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**AUDIO** -- INTOX, 20:00:38 02/13/03 Thu
- yeah...finally...this kid...lol...nice work...i like the flow...this is the first audio i heard from your stankin rastafari ass...lol @ your still mouthing the damn hook...nice beat too what is it...lol @ the adlibs and the falsetto voices...flow is dope full of multis...good to see some audios from you...i gotta jump back on this train....nice jobby job tox (NT) -- INTROVERT of ABZENT MINDED, 21:31:02 02/13/03 Thu
- here are the lyrics for it if you want to read along with it -- INTOX... I go kinda fast sometimes, might be useful, 21:40:20 02/13/03 Thu
- dunno what the fuck is up but my shit keeps buffering, "FROM WHAT I HEARD"...flow and multiples were mos def on point...the cage beat is dope, but i dont think it really fits with the content of ur verse, it calls for more of the content cage spit about or maybe im just used to hearing cage on it, overall from what i heard was nice...peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 22:00:54 02/13/03 Thu
- YO I NEED A LO-FI LINK WITH THIS 56K YA HEARD ME...HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MI$TA MAC, 01:57:46 02/14/03 Fri
- same thing thats happening to sunset is happening to me... but from what i heard it was good... but if you could get a better link I'd appreciate it (NT) -- GuTTy... why even try to make a cd?, 12:31:18 02/14/03 Fri
- this is one of the best audios i've seen on the lounge....the beat, flow, enthusiasm, quality...yo everything was on point, sickness displayed here throughout...keep it up TOX...drop more of these audios....yo gutty..get at me on AIM about the collab, peace.. (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 14:46:14 02/14/03 Fri
- This only played up to 21 secs....but what I heard was pretty hot........nice clear quality and flow was on point......Id like to hear it all (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:22:35 02/14/03 Fri
- anybody wants me to send the actual file to them so they can hear it, send me an e-mail and i'll give you my aim name (NT) -- INTOX, 18:06:12 02/14/03 Fri
- "3 minutes and 40 seconds?"....You should have turned this into a song...with a hook or something instead of just spittin' "50 bars" or how ever many you had in this audio....Besides that, you indeed have my favorite voice on the Lounge as far as audios go.....Keep this up and stay up.....That Cage-beat was alright.....I'll say again, keep this up and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:11:15 02/15/03 Sat
- Nice, flow followed the beat well. I didn't like the voice u had for the hook, still a dope audio nice job wit the fresh lyrics too PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:30:12 02/21/03 Fri
  lol... well i never claimed it was professionally produced... and I didnt have any kids hanging around my dorm room at the time to do the ad-libs for me... but thanks for the feeds... pz (NT) -- TOX, 04:39:14 02/22/03 Sat
Quick Keystyle.. Wassup to all my fans?! lol -- ===||Swords--->, 15:55:12 02/21/03 Fri
This was nice.....I don't why you got all "bent out of shape" over my reply below....that was kind of dumb you know?....And NO, "multisyllabicism" isn't a "real" word....Thanks for your opinion....Anyways, this key was....Had a little bit of a broken-rhyme pattern going on....Keep up and stay up.....You loud-mouth paper bag.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:33:56 02/21/03 Fri
hahahaha... pop culture sent the flies.. nice man... ill drop (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:52:30 02/21/03 Fri
you got skillz..no doubt about that...But...I wasn't feeling ya style...But Im down in the Dirty..south Texas ya know (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:36:29 02/21/03 Fri
haha... what! this shit was doooope... mad quotables... peep inside mayne -- INTOX, 21:05:40 02/21/03 Fri
Nice post, content was nice some parts I fell off on but overall was dope stay up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.AW.G, 21:20:48 02/21/03 Fri
Dope shit...I rather hear this in audio because I barely like reading text, but this had stand out lines...Ima read it again...lol (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 21:43:33 02/21/03 Fri
I was gonna read this but I gotta go I'll check it out when I get back...One Hun'ed...oh yeah...the only fan you got has a broke cord and one blade...lol (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:54:02 02/22/03 Sat
A COLLECTIVE-CYPHER FROM YESTERDAY.......SHOWCASING THEIR EFFORT ARE.....The Dark Spitter....Darknodin.....JC The Eternal Student....reppin' for the UK...and ΜικΜαQ of Κa�a�l�zm.....featuring a guest appearance by none other than....tH� h � k �-A-c��t�....BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING..... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h....aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 16:22:20 02/21/03 Fri
got damn yall on some higher elevation type vibe on here..my boy B-Will aka blaza tried to tell me...but nice though..but if you recorded it I wouldn't bang it (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:39:33 02/21/03 Fri
i scrolled through and read the first few lines of each entry and if they didnt catch my attention, I skipped it and moved on to the next one... and MikMaq was the only one whose shit I read fully each time... sorry, everyone else... (NT) -- INTOX... his flow was just way easier to pick up on in text format... and darknodin... what the fuck? you've been here too long to suck so badly, 20:59:38 02/21/03 Fri
Read most of this yesterday...Mik snapped ..the rest of ya'll did ya thang..I guess.. really wasn't feeling alot of this but keep doing ya'll thang (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:52:05 02/22/03 Sat
cypher.... warning.... dangerous vocab,metaphors and word usage contained... wack emcees beware of the knowledge -- the dark spitter, 17:05:05 02/21/03 Fri
too too Short....I an't even trying to read this mae....But nice attempt (NT) -- Pat ..1/3 of ...**Da Vills**, 18:41:06 02/21/03 Fri
Some cats just don't get it.. -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:48:43 02/22/03 Sat
What up lounge keystyle ta stay up PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:17:31 02/21/03 Fri
this wasn't bad for a freestyle i guess... simplistic as all hell with the rhymes, but coherent which is always a good thing... my favorite line, flow-wise, was "we all say thug but forget our reasons ta fight/ I'am out ta eat emcees like I aint never had a meal in my life. (NT) -- INTOX, 21:34:40 02/21/03 Fri
I agree with Intox on this.....keep practicing..you can't help but get better..I hope (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 00:32:16 02/22/03 Sat
Dear Death.......................................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:28:05 02/21/03 Fri
I don't know what you're going through in Life....or are you just being stupid?.....Anyways, there was no "multisyllabicism" in this post like there was in the one above...But it still had proof of lyricism in it.....You should have just connected the two together....anyways, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....You can stop writing letters to your mom now....., 15:36:52 02/21/03 Fri
Man, christ Hex, WTF is it with you and "multisyllabicism" (if thats even a word)? get off everyone's back with that.. you dont hafta use them to flow.. Every fuckin reply is like "use more multis" blah blah.. shut up... Anyways i read this before too, basically felt the same way as the first one.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 16:00:43 02/21/03 Fri
Read this before it was alright,PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:27:21 02/21/03 Fri
Dear Death prt.2.....................................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:30:54 02/21/03 Fri
This was okay....I'm not really into "overlooking" the grip of �eatH all too much.....This was nice though....A little bit of hints of "multisyllabicism"....Keep this up and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:31:29 02/21/03 Fri
I read this one before.. Not bad, though ive seen you drop way better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 15:56:47 02/21/03 Fri
real spine tingly kind of shit.. ok drop (NT) -- spitter, 16:54:19 02/21/03 Fri
Read this before, switch it up still nice post PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:24:19 02/21/03 Fri
first ish i've ever posted, not shure if i wrote the flow right -- dip, 11:21:53 02/21/03 Fri
Not feeling this yo (NT) -- Maximus, 14:24:12 02/21/03 Fri
Try stretching your bars' length...instead of having "lines" with just four of five words in them...<<<<..That shit's annoying!!!....Other than that, try concentrating on bringing originality to the table...Try trisyllabic....nah, you're not ready for that yet....Try "creating" different rhyme schemes, different rhyme patterns, add wordplay, word usage, word PLACEMENT....etc....Then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:45:20 02/21/03 Fri
this was real weak... sorry (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:56:05 02/21/03 Fri
Brink of Insanity............................................from the bottem -- Maximus, 14:21:30 02/21/03 Fri
Now this is something that I enjoyed....rather than reading some dumb shit about "writing letters to the spirit of �eatH".....This is a much better showcase of lyricism than the two above....Now...Keep THIS up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:41:40 02/21/03 Fri
This was the best of the three BUT... Did you know you owe more than 3 replies cuz you posted three times? 6 more to go kid... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 16:02:58 02/21/03 Fri
All right been busy everybody just let me tell you how I feel on this thing we call hip hop and efforts we need just feel me on this loungePEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:54:46 02/20/03 Thu
this was ok but i couldnt catch the flow that good, tell your mom's i said happy birthday, oNe (NT) -- maximus, 19:26:30 02/20/03 Thu
To be honest I start reading and after bout half way down I gave up...keep building (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 23:25:08 02/20/03 Thu
that was aight, lost flow in some spots. like the topic though (NT) -- dip, 11:31:42 02/21/03 Fri
No offense, but it's getting kind of "played out" how people rhyme about how "ill" they are......That's just how I feel on that....This was okay though, nothing that really makes a person attentive though...Keep building up those thought-blocks....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:52:00 02/21/03 Fri
Warmaster........... it's been a long time since i posted... so i'm like... uh well rusty? something like that i guess... but anyways... this is a small keystyle... -- Darknodin, 14:54:08 02/20/03 Thu
This was str8......your honesty in this was good and it came across in yer emotions...flow was a bit choppy like a key or summit but its coo....keep ya head up......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student, 17:38:11 02/20/03 Thu
Wasn't really feeling this...keep building (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 23:30:00 02/20/03 Thu
tight rhymes, but the first part didn't go with the second (NT) -- dip, 11:35:53 02/21/03 Fri
lil something i keyed up this morning for them fake cats from that wack site to peep ''Distruction of the Freestyle Fortress'' -- starks (the mouth of madness), 11:25:04 02/18/03 Tue
LMFAO!!! Nigga please... -- ~*{ FuLLCLiP}*~ C-LO **~{ Career-Ender }~**, 13:02:59 02/18/03 Tue
good but kinda boring (NT) -- Tactics, 13:59:46 02/18/03 Tue
how many times can you rhyme "line" with "line"? i dunno... i wasn't feelin this as a battle verse... "lyrical litter"... riiiiiight. (NT) -- INTOX, 18:43:29 02/18/03 Tue
For a quick key, this was nice. seen u get iller but for a quickie it was dope fuck these other wack haters, I peeped that guys post and boy was it stupidPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:12:58 02/18/03 Tue
I agree with vis... why did you use the word "line" many times in a row.. cmon man stop that and drop some real hiphop aiight? (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:26:56 02/19/03 Wed
please don't confuse me with R. Kelly's protege ever again (NT) -- INTOX, 10:32:49 02/21/03 Fri
JOIN IN........CYPHER.....Warning: Intrinsic Metaphors and Hebraims May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 12:47:43 02/20/03 Thu
reply -- the dark spitter, 13:08:42 02/20/03 Thu
My turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 13:17:49 02/20/03 Thu
Again....my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 13:43:43 02/20/03 Thu
AIIGHT heres summit....I been playing chess by tha way !!!!! -- JC the Eternal Student (UK), 14:21:29 02/20/03 Thu
reply... -- Darknodin, 15:20:44 02/20/03 Thu
My Move -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 15:29:01 02/20/03 Thu
AIIGHT CHESS IT IS THEN -- JC the Eternal Student (UK), 17:17:39 02/20/03 Thu
My Move Again "Patzer" ? -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 04:17:11 02/21/03 Fri
...again....it's my turn..... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�, 14:10:08 02/20/03 Thu
....again....it's my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:36:58 02/20/03 Thu
....again...it's my turn.... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:19:03 02/20/03 Thu
....again..it's my turn..... -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:53:46 02/20/03 Thu
CHECK THIS SHYT OUT STARKS U BOUT TO GET FUCKED UP -- Desi Souljah, 09:38:37 02/20/03 Thu
I can tell that I need to start a cypher or something........Look, this was way under par for lyricism....I'm not knockin' your rhyme, just your rhyme style......Elevate, concentrate on originality, word usage, wordplay, different rhyme schemes and rhyme patterns.....then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up.. (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:16:24 02/20/03 Thu
who's tha target? personally i didn't like it... there were some parts that didn't make sense... (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 15:02:10 02/20/03 Thu
ha ha nice try. dude you suck give it up.thanks for the laugh. (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 17:04:30 02/20/03 Thu
fuckin die sandscum.............................. (NT) -- GOD the almighty father (the original hater of you stinky fuckers), 17:09:59 02/20/03 Thu
maN Iaint racist but you are more of a camel jockey than a lyricist, starks would harm u son elevate then try againPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 17:23:03 02/20/03 Thu
Yo check this shit out. newcomer here. try it -- Serial, 10:18:28 02/19/03 Wed
Most of the time I'm not feeling this paragraph form....but your verbalistics made this an exception....Content-wise, I wasn't feelin'...but it was keystyle.....Work on original-content, word usage, and wordplay....and probably a different aspect on being introspective....Whatever you do....DO YOU....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 14:07:34 02/19/03 Wed
wow... this is confusin... you should change your format... this is not my style either... but i agree with what the guy above said... elevate... but always be yourself... that brings originality (NT) -- Darknodin, 17:58:31 02/19/03 Wed
ehhh...content to me...........was horrible, just iono, not...uhh...good to me and yea change that format (NT) -- Vis, 09:19:30 02/20/03 Thu
keep elevatin, change ure style a bit good content (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 09:41:25 02/20/03 Thu
*revise of "President Bush" the flow is better has some new parts -- GoNzO the 16 year old boy wonder, 00:46:43 02/19/03 Wed
not feeling this sorry bro. Keep postin and elevation is inevitable. peace. By the way i say bomb the fuck out of them motherfuckin sandpeople. all of them! (NT) -- starks, 07:45:24 02/19/03 Wed
It seems that you have a sort of "anger arrow" pointed at the topic of a President who indeed needs to be impeached.....Try to focus on YOUR reason for "not liking Bush".....To me, it seems that you watch just a little bit too much TV....You do know that the "news" is bias right?....Other than that, keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:47:06 02/19/03 Wed
I wasn't feelin this shit to much -- Serial, 18:53:31 02/19/03 Wed
Its a good message but u need to work on the flow, try to get another rhymin scheme, keep elevatin, and by the way FUCK U STARKS IF U GOT HATE TOWARDS THEM "SAND PEOPLE" COME BATTLE ME MOTHA FUCKA (NT) -- Desi Souljah, 09:29:24 02/20/03 Thu
been a while what up yall, club cancelled freestyle competition cus people wouldn't get off the stage, the whole party sucked except for one cat rhyming the rest was bull like these new cats on the lounge . Quick keystyle ta elevate'em with.PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G.==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:47:20 02/18/03 Tue
You know i respect you Pat D.A.W.G. I respected your rhymes sence i was T- ayalis and still do.But wasent feelin this one. Nothing at all caught my eye. Just seemed like a bunch of words put together. I know you got dope shit so keep your head up (NT) -- Tactics, 19:37:53 02/18/03 Tue
Yo i thought the shit was pretty good . it had it's parts where you lost me but, overall shit was nice. peace (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 21:21:56 02/18/03 Tue
Good shit though majority of it (NT) -- GoNzO the 16 year old boy wonder, 00:50:26 02/19/03 Wed
D.A.W.G...to be honest I wasn't feeling this...probably in audio but not text...but yeah speaking of clubs...P.E.A.C.E..to all those who lost some one in the E2 tragedy the other night...Just show and proves the actions of one effects everyone ...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 00:51:22 02/19/03 Wed
this was tight man...i wouldnt have thought so by seein that name..it really dont fit you...you dope anyway..one (NT) -- PERSONAL TRADGEDY OF GROUP THERAPY, 17:03:43 02/19/03 Wed
It was good but to be truly honest i couldn't find a beat. -- Serial, 00:54:31 02/20/03 Thu
Some shit i made called (Shutin yall up) -- Tactics, 13:57:01 02/18/03 Tue
Peep homiie -- ~*{ FuLLCLiP}*~ C-LO **~{ Career-Ender }~**,, 14:08:18 02/18/03 Tue
This was allright, reminDed me too much of I "dont give a fuck" with the chorous and some of the flow. some content was fresh but keep spittingPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:00:28 02/18/03 Tue
ok wordplay... the rest... I dont know... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 16:23:13 02/19/03 Wed
BITCHES RESIDE IN DIS ROOM COME TO THE FORTRESS AND RAP WIT SUM REAL RAPPAS (NT) -- J QUICK of FREESTYLE FORTRESS, 00:10:54 02/18/03 Tue
Whatever you post is going to be deleted anyway...why don't you use this time instead of posting and start off by first, looking for a better name... (NT) -- YOUR DAD..., 01:12:20 02/18/03 Tue
i went to the "fortress"...yaul niggas suck...YOU YOURSELF...even bit 50 Cent's whole hook to back down and put YOUR name in it...and even used the opening line...ya niggas is garbage (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics, 12:08:57 02/18/03 Tue
LOL @ you going to the Fortress.. My respect for you has dropped.. (NT) -- ===||swords--->, 01:25:04 02/19/03 Wed
Freestyle -- Georgia Boy, 11:58:24 02/14/03 Fri
this shit is really weak... plus your rhyme style sucks (NT) -- the dark spitter, 13:21:06 02/14/03 Fri
biter -- dlar new zealand, 14:47:00 02/14/03 Fri
Spend time in the lab man cus this aint nothing new, focus (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:16:07 02/14/03 Fri
U can't be serious -- Venum, 15:05:08 02/18/03 Tue
Questions and answers...quick key...kinda rusty...(in the spirit of the NEW lounge of lyricism)YO CHECK THIS SHYT OUT HOT GANGSTA GARBAGE DROPPIN SLUGS ON YA GARDEN HOLMES...FUKK Y'ALL IS Y'ALL WHITE OR BLACK HOLLA HOT SHYT MUTHAFUKK -- Big Mental ILLness Dogg, 17:07:26 02/17/03 Mon
this was nice, made me think, had some creative lines in it...keep dropping, stay up..peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 18:03:35 02/17/03 Mon
that was dope. nice wordplay. the beginning was definitely the better but overall a sick post .stay up (NT) -- starks, 11:30:39 02/18/03 Tue
nice topic. But it seemed like most of the words didnt ryhme. I didnt get to much sleep last night so its probly just me reading it wrong.GOOD POST (NT) -- Tactics, 14:22:35 02/18/03 Tue
key...just keying some thoughts...Peace -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 17:53:51 02/17/03 Mon
hey look -- steve, 19:26:40 02/17/03 Mon
mention repentance in every piece to keep thyself humble leap over giant bundles of reality when I stumble my footing is aligned to the sun, right left and so on I walk in awkward directions as my Essence gets its stroll on,...... nice yo (NT) -- maximus, 19:38:52 02/17/03 Mon
that was cool. nice post liked the word usage. stay up. (NT) -- starks, 11:10:30 02/18/03 Tue
Good post. The First couple of lines, are most felt by me. But the whole ryhme was good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:10:41 02/18/03 Tue
just some shit i keyed up this morning between jobs at work.PEEP -- starks (the mutherfuckin mouth of madness), 13:42:35 02/17/03 Mon
DNA strans showered with forms of deviant sciences,stole the heart of a lion and cloned an army of tyrants, dope line, nice work, (NT) -- Maximus, 13:49:27 02/17/03 Mon
you did nice work keeping the rhyme scheme man...overall a pretty decent piece...keep it up... (NT) -- Mental ILLness, 17:25:31 02/17/03 Mon
Some simple verse for upcomin audio shit! Peep and critique! hate if you want, I dont care! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 21:48:53 02/16/03 Sun
. -- maximus, 23:28:38 02/16/03 Sun
100 percent wack hoe wut grade you in boy (NT) -- rezzarecta tha blankman, 02:25:27 02/17/03 Mon
(((AUDIO)))Main Loop Presents = "Attack of the 50 Ft. Beats" pt. 1 - Mike's Birthday -- ===||Swords--->, 17:15:46 02/16/03 Sun
Sorry, I wanted to check em out but this is a crappyass pc and I cant check any audio on it! my bad! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 21:53:03 02/16/03 Sun
this was dope... one of the best beats you have ever made... keep doing ya thing... and thanks for being one of the VERY few who came through for my "attempted" CD... appreciated (NT) -- GuTTy.. had a similar vibe as "worst come to worst" by dialated..., 23:16:35 02/16/03 Sun
REPOST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET ....."One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 17:40:05 02/15/03 Sat
interesting post... your rhyme scheme seems to have gotten so complex i can't grasp it anymore! the lines that made sense to me were nice but the flow was missing in some parts... overall it was nice, but still most of it is over my head... keep doing you....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 17:48:43 02/15/03 Sat
To TRIPPY FOR ME but it ill (NT) -- Gonzo, 11:01:22 02/16/03 Sun
Werent you gonna do audios soon? I really need to hear one of yours... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:30:22 02/16/03 Sun
....THE DEMONIC ONE SHALL BE SILENCED....FINALLY...IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I'VE POSTED AN AUDIO....It's official, this will be the last demonic type of rhyme I'll write...never again shall I mock God...I call this piece...-=In The Beginning...=-...lyrics posted as well...***CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 23:25:50 02/14/03 Fri
i feel ya nigga!!! (NT) -- plural, 23:33:32 02/14/03 Fri
dayum beat is sik..lyrix nice...ill trak..notin wrong wit it man...all i got to say is..why stop usin a style that made u get this far?..1ne... (NT) -- Lucian0, 23:42:10 02/14/03 Fri
*Shakes head at bullshit reply above*...I found this very interesting...especially when you said you would end mocking God in the title...but this audio I felt THOROUGHLY...quality, lyrics, flow and beat...the verse, despite it having large words...it was simple...I don't know if you can understand that but it was...and I could grasp the concept behind this easily...I wished it would've been longer but I enjoyed what I heard...thanks for the listen (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 23:42:33 02/14/03 Fri
Peep inside.. -- ===||Swords--->, 00:16:35 02/15/03 Sat
tried to reply a little while ago, but my comp froze...so imma summerize what i said then....better flow, nice lyrics, beat ehh to me but still managed to set the mood and stuck to the theme, wordplay and multi's got better also....PEACE (NT) -- Vis, 00:55:15 02/15/03 Sat
this is dope yo, i like it (NT) -- maximus, 01:05:37 02/15/03 Sat
sick audio... the first sample is dope, beat is nice... lyrics are very dope... your flow could be better, too many pauses... i like ur style of lyrics but i unerstand the need to change.... a nice drop... peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 09:33:29 02/15/03 Sat
Nice beat.......nice multis........delivery is pretty good.......dark topic.......I wish this was longer.......maybe a hook........but its tight tho.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 09:55:13 02/15/03 Sat
ya flow shouldve been more rapid on this shit...I personally didnt like anything about it.... just honest with my thoughts... flow wasnt fluid enough and the lyrics were too expected... so the audio lagged in the "interesting" field.... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 12:10:39 02/15/03 Sat
I don't know where in the world you get "mocking God" from.....At least, I don't see any "mocking" in your lyrics....It could be something else but I'm not going to stir-up any trouble...Couldn't peep the audio, but the lyrics had the "multisyllabicism" in it....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...I have heard your voice before....It's decent to me....., 16:38:37 02/15/03 Sat
ehhh sample was nice....lyrics were nice...the way you spit em "Wasn't"....just didnt feel it...that demonic one shall be silenced crap, sounds corny and 4th gradish...lol...anyway stay up....peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 16:47:54 02/15/03 Sat
not bad man... not bad at all... FOR THIS BEAT, your delivery was pretty much on point... but with ANY OTHER BEAT... it probably wouldn't have sounded as good... that dark sounding, demonic type voice shit i mean... but lyrics were nice... you repped right. stay up. pz (NT) -- INTOX, 17:45:02 02/15/03 Sat
Im Back Im Back and i got some stuff to express.....much feed back please....key style -- insignificant, 01:34:17 02/15/03 Sat
other then it could be longer, it was on point, keep spitting it (NT) -- maximus, 01:41:08 02/15/03 Sat
You need to have a fixed, centered-idea, original rhyme patterns, creative rhyme schemes...different types of syllabic-structures.....You know, whatever you do just DO YOU....Keep up and stay up.....and utilize corrective-spelling..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....., 16:31:58 02/15/03 Sat
this was all over the place... you have some nice lines, and some garbage ones... think more about what ur saying... focus and you could be dope....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 17:13:48 02/15/03 Sat
raw03'... wrote it last night... -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:40:13 02/14/03 Fri
Nice i like allot lines this was FResh liked the flow. (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:49:35 02/14/03 Fri
pretty tight man.. (NT) -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 21:56:17 02/14/03 Fri
Great vocab -- Mista Uneek, 12:07:36 02/15/03 Sat
the new ill nigga from the O.C. -- c-walt, 21:49:37 02/14/03 Fri
man I'm not going to diss.. or tell you what to do, just stick around you'll learn alot here.. peace man.. stay up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:59:37 02/14/03 Fri
make it longer man...come on...put some more thought into it (NT) -- Nakixem of Abzent Minded Ink of OMNI, 23:05:14 02/14/03 Fri
you not no illest nigga!!!! (NT) -- plural, 23:39:40 02/14/03 Fri
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (NT) -- Maximus, 01:27:41 02/15/03 Sat
yo you cant eaisilly point out the flaws, off point, dont talk bout yourself, talk about something that matters -- insignificant, 01:48:02 02/15/03 Sat
**agrees with everyone here** -- Mista Uneek, 12:04:52 02/15/03 Sat
$ AUDIO $ THE REALEST INC. -- MI$TA MAC, 02:11:51 02/14/03 Fri
yeah the second two verses were heat... coming through your computer speakers burning us on CD so your crew can peep us... me and a mic is like fire to propane... my two favorite lines... quality wasn't shit though... fix that and shit will be LP quality. pz (NT) -- TOX, 18:33:36 02/14/03 Fri
why is this getting slept on, no fucking audios should be slept on.. first cat sounded like somebody from No Limit, second dude was pretty tight, and Mac you sound like you done came up with the skills a bit.. tight audio, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:29:12 02/14/03 Fri
What up yall been a minute, freestyle competition 2 night and it will be my first. Writing for 7 years and it will all come out 2 night. all my pains, fear, love, and joys will be released. Never felt ready till 2 night like I open my mouth but the words wont come out ha ha. keystyle ta keep me sharp. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:12:28 02/14/03 Fri
yeah, i liked this, escpecially the d-day line that was cool. keep it up (NT) -- mc3(nemesis), 16:48:15 02/14/03 Fri
word man have fun! thats what it's about tight lil' drop.. was not short.. just, it read fast for some reason.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:17:38 02/14/03 Fri
Brink of insanity -- Maximus, 16:35:41 02/14/03 Fri
Dizzamn!!!....this is not the best flow i've read by far, but it was dope...for real....i was feelin the flow, as well as the subject....holla (NT) -- Slum Beautiful, 16:45:34 02/14/03 Fri
This is the dopest one yet.. Flow was very nice...COntent was dope.. I like the ending a lot to it.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:10:04 02/14/03 Fri
ill man.. you got a nice style, but peep others for you will be erased soon.. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:13:44 02/14/03 Fri
Dear Death -- Maximus, 16:50:12 02/14/03 Fri
I liked it alot......I could hear the beat in my head...that's a good thing..one (NT) -- does it matter., 17:13:57 02/14/03 Fri
This was nice too.. I thought the other one was a bit better, and flowed better to me, but this was good too.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:06:03 02/14/03 Fri
Toss up both were equally good and contained deep thoughts (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:57:43 02/14/03 Fri
damn man I was already depressed.. I can't make it through this one! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:09:59 02/14/03 Fri
Dear Death prt. 2 -- Maximus, 16:53:38 02/14/03 Fri
nice thoughts... format was a little rudimentary, but still some bar's shined... (NT) -- a cloudy day, 18:00:54 02/14/03 Fri
I thought this was dope as hell.. very nice display of thoughts.. Nice vent.. I hope that's all it is? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:03:44 02/14/03 Fri
I feel this, nice imagery thoughts were on point nice post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:54:55 02/14/03 Fri
man I feel you more then you'll ever know.. pretty sad huh? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:07:45 02/14/03 Fri
To be audio in the future, probably -- ===||Swords--->, 18:00:05 02/14/03 Fri
Pretty ill post yo, it probabbly would flow like hell in audio (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:00:22 02/14/03 Fri
that pencil line was rediculous! that was one of the illest lines I heard in a while.. nice post all together! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:05:17 02/14/03 Fri
Anybody know where I can get Noah23 - 'Neophyte Phenotype' from... the cds outta print and ughh.com and other sites are sold out... If anyone can assist me in finding this album I'd be appreciative.... peace (NT) -- Plague Language Fanatic who's pissed off about SoulSeek, 00:02:38 02/13/03 Thu
TRY FINDIN" SINGLE TRACKS ON KAZAA...HOLLA...BE BLESSED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:04:31 02/13/03 Thu
i have it "Noah_23-Neophyte_Phenotype-2001-CMS"...and NO u cant have it WARCHILD...get the fuck outta here loser.....bwahahhahahahaa (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 12:32:49 02/13/03 Thu
i dont know what the f**k ya talkin about but i just wanted to reply to this so it counts as a reply (NT) -- mc3, 14:43:22 02/13/03 Thu
first... whoever warchild is???? second... thanks for the info.. you were all so helpful.. but it doesnt matter I'm getting it from Noah himself... peace (NT) -- PLB, 18:26:24 02/14/03 Fri
Just some stuff I wrote last night keeping the skills sharpened -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:31:45 02/13/03 Thu
this was pretty nice..some lines were tight and some were like average and wat not..nonetheless this was a nice piece..keep droppin em.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Da Head Judge At Da 1st Annual Twister Competition For Wheel Chair Kids.., 13:56:01 02/13/03 Thu
cool, cool, could probably do better but tight. (NT) -- mc3, 14:38:15 02/13/03 Thu
Yeah, this had some decent lines....A little different from what you were posting in your previous posts...Keep up and stay up anyway... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:55:47 02/13/03 Thu
yo.. this was hella short in my perspective.... ok post tho... nice rhyme formation (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 13:25:38 02/14/03 Fri
Nice diff from ya usual but just tryn ta keep ya skills up its straight (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:24:50 02/14/03 Fri
erm, heaven -- mc3, 14:46:39 02/13/03 Thu
This is acceptable but I wonder why people get this "idea" that Heaven is "up in the sky somewhere"......Anyway, I'll pray that you get better with time.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:44:07 02/13/03 Thu
IF YOU GOT A BASIS TO BELIEVE OTHERWISE HEKS..WHY DON'T YOU OFFER SOME SCRIPTURE.....YO MC3....I"M FEELIN" YA THOUGHTZ' PATNA'...FA SHO'...SIMPLE TO THE POINT WORDS....TONS OF EMOTION...FA SHO'...BE BLESSED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 02:07:59 02/14/03 Fri
nOT TOO BAD, WORK ON IT MAN SOME WAS NICE BUT MOST NEEDS WORK (NT) -- PAT D.A.W.G, 16:21:34 02/14/03 Fri
Loss -- Lil Clouva, 13:02:22 02/13/03 Thu
right...............er yeah.............oookk (NT) -- mc3, 14:49:35 02/13/03 Thu
I think you need to go over the history of our country and understand the role of the military.....Yes, the U.S. is a bully....But then again, without the work of God, this country wouldn't be shit.....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:48:42 02/13/03 Thu
I hope you all know that even though we got people serving this country, doesnt mean its for the right cause, b/c most if not all military services dont fully understand why there missions BUT FOLLOW ORDERS FROM A PRESIDENT WHO DOESNT GIVE TWO SHITS ABOUT YOU OR YOUR FAMILY, AND ONLY GETS WHAT HE WANTS...OIL AND GLOBAL ECONOMIC POWER...AND SOME MORE SHIT BUT I'D RATHER NOT GET ANY FURTHER... (NT) -- 2mEr_iLL_sC, 02:57:00 02/14/03 Fri
eutopia -- nemo twerp, 01:21:30 02/13/03 Thu
If this was English Composition, I'd give you mad props cause this seemed more poetic for me. Kind of simple but keep buildin from that (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:40:54 02/13/03 Thu
hmm..dont know..it was like cool to read but i felt you could have kept going ya know? ..like add more to it so people could fully grasp what it was you were tryin to bring out..it was nice but yea it was simple..then again not all of us need to use big words or w/e to make shyt shine..so i guess just do you..cool drop though.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL First Person To Challenge A Wheel Chair Kid In A "Sit Up" Competition.., 14:01:57 02/13/03 Thu
yeah, erm i think it was more on the poetry side but it was still kinda cool to read. (NT) -- mc3, 14:41:04 02/13/03 Thu
I appreciate the four-line stanzas and everything....Keep this up.....If you ever want to collab, hit up the e-mail..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:30:54 02/13/03 Thu
AN ALL-NEW POST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Vocabulary May Cause Mind-Stops..BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�, 15:49:59 02/12/03 Wed
"and has the ability to fold your spirit like some psyche origami" <<< that was the illest line...had good flow all the way through but just better in parts, im glad it wasnt a chapter long...good as internal rhyming, i kinda see what you mean about taking multisyllabic rhyming farther...stay up (NT) -- Vis, 17:14:31 02/12/03 Wed
I really enjoyed this one, the multis were sick and the line continuity was good...I don't agree with your beliefs but that's your thing, this was nice work Hex (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm dude is called 'Jesus', 12:13:02 02/13/03 Thu
I AM the rope in this tug-of-war between the � l e � h and �pirit..I AM liken to a rubber band stretched at both ends,..........illness......u simply poetic, but i picked up the rhyme scheme, i see alotta cats doin this, myself included...and when its spit right its beautiful.... (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:37:37 02/13/03 Thu
$$$ AUDIO $$$ THE REALEST INC. -- MAC MI$TA, 23:57:24 02/12/03 Wed
Couldn't peep, net congestion wouldn't allow it. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:06:07 02/13/03 Thu
was dat chaos?? lol...this aint the type of shit i usually have interest in peeping and shyt..but aint gonna front..wasnt dat bad..the flows from everyone was dope..lyrics just wasnt my style..ya'll should like send a demo tape to no limit or something..NOT HATIN..just being real..do something wit the skill ya know? anywayz..take it how u want it..wasnt meant to be taken as a diss...peace.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Wheel Chair Skydiving Asst., 14:09:44 02/13/03 Thu
REPOST.........man this was sleeped on crazy like........no replies?.....peep fellas, and ladies? -- styliztik....aka....quote, 13:53:25 02/12/03 Wed
Listen... -- Tizz, 14:30:34 02/12/03 Wed
This was pretty ILL.....I was feeling the imagery ....and the word usage.....flow was nice too......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:35:20 02/12/03 Wed
Something about this brought out the image of Harrison Ford in "The Fugitive"....other than that, this had bits of multisyllabicism in this....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:43:13 02/12/03 Wed
You climbin the ladder man, tight post (NT) -- Double Take, 16:32:43 02/12/03 Wed
ITZ LIKE THIS DOC'...SPIT THE SHIT...ON A MIC...OVER AN ORIGINAL BEAT...AND THEN BITCH ABOUT FOLK$ SLEEPIN'..HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:08:57 02/13/03 Thu
The Ghost -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 17:59:39 02/12/03 Wed
SOme real shit. I feel it. -- Lil CLouva & Lil Lucky, 22:21:11 02/12/03 Wed
ITZ LIKE THIS...IF YOU CAN PUT SOME FIRE TYPE EMOTION IN THIS WHEN YOU SPIT....I WANNA HEAR IT...HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:06:32 02/13/03 Thu
stop and think -- plural, 17:01:30 02/12/03 Wed
elaborate on it....a lot (NT) -- Vision, 17:15:49 02/12/03 Wed
nice poem type of spit, touched on some good topics (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:49:30 02/12/03 Wed
I FEEL YA...JESUS HIMSELF MAY HAVE TO SHOW UP BEFORE MANKIND CHILLS OUT....ITZ CRAZY N' THE LAST DAYZ YA HEARD ME....HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:03:22 02/13/03 Thu
So not to waste paper.. -- ===||Swords--->, 22:35:58 02/10/03 Mon
that fuck wit your mind shit was funny not bad fo a key (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 23:02:05 02/10/03 Mon
THAT WAS HARD DOG!!! I FELT THAT!!! MADE YOU THINK THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH!!! I THOUGHT THIS WAS DOPE!!!! -- LIPS, 00:57:48 02/11/03 Tue
yeah I peeped this already.. same thoughts as before.. peace kiddo! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:39:36 02/11/03 Tue
tight shit my nigga!!...by the way yo..i need the addy to that site again.....peace yo (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:58:10 02/11/03 Tue
I liked it for the majority. The begin was a little off but it was an overall dope post. (NT) -- starks, 09:33:28 02/11/03 Tue
This was pretty good.....Rhyme scheme is a little mixed between broken-rhyme and internal rhyme....Nice though....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:14:59 02/11/03 Tue
This one DOES make you think, ill post (NT) -- Double Take, 16:36:43 02/12/03 Wed
Some strong rhyme -- Lil Clouva, 22:26:55 02/12/03 Wed
who wanna battle (NT) -- cagney n treyz -wan fka novice, 02:05:37 02/12/03 Wed
I will just gimme the time.... you set it up too, u kno bar max and votes and shit.... 5 votes win 3-0=tko??? Holla back (NT) -- Thakin, 08:51:37 02/12/03 Wed
I'm up for a batlle wack one... ready to ripped fag.. I got 50 pages of written batlles to use on you... fag... holla at me at darkspitter362002@yahoo.com... and drop a verse so I can see how"intelligent you are" (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 12:58:09 02/12/03 Wed
i got 50 pages of "WRITTEN BATTLES" to use on you...u sound so fucking wack and gay for saying u got written battle raps to use on someone...stupid fuck (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 16:05:31 02/12/03 Wed
The Fuck -- Lil Clouva & Lil Lucky, 22:14:40 02/12/03 Wed
life -- nemo twerp, 16:12:16 02/12/03 Wed
"....and you think �eatH is better?"....Whatever....Life is beautiful....it all depends on how you choose to live it....This post had the poetic-structure to it...I'll give you credit for that....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:28:44 02/12/03 Wed
Ok, nuthin special (NT) -- Double Take, 16:29:32 02/12/03 Wed
i can understand your point of view here but make sure you analyze both ends, pertty good poetic analysis of your emotional state as it would seem though! (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:57:30 02/12/03 Wed
New drop, I like it -- Double Take, 16:26:33 02/12/03 Wed
"Your rhymes are sugary like cinnamon"...Actually, (depending on your taste buds) cinnamon has a more "bitter" taste than sweet...It's when you mix it with additives and other shit that it "tastes" sweet.....That one line about Jin was a little silly too.....Nobody cares about Ruff Ryders....But keep up and stay up.. (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:38:00 02/12/03 Wed
not a bad attempt, could use a little polishing but desent nonetheless! (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:53:02 02/12/03 Wed
freewritten I wrote a while back... peep this and criticize -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 13:18:34 02/12/03 Wed
The flow towards the end was nice in parts with one or two nice lines, but I couldn't understand your 'wordplay'...like why would Midus be tired?...maybe you mean Midas the dude who turned all he touched to solid gold?...I dunno I'm puzzled. Nice flow tho' Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:57:25 02/12/03 Wed
Flow swayed a bit....but it was ok for a key (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:25:53 02/12/03 Wed
i understood the midas line...i think he meant the mineke shit...they fuk wit tune ups, oil, and rotatin tires....i hope thats what u meant....but uh...u tryin too hard to be bright....u already coo....work at simplistic punchlines, that arent corny but concise (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 14:53:38 02/12/03 Wed
Yeah, this was a keystyle to me because it had no "centered-ideal" to it....But it was nice in fact, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:46:37 02/12/03 Wed
This is a just a lil cypha connect....... done ova AIM..... PAULIE GRIMES & Eternal Student.... PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:38:13 02/12/03 Wed
this was nice....started out a little off...but yall picked it up....i want another audio dawg....love ur accent...ha...peace (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 14:50:10 02/12/03 Wed
This was excellent......It's good to see one of your posts around, though I haven't been able to peep your audios on this computer....But keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:38:07 02/12/03 Wed
WHO'S UP FOR A QUICK STORY?!...here go one, its pretty old but shit i liked it.... -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 22:34:23 02/11/03 Tue
ha....my nig still doin it..the chi town windy city pimp...lovin it...i du'nt cuur if its old me laddy...its still bloody gould (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:32:32 02/12/03 Wed
this was nice..nice creativity....had me imagining...good shit..peace...keep writing (NT) -- 2mEr_iLL_sC, 13:14:30 02/12/03 Wed
One mo time.....i gotta lace a few verses....fo subvercives....hahahha....stop n peep inside -- styliztik...aka...quote, 05:12:02 02/12/03 Wed
Been busy, heres a quick piece for yall, Had a joint back in 99 called "my religion is lost" and I never finsihed it. Had me thinking and I wanna bless ya with these words ta stimulate ya soul. -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:40:09 02/11/03 Tue
No need to finish it man, great the way it is (NT) -- Double Take, 19:59:36 02/11/03 Tue
nice post. i feel your rhymes are mostly on the emotional side of things which is cool. sometimes emotions bring out the best in people. Where you from? Keep it real. One (NT) -- starks, 20:25:07 02/11/03 Tue
Militant minded mans rewinding back ta days of neanderthas/..that was tite.....u steppin up ur self....only advice....in some bars, it seemed like u added words to add definition but it took from what u were sayin...i.e...feeble..unless im stupid....i don tthink its spelled feable...but tell me if thats a word so ill be up on things... (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:36:48 02/12/03 Wed
Immortal Massacre .... Just some shit i wrote at work this morning.Finaly got a chance to post up. PEEP -- STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 12:14:37 02/11/03 Tue
DOPE!!!....and it didn't even need all the multisyllabicism in it either....I'm impressed....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:25:50 02/11/03 Tue
you gotz skillz yo, that verse is realness,hot shi -- R.U.C, 15:56:33 02/11/03 Tue
hey starks, eva though about comin pro? any way this was some dope shit dawg. keep it up! (NT) -- mc3, 16:29:39 02/11/03 Tue
ayo! this was ill.... straight on point....one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:14:19 02/11/03 Tue
WOAH......d-d-d-deep.....you stayed on point with this........str8 man.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 18:33:40 02/11/03 Tue
Out of ya mouth you display the real madness FResh and deep feeling to this yo, very nice post. allot of posts lately have been deep in here this is one the top tensPeace (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:59:47 02/11/03 Tue
u stepped it up...nice.....i dont agree wit the sandman shit tho.....even tho it was dope.....im a black militant....sorry...i aint patriotic (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:28:47 02/12/03 Wed
WHUDDUP LOUNGE??...JUST CAME TO DROP DOWN THIS KEYSTYLE...MELTING BARS WITH SOME SHIT I CALL...."SLAY THE GORGON" -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:48:48 02/11/03 Tue
This guy.. Whattup? Rhyme was nice.. The first part looked familiar as hell tho, like something you dropped in that big-ass cypher a long time ago..2nd verse wasnt as good as the first, like you lost interest.. The other one was straight..Bring The Heat next time, like the old lounge days.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:56:22 02/11/03 Tue
thats tight -- krazy glue, 11:35:35 02/11/03 Tue
some lines where added just for the sake of the flow, other then that observation shit was tight.. the jacking off with a handfull of glass line was dirty like Christina.. one! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:58:20 02/11/03 Tue
nice drop/ you've dropped alot hotter but i think you know that peace (NT) -- starks, 09:44:30 02/11/03 Tue
Knock the dust off those "ideas"......Just playin'....This post isn't as exciting as your previous posts....But keep at it....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:00:11 02/11/03 Tue
da shit is dope,how do i check it out on realone? -- R.U.C, 16:07:12 02/11/03 Tue
errm.... i dont know whos better you or starks , i think you guys should have a battle yo. dope post though! (NT) -- mc3, 16:33:48 02/11/03 Tue
Nice post, going against the so called Gangsta grain in one part nice job earth PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G.== dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 19:07:08 02/11/03 Tue
keystle....just got offa work, felt like dropping some thoughts....PEACE~~ -- Essence...........AM, 17:19:36 02/10/03 Mon
ha...i liked this...flow was iffy at the beginnin, but u made up for it nicely ....strong points in here...like that 360 shit...simple shit, but said complex......like yo concept (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 17:35:13 02/10/03 Mon
yeah a nice key no doubt (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:23:29 02/10/03 Mon
Pretty nice.. cant say too much about it (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:41:30 02/10/03 Mon
THIS FLOWED SMOOTH WITH DECENT VOCAB!!! PRETTY NICE DROP!!!CREATIVE!!! -- LIPS, 00:59:46 02/11/03 Tue
yeah it's been deemed correctly.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:42:09 02/11/03 Tue
JUST some str8 spittin..nice flow and word use..peace kid! (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 02:04:11 02/11/03 Tue
Yo i feel it, we all searching for that answer and at times we don't know the question. Writing DOES have the power, dope post peace PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 19:03:45 02/11/03 Tue
hey sup everyone just wanted to try sumthin new for me its a kinda battle rhyme towards the "MINORITIEZ" -- mc3, 15:10:23 02/10/03 Mon
umm....pray.....this was coo....basic...ull get bettter (NT) -- styliztik..aka..quote, 16:06:25 02/10/03 Mon
yea....pray,.....this was simple, i see room for improvment in many places, but keep dropping, youll elevate... (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:23:34 02/10/03 Mon
I couldn't get into it.. BTW who's MINORITIEZ? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:45:26 02/10/03 Mon
SOME WHAT SIMPLISTIC, BUT YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL!! JUST NEED TO PEFECT YA WORDPLAY AND VOCAB!! -- LIPS, 01:01:33 02/11/03 Tue
I'm not in the mood to go any further after the first lines sour taste. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:43:30 02/11/03 Tue
like the nigga siad don't speak with no sence foo -- R.U.C, 16:28:01 02/11/03 Tue
ha ha.... DROPPIN A COUPLE VERSES......tell me what u think...peep.. -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:35:14 02/10/03 Mon
dope (NT) -- mc3, 14:30:47 02/10/03 Mon
this was dope, just the font color...haha...its cool though once you highlight it...i was feeling this, flow was tight...keep on..peace (NT) -- Essence...AM, 17:33:35 02/10/03 Mon
yeah kinda coo (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:34:04 02/10/03 Mon
Very nice flow.. made for audio.. Some lines were nice.. I liked first verse more.. (NT) -- ====||Swords--->, 22:50:04 02/10/03 Mon
pretty tight man.. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:45:46 02/11/03 Tue
just trying to help -- krazy glue, 11:28:43 02/11/03 Tue

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