:17:30 02/04/03 Tue
HipHop! the now and then and what could have been.PEEP -- STARKS (THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 17:06:52 02/04/03 Tue
Very good.......indeed......Thanks for bringing back memories of Black Sheep......You've improved since the last time I peeped one of your verses....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:19:43 02/04/03 Tue
This was a real nice read ...and you touched on some important factors...just felt the last lline let down the finish..... but apart from that... this was solid.......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:48:01 02/04/03 Tue
I liked the direction of this. Nothing wrong with payin tribute to the old school. You forgot Rakim though. It's cool though, keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:23:29 02/04/03 Tue
This flows together really nice in a lot of spots...That "cord" line was cool.....Throw one more line at the end for a strong ending. (NT) -- Blueprint, 20:59:39 02/04/03 Tue
very nice man this was heart-warming.. foreal.. nice tribute.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:05:21 02/04/03 Tue
RePoST...............AUDIO battle..........Just wanted a bit of feedback........Its only 1-30....PeAcE -- Eternal Student, 18:03:22 02/04/03 Tue
it's hilarious what happened to my audio I asked a question and got not a answer.. real clear audio.. I think this was coo' real playful and fluid.. tight audio man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:55:39 02/04/03 Tue
THE GAME OF LIFE....yo,i made it short 2 see what u think ....if itz cool i'll post a whole song but this just a sample 4 mouths to taste test -- THa LOST 1, 13:31:37 02/04/03 Tue
THE GAME OF LIFE??...son you done lost...haha...on the real....find a solid rhyme scheme and follow it....work on your content and write more yo....p'z (NT) -- Nakixem of AM/OMNI, 14:23:48 02/04/03 Tue
Nah, don't even post the rest. matter of fact just elevate till you got something ta post. some words were all right maybe, be u need ta put more thought in a rhyme PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 14:30:25 02/04/03 Tue
flow was there...but it was mad short...add more, that opening line was ill to me though (NT) -- Vis, 14:39:58 02/04/03 Tue
wat Vision said, my thoughts exactly...... (NT) -- Essence....AM, 15:45:55 02/04/03 Tue
I agree.. but don't give up from diss-apointment.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:52:09 02/04/03 Tue
Who wanna battle? -- SickNen, 15:56:14 02/04/03 Tue
Dman! Iz there not ah head on site that can take me on? (NT) -- SickNen, 16:06:17 02/04/03 Tue
........... (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 16:08:32 02/04/03 Tue
So.......U battle'n or what? (NT) -- SickNen, 16:12:57 02/04/03 Tue
If so.....then post....... -- SickNen, 16:16:37 02/04/03 Tue
UMMMMMM.....So...There aint ah head in here willin' da battle... (NT) -- SickNen, 16:30:12 02/04/03 Tue

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