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KEYSTYLE........just got offa work, felt like dropping some shit.....peace~~
-- Essence...........AM, 01:02:06 01/28/03 Tue
- no doubt a quality read. great word play. peace (NT) -- starks, 10:44:17 01/28/03 Tue
- damn.. this text grabs me.. the vividness was evident from the very first words.. good job man, this was nice! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 11:35:36 01/28/03 Tue
- i read this few times it was that good, word play was compelling dawg (NT) -- rusty, 13:23:30 01/28/03 Tue
- I read this shit yesterday and didn't respond cause I got kicked off, but all I got to say is this was well worth the read, content was ill, wordplay was phat, all I can say is stay in space cause you at no one is at, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U, 14:47:31 01/29/03 Wed
- This was a nice piece for real. Your words spoke volume. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:57:28 01/29/03 Wed
- was kind of short... nice wordplay and usage of words... dope post kid. (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:34:28 01/29/03 Wed
DEVELOP A WINNING INVESTMENT STRATEGY-WITH EXPERT ADVICE FROM "THE NATION'S #1 MONEY MANAGER" ***this you can't follow unless you can*** -- sincerely, Peter Lynch, 22:51:57 01/28/03 Tue
and PLEASE NOTE: the link inside is for an html color page in case theres kids in here who either can't change their font colors yet or only know codes for the basics... (NT) -- Peter Lynch without the money, 22:55:26 01/28/03 Tue
wdf was all this shit? lmaoo @ cock slosher... this was odd... what kinda drugs u on? "money see, monkey do i'll fuck with me to you fuck with you..." lmaooo (NT) -- Psych, 00:01:51 01/29/03 Wed
lay off da extacy yo (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 00:25:58 01/29/03 Wed
What are you talking about Psych? This looks like your style.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 00:41:28 01/29/03 Wed
Lay off the coke, are u on crack too man? (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 03:06:05 01/29/03 Wed
Oh ya I forgot to respond, I was so qwick to take the colors, anyways this was really weird, this post had me like huh, I didn't know where you were going, I just didn't get it if there was anything to get but I did get the colors thanx (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U, 14:43:41 01/29/03 Wed
At this rate you could replace Bizarre from D12 anyday.........that works two ways though, ill let you figure that one out (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:43:48 01/29/03 Wed
BEEN WORKING Hard ta find time ta write 3rd shifts a bitch WHAT UP LOUNGE QIUCK KEYSTYLE FOR YALL. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:09:53 01/29/03 Wed
Damn it...there goes WARCHILD again... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:44:36 01/29/03 Wed
nice post man. i personally think this is the best of your posts that i've read keep it up. peace (NT) -- starks, 12:23:53 01/29/03 Wed
WoW pat dawg, I thought this shit flowed fluent, content was ill, rhymed like an A.D.D kid, perfect if you ask me, I liked that line fuck it I liked alot of lines, shit was a real nice post, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U, 14:01:04 01/29/03 Wed
i didnt feel this for some reason ??? (NT) -- nemisis, 14:49:31 01/29/03 Wed
No it's not Warchild just Pat D.A.W.G. == Despencing Amplified Words Geographically (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 15:09:14 01/29/03 Wed
I gotta agree with starks man this is some of the tightest shit I've seen from you ever. The first half hit the hardest I though. Keep this up (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:35:48 01/29/03 Wed
Attention Attention Calling all Wack Ass Amateurs Beat off to that Sticky Smut Mag Of Yours With Your Own Blood...My First Battle Post -- G R O T e S Q U E reppin himSelf, 16:06:04 01/28/03 Tue
this was dope man.. I like the way you connected your sentences.. some of the lines I was not feeling.. but all in all this was dope.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:09:36 01/28/03 Tue
Religion will lead to the demise of all. A little something the keep my mind going -- starks(the mouth of madness), 10:32:48 01/28/03 Tue
ummm.. pretty nice flow man.. should've added more content on different scales though.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 11:32:16 01/28/03 Tue
i like this (NT) -- rusty, 13:20:48 01/28/03 Tue
This was alright, but like son said up top you could have went more indepth. Keep doin ya thing though (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:40:26 01/28/03 Tue
flow was their, scheam was aight, pretty discriptive, nice post, keep on....peep mines above (NT) -- Grotesque, 17:23:33 01/28/03 Tue
*Repost* My understandings of Overstandings and creations of creating.. Just be, the truth is always present why spend time searching for the obvious..? -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 11:44:25 01/28/03 Tue
the rhyming was pretty cool on this one, though some lines were pretty choppy i though, a pretty good try (NT) -- rusty, 13:27:09 01/28/03 Tue
I was feelin this, you had some real nice word connection and gave some good imagry. liked the buzzards sequence. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:45:23 01/28/03 Tue
This was some weird ass shit, very nice content though, flow to me was ill, i wouldn't say choppy, very creative shit, nice post, keep on...peep mines above (NT) -- Grotesque, 16:56:24 01/28/03 Tue
my lyrics -- crackco, 16:52:02 01/27/03 Mon
well uh........hmm.........post in bars (NT) -- Vision, 18:06:45 01/27/03 Mon
not bad... sounded like a free-style! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:19:37 01/27/03 Mon
it was ok...just post in bars next time like Vis said....peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 01:09:02 01/28/03 Tue
lil key-style.. for the heads to pick up! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:17:42 01/27/03 Mon
this was also very dope..you got a very unique style, that takes a couple of reads for me to figure out what ya really saying....i like it a lot....ish that makes the reader think....thas what im talking about...keep dropping ill shit like this..stay up man...piece (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 01:07:47 01/28/03 Tue
jus a quick spit -- scoobie-smokin-doobies, 01:15:27 01/27/03 Mon
lol....come on dogg...you serious? (NT) -- Nakixem of AM/OMNI, 12:11:45 01/27/03 Mon
this is worse than my first spit (NT) -- rusty, 14:29:04 01/27/03 Mon
whack -- Nicky Nick, 17:11:44 01/27/03 Mon
lmao... ahahahah.. lol! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:11:28 01/27/03 Mon
u like steppin on rabbit shit?...lmao..dat's wut i understood...and another thing...i like my eggs scrambled but i don't rhyme about it...haha...back to da lab for u homie...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...mournin for Oakland, 00:06:22 01/28/03 Tue
What is the Problem? -- Watt$on formerly from Vocab's Official, 12:24:26 01/25/03 Sat
it started nice but then ya lost me...some of the lines were eh? ..hooks are wack in text but the flow was cool...keep on (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:34:51 01/25/03 Sat
its good......But i dont know.. its missing something (NT) -- Tactics, 12:46:46 01/25/03 Sat
could have done without the chorus, wasnt pullin nothin... expecially in text. anyways, this was alright.. some shit i didnt know why you added it, but overall it was iigh.. nothin eye catchin.. keep elevatin (NT) -- ººmz. mîJå¬pØéºº, 13:31:41 01/25/03 Sat
um the host is mean.... this flow was aiight im cant say anything cuz um im not good as other niggas/./.. -- GONZo, 14:06:46 01/25/03 Sat
scratch the hook......verse was straight....pretty decent flow and vocab here and there....yo you posted on da underground huh? you should bring more of them cats here (NT) -- Vision, 17:16:18 01/25/03 Sat
i actully like the beginning and then you fizzled out. but overall a proper post........lose the chorus. (NT) -- starks, 12:09:39 01/26/03 Sun
this was iight.. it started iight and kinda got worse.. but not to much.. stay up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:38:07 01/27/03 Mon
Quick keypad...Might look kinda simple, but it sounds good with the beat i used -- Tactics, 12:27:25 01/25/03 Sat
uhm...you need to progress some kid, this was weak, look at some other posts and you'll see what I mean. It looks 'simple' because it is...just elevate your thoughts and you'll find your style..keep writing! Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:42:20 01/25/03 Sat
for a key i didnt expect much commin into this, so i cant say that im too supprised... flow was just real simple, mother goose type shit... work on your vocab, everything else will follow (NT) -- ººmz. mîJå¬pØéºº, 13:27:50 01/25/03 Sat
NAH MEAN I DIDN't NAH WHAT U MEAN NAH MEAN (NT) -- GONZO, 14:04:23 01/25/03 Sat
yo' it's definitly not the greatest rhyme scheme you got going but it wasn't that bad. simple but i could see it spit over a beat and possibly being allright (NT) -- starks, 12:01:25 01/26/03 Sun
just nothing with worth.. iight at best, keep writing man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:35:51 01/27/03 Mon
Heartbroken but moving on -- GoNzO, 12:27:30 01/25/03 Sat
Its good to see something diffrent on the forum but to me the rhyme is just not interesting.After i was done i was like.........ok.....yep...now what.. (NT) -- Tactics, 12:41:53 01/25/03 Sat
oh that's it ...I'm out...elevate and make the shit ryhme, I stopped after the second line sonn...damn (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:47:00 01/25/03 Sat
im gonna have to agree, i wasnt feelin this at all... the 'rhyme' and everything was off to me... keep elevatin (NT) -- ººmz. mîJå¬pØéºº, 13:22:36 01/25/03 Sat
sound like some Cam'ron shyt...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 00:40:47 01/26/03 Sun
not feeling this at all. i gave it until the third or fourth line and almost threw up. (NT) -- STARKS, 12:04:53 01/26/03 Sun
yo, i think you would do better writing songs with vanilla ice, got the hint!!!!!!!!!! -- rusty, 12:48:44 01/26/03 Sun
this was better then the one up-top.. keep trying man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:26:18 01/27/03 Mon
I dont know if yall now bout this shit but hear a flow about B-Boying...maybe i need to elevate...but this.is a part time thing (NAH MEAN)...mayb i should stick to breaking.... -- GoNzo (Imma try cuz i need to), 13:42:42 01/25/03 Sat
shorten your bars....elevate (NT) -- Vision, 18:07:48 01/25/03 Sat
*Looks down at Gonzo's replies*...NAH MEAN...YOU NEED TO ELEVATE.."NAH MEAN"... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:23:04 01/26/03 Sun
so "Dick"...u got potential...just elevate and in no time you'll be writin some ill shyt....and oh yeah...LMAO@ u postin ur age n hobbiez n shyt..ain't tryin to diss u but that was mad gay yo lol..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 04:15:12 01/26/03 Sun
stick to breaking sonn "NAH MEAN"...and stop clowning yourself there's plenty of others who will assist (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:16:40 01/26/03 Sun
i feel like you could definitely elevate to where you spit fire. so keep writing and growing.but the key is elevation. peace (NT) -- starks, 11:57:06 01/26/03 Sun
i think ya lines were too long, i stopped readin after the first three lines -- rusty, 12:54:46 01/26/03 Sun
that dick line made me stop reading.. keep writing and elevating! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:22:23 01/27/03 Mon
First part of something i hope to make into an audio soon. PEEP.........It's Called ''Mind Wanderer'' -- Starks (the mind drifter) aka the mouth of madness, 11:50:11 01/26/03 Sun
this was cool...the vocab was nice and I like the content but you say it's gonna be an audio and some of the lines look a lil long y'know ? like I don't see them fitting into the flow as much as others...but on paper it's nice... short but a real good read...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:18:20 01/26/03 Sun
i liked reading this, though some lines i think just didnt flow but keep it up -- rusty, 12:45:30 01/26/03 Sun
I thought this was cool...if you'll be able to serve these long lines well in audio, then that is what's commendable...El-p has done it, but that's a different story...to ME, I've seen more glorification of your rhyming ability than mere mind staggering quotes which interests us more...but I won't hold you to that...good luck with the audio.. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 19:00:08 01/26/03 Sun
this was aight...flow was cool, but ya lines was mad long had to read em faster than what they sounded to make em fit....well maybe thats just my flow, it might work for you...content was enjoyable enough, it kept my attention, good drop (NT) -- Vision, 16:17:50 01/27/03 Mon
Vision hit it on the nail.. I agree! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:18:55 01/27/03 Mon
just a spit, tell me if you like or if you dont -- rusty, 13:23:39 01/26/03 Sun
the only line i seen with any potential was the second line. the rest was no good. keep postin and rhyming and your flow will come to you. USE THE FORCE MY SON AND ELEVATE (NT) -- STARKS, 15:22:23 01/26/03 Sun
Son your wack... -- Tizz the Successor, 17:07:23 01/26/03 Sun
You had to bite & reword two bars from EMINEM...used it horribly too...what a loser...lol (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 18:46:17 01/26/03 Sun
is that your name or your excuse? (NT) -- INTOX, 23:54:27 01/26/03 Sun
WHY DIDNT YOU JUST GO AHEAD AND STEAL THE OTHER NOTABLE FROM THAT ALBUM..."you couldnt make the fans throw up their hands if they swallowed their fingers..." man Infinite is dope in its own way but you ripped off and reworded two of the best "lines" on there...SAD like "Da Raiders" (NT) -- intro, 01:12:03 01/27/03 Mon
-=shakes head=-.....damn....Originality is so easy to grab, yet impossible to some.....keep writing dogg...and buy other cd's other than Eminem's.... (NT) -- Nakixem of AM/OMNI, 12:20:43 01/27/03 Mon
hmmm... this was kinda wack man.. you said the same thing through out it.. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:16:04 01/27/03 Mon
my second spit(i dont give a shit) -- rusty, 14:38:18 01/27/03 Mon
dont matter if you white....should have learned that by now, but you still need to learn to rhyme...like you went from "feel me" to "best mc' to 'stop me' to 'corny' to 'ignore me'....see that all woulda been cool if you left that line with stop me out or switched the words stop me with something that rhymed, cause then that messed ya flow up...try not to sound so.....uhh......'angry', that only works for a few people, be yaself and spit (NT) -- Vision, 16:10:56 01/27/03 Mon
um iight.. I was not really feeling this.. just sounded like you was .. well I dont know.. I just aint feel it.. keep writing though, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:22:50 01/27/03 Mon
::::Quik battle verse...no need to really say his name..from anotha board peep and crit;;;;;;;; -- Lucian0, 19:38:55 01/24/03 Fri
some parts coo, others sucked...flow was pretty consistant (NT) -- Vision, 22:29:36 01/24/03 Fri
I agree with vision completely........ (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:45:35 01/25/03 Sat
you didn't have any decent punches here, who were battling? Frank Bruno? ...other than the line about "reconnect yah jaw" there wasn't a lot here...but 'I should see the other guy' right? ...stay up (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:57:01 01/25/03 Sat
flow was hot, content was a little iffy.. Punches were there, but not very strong...ruff and rugged..would like to see other battle verse.. one -- Watt$on formerly from Vocab's Official, 12:14:00 01/25/03 Sat
um it was allright -- GoNzo, 12:34:26 01/25/03 Sat
Hot Shit -- Venum, 14:55:30 01/25/03 Sat
Keyed piece Entitled..." OV@ Disrupt shit...like Comp. Viruses...and ENRON Paper Shredder's".....Keep it Moving... -- OV@KIL....What else can I say...One Hun'ed///G3n@$yDe...Over 1 and 1/2 sold!!!, 16:59:55 01/23/03 Thu
YOU DO KNOW that putting you're shit a different color does NOT make it better hahahahaha...just playing...nice drop! (NT) -- Pro-Log, 17:11:01 01/23/03 Thu
havent peeped any of ur shyt in a minute...was a nice read..nothing was like WHOA...but nice drop nonetheless..only thing i wasnt feelin was dat george foreman line and the pink font! lol..piece fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL ..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I., 17:15:59 01/23/03 Thu
NIce shit...Genasyde!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N2$yD3, 00:44:45 01/24/03 Fri
this was fucking tight...i liked the morse code line....nice drrrrrrrrrop!! peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:37:37 01/24/03 Fri
i like pink (lol) kewl (NT) -- Gonzo, 14:09:57 01/25/03 Sat
Some shit that I've been thinking about lately. It hasn't happened yet, but it happens to every writer worth his/her salt in this world...Read on... -- §leepý: The ∑pic of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 04:58:36 01/24/03 Fri
haha.....very nice and creative....nice read kid...keep them comin (NT) -- «´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`», 09:29:51 01/24/03 Fri
real nice commentary here sonn...I also like how you set it out , it read nicely and I could relate to the emotions and imagery you painted...nice drop peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ, 12:42:09 01/24/03 Fri
mos def a nice read yo..shyt was lovely how u put shit together...lyrics truly brought out the imagery on wat was going on..caught a lil flow in there 2 lol..good usage of words ..nice drop..keep em comin.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I., 16:24:41 01/24/03 Fri
good ish... LMAO @ to be continued! Already a novel hea, this was tight tho, real esoteric, but backed up with a nice flow and great imagery. Good ish fo real. One -- Watt$on formerly from Vocab's Official, 12:19:46 01/25/03 Sat
**~~DAMN IT..I DID ANOTHER AUDIO~~**...THIS ONE IS ENTITLED..."MENTAL STRENGTH"...THIS IS NOT A PUNCHLINE AUDIO..MORE OR SOMETHING TO VENT A LIL..FLOW IS A LIL FAST BUT MORE ON BEAT THEN PREVIOUS AUDIOS IN MY OPINION..I STILL NEED TO FLOW DOWN A LIL MORE...I'M GETTING THERE..I TRIED CHANGING A FEW THINGS TO IMPROVE QUALITY..HOPEFULLY IT WORKED..LYRICS INCLUDED IN INSIDE FOR THOSE WHO CANT PEEP AUDIOS.. -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.i....Proud Sposor of Da Dlusional Walk For Fun With All Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 17:08:52 01/24/03 Fri
honestly shyt is ight...i think if u make ya lyrix more simple and basic and shorten ya bars a lil ya flow will be more smooth stay up 1ne (NT) -- Luciano, 19:50:10 01/24/03 Fri
it was aight....i dont think you need to make your lyrics more simple and basic at all....OR shorten ya bars....just slow ya flow down. take ya time and enjoy the beat...just have fun with it, when you spit fast you sound too tongue tied and not clear enough...just take ya time with it, trust me you'll be aight and might be better off (NT) -- Vision, 21:38:44 01/24/03 Fri
Yeah work on fitting the beat better.. i wonder if when you write the lyrics if you have the beat going, and you're spittin it as you go along.. That's the best way to make sure the flow is right.. Cuz right now it just sounds like you're thorwing some lyrics over a beat with no regards to how the beat works at all, just cramming it all in there.. This beat is pretty nice tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 04:50:09 01/25/03 Sat
Now the beat I like...delivery still shakey...speak clearer...almost on beat ...get ya timing right...caught the part where you fucked up...keep practicing (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:48:33 01/25/03 Sat
as a keystyle it is dope, I wasn't realy feeling the audio because the lyrics where hella nice but maybe too contrived for an audio (without them I dunno what you are saying)...but nice flow at the beginning of the second verse and the lyrics were sick...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:47:41 01/25/03 Sat
KEYED CYPHER JUST FLOWIN ON EM..........OFF THA DOME-PIECE HOMEPIECE! WHAT UP... -- ===||Swords--->, 04:13:44 01/24/03 Fri
Damn. That's pure shit. I can picture this as I read, and that means it's something good. Never rest. (NT) -- §leepý: The ∑pic of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:03:17 01/24/03 Fri
i could almost hear swords voice rhyming this as i was reading lol..some sick lyrics through this piece..both of ya'll definitely came nice...felt weird reading a text from swords lol..but nonetheless this worth the sorta long read lol..what i wanna know is..why didnt u put blak earth in ur title? or along wit ur name? lololol..fuked up..::shakes head::...lol@da message u left for me..wat a fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL ..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.i., 16:40:15 01/24/03 Fri
yeah, this was a collab right? Whatever, both came nice I liked the part about the "tanantula" and the part about "God passing out brains"...shit was nice and the last verse in red was slick as hell ...nice post peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 06:28:42 01/25/03 Sat
@------{ A U D I O }------@ OK.....second audio........NEEDs SOME FEEDBACK............something I wrote a little while ago.........Show some love on this one Lounge!!!!...........This one is called......'the STUDENTS' Testimony'...........PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 16:37:00 01/21/03 Tue
at least i understood you..cuz i couldnt understand the other dude from UK lol..the flow was tight..beat was ill obviously lol...lyrics were coo..not really my type of shyt..but it was nice...good audio..keep droppin.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL ..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Proud Sponsor Of Da Dlusional Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 17:14:52 01/21/03 Tue
sorry duke.. I can't peep audio right now.. thanks for the look out tho! peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:11:58 01/21/03 Tue
beat is dope... i forgot where its from... first dude comes nice... accent aint too bad... hmmm 2nd guy aint bad.. accent is a lil stronger... but not a bad audio.. good work.. (NT) -- GuTTy, 18:21:36 01/21/03 Tue
Damn, beat was tight.. flow on first dude was pretty nice, was RZA-ish, Sunz of Man-ish.. here comes next dude.. his acccent aint ttoo bad.. ive heard some uk rappers with huge-ass accents hehe.. Lyrics were tight, went well with the beat.. Shit was a pretty damn nice audio.. Who's this beat from? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:52:51 01/22/03 Wed
sick ...I love this and it was a lot better than the last one, I hope I can come like this when I start touching mics. The lyrics very nice and I felt the first part the most but a def nice audio with a sick beat...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:43:29 01/24/03 Fri
**~~Another DluSioNaL Audio..**~~..SEEMS LIKE NO ONE ELSE WANTS TO POST IN HERE..WHEN THE FUK IS AN ABZENT MINDED CAT GONNA POST AN AUDIO BESIDES ME? LOL..YA'LL DISAPPEARED AND SHYT..ANYWAYZ..THIS ONE IS ENTITLED.."Various Moods"..if anyone could give me advice on how to fix the quality..let me know within ur reply.not on the subject line..like post inside the thread..TEXT INCLUDED FOR THOSE WHO CANT PEEP AUDIOS!! -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...Proud Sponsor of Da D-luSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 17:23:15 01/23/03 Thu
was a decent audio....quality..hmm, cant help you on that one besides get a better mic....didnt like either beat....parts of ya flow was good and others werent sounded better when your bars were more even or around the same length....keep at em yo (NT) -- Vision...i got cha back son...new AM audios in the process, 19:44:24 01/23/03 Thu
yeah, u might need a new mic... flow was a lil better... ad libs were real bad..lol way too loud and akward sounding...just try going a lil slower... take ya time.. its like ya rushing threw ya lines... (NT) -- GuTTy... vision, i hope those audios ur refering to are for the cd..lol, 22:42:55 01/23/03 Thu
Since you hate my honest opinion ..I'ma keep shoving it down you throat....Not feeling the beat....Delivery needs work...slow down and ride the beat...stop saying it fast and flow it...second beats better...the rest is the same...bottom line ride the beat...stop saying it fast and flow it... (NT) -- Lyrikil....Having ill lines and being an ill emcee are two totally different things...Remember that ...G3N@$yD3..., 00:54:07 01/24/03 Fri
quality was a little crappy but the audio was off the chain yo...i liked this..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:17:25 01/24/03 Fri
first beat sounded like da barnum & bailey circus was on acid haha...most peepz didn't like da beat i see but i thought it was dope...shyt was crazy...1st verse had alot better flow to it than da 2nd one...but lyrically-wise,i don't think u could have come sicker,alot of good lines in here...keep elevatin and keep droppin audio's...1ne (NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Robitussin fiend, 02:15:42 01/24/03 Fri
yeah i agree adlibs were very bad lol.. way too loud.. flow is getting a bit better.. try to see if you can find a beat with some louder hi-hats and try to ride them.. i bet it'll make your flow better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 03:32:04 01/24/03 Fri
Can't peep audios for the moment, but I love the lyrics. You obviously yearn to improve, and that's commendable in itself. (NT) -- §leepý: The ∑pic of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:11:32 01/24/03 Fri
iight...both beats was iight..second was better though....ya flow on both fell off at some points....but still u came good at alot of parts...lyrics was sick...work on delivery .....keep em comin (NT) -- «´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`», 09:26:30 01/24/03 Fri
my mind -- Rekless, 00:13:07 01/23/03 Thu
very short -- ????, 13:22:59 01/23/03 Thu
Nice...post in Bar formmm...Get a schemem going..??? (NT) -- OV@..took me a while just flow with what best suit's yu..., 17:02:16 01/23/03 Thu
didnt i peep this already??..is this the second time u post this?..ehh..anywayz..make it longer..put it into bar form and expand ur thoughts more and make it longer to get the feel for it.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I., 17:18:56 01/23/03 Thu
ITTS IGGHT (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:49:29 01/24/03 Fri
**~~A D-luSioNaL Walk Sponsored Audio**~~Entitled "Severe Sanity"..I THINK I FINALLY RIPPED THE BEAT ON THIS ONE..IF NOT..CLOSE TO IT I THINK..LYRICS INCLUDED FOR THOSE WHO SAY I SPIT TOO FAST..GUARANTEED ELEVATION FROM LAST AUDIOS I'VE POSTED..JUST PEEP!!! -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I..Proud Sponsor of Da D-luSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 15:35:04 01/22/03 Wed
yea, this was tight....beat was dope, and you came pretty damn hyped on this...good shit D....some words sounded rushed, but for the most part you came real nice...elevation is definetly evident.....nice to see you dropping nothing but audios now...keep rising.....peace mafaka...oh, and the conetent was dope as fuk.... (NT) -- Essence....AM, 15:52:09 01/22/03 Wed
ok, this was better... ur vocal quality is still kinda doo doo... but the rest of it was an improvement... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 16:42:49 01/22/03 Wed
I can't peep the audio right now...not at the crib...but the text wasn't what I expected from you...I 'lll have to peep later might be better in audio (NT) -- Lyrikil, 17:18:54 01/22/03 Wed
wow, it actually played the whole way through without buffering...but emotion, but still sounds forced.....you started out pretty good with the flow then it fell off a little then it picked back up when the bars shortened up....you gettin better keep bangin em out (NT) -- Vision, 22:37:15 01/22/03 Wed
D'l...you doin good by doin these yo...for real...some kids aint got the balls to do it...thas cool in itself...i got respect for that...i think you should slow down. just in general. say things slower and more delibrately...use beats you feel...like i mean literally...some shit you can feel go through you and then just rip it...pz mofo -- N-troh, 00:22:47 01/23/03 Thu
sounded like a horror flick beat...which was cool...flow is improvin...like Essence said,u sounded hyped for this one...fav line was the straight jacket line...Robitussin line too haha..nice audio yo...best one i've heard from u so far...peeez out fool....wun(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Robitussin fiend, 01:51:37 01/23/03 Thu
sounded like a horror flick beat...which was cool...flow is improvin...like Essence said,u sounded hyped for this one...fav line was the straight jacket line...Robitussin line too haha..nice audio yo...best one i've heard from u so far...peeez out fool....wun(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 01:53:14 01/23/03 Thu
I like this beat, went well with the lyrics.. Flow is getting better, for these fast ones.. Kinda reminds me of sunset's first audios, except his flow was still better.. Lyrics were tight as hell to me.. I dunno what lyrikil was talkin about.. Fuck it, keep doin them.. you'll get better and better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 02:02:58 01/23/03 Thu
very nice elevation kid......mos def u earn props....i like ur emotion on this..some words were rushed ....but still...u came nice kid....keep em comin... (NT) -- «´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`», 08:54:50 01/23/03 Thu
can't peep audio.......Text was cool...just shorten your bars up when you key your shit....I used to have long ass lines too till I had to key to beats when I did audios...even though my last verse with SET and Intro was ass, my bars were too long...Don't make that same mistake...from what everybody said, just pace your breathin and key to beats more accurately with shorter lines...should get rid of that speedin up shit...damn@you trippin on Lyrikil...I personally wouldn't of thought his reply was an insult....anyway...text was cool and all....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka Damien Christ of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 12:30:55 01/23/03 Thu
Ha ha ...Wheel chair Boy...Long time no Peep....i must peep the AUDIO...Text was blazin.. (NT) -- OV@..Yo this gotta sound good in audio,...Punches were like aight suhn....peep later,...Holl@, 17:06:16 01/23/03 Thu
umm...yeah.....i couldnt feel it....honestly.....punches were forced, as well as delivery, work on style, u sounded a lil monotonous, no real flow pattern, work on that...the game aint just about tight words and metaphors, its beats rhymes and construction....study NAS (NT) -- styliztik.,...aka....quote, 18:52:55 01/23/03 Thu
Heroine -- Native Brute, 09:43:42 01/22/03 Wed
New topic as far as I've seen. Read some bout drugs but u focused on ONE type. Language was very nice good figurative language in most parts too. Haven't read anyhting by u b4, nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 17:07:37 01/22/03 Wed
Heroine -- Converse, 08:13:48 01/23/03 Thu
I dunno what pat dwag is talking bout..this is the WORST POST EVER READ...This is garbage... (NT) -- OV@..Stopped reading after first two-lines, 17:12:11 01/23/03 Thu
The Birth Of Kataklysm, The Newest Crew To Join The Lounges Hierarchy -- Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:48:52 01/20/03 Mon
Don't delete this, I responded to posts with my name (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:52:22 01/20/03 Mon
oh no...it's begun...a new crew...im fuckin shaking...haha, well this was nicely done, i knew eventually the four up and comers would unite in an alliance, i just didnt know when...but seriously, dont hype this shit out as much as you did, i mean if it was an AUDIO collabo like Abzent Minded did last time, i could see hype, but a basic text collabo announcing your a crew? yawn...well good luck to yas, all of ya, hopefully yours will stand the test of time... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 12:56:07 01/20/03 Mon
very nicely done....all came good....like xitizen said.....try to hype up a text collab too much....still overall it was nice...good luck wit ya crew (NT) -- -«´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`»-, 13:22:31 01/20/03 Mon
another crew in the lounge..hopefully this one will last ..just dont recruit warchild..then the crew will go downhill ..anywayz..this was nicely put together..would be nice if eventually all ya'll turn into audio heads..would hype things up more..nice flow and shyt from everyone..good lucks wit da crew... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL ...Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productionz...HahaHah!, 14:55:23 01/20/03 Mon
I remember the time when you'd have to go through Bennidiction to get a crew in the Lounge... (NT) -- ..., 15:08:14 01/20/03 Mon
finally,a new crew....this shit was tight...all of u came nicely...i figured JRock and Sleepy would eventually start a crew or be in one together....heh...like everyone else said...hopefully u guys last longer than other crews...1ne (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 15:27:26 01/20/03 Mon
Hmm took me forever to get through the first two cuz the flow was so jerky.. LAst 2 were smooth.. Next time you do a long collabo try to maintain your fluidity through the whole thing.. it'll make it much better to read.. The content in this was real tight tho.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:41:06 01/20/03 Mon
yea, this was pretty sik...Agreed with Swords on the fluid part, but overall this was Ill...very nice content displayed...this should be a strong crew...i see Brail holding yall together strong in the long run...dont know why i said that, but i unno....keep dropping yall...peace (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 15:58:01 01/20/03 Mon
Nice......y'all should try and drop some auds eventually.....but on a text level you all have real nice talent.......lets look forward to some decent work.... good luck on the crew thing.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:39:22 01/20/03 Mon
I had a feeling this would happen...good luck...go start trouble and win or your gonna be Mendacious Prophets Part II...unless your just hear to hang out and give each daps on your text posts...do some audios...challenge some fuckas...tell them they suck and attack them like kamikaze terrorists...DO AUDIOS... (NT) -- INTRO of AM, 22:01:01 01/20/03 Mon
fuck text, this was pointless, work on audios (NT) -- //Trojohn\\, 23:13:24 01/20/03 Mon
you guys should join forces with lyrikil and set up a 800 man text collab (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:56:21 01/20/03 Mon
LOl -- willsty, 13:31:10 01/23/03 Thu
DLUSIONAL BEING HIS CRAZY SELF..RHYMING OVER THE COLLEGE GAMEDAY INTRO THEME SONG USING MASCOTS AS THE SUBJECT..THEN SWITCHING IT OVER TO DO A RHYME BOUT SPORTSCENTER..THIS IS STRICTLY FOR ENTERTAINMENT..FUK A FLOW AND WORDPLAY ON THIS SHYT..JUST PEEP AND ENJOY.. -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I...wheelchairs? ..yea..i could rhyme bout dat.., 14:36:35 01/21/03 Tue
nice idea man.. I felt what was going on.. trojan line was dope.. pretty nice shit man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:48:48 01/21/03 Tue
lmaoo this shyt was mad funnie...cornhuskers,tar heel,and buck eye lines were my favorite...had to volume up all da way and that chris berman "whoooop" scared da shyt out of me haha....it's funny da audio u did fuckin around had da best flow i've heard from u lol...one luv for Dick Shaap R.I.P......(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Rich Eisen of da lounge, 14:49:09 01/21/03 Tue
horrible horrible.. wtf man.. this has seriously gotta be the most corniest thing Ive heard online since I've been peeping audios ONLINE.. pathetic.... (NT) -- Morbid Armor, 14:57:10 01/21/03 Tue
THAT'S RIGHT TAR HEELS! WHOO! Erm...nm. Funny shit...I was gonna do something like that, but...not sports like...maybe if I have time, I'll drop it. Good shit. (NT) -- Sleepy D'Wulf, the EPIC of Kataclyzm, 15:00:28 01/21/03 Tue
well.....I found it comical but I dunno if that is a good or bad thing.....hummm......I dont understand a lot of tha jokes cus Im from tha UK.......but I got the jist of it......could have been done better......but I dunno if its meant to be THAT serious !!!!!...lmao.......C R A Z Y (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:08:46 01/21/03 Tue
ehhh... not really feeling this... u should have done this over real beats... sound quality was a major flaw too.. just my opinion (NT) -- GuTTy, 18:14:03 01/21/03 Tue
LOL you're crazy man.. yeah shoulda been done over a real beat..itda been dope if there was a drum beat that went with songs but oh well.. haha.. reminds me of when i made a beat out of the austin powers theme song and the power rangers one.. lmaooo those are hilarious..anyways, drop some real shit.. nice lines though, but you need the text for them.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:03:08 01/22/03 Wed
i think the writing was good...some witty stuff in here...i dont think the way you layed it in audio form worked tho...that shit should be sampled and looped OVER a beat so you can know when to start and stop your flow plus it gives the listener somethin to bounce their head to...i dunno...crits can be helpful or just deflating depending on your ego...just keep pluggin away and listen to yourself...try and create shit you would think was dope if you heard it but had NO IDEA who made it...gl...pz... (NT) -- INTRO abzent minded, 01:43:55 01/22/03 Wed
yeah definatly feelin this shit ....some sick similies... u definately know how to spit your shit (NT) -- Native Brute, 08:32:14 01/23/03 Thu
My understanding on overstanding of creation and creating.. the since of matters is mostly misunderstood.. yet to try is the first step to failure.. so in turn thinking would only result in insainity.. so my brothers and sisters just know what is present and never look for truth because truth is always evident..there-for it in front of you at all times.. just be.. exist! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!" Feat. Warpath, Eminent, Horrid, and ELaSTiCs, 15:04:56 01/21/03 Tue
Nice........real strong imagery here....nice word usage and flow......hey you should peep mah audio^^^ PATH cus you might like that.....PeAcE tho and good work (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 16:13:12 01/21/03 Tue
WHAT THE FUCK IS THE DIZZEAL!?!??!!!!!.....man you need to get at me (wordy48214@yahoo.com)....iight....back to the flow....niceness I see sh!t aint changed you still spittin that real shit....had me hooked from the opening lines all the way through......get at ya boy..peace (NT) -- WORDS, 16:31:44 01/21/03 Tue
Aint seen you post in a long minute.. aint lost a step.. this is standard Pathologist brain food for the kiddies.. A nice read as always.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:58:42 01/22/03 Wed
(((AUDIO BATTLE)))SWORDS vs VISUAL OPTIKSThis is from a diff site.. How he got even 2 votes, i dunno..But peep it, my shit's quality, heh.. -- ===||Swords--->, 00:33:26 01/22/03 Wed
well i peeped urs already..before u posted..i'm cool like dat lol..jk..dat shyt u said bout his name before u started spittin had me rollin...golden glove line was mad funny 2..alot of lines had me rollin..u've elevated on punches..flow was nice..u got into it and shyt.and hyped up while spittin..beat was unusual..not my kinda thing..but its all good..other dude had to many clips..and they werent even funny..anwayz..swords..u know u got this..lol.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL....Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I....Proud Sponsor of Da D-luSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 00:52:39 01/22/03 Wed
"Attention"...Some body driving a 73 Monza sittin on 21in hubcapps......Ya shitts being Towed..........{Feel OV@ in FuLl ThroTtEl} -- OV@....."WahTcHut@WkiNboUtWyLliZ", 17:31:55 01/21/03 Tue
damn look how gully you done got.. lol.. I can't say I was really feeling the style in text.. prolly dope in audio.. peace sun! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:15:09 01/21/03 Tue
Gangsta Gangsta lol.. Yeah im with path on this one.. I could listen to it in audio, and enjoy it more.. but this was still a nice read, at least you make it interesting.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 00:41:50 01/22/03 Wed
Damn!! its been FOREVER since I been in here! Whats up Lounge.. how everybodies NEW YEAR? I'm rusty as shit taking care of my seed.. yall peep it out and be safe.. Whats up SUNSET? FLY? TOX? WORDSMITH? DAMN TO MANY TO SHOT OUT... PEACE LOUNGE!! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:27:14 01/21/03 Tue
yea..u rusty lol...welcome back i guess..maybe the lounge could come back alive since another vet is back..flow was pretty coo..some lines i wasnt feelin but nice read nonetheless... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL....Official Sponsor of Da Dlusional Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 14:41:58 01/21/03 Tue
OK..........humm some of this I was feeling....but it was a bit loose....definetly talent there.....keep writing man....PEACE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 16:25:02 01/21/03 Tue
I am History -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:32:03 01/21/03 Tue
were you mentioning that people don't know Jesus real birthday in that one part.. if you were I give you real props on that knowledge.. over all I dug this .. pretty good shit man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:31:26 01/21/03 Tue
Still coming down from the lyrical high yo! Deep spit very well done again Brail PEACE (NT) -- PAt D.A.W.G, 16:04:09 01/21/03 Tue
NEW POST!!!!!!!.....just finished writin...."The Grace of Failures"....one of my best works...packed wit stimulatin rhymes, engulfin the essence of the art of hiphop.....ENJOY!!!!! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:18:28 01/20/03 Mon
From what I read was straight but make it into bars not paragraphs I learned that shit real fast.peace.. (NT) -- mike, 17:32:36 01/20/03 Mon
damn, this shit was sik...kinda long, but well worth the read...damn, glad to see you got it like this man..you came ill, now its time for you and ya crew to drop some audios....im anticipating yall shit...its gonna be dope...just keep shining b...you got the skillz, pursue destiny within pen..stay up...PEACE` (NT) -- Essence.....AM, 17:56:23 01/20/03 Mon
Can we say long? well worth it though man nice ass post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:38:18 01/20/03 Mon
I thought you would of got more props for this sonn...which is a shame because it's ill and also your best work...maybe worth a repost in a grip for sleeping cats...very nice work...stay up (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ, 12:35:01 01/21/03 Tue
very vivid .. You thought this out as you wrote.. very nice man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:44:46 01/21/03 Tue
i was going to wait till tommorrow to post this, but fuck it.....*~*~AUDIO*~*~......i call it (DESTINY)....peep and leave some feedback....PEACE -- Essence....AM, 17:41:51 01/20/03 Mon
yea man, peeped this early man, good lookin out giving me the link to this earlier, loved your switch up style wise, good to see others trying new things, very strong work man, nice beat, deep lyrics, good stuff man, nice seein ya with back on the audios Essence... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 18:06:15 01/20/03 Mon
i like the beat, but its a little TOO mellow for me...ya flow is getting better, but you were off some...dog you gotta do something more hype man, i have not heard anything hype from you at all...but nice to see you at them audios again, keep droppin em (NT) -- Vision....oh yea the singing was straight too, 18:13:36 01/20/03 Mon
You sound like Slug when you sing.. not a bad thing.. Beats tight, it remnds me of this Latin Freestyle song they used to play (All the asians in Cali love that shit lol..) But anyways, nice lyrics, i remember this key.. Flow is decent, woulda been way better if you wrote it to the beat tho.. at first i didnt know what that heartbeat thing was gonna be.. but the beat drops again.. its tight.. Nice audio man.. 1 (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:32:25 01/20/03 Mon
wzup wit the name of ur audio? destiny? sounds like a name of a stripper..lol..anywayz..the beat was nice..mellow stuff..made me wanna go to sleep considering i'm mad tired..oh shyt..u singing..lol.xitizen jr..flow was nice..chorus wasnt dat bad...nice audio...just do a hype one next time lol... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...no...i aint really on a wheelchair.., 20:33:09 01/20/03 Mon
this sounds like an r&b beat... im waiting for ashante... ur singing.. super... ok, u need a new mic... not a bad flow tho... cant hear some of ur shit, volume keeps going up and down.... but keep droppin.. peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:44:42 01/20/03 Mon
Im feeling this......oldskool type joint........got me thinking......your flow is a bit patchy and your levels vary.....but keep doing it and elevating.....PeACe (NT) -- Eternal Student, 14:12:23 01/21/03 Tue
damn it can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:12:28 01/21/03 Tue
YEA YEA..I'M BACK..POSTING A NEW AUDIO..BLAH BLAH BLAH...AINT HYPIN SHYT UP CUZ I'M RUSTY AND SHYT AND STILL GOT WORK TO DO ON MY MIC SKILLS...ITS ALL GOOD THOUGH..ANYWAYZ..FOR THOSE WHO CARE.I'M BACK..PEEP AUDIO AND REPLY WIT W/E THE FUK U WANT.. -- D-luSioNaL..yea..its me..the wheelchair guy..., 19:56:50 01/20/03 Mon
i like the beat....ya flow is getting better...not rusty, but you still do that fast spit then slow up at the last word thing every now and then...parts sounded nice with that choppy kinda flow, but others would of sounded better if you were more fluent into the next line....lyrics were nice, no real critique there...just keep workin with ya flow, it started out pretty good but then started back to that fast ish...got hard to understand what you were saying...stay with what you were doing at the beginning and elevate on that (NT) -- Vision, 20:13:35 01/20/03 Mon
Maybe you should of kept reading my post, not Bad but I wouldn't be too harsh about other people's post though (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:51:51 01/20/03 Mon
flow has improved, just needs to be polished, you sound much more comfortable on the mic, beat fit you will, lyrics from what i could pick up sounded dope, better than most of your audios, good effort Dlus... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 21:00:39 01/20/03 Mon
hmmm.. not bad... dope beat... u definetly say words too fast, its like i cant understand what u saying sometimes... but from what i remember, and improvement... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:38:35 01/20/03 Mon
i liked this audio...had some dope lines in it...beat was cool...flow is gettin better...it got a lil fast towards da end but i understood ur words newayz...i wanna hear some new AM collabs already yo...keep this shyt up...peace out u oriental urkel with carlton from fresh prince of bel air's wardrobe and samuel L jackson's hair from da movie 'unbreakable'...haha...1ne(NT) -- DiAtRiBe...da Robitussin fiend, 00:45:02 01/21/03 Tue
The flow was aight yeh.....i enjoyed it..lyrics were tight....words were mumbled though but yeh i enjoyed it...lyrics ya strong point huh! niceness though (NT) -- Truth, 06:05:05 01/21/03 Tue
I aint heard your audios before..Nice flow in areas and the lyrics were cool, you sounded quite relaxed which was good but I thought you could of come harder at certain points...but a good listen anyways peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 11:56:36 01/21/03 Tue
damn can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:50:33 01/21/03 Tue
New Audio......"Str8 Rappin" -- Truth, 06:10:21 01/21/03 Tue
Honestly I thought this was pretty good. Better than some I have heard. Flow was choppy at some parts but other than that it was straight. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:30:56 01/21/03 Tue
can't peep audio right now.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:32:59 01/21/03 Tue
shyt was buffering alot for me..so i didnt get to hear it str8 through and shyt but i did peep it all..hard to understand some of the things u were saying cuz of your accent..flow fell off at some points..beat was pretty coo..not bad..i'll try and peep a lil later to listen closer to see if i pick up on the shyt i couldnt understand..piece.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I....Proud Sponsor Of Da DluSioNaL Walk For Fun With Proceeds Going To Wheel Chair People.., 14:48:37 01/21/03 Tue
Got a new job yall, been a minute, it's kind of sketchy but eh..... call it "Lanslide" PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:05:37 01/20/03 Mon
"I'm coming back to reallign these wheels.."..i honestly stopped reading after dat..didnt catch my attention.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..dlusional walk...sponsored by superman remote controlled wheelchairz.., 20:44:12 01/20/03 Mon
it was aight...but i dunno simplistic and been said before....the message cool.....maybe put a twist? i dunno it didnt really catch me either.....but could go on to be summin good (NT) -- Truth, 06:00:39 01/21/03 Tue
Try and flip the topic with some type of an angle or somehing. The more time you spend at you craft the better you'll become (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:37:58 01/21/03 Tue
this was speaking on the condition of hip hop on a off balanced stand-point.. I felt you man.. just keep writing.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:45:16 01/21/03 Tue
"Those who spoke on the Truth of this choked on their Eucharist"... (IN BAR FORM)... delete the shit below, Stice... -- INTOX, 20:27:40 01/20/03 Mon
i felt like i was reading a hexagon verse for some reason..some parts i understood perfectly..others just a lil lost..cant really see i feel ya on wat ur saying..considering i didnt understand 100% of it..dope though how u dropped ur thoughts like this..keep droppin..maybe when it read it again a lil bit later i'll undderstand it.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...i got wheelchair people doing the dlusional walk.., 20:39:57 01/20/03 Mon
this was complex and thought provoking as hell...flowed nice as hell too...i couldnt tell if you were questioning God or questioning people who look to him...i prolly missed the message on alot of this though...different side of you Intox, did not think you ever delved this deep...would like to see more of these tastes from you...outstanding work from what i picked up... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 21:07:28 01/20/03 Mon
This doesnt really surprise me from you...you seem like the kinda person who can write like this (not that i would know you from a hole in the wall) but this was a really nice read...flowed sick as usual...youre good at speaking in multis...ok now excuse me while i go back to my laser disc and devil worship...pz donkey lips... (NT) -- INTRO from Camp Anawanna...we hold you in our hearts...and when we think about you it makes me wanna FART..."it's i hope we never part now get it right or pay the price!", 21:33:00 01/20/03 Mon
this was about my stance on organized religion... basically, I feel that it is a man-made institution and an arrogant one, at that. Humans are not the MOST important beings on Earth, they are just part of a larger entity in which all components are equal in importance, in terms of contribution to the whole of that larger entity. In other words, if humans vanished, the Earth would not cease to exist, nor would other forms of life. -- INTOX... peep for more, 00:09:05 01/21/03 Tue
i felt this.made you really look into it deep and made you had to think bout it proper...real nice flow was good aswell....i found it hard to understand some but i liked it a LOT -- Truth, 05:56:38 01/21/03 Tue
Some of this I understood, the rest I didn't comprehend. It flowed nice as hell though. Really feelin the opening line. Your second bit of commentary makes me think you've taken a few philosohphy courses (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:44:29 01/21/03 Tue
I wasn't sure exactly what your point was..but you made me think and that's why I liked it...it had nice multis too but some of the lines took a second reading so it was difficult to catch the flow in areas...but it was still intelligent and thought provoking and well worth a read...peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:09:49 01/21/03 Tue
very well done TOX, you based alot of sense on what I already think.. I think you pulled this style off very good.. the cross.. is pagon.. I wonder if you know why I say so.. or if you even really care? lol.. but I give you props for your diversity.. peace dunny! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:40:35 01/21/03 Tue
For Faith...For Race...For Power...For Oil...brand new audio...the first since the tournament...***REIGN OF TERROR*** political ramblings and protests...onward to Iraq...praise Freedom of Speech... -- XitiZeN, 17:06:22 01/20/03 Mon
..i was gonna d/l this beat to use it on an upcoming audio..there goes dat idea..unless i do a remix or some shyt lol...nice lyrics ..flow was coo...the chorus was coo and all..just didnt like the way u said the chorus..dont know wat the fuk u were on when u did ur ending lol..keep droppin fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Originator of Da D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I., 17:22:14 01/20/03 Mon
sorry, can't peep audios (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:24:30 01/20/03 Mon
this was a very powerful post Xiti...feeling everything about it...you came very nice with the flow, and your content was superb...glad to see you dropping ill shit, and shining like this....you killed it man..absolutely...keep on.....PEACE (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:34:11 01/20/03 Mon
Lyrics were good.. flow nice for the most part, the chours flow was the best part to me.. Some words you stretched to fit the beat, but not too many.. Some parts your voice wavered too, which hurt your delivery... Beat is pretty tight, good selection.. LOL i agree with DL about the last part haha.. Decent drop.. worth a listen.. Oh yeah, ill go first on that Gutty collabo.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:01:38 01/20/03 Mon
ok.. this was kinda weird... content was good.. could work on quality... otherwise.. nice work (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:53:03 01/20/03 Mon
i like this, this was different but real good..keep up dude..holla at me (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 23:15:15 01/20/03 Mon
Beat is hot........your flow suits it well.........nice hook........reminded me of a 'Pschyco Realm' track........the last bit was doing mah brain in tho... apart from that .....good work.....pretty deep.......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 13:57:50 01/21/03 Tue
(((AUDIO))) BEAT IS MURDER!! "THE FIGHT SONG" I kill it... Drop a reply -- ===||Swords--->, 15:25:06 01/20/03 Mon
i tried to dl it, and it said 404 not found..we had this problem last time, but then it eventually worked...ill keep trying...peace... (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 15:47:08 01/20/03 Mon
I like it...it has a sick flow at the start and that's where the best lyrics were..the loop is nice and I like the double voiced parts..it gives it a good 'drama' ...nice audio peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:59:13 01/20/03 Mon
Yeeeeah.........thats better.........the levels are perfect on this one.......nice lyrics and flow.....beats tight too.........nice work.......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 16:47:08 01/20/03 Mon
alot of adlibs ...some were off..sounded like an echo adlib..wasnt feeling dat..beat is mos def nice..props on dat..lyrics were nice as well as flow...overall good audio..just a few adlibs were kinda ehh 2 me..nice shyt though..and the voice and volume was exactly right ..i been peeping ur latest audios and the beat seemed louder then ur voice which made it hard to hear..dont know if dats cuz i'm peepin it on Lo Fi..but it was perfect now..keep droppin fool.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL Da Originator of Da D-luSioNaL Walk..Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions .., 17:00:18 01/20/03 Mon
sick man, im loving your style and voice on this one, just rippin your own beat...adlibs were nice at most times, loving how hype you are...damn, good work there Swords, we (i) need to get crackin on our comp audio... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 17:17:35 01/20/03 Mon
soundclick is doo doo... sorry.. i tried (NT) -- GuTTy.. i'm still a Yao Ming fan, 23:45:04 01/20/03 Mon
Living life on borrowed time CHI Style -- Mike, 17:13:17 01/20/03 Mon
ummm...."To Be Continued"?!?!?!......please just save us and yaself the trouble and DON'T continue it....this was weak as hell sonn...way too elementary (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:21:57 01/20/03 Mon
just elevate kid, youll see if you stik around what kind of shit lounge heads are on....just read a grip of posts and try and find what you like about them...then apply it to your style...stay up..peace (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:36:07 01/20/03 Mon
Elevate man, might make a better self poem instead MAYBE? (NT) -- Pat DA.W.G, 20:43:24 01/20/03 Mon
"Those who spoke on the Truth of this choked on their Eucharist"... this is some spoken word type shit. You may or may not take kindly to this... feedback APPRECIATED -- INTOX, 19:03:24 01/20/03 Mon
im sorry Intox, but i cannot read this...why would you of all people post in paragraph form? it blinded me as soon as i opened the thread... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 19:23:18 01/20/03 Mon
Deep on tha mental plain, nice post (NT) -- Pat DA.W.G, 20:40:22 01/20/03 Mon
Introverted diction exerted with acurate understandings...many words make up our lives, here are some taken from the excerts of My time embeded mind...PEACE -- Essence...........AM, 15:44:42 01/20/03 Mon
Content nice as usual but ehh im not feelin these types of posts right now.. I need some hardcore tear-heads-off type shti right now.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 15:48:09 01/20/03 Mon
gotta agree wit swords on dat need some hardcore ish lol..like right now i'm just not into the deep thought provokin type shyt..nonetheless..this was a nice post..flow is tight..and the way u express shyt is dope...when da fuk u gonna do an audio u ass engineer... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Da Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions.., 17:07:22 01/20/03 Mon
yo this was pretty nice...flow was good for the most part, some lines seemed a lil choppy though...rhymes were nice and content was good...nice job at expressin yaself...just nothin that really stood out to me here...butoverall it's good...peace (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 17:07:55 01/20/03 Mon
gotta agree wit swords on dat need some hardcore ish lol..like right now i'm just not into the deep thought provokin type shyt..nonetheless..this was a nice post..flow is tight..and the way u express shyt is dope...when da fuk u gonna do an audio u ass engineer... (NT) -- D-luSioNaL...Da Originator of the D-luSioNaL Walk...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. Productions.., 17:09:06 01/20/03 Mon
very positive and powerful expression of thoughts, the standard Essence i've come to expect from your posts, feelin that audio you gave me even more though...post that man... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 17:13:04 01/20/03 Mon
LUNAR -- RAIF, 12:26:28 01/20/03 Mon
LMMFAO This cat threw a chorus in after droppin SIX bars. (NT) -- Brail, 12:58:14 01/20/03 Mon
"Im the man who's got the honies with the nice tits and ass man"...hahaha wtf ? must peep! (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:20:05 01/20/03 Mon
honestly...seek another hobby or something..cuz this rhyming stuff aint for you..a chorus for a text drop? not to mention..a SHORT text drop..this is sad..shyt like this makes me think twice about respecting everyone who is in hip hop.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL Da Orginator Of Da D-lusional Walk ...Da Official Walk of Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I Productionz..HaHaHa!, 14:59:12 01/20/03 Mon
LMFAO hahaha...holy shyt...this was FUCKIN WAAACKKK lmaoo....i think Puffy is startin another hip hopp group...go try out....lol..GOD DAMN U SUCK..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe.....lmaoo haha, 15:31:21 01/20/03 Mon
LMFAO.. Does Kris-Kross make you jump? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:44:40 01/20/03 Mon
LMAO!!!!! (like everyone else).......Sonn, Step away from the Pen and Paper, before ya hurt yaself...hahahaha (NT) -- J£:The®ealist, 16:31:28 01/20/03 Mon
a lil something to see if ya'll are feelin me. kinda of a different flow. PEEP -- STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 15:15:44 01/19/03 Sun
This was kind of short and the flow was hard to catch. A couple of nice lines here and there (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:30:21 01/19/03 Sun
in case you were wondering, I wouldn't do some corny shit like leave "youd like to know" as my name... so that was not me (NT) -- INTOX, 09:59:41 01/20/03 Mon
It's alright -- Mike, 01:12:02 01/20/03 Mon
It's alright, seemed like you didn't have the greatest focus in the rhyme though (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 10:58:00 01/20/03 Mon
!!!!!AUDIO!!!!!....repost........old Abzent Minded collab...Vision and Dialect....."Heated Conversation"......peep and enjoy....jus some older shit for the new cats to peep... -- -«´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`»-, 14:41:09 01/19/03 Sun
Beat is nice, the first dudes flow was nice, second dude came correct too. (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:34:37 01/19/03 Sun
yeah shit was coo......beat was nice.....visions flow could have been tighter....dialect shit was tight... (NT) -- styliztik.....aka,,,,quote, 22:13:49 01/19/03 Sun
damn,...the only thing I wanted to peep here today and I couldn't...'figures. (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:10:29 01/20/03 Mon
Listened to this yesterday, was feelin it in every aspect. peace (NT) -- Brail Optiks, 10:53:31 01/20/03 Mon
Not sure about this one.So tell me. Its called "Rap fiend" -- Tactics, 14:47:19 01/18/03 Sat
ehh....not that good...actually not good at all...oh yeah..Kurt Cobain was on heroine,not cocaine..(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 01:52:13 01/19/03 Sun
this post was not that good, the concept was tight, but your lines just didn't line up, it stryggled to rhyme, the good thing about was the kurt kobain line, it was aight tho, keep on (NT) -- Grotesque, 12:59:26 01/19/03 Sun
its aight -- Ben, 13:55:36 01/19/03 Sun
what is wrong with you people who don't understand the "3 replies rule"...DELETE this wack shit (NT) -- MikMaQ, 04:58:39 01/20/03 Mon
that was aight still, need to work on the rhymin though, tight storyline (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 08:12:01 01/20/03 Mon
Tell me wat yall think bout diz... -- Ben, 13:42:02 01/19/03 Sun
very simplistic....u needa elevate alil more kid...throw some knowledge in ya rhyme scheme.....u needa spit non played shit..."sting like a buble bee"... ??? (NT) -- -«´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`»-, 14:43:22 01/19/03 Sun
yeah like dialect said above, way to simplistic. definitely need to step it up.but keep postin and peeping other posts and you'll do fine. (NT) -- starks, 15:18:36 01/19/03 Sun
This wasn't very good, but don't get discouraged, take it all in stride one step at a time, elevation will occur if you devote the proper time (NT) -- I BET YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW, 16:37:34 01/19/03 Sun
reminds of what J was saying about "doctor suess"...hahaha whatever dude (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:06:57 01/20/03 Mon
The Drunk off of a 6 pack of Natural Ice keystyle I call "My Life" -- Grotesque, lounging waiting for the buccs and eagles game, 12:45:40 01/19/03 Sun
ILLMATIC!!! -- Bianca, 13:45:03 01/19/03 Sun
hott shyt -- Ben, 13:50:58 01/19/03 Sun
honestly......this flowed sick as fuck...i like this....real issue type shit.....keep em comin (NT) -- -«´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`»-, 14:45:35 01/19/03 Sun
proper post....nothing real catchy but the message was recieved....keep postin (NT) -- starks, 15:21:44 01/19/03 Sun
I liked this one -- Mike, 01:26:18 01/20/03 Mon
(((AUDIO)))JUSTICE AND VENGEANCE...The Epic.. -- ===||Swords--->, 12:59:46 01/18/03 Sat
*listening* ..this is nice, dope beat ill flow, ... it would be nice to read the lyrics with it,..like the double tracked parts,,it's nice where the beat stops and you keep flowing..yeah it's dope nice drop peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 13:10:13 01/18/03 Sat
beat is nice... lots of things going on in it but i like it... your flow is good, but you're a little hard to understand at times... damn this shit is long, lyrics would have been nice coz its hard to follow... overall i liked it tho, you sound more comfortable on this one than usual... good drop...peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 13:31:08 01/18/03 Sat
agree about tha lyrics being posted but i like tha flow and tha beat....ill drop. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 17:34:21 01/18/03 Sat
This is aiight man......keep working on your delivery....because you use a lot of words your annunciation needs to be spot on....but this is tight tho......good lyrics.....the break in the beat is when your lyrics sound the best (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 19:40:04 01/18/03 Sat
Swords the beat was ill as fuc, your vocals were on point but I would like it better if you posted them along with your post, because sometimes I can't understand you, but if not your shits still ill, Keep On and on and on shit was llooonnnnggggg (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:05:27 01/19/03 Sun
this was very nice...nice beat yo...flow was nice....pronounced some words odd....buit still nice (NT) -- -«´¨`·...·´¨`Dialec† of A.M.´¨`·...·´¨`»-, 14:51:54 01/19/03 Sun

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