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the new ill nigga from the O.C. -- c-walt, 21:49:37 02/14/03 Fri
- man I'm not going to diss.. or tell you what to do, just stick around you'll learn alot here.. peace man.. stay up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:59:37 02/14/03 Fri
- make it longer man...come on...put some more thought into it (NT) -- Nakixem of Abzent Minded Ink of OMNI, 23:05:14 02/14/03 Fri
- you not no illest nigga!!!! (NT) -- plural, 23:39:40 02/14/03 Fri
- ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (NT) -- Maximus, 01:27:41 02/15/03 Sat
- yo you cant eaisilly point out the flaws, off point, dont talk bout yourself, talk about something that matters -- insignificant, 01:48:02 02/15/03 Sat
- **agrees with everyone here** -- Mista Uneek, 12:04:52 02/15/03 Sat
$ AUDIO $ THE REALEST INC. -- MI$TA MAC, 02:11:51 02/14/03 Fri
- yeah the second two verses were heat... coming through your computer speakers burning us on CD so your crew can peep us... me and a mic is like fire to propane... my two favorite lines... quality wasn't shit though... fix that and shit will be LP quality. pz (NT) -- TOX, 18:33:36 02/14/03 Fri
- why is this getting slept on, no fucking audios should be slept on.. first cat sounded like somebody from No Limit, second dude was pretty tight, and Mac you sound like you done came up with the skills a bit.. tight audio, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:29:12 02/14/03 Fri
What up yall been a minute, freestyle competition 2 night and it will be my first. Writing for 7 years and it will all come out 2 night. all my pains, fear, love, and joys will be released. Never felt ready till 2 night like I open my mouth but the words wont come out ha ha. keystyle ta keep me sharp. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:12:28 02/14/03 Fri
- yeah, i liked this, escpecially the d-day line that was cool. keep it up (NT) -- mc3(nemesis), 16:48:15 02/14/03 Fri
- word man have fun! thats what it's about tight lil' drop.. was not short.. just, it read fast for some reason.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:17:38 02/14/03 Fri
Brink of insanity -- Maximus, 16:35:41 02/14/03 Fri
- Dizzamn!!!....this is not the best flow i've read by far, but it was dope...for real....i was feelin the flow, as well as the subject....holla (NT) -- Slum Beautiful, 16:45:34 02/14/03 Fri
- This is the dopest one yet.. Flow was very nice...COntent was dope.. I like the ending a lot to it.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:10:04 02/14/03 Fri
- ill man.. you got a nice style, but peep others for you will be erased soon.. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:13:44 02/14/03 Fri
Dear Death -- Maximus, 16:50:12 02/14/03 Fri
- I liked it alot......I could hear the beat in my head...that's a good thing..one (NT) -- does it matter., 17:13:57 02/14/03 Fri
- This was nice too.. I thought the other one was a bit better, and flowed better to me, but this was good too.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:06:03 02/14/03 Fri
- Toss up both were equally good and contained deep thoughts (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:57:43 02/14/03 Fri
- damn man I was already depressed.. I can't make it through this one! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:09:59 02/14/03 Fri
Dear Death prt. 2 -- Maximus, 16:53:38 02/14/03 Fri
- nice thoughts... format was a little rudimentary, but still some bar's shined... (NT) -- a cloudy day, 18:00:54 02/14/03 Fri
- I thought this was dope as hell.. very nice display of thoughts.. Nice vent.. I hope that's all it is? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:03:44 02/14/03 Fri
- I feel this, nice imagery thoughts were on point nice post (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:54:55 02/14/03 Fri
- man I feel you more then you'll ever know.. pretty sad huh? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:07:45 02/14/03 Fri
To be audio in the future, probably -- ===||Swords--->, 18:00:05 02/14/03 Fri
- Pretty ill post yo, it probabbly would flow like hell in audio (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:00:22 02/14/03 Fri
- that pencil line was rediculous! that was one of the illest lines I heard in a while.. nice post all together! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:05:17 02/14/03 Fri
Anybody know where I can get Noah23 - 'Neophyte Phenotype' from... the cds outta print and ughh.com and other sites are sold out... If anyone can assist me in finding this album I'd be appreciative.... peace (NT)
-- Plague Language Fanatic who's pissed off about SoulSeek, 00:02:38 02/13/03 Thu
TRY FINDIN" SINGLE TRACKS ON KAZAA...HOLLA...BE BLESSED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:04:31 02/13/03 Thu
i have it "Noah_23-Neophyte_Phenotype-2001-CMS"...and NO u cant have it WARCHILD...get the fuck outta here loser.....bwahahhahahahaa (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 12:32:49 02/13/03 Thu
i dont know what the f**k ya talkin about but i just wanted to reply to this so it counts as a reply (NT) -- mc3, 14:43:22 02/13/03 Thu
first... whoever warchild is???? second... thanks for the info.. you were all so helpful.. but it doesnt matter I'm getting it from Noah himself... peace (NT) -- PLB, 18:26:24 02/14/03 Fri
Just some stuff I wrote last night keeping the skills sharpened -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:31:45 02/13/03 Thu
this was pretty nice..some lines were tight and some were like average and wat not..nonetheless this was a nice piece..keep droppin em.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Da Head Judge At Da 1st Annual Twister Competition For Wheel Chair Kids.., 13:56:01 02/13/03 Thu
cool, cool, could probably do better but tight. (NT) -- mc3, 14:38:15 02/13/03 Thu
Yeah, this had some decent lines....A little different from what you were posting in your previous posts...Keep up and stay up anyway... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:55:47 02/13/03 Thu
yo.. this was hella short in my perspective.... ok post tho... nice rhyme formation (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 13:25:38 02/14/03 Fri
Nice diff from ya usual but just tryn ta keep ya skills up its straight (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:24:50 02/14/03 Fri
erm, heaven -- mc3, 14:46:39 02/13/03 Thu
This is acceptable but I wonder why people get this "idea" that Heaven is "up in the sky somewhere"......Anyway, I'll pray that you get better with time.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:44:07 02/13/03 Thu
IF YOU GOT A BASIS TO BELIEVE OTHERWISE HEKS..WHY DON'T YOU OFFER SOME SCRIPTURE.....YO MC3....I"M FEELIN" YA THOUGHTZ' PATNA'...FA SHO'...SIMPLE TO THE POINT WORDS....TONS OF EMOTION...FA SHO'...BE BLESSED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 02:07:59 02/14/03 Fri
nOT TOO BAD, WORK ON IT MAN SOME WAS NICE BUT MOST NEEDS WORK (NT) -- PAT D.A.W.G, 16:21:34 02/14/03 Fri
Loss -- Lil Clouva, 13:02:22 02/13/03 Thu
right...............er yeah.............oookk (NT) -- mc3, 14:49:35 02/13/03 Thu
I think you need to go over the history of our country and understand the role of the military.....Yes, the U.S. is a bully....But then again, without the work of God, this country wouldn't be shit.....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:48:42 02/13/03 Thu
I hope you all know that even though we got people serving this country, doesnt mean its for the right cause, b/c most if not all military services dont fully understand why there missions BUT FOLLOW ORDERS FROM A PRESIDENT WHO DOESNT GIVE TWO SHITS ABOUT YOU OR YOUR FAMILY, AND ONLY GETS WHAT HE WANTS...OIL AND GLOBAL ECONOMIC POWER...AND SOME MORE SHIT BUT I'D RATHER NOT GET ANY FURTHER... (NT) -- 2mEr_iLL_sC, 02:57:00 02/14/03 Fri
eutopia -- nemo twerp, 01:21:30 02/13/03 Thu
If this was English Composition, I'd give you mad props cause this seemed more poetic for me. Kind of simple but keep buildin from that (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:40:54 02/13/03 Thu
hmm..dont know..it was like cool to read but i felt you could have kept going ya know? ..like add more to it so people could fully grasp what it was you were tryin to bring out..it was nice but yea it was simple..then again not all of us need to use big words or w/e to make shyt shine..so i guess just do you..cool drop though.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL First Person To Challenge A Wheel Chair Kid In A "Sit Up" Competition.., 14:01:57 02/13/03 Thu
yeah, erm i think it was more on the poetry side but it was still kinda cool to read. (NT) -- mc3, 14:41:04 02/13/03 Thu
I appreciate the four-line stanzas and everything....Keep this up.....If you ever want to collab, hit up the e-mail..... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:30:54 02/13/03 Thu
AN ALL-NEW POST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h Ł k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Vocabulary May Cause Mind-Stops..BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- h Ł k §-A-g Ř ń/|_ A \/ Ą § h...aka tHŁ l e § h ř |Đ e § § Ą Ł| JŠ, 15:49:59 02/12/03 Wed
"and has the ability to fold your spirit like some psyche origami" <<< that was the illest line...had good flow all the way through but just better in parts, im glad it wasnt a chapter long...good as internal rhyming, i kinda see what you mean about taking multisyllabic rhyming farther...stay up (NT) -- Vis, 17:14:31 02/12/03 Wed
I really enjoyed this one, the multis were sick and the line continuity was good...I don't agree with your beliefs but that's your thing, this was nice work Hex (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm dude is called 'Jesus', 12:13:02 02/13/03 Thu
I AM the rope in this tug-of-war between the l e § h and pirit..I AM liken to a rubber band stretched at both ends,..........illness......u simply poetic, but i picked up the rhyme scheme, i see alotta cats doin this, myself included...and when its spit right its beautiful.... (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:37:37 02/13/03 Thu
$$$ AUDIO $$$ THE REALEST INC. -- MAC MI$TA, 23:57:24 02/12/03 Wed
Couldn't peep, net congestion wouldn't allow it. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:06:07 02/13/03 Thu
was dat chaos?? lol...this aint the type of shit i usually have interest in peeping and shyt..but aint gonna front..wasnt dat bad..the flows from everyone was dope..lyrics just wasnt my style..ya'll should like send a demo tape to no limit or something..NOT HATIN..just being real..do something wit the skill ya know? anywayz..take it how u want it..wasnt meant to be taken as a diss...peace.. (NT) -- D-luSioNaL..Wheel Chair Skydiving Asst., 14:09:44 02/13/03 Thu
REPOST.........man this was sleeped on crazy like........no replies?.....peep fellas, and ladies? -- styliztik....aka....quote, 13:53:25 02/12/03 Wed
Listen... -- Tizz, 14:30:34 02/12/03 Wed
This was pretty ILL.....I was feeling the imagery ....and the word usage.....flow was nice too......PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:35:20 02/12/03 Wed
Something about this brought out the image of Harrison Ford in "The Fugitive"....other than that, this had bits of multisyllabicism in this....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:43:13 02/12/03 Wed
You climbin the ladder man, tight post (NT) -- Double Take, 16:32:43 02/12/03 Wed
ITZ LIKE THIS DOC'...SPIT THE SHIT...ON A MIC...OVER AN ORIGINAL BEAT...AND THEN BITCH ABOUT FOLK$ SLEEPIN'..HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:08:57 02/13/03 Thu
The Ghost -- slick vic low a.k.a. the lyrical leviathan, 17:59:39 02/12/03 Wed
SOme real shit. I feel it. -- Lil CLouva & Lil Lucky, 22:21:11 02/12/03 Wed
ITZ LIKE THIS...IF YOU CAN PUT SOME FIRE TYPE EMOTION IN THIS WHEN YOU SPIT....I WANNA HEAR IT...HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:06:32 02/13/03 Thu
stop and think -- plural, 17:01:30 02/12/03 Wed
elaborate on it....a lot (NT) -- Vision, 17:15:49 02/12/03 Wed
nice poem type of spit, touched on some good topics (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:49:30 02/12/03 Wed
I FEEL YA...JESUS HIMSELF MAY HAVE TO SHOW UP BEFORE MANKIND CHILLS OUT....ITZ CRAZY N' THE LAST DAYZ YA HEARD ME....HOLLA...BE BLE$$ED (NT) -- MAC MI$TA, 00:03:22 02/13/03 Thu
So not to waste paper.. -- ===||Swords--->, 22:35:58 02/10/03 Mon
that fuck wit your mind shit was funny not bad fo a key (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 23:02:05 02/10/03 Mon
THAT WAS HARD DOG!!! I FELT THAT!!! MADE YOU THINK THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH!!! I THOUGHT THIS WAS DOPE!!!! -- LIPS, 00:57:48 02/11/03 Tue
yeah I peeped this already.. same thoughts as before.. peace kiddo! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:39:36 02/11/03 Tue
tight shit my nigga!!...by the way yo..i need the addy to that site again.....peace yo (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:58:10 02/11/03 Tue
I liked it for the majority. The begin was a little off but it was an overall dope post. (NT) -- starks, 09:33:28 02/11/03 Tue
This was pretty good.....Rhyme scheme is a little mixed between broken-rhyme and internal rhyme....Nice though....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 12:14:59 02/11/03 Tue
This one DOES make you think, ill post (NT) -- Double Take, 16:36:43 02/12/03 Wed
Some strong rhyme -- Lil Clouva, 22:26:55 02/12/03 Wed
who wanna battle (NT) -- cagney n treyz -wan fka novice, 02:05:37 02/12/03 Wed
I will just gimme the time.... you set it up too, u kno bar max and votes and shit.... 5 votes win 3-0=tko??? Holla back (NT) -- Thakin, 08:51:37 02/12/03 Wed
I'm up for a batlle wack one... ready to ripped fag.. I got 50 pages of written batlles to use on you... fag... holla at me at darkspitter362002@yahoo.com... and drop a verse so I can see how"intelligent you are" (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 12:58:09 02/12/03 Wed
i got 50 pages of "WRITTEN BATTLES" to use on you...u sound so fucking wack and gay for saying u got written battle raps to use on someone...stupid fuck (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 16:05:31 02/12/03 Wed
The Fuck -- Lil Clouva & Lil Lucky, 22:14:40 02/12/03 Wed
life -- nemo twerp, 16:12:16 02/12/03 Wed
"....and you think ĐeatH is better?"....Whatever....Life is beautiful....it all depends on how you choose to live it....This post had the poetic-structure to it...I'll give you credit for that....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:28:44 02/12/03 Wed
Ok, nuthin special (NT) -- Double Take, 16:29:32 02/12/03 Wed
i can understand your point of view here but make sure you analyze both ends, pertty good poetic analysis of your emotional state as it would seem though! (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:57:30 02/12/03 Wed
New drop, I like it -- Double Take, 16:26:33 02/12/03 Wed
"Your rhymes are sugary like cinnamon"...Actually, (depending on your taste buds) cinnamon has a more "bitter" taste than sweet...It's when you mix it with additives and other shit that it "tastes" sweet.....That one line about Jin was a little silly too.....Nobody cares about Ruff Ryders....But keep up and stay up.. (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:38:00 02/12/03 Wed
not a bad attempt, could use a little polishing but desent nonetheless! (NT) -- slick vic low, 17:53:02 02/12/03 Wed
freewritten I wrote a while back... peep this and criticize -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 13:18:34 02/12/03 Wed
The flow towards the end was nice in parts with one or two nice lines, but I couldn't understand your 'wordplay'...like why would Midus be tired?...maybe you mean Midas the dude who turned all he touched to solid gold?...I dunno I'm puzzled. Nice flow tho' Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 13:57:25 02/12/03 Wed
Flow swayed a bit....but it was ok for a key (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:25:53 02/12/03 Wed
i understood the midas line...i think he meant the mineke shit...they fuk wit tune ups, oil, and rotatin tires....i hope thats what u meant....but uh...u tryin too hard to be bright....u already coo....work at simplistic punchlines, that arent corny but concise (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 14:53:38 02/12/03 Wed
Yeah, this was a keystyle to me because it had no "centered-ideal" to it....But it was nice in fact, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:46:37 02/12/03 Wed
This is a just a lil cypha connect....... done ova AIM..... PAULIE GRIMES & Eternal Student.... PeAcE -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:38:13 02/12/03 Wed
this was nice....started out a little off...but yall picked it up....i want another audio dawg....love ur accent...ha...peace (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 14:50:10 02/12/03 Wed
This was excellent......It's good to see one of your posts around, though I haven't been able to peep your audios on this computer....But keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:38:07 02/12/03 Wed
WHO'S UP FOR A QUICK STORY?!...here go one, its pretty old but shit i liked it.... -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 22:34:23 02/11/03 Tue
ha....my nig still doin it..the chi town windy city pimp...lovin it...i du'nt cuur if its old me laddy...its still bloody gould (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:32:32 02/12/03 Wed
this was nice..nice creativity....had me imagining...good shit..peace...keep writing (NT) -- 2mEr_iLL_sC, 13:14:30 02/12/03 Wed
One mo time.....i gotta lace a few verses....fo subvercives....hahahha....stop n peep inside -- styliztik...aka...quote, 05:12:02 02/12/03 Wed
Been busy, heres a quick piece for yall, Had a joint back in 99 called "my religion is lost" and I never finsihed it. Had me thinking and I wanna bless ya with these words ta stimulate ya soul. -- Pat D.A.W.G, 18:40:09 02/11/03 Tue
No need to finish it man, great the way it is (NT) -- Double Take, 19:59:36 02/11/03 Tue
nice post. i feel your rhymes are mostly on the emotional side of things which is cool. sometimes emotions bring out the best in people. Where you from? Keep it real. One (NT) -- starks, 20:25:07 02/11/03 Tue
Militant minded mans rewinding back ta days of neanderthas/..that was tite.....u steppin up ur self....only advice....in some bars, it seemed like u added words to add definition but it took from what u were sayin...i.e...feeble..unless im stupid....i don tthink its spelled feable...but tell me if thats a word so ill be up on things... (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:36:48 02/12/03 Wed
Immortal Massacre .... Just some shit i wrote at work this morning.Finaly got a chance to post up. PEEP -- STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS), 12:14:37 02/11/03 Tue
DOPE!!!....and it didn't even need all the multisyllabicism in it either....I'm impressed....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 12:25:50 02/11/03 Tue
you gotz skillz yo, that verse is realness,hot shi -- R.U.C, 15:56:33 02/11/03 Tue
hey starks, eva though about comin pro? any way this was some dope shit dawg. keep it up! (NT) -- mc3, 16:29:39 02/11/03 Tue
ayo! this was ill.... straight on point....one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:14:19 02/11/03 Tue
WOAH......d-d-d-deep.....you stayed on point with this........str8 man.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 18:33:40 02/11/03 Tue
Out of ya mouth you display the real madness FResh and deep feeling to this yo, very nice post. allot of posts lately have been deep in here this is one the top tensPeace (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 18:59:47 02/11/03 Tue
u stepped it up...nice.....i dont agree wit the sandman shit tho.....even tho it was dope.....im a black militant....sorry...i aint patriotic (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:28:47 02/12/03 Wed
WHUDDUP LOUNGE??...JUST CAME TO DROP DOWN THIS KEYSTYLE...MELTING BARS WITH SOME SHIT I CALL...."SLAY THE GORGON" -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:48:48 02/11/03 Tue
This guy.. Whattup? Rhyme was nice.. The first part looked familiar as hell tho, like something you dropped in that big-ass cypher a long time ago..2nd verse wasnt as good as the first, like you lost interest.. The other one was straight..Bring The Heat next time, like the old lounge days.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 01:56:22 02/11/03 Tue
thats tight -- krazy glue, 11:35:35 02/11/03 Tue
some lines where added just for the sake of the flow, other then that observation shit was tight.. the jacking off with a handfull of glass line was dirty like Christina.. one! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:58:20 02/11/03 Tue
nice drop/ you've dropped alot hotter but i think you know that peace (NT) -- starks, 09:44:30 02/11/03 Tue
Knock the dust off those "ideas"......Just playin'....This post isn't as exciting as your previous posts....But keep at it....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 12:00:11 02/11/03 Tue
da shit is dope,how do i check it out on realone? -- R.U.C, 16:07:12 02/11/03 Tue
errm.... i dont know whos better you or starks , i think you guys should have a battle yo. dope post though! (NT) -- mc3, 16:33:48 02/11/03 Tue
Nice post, going against the so called Gangsta grain in one part nice job earth PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G.== dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 19:07:08 02/11/03 Tue
keystle....just got offa work, felt like dropping some thoughts....PEACE~~ -- Essence...........AM, 17:19:36 02/10/03 Mon
ha...i liked this...flow was iffy at the beginnin, but u made up for it nicely ....strong points in here...like that 360 shit...simple shit, but said complex......like yo concept (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 17:35:13 02/10/03 Mon
yeah a nice key no doubt (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:23:29 02/10/03 Mon
Pretty nice.. cant say too much about it (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:41:30 02/10/03 Mon
THIS FLOWED SMOOTH WITH DECENT VOCAB!!! PRETTY NICE DROP!!!CREATIVE!!! -- LIPS, 00:59:46 02/11/03 Tue
yeah it's been deemed correctly.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:42:09 02/11/03 Tue
JUST some str8 spittin..nice flow and word use..peace kid! (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 02:04:11 02/11/03 Tue
Yo i feel it, we all searching for that answer and at times we don't know the question. Writing DOES have the power, dope post peace PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY, 19:03:45 02/11/03 Tue
hey sup everyone just wanted to try sumthin new for me its a kinda battle rhyme towards the "MINORITIEZ" -- mc3, 15:10:23 02/10/03 Mon
umm....pray.....this was coo....basic...ull get bettter (NT) -- styliztik..aka..quote, 16:06:25 02/10/03 Mon
yea....pray,.....this was simple, i see room for improvment in many places, but keep dropping, youll elevate... (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:23:34 02/10/03 Mon
I couldn't get into it.. BTW who's MINORITIEZ? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:45:26 02/10/03 Mon
SOME WHAT SIMPLISTIC, BUT YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL!! JUST NEED TO PEFECT YA WORDPLAY AND VOCAB!! -- LIPS, 01:01:33 02/11/03 Tue
I'm not in the mood to go any further after the first lines sour taste. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:43:30 02/11/03 Tue
like the nigga siad don't speak with no sence foo -- R.U.C, 16:28:01 02/11/03 Tue
ha ha.... DROPPIN A COUPLE VERSES......tell me what u think...peep.. -- styliztik...aka...quote, 04:35:14 02/10/03 Mon
dope (NT) -- mc3, 14:30:47 02/10/03 Mon
this was dope, just the font color...haha...its cool though once you highlight it...i was feeling this, flow was tight...keep on..peace (NT) -- Essence...AM, 17:33:35 02/10/03 Mon
yeah kinda coo (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:34:04 02/10/03 Mon
Very nice flow.. made for audio.. Some lines were nice.. I liked first verse more.. (NT) -- ====||Swords--->, 22:50:04 02/10/03 Mon
pretty tight man.. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:45:46 02/11/03 Tue
just trying to help -- krazy glue, 11:28:43 02/11/03 Tue
Israeli Masterpeice- THE DEAD EDITIONS STRAIGHT OUT THE KITCHEN The Verses For the Churches -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:09:49 02/10/03 Mon
hella sick..a bit too long but a tight post -- cyborgx47111z3, 04:10:52 02/10/03 Mon
hot damn.....this was the dopest shit ive read dawg.......i didnt finish it cuz it made me wanna flip this style....i love taht shit....wordplay and punchlines was coo as fuk who tha fuk are u..? (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:47:04 02/10/03 Mon
Moses WASN'T a "Jew"......Other than that, this was alright....A tad bit too long and long-winded.....I'm not knocking your post at all...I'm just stating my opinion....Keep up and stay up..... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 12:08:13 02/10/03 Mon
this was long but tight, could you do better?thats a retorical question (NT) -- mc3, 14:38:35 02/10/03 Mon
dman this was fucking long...flow was dope though,,,nice wordplay, i liked it...stay up..piece (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:40:23 02/10/03 Mon
Umm wow.. How long did it take you to write this? was this a Keystyle? it'da taken me forever.. I could only read up to where the lines got longer.. Plus i really didnt know what this was about... Work on making the message more concise, cuz not everyone can read this whole thing to get the message.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:58:24 02/10/03 Mon
I got bored within the text.. way to long especially at 2 in the morning.. what I read reminded me of my Rejuvination song on my 2000 album Mission of a Life-time.. so I give props on what I read, what I did read was nice! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:52:48 02/11/03 Tue
let me grabe my spot son.....i got dis...info pleas..."1ne" -- jay, 19:50:01 02/09/03 Sun
Wasn't really feelin this one, yor 2nd one was better (NT) -- Double Take, 21:38:49 02/09/03 Sun
good i think that that very first line set it off nicely (NT) -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:19:59 02/10/03 Mon
this was fucking week kid (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 23:58:40 02/10/03 Mon
Got done slamning a 40 yall feels good, but all is not good, heres a quick keystyle for yall. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:21:19 02/08/03 Sat
I can tell you drunken on this.. cause it sounds tight.. and I'm drunk as hell as well! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:41:00 02/09/03 Sun
kinda short dawg but, in the lines was good wordplay. (NT) -- nemisis, 04:58:37 02/09/03 Sun
yo this was cool...........i know i always write better when i'm high hahaha....good lyrical show here...smooth flow to it...wordplay was definitely nice here...and liked ya word usage...multi's helped set it off too...overall this was tight...keep up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:41:56 02/09/03 Sun
mad props yo....ya flow is definitly fresh...i give u mad coo points.. -- jay, 23:09:23 02/09/03 Sun
not bad son (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:55:41 02/10/03 Mon
VERSETYLE VISIONS pt 6....aint been a good story in here in a minute...yaul remember these? the new cats definately wont, but enjoy...."Fallen Angels: Angelic Battle".....peace muvafukas -- an Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. collaboration, 14:18:27 02/09/03 Sun
This was aight, nothing really stood out, It was an ill idea and creative but lacked, it just wasn't what I thought it would be as I read on, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:53:15 02/09/03 Sun
hey, i think this was the longest post ive seen on here. it kinda got boring going towards but liked the first paragraph. PEACE dawg! (NT) -- mc3, 16:25:39 02/09/03 Sun
Well well well.. first and foremost.. Azrael and Azazel? WOW to put yourself in those shoes.. thats like claiming Molech, blasphemous. This was devilish to me. The idea was great I just find it hard to relate to their stand-points .. The Enoch qoute was almost like asking god to bless from both sides of war "partakers" .. peep! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:00:12 02/09/03 Sun
it wold sound better live to long ta read and feel a beat...but i give u props yo -- jay, 20:32:09 02/09/03 Sun
I agree it was too long to read but what I read it would sound great in an audio (NT) -- Double Take, 21:40:52 02/09/03 Sun
this got mad love when it was first posted, almost got POTM (damn Xitizen...lol)... but yeah it wasn't meant to be controversial, just creative.... but whatever, each to their own...peace (NT) -- Versetyle.....(yo Vis i know a Versetyle Vision is long overdue... it shall be done soon....i'll get at you this week-end...peace, 19:57:30 02/10/03 Mon
Haven't been here in awhile cause my last freestyle sucked and I got roasted almost outta here but I'm back with this untitled freestyle -- Double Take, 21:35:50 02/09/03 Sun
tight bring on ya tighter shi tho.... -- jay, 21:45:07 02/09/03 Sun
for you -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:15:57 02/10/03 Mon
hmm....this was sttttttrrrrrrrraight.,....could work on a more focused position though....talk shit but if u do that...go off on everything...if u torture someone....torture them like crazy (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:51:06 02/10/03 Mon
your flow has improved but your content is still lacking...you could work on the vocab a lil more but if you've got something to say then it aint important...this was better than before, keep on Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:47:36 02/10/03 Mon
ok, better than ya last keystyle but instead of doin those all the time try writin ya feelings on a page and think about it. (NT) -- mc3, 14:41:38 02/10/03 Mon
Battle verse.....................peep -- SickNen, 12:01:13 02/08/03 Sat
HAHA! MINES was a KEYSTYLE too in like 5 min. YOU BASICALLY said a whole bunch of SHIT I said just way more simplistic.. FLIP off the norm kid.. this was pretty tight, I hated the start becuase it was filler shit.. but it progressed nicely.. "pretty tight stuff man.. just dig deeper then a settled spot!" ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:10:32 02/08/03 Sat
This was an ill battle verse, had some decint punches, nice wordplay, ill post overall---Now peep 3 posts (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:17:49 02/08/03 Sat
too many UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU's in it but keep practicing your shity frestyles (NT) -- nemisis, 12:35:09 02/08/03 Sat
Keep writing.....on work on "witty" punches....This was pretty good....But just keep working on originality....I'm not knockin' your style or anything of that nature....Just keep writing...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:05:13 02/08/03 Sat
(Shit....I just got bored...."thatz just alittle keystyle.").....Pathologist , did U not see or what? Focus upon tha fact that I'm play'n around...I'm not mad becuz of what U said..itz just, "not much shit comez to me when I'm high (as far as freestyle'n.) (NT) -- SickNen, 12:32:24 02/10/03 Mon
some lay back shi i wrote yo....info back on dis...hot shi... -- jay, 20:14:42 02/09/03 Sun
Good, not the greatest though (NT) -- Double Take, 21:37:08 02/09/03 Sun
o' my god a deaf messenger laying it down beautiful peice (NT) -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:18:25 02/10/03 Mon
hmm....damn dawg...not much u can say but...try harder, or dont try hard and be u... (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote....u a rookie right?, 04:52:35 02/10/03 Mon
Hey Path I Checked My Deck and This Is What Transpired...Deal It -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:04:34 02/09/03 Sun
flow wasnt bad.....choppy in parts and well....the punches lacked...i think some things couda been left out...like paralyzed paraplegics....kinda defeats the purpose of the word paraplegic ya know (NT) -- Vis, 14:24:17 02/09/03 Sun
i honestly think that was dope, the rhymin scheme was possibly a little choppy but hey it was still dope (NT) -- mc3, 16:35:46 02/09/03 Sun
hah.. yeah man this was alot better and more focused.. with what you tried to convey.. "stumped paraplegic" would have drawn a better vision, or something that does not have the same meaning knaw'mean? reguardless.. I liked it nice drop kid! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:37:10 02/09/03 Sun
yo that was tight...sound like u got some ish-u's...but i give ya props..."1ne" -- jay, 20:40:21 02/09/03 Sun
just something o wrote while back and i felt like postin it so, peep -- nemisis, 05:16:04 02/09/03 Sun
aight...i didn't even read past the second line here.....and let me tell ya why--"all they want is my money and new benz"....please, just a few posts down you say you're either 14 or 13 years old....you ain't got no new benz...this is fake ass shit...and i don't read that! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:32:44 02/09/03 Sun
yo son wz realy goin on in ya life that shit is twisted...u need jesus...im not all fillin nat verse...needs mad work..."1ne" -- jay, 07:00:10 02/09/03 Sun
well, aight.....yea, the uh....content was okay, nice to see you have a heart...but still your rhyming needs work....a good paragraph of about five lines didnt even rhyme...work on that (NT) -- Vis, 14:03:32 02/09/03 Sun
ONCE AGAIN, it RHYMED!!! This was better then your first drop man I feel you, tight lil' drop keep elevating your thoughts... I'm sure you ment A new BENZ not YOUR new BENZ.. jesus cats is more critical then me these days.. thats ashame.. cause I hate everyone and everything! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:12:43 02/09/03 Sun
Just a Lil Somethin New!!....and song i'm workin on...gonna call it "Wasting Time"...this is just the first verse.....wanted some feedback on it......Enjoy!!! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:28:42 02/09/03 Sun
i dig da verse yo...props give'ith...word -- jay, 06:51:35 02/09/03 Sun
hmm...the flow was okay, i guess melodic in parts...didnt really feel the content much (NT) -- Vis, 13:52:03 02/09/03 Sun
Felt all the way thru, real deep and understandable, I liked it, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:20:15 02/09/03 Sun
very dope man, I was feeling the abstractions of the flow.. real nice kid, ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:08:35 02/09/03 Sun
check dis yo im new up in here im just drop a flow see wz up yo...drop some info..."1ne" -- jay, 06:41:42 02/09/03 Sun
naw son... try again... it sounded like you were advertising yourself and you group... -- Tizz_the sucessor, 09:36:34 02/09/03 Sun
whack!!!! -- SHORTY WIT DA PRETTY EYEZ!, 10:49:52 02/09/03 Sun
practice little buddy....practice, be real to yourself while you're at it (NT) -- Vis, 13:58:09 02/09/03 Sun
Nice intro now show us your stuff yo (NT) -- Grotesque, 14:17:13 02/09/03 Sun
what the fuck, dawg you need 2 go home and buy a microphone, pen and pad of paper and then dont write on this board again until everything rhymes and when that happens you might get a little bit of praise but until then stop spittin. (NT) -- mc3, 16:41:08 02/09/03 Sun
it rhymed but that's not always what it's about.. you simpletons kill me talking bout' shit don't rhyme.. just build address a real topic and come back with some originality, speak on something you'd like to change or something you have knowledge over.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:05:22 02/09/03 Sun
Damn this is a quick as I've ever-wrote.. just freestyling on the keys.. peep it out! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:39:04 02/09/03 Sun
this is dope for a keystyle and it wasnt short which helped. PEACE! (NT) -- nemisis, 04:56:25 02/09/03 Sun
wasn't short?!?!...this was long as fuck..hahaha..and damn Path, you said I write long shit...hahahaha..nah but for reals, this is a nice key...kinda lost interest in few spots...but it was nice....good word usage and rhymin....nice use of multi's....and the imagery, allusions and metaphors were nice in here.....nice all 'round key...what i've come to expect of ya....stay up sonn, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:38:46 02/09/03 Sun
yo off da hook son...wild styl...long verse...didn't wanna go thro the verse but i got in to it ...much props yo -- jay, 07:14:30 02/09/03 Sun
Path a fucking Keystyle, come on, This shit was fucking ill, your mind is packed with thoughts, nice wordplay, content was tight,I liked the Han Solo Line I'd hate to see 1 of your written battle verses, keep on.....PEEP MINES DID IT JUST FOR YOU (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 13:59:09 02/09/03 Sun
So not to waste paper.. -- ===||Swords--->, 20:45:01 02/08/03 Sat
Tight (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:22:43 02/08/03 Sat
it's cool not my and are type of shit though (NT) -- Da Vills, 23:57:32 02/08/03 Sat
very different from your style props on the change up.. dope shit! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:44:43 02/09/03 Sun
i aint used to this from you, it works good though (NT) -- nemisis, 05:02:32 02/09/03 Sun
Audio...from us we outta Austin,tx...we callin this GameOver...peep and give feedback we need it..But don't just say elava..we 16 ....so we got time for that..peep please much lov -- Da Vills......off Austin's YNa click, 21:27:49 02/08/03 Sat
sorry duke.. can't peep out audio's right now. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:42:09 02/09/03 Sun
A CONCEPTUAL CLOUD -- a cloudy day, 13:41:10 02/08/03 Sat
this was worded well, that's not always a easy task for some.. well up.. nice drop. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:24:07 02/08/03 Sat
was this supposed to rhyme? cause i dont think it did but besides that it was kinda good (NT) -- nemisis&royam(new mc ), 14:28:48 02/08/03 Sat
your kidding me right? you can't see the flow in this... dude can you read? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:31:11 02/08/03 Sat
Your style reminds so much of Ach.....or is it Overcast?...HAHAHA.....This was dope...It's always a joy to peep something different every once and a while...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:07:27 02/08/03 Sat
Conceptual cloud eh? i agree.. Pretty nice, better than average.. i can tel you can do way better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:53:27 02/08/03 Sat
Not bad first post I read from you, u can elevate PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:27:18 02/08/03 Sat
this is introducing the newest mc on here royam we did a collab and we is part of a gruop called mc3 and this called 'feel ya fears' -- nemisis&royam(mc3), 14:42:32 02/08/03 Sat
man.. this was way to average.. I'm sorry.. how old are yall? If your young then I may change my critque. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:17:46 02/08/03 Sat
This post reminded me of that commercial from the '80s, where that "Where's the beef?" Lady did a "rap" for Hardee's....Remember that?...Playin', hey...just keep on writing and work on thinking about...."Well, how can I convey my rhyme differently from everybody else?"...Then you'll see improvement...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:27:47 02/08/03 Sat
WHat more can i say besides put more experience under your belt? lmao @ shite..german shitzer film anyone? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:49:31 02/08/03 Sat
mORE WORK YALL GET ITpeace -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:24:18 02/08/03 Sat
just something real quick -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:53:45 02/08/03 Sat
typo -- Karma The Konsequence, 13:03:00 02/08/03 Sat
sorry, i couldnt get into this... (NT) -- a cloudy day, 15:25:35 02/08/03 Sat
This wasn't bad at all......Keep at this....I was digging the "trapped U" line....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:09:06 02/08/03 Sat
LOL i dunno man.. i thought this was wack.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:55:06 02/08/03 Sat
just a quick freestyle....please give me your opinions..iam not for sure if this was the right form to write this.one -- does it matter, 18:17:52 02/07/03 Fri
Some lines were allright others just didn't fit, I see strong possability in the direction your going PECAE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:49:12 02/07/03 Fri
the beginning was deeper then the text was saying I felt where you was going.. just try to word it better.. it's structure became stronger as it went along.. it's just that your wearing out this subject a bit.. try to focus on something you know that nobody else knows about.. this was pretty good though I'm just bored of hearing about this GOVERNMENT, I hate the world I have no ties with it! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:12:39 02/07/03 Fri
I felt the first part very strongly and agree, The president acts like hes been in are residence, for real fuck em, Any way Flow was a little chop sticked, on the second part I don't know it lost my intrest for some reason, overall aight post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:06:46 02/08/03 Sat
The first "stanza" was my favorite....Just about every line in that one was pure truth....There's no way God is blessing "US"/U.S. with all the infantine bickering going on in today's social and governmental climate....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:34:05 02/08/03 Sat
Piece I call "Immortal tounge" had some thoughts, just working on the rhymes PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:45:40 02/07/03 Fri
This was nice man I don't think you got a nice title from me yet.. be proud.. naw I'm playing man.. nice post! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:07:33 02/07/03 Fri
good knowledge dropped!! liked the way you talked about issues in the world!nice drop! -- LIPS, 00:48:10 02/08/03 Sat
This shit is hot sun.. -- Tizz_the sucessor, 02:27:04 02/08/03 Sat
Very creative, nice imaginary, well thought, flowed great, ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:01:19 02/08/03 Sat
My favorite line was the "1776 contracts" line....That was truth right there.....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:30:25 02/08/03 Sat
Just Taking A Shit On My Big Brother Who Hates On Mr Cause I Have "Real" Talent and used 1 of His CDs -- G R O T E S Q U E, 11:52:13 02/08/03 Sat
it's a 747 by the way.. "umm.. this was coo' man- but PEEP!" -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:04:33 02/08/03 Sat
next please... i always ask... what seperates you from the next, with text you really need to grab the reader, this was only nagging on the wu garment... try again. (NT) -- A CLOUDY DAY, 12:59:52 02/08/03 Sat
This was pretty good.....I don't the reasons for attacking your "older brother" online...."Watch out for those wedgies!!!"....Joking, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:19:11 02/08/03 Sat
Just VENTING but watch out next time it might be about YOU! "MY FEELINGS ON ALL YOU WACK RAPPERS AND SO-CALLED EMCEES!" -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 23:52:05 02/07/03 Fri
definate fire!!!!!!!!!!!! that' all!!1 props!!!!!!! -- LIPS, 00:46:05 02/08/03 Sat
I didn't like this at all... wack... -- Tizz_the sucessor, 02:24:23 02/08/03 Sat
nice flow i liked this one (NT) -- nemisis, 09:22:47 02/08/03 Sat
This was Definitly Hott, at times the flow was chopped, but fuck it, that em line and martinking line had me rolling, nice wordplay, very ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 11:57:59 02/08/03 Sat
i'd like to hear how you would do this via audio... adequate wordplay at parts overall nice drop. (NT) -- a cloudy day., 12:51:28 02/08/03 Sat
Keep this Lounge alive!!!...HAHA.....I liked this, although you came a little more "straightforward" on this post than usual....Oh yeah, I received your e-mail.....Hey, keep that emotive-complex up.....E-mail anytime you want.....I'll be back on Monday....I have a job interview on Tuesday.....Peace.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:15:34 02/08/03 Sat
AYO, PATHOLOGIST!!!! GET AT ME DUN!!!! -- LIPS, 11:16:24 02/06/03 Thu
accept criticism and move on...nothin to whine about (NT) -- Vision...wow he pulled the race card, 12:32:30 02/06/03 Thu
yo dickhead...my man gave you his honest opinion DUNN...all he was doin was tellin you what he thought....and who gives a shit if you white..that aint what hip hop's iz about...just chill and stop wasting threadz with this bullshit...peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 14:05:26 02/06/03 Thu
lol.. I aint pissed not at you being pissed.. just listen man.. "I already told you how I felt.. "HOW I FELT!" the COMMON qoute sums it up perfect.. "If I don't like it I don't like it, that don't mean that I'm hating!" just be cool, be easy I told you you'll get better with time.. this is a good board to elevate some real nice EMCEES in here.. stick around, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:37:18 02/06/03 Thu
quit with the caps lock man.......even though this didn't concern me it pisses me off reading shit in caps..... (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 13:00:02 02/08/03 Sat
I HAD A FUKED UP DAY SO I THOUGHT I WOULD LET OUT SOME STEAM FOR EVERYONE TO READ,.. ITS A LITTLE SIMPLE BUT I THINK ITS WORTH READING. -- does it matter., 18:44:25 02/06/03 Thu
damn fuk, this wasnt simple dawg...this was just right....this is spittable...i liked a lot (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 19:12:57 02/06/03 Thu
"I'm sick wearing this same damn NIKE air hat- I'm sick of emcees who aint bringing half the skill as me saying they wasn't feeling on no-ones as ill as me.." this reminded me of EMINEM 2 BUT FIRST MAJOR RELEASED ALBUM.. I can't remember the name of the song but this reminds me of it.. pretty tight man peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:21:07 02/06/03 Thu
I like that line about "walking home in the rain after work", that's good imagery. I was having trouble holding on to your rhythm, I'd be on it for a few bars then lose it again. I liked this, but I know you can do better. Thanks for the feedback. (NT) -- Blueprint, 20:53:38 02/06/03 Thu
oh ya, this flowed ill, scheam was tight, wordplay nice, some real good lines in there, ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:40:11 02/06/03 Thu
I FELT THAT DOG!!!! WE ALL HAVE THOUGHTS LIKE THAT AND BAD DAYS! GOOD DROP! -- LIPS, 01:44:41 02/07/03 Fri
shit was good.....i feel that all the time man.....just need to rhyme to get your mind off all the shit that happens that pisses you off......god shit (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:58:39 02/08/03 Sat
Love joint, quick keystyle about my last girl I thought was a soul mate and we agreed ta marry but like Roots say "Things Fall Apart" Its been a while since the break up but this one had crippling effects badly. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:05:36 02/07/03 Fri
aye, hot drop dog!!! that situation sound very familiar to a few girls that i've been with! you really expressed ya feelings good in this joint!! props!! stay up! one!! -- LIPS, 12:12:44 02/07/03 Fri
all im gonna say is this was hot (NT) -- nemisis, 14:38:26 02/07/03 Fri
This was nice....keep on improving with the rhyme scheme and word-placement.....You're improving excellently....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:21:26 02/07/03 Fri
very nice......felt you on this one...been in the same situation so i can definately relate (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:56:33 02/08/03 Sat
YES.....YAHVEH'S TWO GUARDIANS HAVE COMBINED THE GAINED-KNOWLEDGE FOR YOU "BIZZLE-NITCHES"........Pathologist and tHŁ h Ł k §-A-cĄtŽ....BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING.... -- |the| h Ţ ř t h Ł t Ą c ŕ l/|_ u m Ą ń ¤ r Ľ/, 16:03:21 02/07/03 Fri
Uhhh ok ill say i only understood about 30% of this.. 2nd half of Path's was ill as hell tho.. i couldnt even get through all of hex's... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:12:00 02/07/03 Fri
I agree with swords, i didnt quite understand all of it.....but it was still ill as hell.....please keep droping like i know ya'll will.. (NT) -- does it matter., 17:46:57 02/07/03 Fri
can it really be all that ill to you if you dont understand it? explain that to me (NT) -- no it doesnt, 19:33:36 02/07/03 Fri
WOAH!!!!!!!AMAZING HOW YA THOUGHTS WORK! PEEP PATH............ -- LIPS, 19:21:05 02/07/03 Fri
Some parts u lost me on cus I'am Catholic and do not have that much knowledge about other religions. Never the less this was fine post by you, vocab was excellent and choice of words fell in the right place I like the lines about brothers of Zion and zilch can hang on. The sonnetts are always dope at the end yo PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:55:49 02/07/03 Fri
actualy it can be that ill even if i didnt understand it. resson being, is because i see the talent in your wordplay, and the vocabulary, and also the fact that your very intelagent. thats how it can be ill even if i dont understand it. read my post down at the bottom. it says that basicaly," rap is'nt words just emotion". i gave you good feedback, and so you simply spit it in my face . some would get mad. not me, its cool because, no matter how dumb it sounded to you....I STILL FELT IT! one (NT) -- does it matter......dont try to change up the name of the game...DUNN., 20:57:33 02/07/03 Fri
OMG!! HEX your shit was rediculous, I'm not sure where the part about my descendants error was.. but I'll save this and read it like 1,000 times daily.. foreal this came out way more powerful then I imagined it.. DAMN.. I've read your verse like 10 times already after 10 times of reading mine of-course.. VERY VERY VERY ILL!! I'm gonna pat myself on the back now.. you do the same! LMAO!! WONDERFUL COLLAB, perfectly blended! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:04:38 02/07/03 Fri
This shit was so illll, hardcore to the core, crazy, ill collabo, you both came hard, concept was tight, MY MOTHA FUCKIN EYES HURT LIKE THE RHYME SPRAYED ME WITH MUSTARD GAS, trying to goge em out, nice kepp dropping (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:26:35 02/08/03 Sat
just a quick freestyle....please give me your opinions..iam not for sure if this was the right form to write this.one -- does it matter, 18:15:03 02/07/03 Fri
believe it or not, you might be able to post somethin' better, but you could feel ya emotion on this one! felt like you were frustrated about what you were talkin' about! i liked it! -- LIPS, 19:28:25 02/07/03 Fri
wow this looks familiar.. delete! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:16:39 02/07/03 Fri
erm just thoughts about some deep shit so peep and gimme feed back -- nemisis, 14:57:44 02/07/03 Fri
You seemed to have a lot of ideas stuffed up in this rhyme....Next time, come more concentrated....I'm not saying that it was bad...'cause it wasn't.....Just take advice....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:11:29 02/07/03 Fri
agreein wit hex.....ha....now u gettin the idea dawg....jk....nem....just focus (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:18:38 02/07/03 Fri
I thought that if you were to put a little more time into the same idea's it would be better than it already is...one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:49:33 02/07/03 Fri
Nice aim in this I feel you, just concentrate on what u wanna say on each bar and dig deeper for another way to say it, I think this is one of the better posts Ive seen from you PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:59:37 02/07/03 Fri
yo new nigga on the shit peep gun knowledge of a gangsta -- Klipz, 12:44:35 02/07/03 Fri
Man u sound like every other gangsta rapper, i really didn't like reading this cus the content was not very well thought out and it was in paragraph form ehhh ELEVATE man PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 13:18:47 02/07/03 Fri
err i read thid one and found it pretty good, ya rhymin skills are tight dawg peace. (NT) -- nemisis, 14:29:12 02/07/03 Fri
hahaha...i usually dont like this shit, but u actually got skills....ha....i liked this (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:13:18 02/07/03 Fri
I usually don't criticize someone else for what they do....But, could you bring something new and invigorating to the table....This was not anything of that nature...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:13:20 02/07/03 Fri
I liked it on a,"thug'is tip",....it would have been easier to read in bar form...but all in all, nice post ..one (NT) -- does it matter., 17:52:26 02/07/03 Fri

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