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Israeli Masterpeice- THE DEAD EDITIONS STRAIGHT OUT THE KITCHEN The Verses For the Churches -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:09:49 02/10/03 Mon
- hella sick..a bit too long but a tight post -- cyborgx47111z3, 04:10:52 02/10/03 Mon
- hot damn.....this was the dopest shit ive read dawg.......i didnt finish it cuz it made me wanna flip this style....i love taht shit....wordplay and punchlines was coo as fuk who tha fuk are u..? (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:47:04 02/10/03 Mon
- Moses WASN'T a "Jew"......Other than that, this was alright....A tad bit too long and long-winded.....I'm not knocking your post at all...I'm just stating my opinion....Keep up and stay up..... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 12:08:13 02/10/03 Mon
- this was long but tight, could you do better?thats a retorical question (NT) -- mc3, 14:38:35 02/10/03 Mon
- dman this was fucking long...flow was dope though,,,nice wordplay, i liked it...stay up..piece (NT) -- Essence....AM, 17:40:23 02/10/03 Mon
- Umm wow.. How long did it take you to write this? was this a Keystyle? it'da taken me forever.. I could only read up to where the lines got longer.. Plus i really didnt know what this was about... Work on making the message more concise, cuz not everyone can read this whole thing to get the message.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 22:58:24 02/10/03 Mon
- I got bored within the text.. way to long especially at 2 in the morning.. what I read reminded me of my Rejuvination song on my 2000 album Mission of a Life-time.. so I give props on what I read, what I did read was nice! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:52:48 02/11/03 Tue
let me grabe my spot son.....i got dis...info pleas..."1ne" -- jay, 19:50:01 02/09/03 Sun
Wasn't really feelin this one, yor 2nd one was better (NT) -- Double Take, 21:38:49 02/09/03 Sun
good i think that that very first line set it off nicely (NT) -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:19:59 02/10/03 Mon
this was fucking week kid (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 23:58:40 02/10/03 Mon
Got done slamning a 40 yall feels good, but all is not good, heres a quick keystyle for yall. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:21:19 02/08/03 Sat
I can tell you drunken on this.. cause it sounds tight.. and I'm drunk as hell as well! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:41:00 02/09/03 Sun
kinda short dawg but, in the lines was good wordplay. (NT) -- nemisis, 04:58:37 02/09/03 Sun
yo this was cool...........i know i always write better when i'm high hahaha....good lyrical show here...smooth flow to it...wordplay was definitely nice here...and liked ya word usage...multi's helped set it off too...overall this was tight...keep up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:41:56 02/09/03 Sun
mad props yo....ya flow is definitly fresh...i give u mad coo points.. -- jay, 23:09:23 02/09/03 Sun
not bad son (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:55:41 02/10/03 Mon
VERSETYLE VISIONS pt 6....aint been a good story in here in a minute...yaul remember these? the new cats definately wont, but enjoy...."Fallen Angels: Angelic Battle".....peace muvafukas -- an Abzent Minded/O.M.N.I. collaboration, 14:18:27 02/09/03 Sun
This was aight, nothing really stood out, It was an ill idea and creative but lacked, it just wasn't what I thought it would be as I read on, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:53:15 02/09/03 Sun
hey, i think this was the longest post ive seen on here. it kinda got boring going towards but liked the first paragraph. PEACE dawg! (NT) -- mc3, 16:25:39 02/09/03 Sun
Well well well.. first and foremost.. Azrael and Azazel? WOW to put yourself in those shoes.. thats like claiming Molech, blasphemous. This was devilish to me. The idea was great I just find it hard to relate to their stand-points .. The Enoch qoute was almost like asking god to bless from both sides of war "partakers" .. peep! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:00:12 02/09/03 Sun
it wold sound better live to long ta read and feel a beat...but i give u props yo -- jay, 20:32:09 02/09/03 Sun
I agree it was too long to read but what I read it would sound great in an audio (NT) -- Double Take, 21:40:52 02/09/03 Sun
this got mad love when it was first posted, almost got POTM (damn Xitizen...lol)... but yeah it wasn't meant to be controversial, just creative.... but whatever, each to their own...peace (NT) -- Versetyle.....(yo Vis i know a Versetyle Vision is long overdue... it shall be done soon....i'll get at you this week-end...peace, 19:57:30 02/10/03 Mon
Haven't been here in awhile cause my last freestyle sucked and I got roasted almost outta here but I'm back with this untitled freestyle -- Double Take, 21:35:50 02/09/03 Sun
tight bring on ya tighter shi tho.... -- jay, 21:45:07 02/09/03 Sun
for you -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:15:57 02/10/03 Mon
hmm....this was sttttttrrrrrrrraight.,....could work on a more focused position though....talk shit but if u do that...go off on everything...if u torture someone....torture them like crazy (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 04:51:06 02/10/03 Mon
your flow has improved but your content is still lacking...you could work on the vocab a lil more but if you've got something to say then it aint important...this was better than before, keep on Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:47:36 02/10/03 Mon
ok, better than ya last keystyle but instead of doin those all the time try writin ya feelings on a page and think about it. (NT) -- mc3, 14:41:38 02/10/03 Mon
Battle verse.....................peep -- SickNen, 12:01:13 02/08/03 Sat
HAHA! MINES was a KEYSTYLE too in like 5 min. YOU BASICALLY said a whole bunch of SHIT I said just way more simplistic.. FLIP off the norm kid.. this was pretty tight, I hated the start becuase it was filler shit.. but it progressed nicely.. "pretty tight stuff man.. just dig deeper then a settled spot!" ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:10:32 02/08/03 Sat
This was an ill battle verse, had some decint punches, nice wordplay, ill post overall---Now peep 3 posts (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:17:49 02/08/03 Sat
too many UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU's in it but keep practicing your shity frestyles (NT) -- nemisis, 12:35:09 02/08/03 Sat
Keep writing.....on work on "witty" punches....This was pretty good....But just keep working on originality....I'm not knockin' your style or anything of that nature....Just keep writing...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:05:13 02/08/03 Sat
(Shit....I just got bored...."thatz just alittle keystyle.").....Pathologist , did U not see or what? Focus upon tha fact that I'm play'n around...I'm not mad becuz of what U said..itz just, "not much shit comez to me when I'm high (as far as freestyle'n.) (NT) -- SickNen, 12:32:24 02/10/03 Mon
some lay back shi i wrote yo....info back on dis...hot shi... -- jay, 20:14:42 02/09/03 Sun
Good, not the greatest though (NT) -- Double Take, 21:37:08 02/09/03 Sun
o' my god a deaf messenger laying it down beautiful peice (NT) -- Benjamin Barnes- the prodigal son the flow of the century, 02:18:25 02/10/03 Mon
hmm....damn dawg...not much u can say but...try harder, or dont try hard and be u... (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote....u a rookie right?, 04:52:35 02/10/03 Mon
Hey Path I Checked My Deck and This Is What Transpired...Deal It -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:04:34 02/09/03 Sun
flow wasnt bad.....choppy in parts and well....the punches lacked...i think some things couda been left out...like paralyzed paraplegics....kinda defeats the purpose of the word paraplegic ya know (NT) -- Vis, 14:24:17 02/09/03 Sun
i honestly think that was dope, the rhymin scheme was possibly a little choppy but hey it was still dope (NT) -- mc3, 16:35:46 02/09/03 Sun
hah.. yeah man this was alot better and more focused.. with what you tried to convey.. "stumped paraplegic" would have drawn a better vision, or something that does not have the same meaning knaw'mean? reguardless.. I liked it nice drop kid! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:37:10 02/09/03 Sun
yo that was tight...sound like u got some ish-u's...but i give ya props..."1ne" -- jay, 20:40:21 02/09/03 Sun
just something o wrote while back and i felt like postin it so, peep -- nemisis, 05:16:04 02/09/03 Sun
aight...i didn't even read past the second line here.....and let me tell ya why--"all they want is my money and new benz"....please, just a few posts down you say you're either 14 or 13 years old....you ain't got no new benz...this is fake ass shit...and i don't read that! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:32:44 02/09/03 Sun
yo son wz realy goin on in ya life that shit is twisted...u need jesus...im not all fillin nat verse...needs mad work..."1ne" -- jay, 07:00:10 02/09/03 Sun
well, aight.....yea, the uh....content was okay, nice to see you have a heart...but still your rhyming needs work....a good paragraph of about five lines didnt even rhyme...work on that (NT) -- Vis, 14:03:32 02/09/03 Sun
ONCE AGAIN, it RHYMED!!! This was better then your first drop man I feel you, tight lil' drop keep elevating your thoughts... I'm sure you ment A new BENZ not YOUR new BENZ.. jesus cats is more critical then me these days.. thats ashame.. cause I hate everyone and everything! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:12:43 02/09/03 Sun
Just a Lil Somethin New!!....and song i'm workin on...gonna call it "Wasting Time"...this is just the first verse.....wanted some feedback on it......Enjoy!!! -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:28:42 02/09/03 Sun
i dig da verse yo...props give'ith...word -- jay, 06:51:35 02/09/03 Sun
hmm...the flow was okay, i guess melodic in parts...didnt really feel the content much (NT) -- Vis, 13:52:03 02/09/03 Sun
Felt all the way thru, real deep and understandable, I liked it, keep on (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 14:20:15 02/09/03 Sun
very dope man, I was feeling the abstractions of the flow.. real nice kid, ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:08:35 02/09/03 Sun
check dis yo im new up in here im just drop a flow see wz up yo...drop some info..."1ne" -- jay, 06:41:42 02/09/03 Sun
naw son... try again... it sounded like you were advertising yourself and you group... -- Tizz_the sucessor, 09:36:34 02/09/03 Sun
whack!!!! -- SHORTY WIT DA PRETTY EYEZ!, 10:49:52 02/09/03 Sun
practice little buddy....practice, be real to yourself while you're at it (NT) -- Vis, 13:58:09 02/09/03 Sun
Nice intro now show us your stuff yo (NT) -- Grotesque, 14:17:13 02/09/03 Sun
what the fuck, dawg you need 2 go home and buy a microphone, pen and pad of paper and then dont write on this board again until everything rhymes and when that happens you might get a little bit of praise but until then stop spittin. (NT) -- mc3, 16:41:08 02/09/03 Sun
it rhymed but that's not always what it's about.. you simpletons kill me talking bout' shit don't rhyme.. just build address a real topic and come back with some originality, speak on something you'd like to change or something you have knowledge over.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:05:22 02/09/03 Sun
Damn this is a quick as I've ever-wrote.. just freestyling on the keys.. peep it out! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:39:04 02/09/03 Sun
this is dope for a keystyle and it wasnt short which helped. PEACE! (NT) -- nemisis, 04:56:25 02/09/03 Sun
wasn't short?!?!...this was long as fuck..hahaha..and damn Path, you said I write long shit...hahahaha..nah but for reals, this is a nice key...kinda lost interest in few spots...but it was nice....good word usage and rhymin....nice use of multi's....and the imagery, allusions and metaphors were nice in here.....nice all 'round key...what i've come to expect of ya....stay up sonn, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:38:46 02/09/03 Sun
yo off da hook son...wild styl...long verse...didn't wanna go thro the verse but i got in to it ...much props yo -- jay, 07:14:30 02/09/03 Sun
Path a fucking Keystyle, come on, This shit was fucking ill, your mind is packed with thoughts, nice wordplay, content was tight,I liked the Han Solo Line I'd hate to see 1 of your written battle verses, keep on.....PEEP MINES DID IT JUST FOR YOU (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 13:59:09 02/09/03 Sun
So not to waste paper.. -- ===||Swords--->, 20:45:01 02/08/03 Sat
Tight (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:22:43 02/08/03 Sat
it's cool not my and are type of shit though (NT) -- Da Vills, 23:57:32 02/08/03 Sat
very different from your style props on the change up.. dope shit! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:44:43 02/09/03 Sun
i aint used to this from you, it works good though (NT) -- nemisis, 05:02:32 02/09/03 Sun
Audio...from us we outta Austin,tx...we callin this GameOver...peep and give feedback we need it..But don't just say elava..we 16 ....so we got time for that..peep please much lov -- Da Vills......off Austin's YNa click, 21:27:49 02/08/03 Sat
sorry duke.. can't peep out audio's right now. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:42:09 02/09/03 Sun
A CONCEPTUAL CLOUD -- a cloudy day, 13:41:10 02/08/03 Sat
this was worded well, that's not always a easy task for some.. well up.. nice drop. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:24:07 02/08/03 Sat
was this supposed to rhyme? cause i dont think it did but besides that it was kinda good (NT) -- nemisis&royam(new mc ), 14:28:48 02/08/03 Sat
your kidding me right? you can't see the flow in this... dude can you read? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:31:11 02/08/03 Sat
Your style reminds so much of Ach.....or is it Overcast?...HAHAHA.....This was dope...It's always a joy to peep something different every once and a while...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:07:27 02/08/03 Sat
Conceptual cloud eh? i agree.. Pretty nice, better than average.. i can tel you can do way better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:53:27 02/08/03 Sat
Not bad first post I read from you, u can elevate PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:27:18 02/08/03 Sat
this is introducing the newest mc on here royam we did a collab and we is part of a gruop called mc3 and this called 'feel ya fears' -- nemisis&royam(mc3), 14:42:32 02/08/03 Sat
man.. this was way to average.. I'm sorry.. how old are yall? If your young then I may change my critque. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:17:46 02/08/03 Sat
This post reminded me of that commercial from the '80s, where that "Where's the beef?" Lady did a "rap" for Hardee's....Remember that?...Playin', hey...just keep on writing and work on thinking about...."Well, how can I convey my rhyme differently from everybody else?"...Then you'll see improvement...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:27:47 02/08/03 Sat
WHat more can i say besides put more experience under your belt? lmao @ shite..german shitzer film anyone? (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:49:31 02/08/03 Sat
mORE WORK YALL GET ITpeace -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:24:18 02/08/03 Sat
just something real quick -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:53:45 02/08/03 Sat
typo -- Karma The Konsequence, 13:03:00 02/08/03 Sat
sorry, i couldnt get into this... (NT) -- a cloudy day, 15:25:35 02/08/03 Sat
This wasn't bad at all......Keep at this....I was digging the "trapped U" line....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:09:06 02/08/03 Sat
LOL i dunno man.. i thought this was wack.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:55:06 02/08/03 Sat
just a quick freestyle....please give me your opinions..iam not for sure if this was the right form to write this.one -- does it matter, 18:17:52 02/07/03 Fri
Some lines were allright others just didn't fit, I see strong possability in the direction your going PECAE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:49:12 02/07/03 Fri
the beginning was deeper then the text was saying I felt where you was going.. just try to word it better.. it's structure became stronger as it went along.. it's just that your wearing out this subject a bit.. try to focus on something you know that nobody else knows about.. this was pretty good though I'm just bored of hearing about this GOVERNMENT, I hate the world I have no ties with it! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:12:39 02/07/03 Fri
I felt the first part very strongly and agree, The president acts like hes been in are residence, for real fuck em, Any way Flow was a little chop sticked, on the second part I don't know it lost my intrest for some reason, overall aight post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:06:46 02/08/03 Sat
The first "stanza" was my favorite....Just about every line in that one was pure truth....There's no way God is blessing "US"/U.S. with all the infantine bickering going on in today's social and governmental climate....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:34:05 02/08/03 Sat
Piece I call "Immortal tounge" had some thoughts, just working on the rhymes PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:45:40 02/07/03 Fri
This was nice man I don't think you got a nice title from me yet.. be proud.. naw I'm playing man.. nice post! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:07:33 02/07/03 Fri
good knowledge dropped!! liked the way you talked about issues in the world!nice drop! -- LIPS, 00:48:10 02/08/03 Sat
This shit is hot sun.. -- Tizz_the sucessor, 02:27:04 02/08/03 Sat
Very creative, nice imaginary, well thought, flowed great, ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:01:19 02/08/03 Sat
My favorite line was the "1776 contracts" line....That was truth right there.....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:30:25 02/08/03 Sat
Just Taking A Shit On My Big Brother Who Hates On Mr Cause I Have "Real" Talent and used 1 of His CDs -- G R O T E S Q U E, 11:52:13 02/08/03 Sat
it's a 747 by the way.. "umm.. this was coo' man- but PEEP!" -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:04:33 02/08/03 Sat
next please... i always ask... what seperates you from the next, with text you really need to grab the reader, this was only nagging on the wu garment... try again. (NT) -- A CLOUDY DAY, 12:59:52 02/08/03 Sat
This was pretty good.....I don't the reasons for attacking your "older brother" online...."Watch out for those wedgies!!!"....Joking, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:19:11 02/08/03 Sat
Just VENTING but watch out next time it might be about YOU! "MY FEELINGS ON ALL YOU WACK RAPPERS AND SO-CALLED EMCEES!" -- Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!", 23:52:05 02/07/03 Fri
definate fire!!!!!!!!!!!! that' all!!1 props!!!!!!! -- LIPS, 00:46:05 02/08/03 Sat
I didn't like this at all... wack... -- Tizz_the sucessor, 02:24:23 02/08/03 Sat
nice flow i liked this one (NT) -- nemisis, 09:22:47 02/08/03 Sat
This was Definitly Hott, at times the flow was chopped, but fuck it, that em line and martinking line had me rolling, nice wordplay, very ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 11:57:59 02/08/03 Sat
i'd like to hear how you would do this via audio... adequate wordplay at parts overall nice drop. (NT) -- a cloudy day., 12:51:28 02/08/03 Sat
Keep this Lounge alive!!!...HAHA.....I liked this, although you came a little more "straightforward" on this post than usual....Oh yeah, I received your e-mail.....Hey, keep that emotive-complex up.....E-mail anytime you want.....I'll be back on Monday....I have a job interview on Tuesday.....Peace.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 16:15:34 02/08/03 Sat
AYO, PATHOLOGIST!!!! GET AT ME DUN!!!! -- LIPS, 11:16:24 02/06/03 Thu
accept criticism and move on...nothin to whine about (NT) -- Vision...wow he pulled the race card, 12:32:30 02/06/03 Thu
yo dickhead...my man gave you his honest opinion DUNN...all he was doin was tellin you what he thought....and who gives a shit if you white..that aint what hip hop's iz about...just chill and stop wasting threadz with this bullshit...peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 14:05:26 02/06/03 Thu
lol.. I aint pissed not at you being pissed.. just listen man.. "I already told you how I felt.. "HOW I FELT!" the COMMON qoute sums it up perfect.. "If I don't like it I don't like it, that don't mean that I'm hating!" just be cool, be easy I told you you'll get better with time.. this is a good board to elevate some real nice EMCEES in here.. stick around, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:37:18 02/06/03 Thu
quit with the caps lock man.......even though this didn't concern me it pisses me off reading shit in caps..... (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 13:00:02 02/08/03 Sat
I HAD A FUKED UP DAY SO I THOUGHT I WOULD LET OUT SOME STEAM FOR EVERYONE TO READ,.. ITS A LITTLE SIMPLE BUT I THINK ITS WORTH READING. -- does it matter., 18:44:25 02/06/03 Thu
damn fuk, this wasnt simple dawg...this was just right....this is spittable...i liked a lot (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 19:12:57 02/06/03 Thu
"I'm sick wearing this same damn NIKE air hat- I'm sick of emcees who aint bringing half the skill as me saying they wasn't feeling on no-ones as ill as me.." this reminded me of EMINEM 2 BUT FIRST MAJOR RELEASED ALBUM.. I can't remember the name of the song but this reminds me of it.. pretty tight man peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:21:07 02/06/03 Thu
I like that line about "walking home in the rain after work", that's good imagery. I was having trouble holding on to your rhythm, I'd be on it for a few bars then lose it again. I liked this, but I know you can do better. Thanks for the feedback. (NT) -- Blueprint, 20:53:38 02/06/03 Thu
oh ya, this flowed ill, scheam was tight, wordplay nice, some real good lines in there, ill post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:40:11 02/06/03 Thu
I FELT THAT DOG!!!! WE ALL HAVE THOUGHTS LIKE THAT AND BAD DAYS! GOOD DROP! -- LIPS, 01:44:41 02/07/03 Fri
shit was good.....i feel that all the time man.....just need to rhyme to get your mind off all the shit that happens that pisses you off......god shit (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:58:39 02/08/03 Sat
Love joint, quick keystyle about my last girl I thought was a soul mate and we agreed ta marry but like Roots say "Things Fall Apart" Its been a while since the break up but this one had crippling effects badly. PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:05:36 02/07/03 Fri
aye, hot drop dog!!! that situation sound very familiar to a few girls that i've been with! you really expressed ya feelings good in this joint!! props!! stay up! one!! -- LIPS, 12:12:44 02/07/03 Fri
all im gonna say is this was hot (NT) -- nemisis, 14:38:26 02/07/03 Fri
This was nice....keep on improving with the rhyme scheme and word-placement.....You're improving excellently....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:21:26 02/07/03 Fri
very nice......felt you on this one...been in the same situation so i can definately relate (NT) -- Karma The Konsequence, 12:56:33 02/08/03 Sat
YES.....YAHVEH'S TWO GUARDIANS HAVE COMBINED THE GAINED-KNOWLEDGE FOR YOU "BIZZLE-NITCHES"........Pathologist and tHŁ h Ł k §-A-cĄtŽ....BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING.... -- |the| h Ţ ř t h Ł t Ą c ŕ l/|_ u m Ą ń ¤ r Ľ/, 16:03:21 02/07/03 Fri
Uhhh ok ill say i only understood about 30% of this.. 2nd half of Path's was ill as hell tho.. i couldnt even get through all of hex's... (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:12:00 02/07/03 Fri
I agree with swords, i didnt quite understand all of it.....but it was still ill as hell.....please keep droping like i know ya'll will.. (NT) -- does it matter., 17:46:57 02/07/03 Fri
can it really be all that ill to you if you dont understand it? explain that to me (NT) -- no it doesnt, 19:33:36 02/07/03 Fri
WOAH!!!!!!!AMAZING HOW YA THOUGHTS WORK! PEEP PATH............ -- LIPS, 19:21:05 02/07/03 Fri
Some parts u lost me on cus I'am Catholic and do not have that much knowledge about other religions. Never the less this was fine post by you, vocab was excellent and choice of words fell in the right place I like the lines about brothers of Zion and zilch can hang on. The sonnetts are always dope at the end yo PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:55:49 02/07/03 Fri
actualy it can be that ill even if i didnt understand it. resson being, is because i see the talent in your wordplay, and the vocabulary, and also the fact that your very intelagent. thats how it can be ill even if i dont understand it. read my post down at the bottom. it says that basicaly," rap is'nt words just emotion". i gave you good feedback, and so you simply spit it in my face . some would get mad. not me, its cool because, no matter how dumb it sounded to you....I STILL FELT IT! one (NT) -- does it matter......dont try to change up the name of the game...DUNN., 20:57:33 02/07/03 Fri
OMG!! HEX your shit was rediculous, I'm not sure where the part about my descendants error was.. but I'll save this and read it like 1,000 times daily.. foreal this came out way more powerful then I imagined it.. DAMN.. I've read your verse like 10 times already after 10 times of reading mine of-course.. VERY VERY VERY ILL!! I'm gonna pat myself on the back now.. you do the same! LMAO!! WONDERFUL COLLAB, perfectly blended! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:04:38 02/07/03 Fri
This shit was so illll, hardcore to the core, crazy, ill collabo, you both came hard, concept was tight, MY MOTHA FUCKIN EYES HURT LIKE THE RHYME SPRAYED ME WITH MUSTARD GAS, trying to goge em out, nice kepp dropping (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:26:35 02/08/03 Sat
just a quick freestyle....please give me your opinions..iam not for sure if this was the right form to write this.one -- does it matter, 18:15:03 02/07/03 Fri
believe it or not, you might be able to post somethin' better, but you could feel ya emotion on this one! felt like you were frustrated about what you were talkin' about! i liked it! -- LIPS, 19:28:25 02/07/03 Fri
wow this looks familiar.. delete! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:16:39 02/07/03 Fri
erm just thoughts about some deep shit so peep and gimme feed back -- nemisis, 14:57:44 02/07/03 Fri
You seemed to have a lot of ideas stuffed up in this rhyme....Next time, come more concentrated....I'm not saying that it was bad...'cause it wasn't.....Just take advice....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:11:29 02/07/03 Fri
agreein wit hex.....ha....now u gettin the idea dawg....jk....nem....just focus (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:18:38 02/07/03 Fri
I thought that if you were to put a little more time into the same idea's it would be better than it already is...one (NT) -- does it matter, 17:49:33 02/07/03 Fri
Nice aim in this I feel you, just concentrate on what u wanna say on each bar and dig deeper for another way to say it, I think this is one of the better posts Ive seen from you PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 19:59:37 02/07/03 Fri
yo new nigga on the shit peep gun knowledge of a gangsta -- Klipz, 12:44:35 02/07/03 Fri
Man u sound like every other gangsta rapper, i really didn't like reading this cus the content was not very well thought out and it was in paragraph form ehhh ELEVATE man PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 13:18:47 02/07/03 Fri
err i read thid one and found it pretty good, ya rhymin skills are tight dawg peace. (NT) -- nemisis, 14:29:12 02/07/03 Fri
hahaha...i usually dont like this shit, but u actually got skills....ha....i liked this (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 15:13:18 02/07/03 Fri
I usually don't criticize someone else for what they do....But, could you bring something new and invigorating to the table....This was not anything of that nature...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:13:20 02/07/03 Fri
I liked it on a,"thug'is tip",....it would have been easier to read in bar form...but all in all, nice post ..one (NT) -- does it matter., 17:52:26 02/07/03 Fri
HARLEM, WHAT !!! -- OMA, 06:48:32 02/07/03 Fri
Kinda simple yo, nothing the lounge hasn't read before, take a little more time on each bar, u coulda put more descriptive words in some spots elevate PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 13:23:23 02/07/03 Fri
i agree with pat D.A.W.G on this one it was kinda simple but youll get better (NT) -- nemisis, 14:32:22 02/07/03 Fri
hmmm...i see bright spots in here....my advice?...keep ur bars at that length, but say more in them, learn to get the most out of one word, therefore when u flip it, someone might catch it a different way, but they'll still feel it... (NT) -- styliztik..aka..quote...says....elevator going up?, 15:16:17 02/07/03 Fri
This was WAY too simplistic.....Try concentrating deeper on your words...increase wordplay and vocabulary usage....Think of imagery, abstract even....Whatever you do, do what you're good at....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 15:17:38 02/07/03 Fri
daylight's saving time -- xEnOiC, 01:08:55 02/07/03 Fri
WHAT STOOD OUT FOR ME ON THIS WAS YA RYME SCHEME!!!NICE ASS DROP! PROPS ON THIS JOINT!! -- LIPS, 01:46:47 02/07/03 Fri
First and only neg is paragarph form is hard ta read/ break it down inta lines, clean ass content nice lyrics and wordplay, first time I ever peeped ya post but i will definetly check the next PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:13:49 02/07/03 Fri
ehh...break into bars then I'll read...but anyway...YO DAVID DUNG.......WHEN YOU GONNA DROP THAT LP YOU WERE PROMOTING???......just curious.... (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I., 11:42:55 02/07/03 Fri
MY CREW-F.U.-FLOW UNLIMITED-COLLABO-"ANGER AND RAGE" -- LIPS, 01:52:37 02/07/03 Fri
Good job elaborating on the subject, not extremely ill and lay off the powder man, overall descent postPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:10:10 02/07/03 Fri
"Caveman Primitive" made me laugh. That middle section is the the best, the first one uses words for the sake of sylables. Good Post (NT) -- Blueprint, 10:41:33 02/07/03 Fri
He's Not A Felon -- Blueprint, 21:59:01 02/06/03 Thu
dope! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:34:01 02/06/03 Thu
Nice as concept, shit was very vivid, great discriptive wise, overall ill post (NT) -- GROTESQUE, 22:50:05 02/06/03 Thu
good storytellin' ability on this joint dog!! props! -- LIPS, 23:23:06 02/06/03 Thu
Nice, imagery was nice in begining and overall story's persona was nice good post blue. PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:22:37 02/07/03 Fri
One Step To Go but Then The Last Step Snapped And I Went Through -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Big Boy, 23:51:11 02/06/03 Thu
I liked this.. the shit flowed like water.. your style is simplistic but orginal with you punch-lines and sims, I was feeling this, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:22:16 02/07/03 Fri
I LIKE YA FLOW, I THINK YOU SHOULD ADD LENGTH TO YA BARS THOUGH!!! PROPS! -- LIPS, 01:54:13 02/07/03 Fri
Nice flow, lines were ill and overall a nice post keep up, was your little brother on here man? PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:17:18 02/07/03 Fri
Oh My , Termites Ate George Washingtons Wooden Teethe..hahah, well anyways.." Freestyle Directed At Whoeva Wants it and Packrats" -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Boy Big BE SHORE TO PEEP MY OTHER RHYME BELOW BLUEPRINTS, 22:44:55 02/06/03 Thu
Micheal Jackson line had me rollling .. he looked hilarious when he did that like he aint human no more a over-grown elf or some shit.. this was equally as dope as the one above.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:25:56 02/07/03 Fri
Let the light from my subjects erect the truth we all most see, If we can't open our eyes we'll never just be. The thought of a end is truly the beginning lets spread love not war and reap our new surroundings! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 14:59:28 02/06/03 Thu
this was very deep, seems like every mc on this board writes like this!!! that shit is great man!!! this board is dope!! and that post was hot yo!!!! it would take hours to really peep it! props!! -- LIPS, 15:20:37 02/06/03 Thu
This was dope....although, the Black race didn't descend from the line of Ham....I'll explain in our collabo.....Other than that, this was well-structured and the content was deep too....Keep this up and stay up.....I'll be e-mailing you this Saturday on more info on the collabo.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š....I've already started on my verse.....HAHAHA....., 15:59:20 02/06/03 Thu
cool I'm interested in knowing what you have to tell me on this matter, because I thought we really did descend from HAM.. you got me curious as HELL.. lol and thanks for waiting lmao! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:12:27 02/06/03 Thu
I'll have to read it some other time.... it's been a while since i've gotten off into this.... nice though.... I just need to read it when I'v feelin it more..... peace (NT) -- SKORP-I....... *STILL IN THE LAB*.... P.S. HEKS..... I GOT SOME PROGRAMS FOR YOU..... BOUT A THOUSAND $$ WORTH.... holla, 17:04:55 02/06/03 Thu
haha...the science of Elohiem....yahweh..ehh?...this was poetic....tight....nothin u could spit over a beat though...less it was some syncopated shit (NT) -- styliztik...aka...quote, 20:59:58 02/06/03 Thu
if you only knew me.. I don't write shit I can't spit.. I drop it just for you.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:31:47 02/06/03 Thu
This shit was ill, black history, good shit, concept was tight on point, ill (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 00:00:30 02/07/03 Fri
Smoking On Mic Wire as Christopher Reeves Stands Out His Chair -- G R O T E S Q U E Little Boy Big, 21:34:45 02/06/03 Thu
At first I was skeptic, but by the end I was smilin'. It's laid back and easy to spit, simple is not necessarily bad. This has that consistent carefree, not-to-serious vibe, Good post. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:48:55 02/06/03 Thu
"dictionary cats" any time cats say something like that it makes me smile.. I aint never picked up a dictionary.. I guess I feel what your saying.. just I like to be astounded when I read a post.. I hate reading boring shit.. that don't got no feel to it.. I've seen you way nicer then this though.. keep spittin' peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:38:26 02/06/03 Thu
path peep -- GRO, 23:04:57 02/06/03 Thu
got better as it went on! props!!! -- LIPS, 23:20:12 02/06/03 Thu
JUST A BATTLE VERSE -- LIPS, 15:08:32 02/06/03 Thu
iight I liked the collab.. better, your battle style kinda just drags on.. what board you said you was a 5 time champ at? I'd like to visit it.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:13:04 02/06/03 Thu
PATH PEEP............... -- LIPS, 15:29:50 02/06/03 Thu
my bad man I didn't mean to set you up like that.. thanks and sorry again.. I forgot about the advertising thing.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:06:03 02/06/03 Thu
it's aight..... keep it comin... (NT) -- SKORP-I....... *still in the lab*, 16:52:44 02/06/03 Thu
this was...coo..punches where kinda corny...tho... (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 20:53:28 02/06/03 Thu
WOW, shit was ill, punches like holyfeild for real, flowed like a drunks piss, it just kept going, made my eyes tired, shit was very good though (NT) -- GROTESQUE, 22:55:17 02/06/03 Thu
fellow emcees -- nick, 15:47:58 02/06/03 Thu
first off.....THIS NEEDS TO BE DELETED!...second, i would like to say that the next time you write something remember this are such things as periods. periods let the readers know when the sentence starts and then stops..third, DO NOT EVER IN YOUR LIFE, disrespect the emcee's that are in this lounge. I have nothing more to say. (NT) -- does it matter, 17:54:37 02/06/03 Thu
WHATS THAT? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:29:50 02/06/03 Thu
I'm sorry man, but if your older than 16, take some time out and decide whether writing is for you. If your younger than that, try to pick up some punctuation techniqes. There is a lot of good writing on this site, use it as a resourse to polish up what your doing. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:42:27 02/06/03 Thu
YOU CANT CUM HARD AT 10, D E L E T E (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:49:21 02/06/03 Thu
OLD BATTLE VERSE TO MAJESTIC -- LIPS, 17:09:37 02/06/03 Thu
this was iight....keep it up..knowledge = power. (NT) -- does it matter, 17:56:48 02/06/03 Thu
naw this had a constant flow to it, so it made it entertaining write some new shit man.. you had to have elevated past this.. I'm not dissing I'm just noting the fact that this was the best verse so far, so in turn writing something new is a way to chart your elevation.. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:28:08 02/06/03 Thu
u got flow patterns down...just work on what ur sayin inside those patterns...peace (NT) -- styliztik...aka..quote, 19:35:54 02/06/03 Thu
I like the way you edit, it compliments the way I like to flow. That Oprah line is nice, but i was lost on your direction. Most of your lines are scatter blasted with things that sound real nice but are difficult to discipher. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:38:38 02/06/03 Thu
Some good lines in here , I liked the apollow line the most, overall shit was intact,, wordplay and all, nice post (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 21:45:10 02/06/03 Thu
D-LUXE AND LIPS COLLABO! "TRY AND FORGE OUR FLOW" -- LIPS, 14:58:44 02/06/03 Thu
this was dope man.. much better, way more on point, is this something yall did in the past? dope collab man, ONE! P.S I'm from DETROIT! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 15:08:27 02/06/03 Thu
aye man, my bad! i didn't mean to offend you before dog! i really like this board!!! peep....l -- LIPS, 15:13:28 02/06/03 Thu
i know sicilians that'll say they aint white at all (NT) -- Vis, 15:51:50 02/06/03 Thu
well, i'm not really!!! i just consider myself italian!!! sicilians decended from the moors!!!! peep...... -- LIPS, 16:08:43 02/06/03 Thu
All right yall, been kinda rusty a little bit bit. Keystyle I call "Mass of The Few" u betta know what side u on when the fake hip hop gets slayed PEACE -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:23:30 02/06/03 Thu
YO................... -- LIPS, 02:39:07 02/06/03 Thu
This was aight.. i liked the beginning more than anything.. I thought a lot of the lines were worded weird.. Keep workin at it tho, you're slowly getting better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:21:52 02/06/03 Thu
I liked reading through this...The flow was good for the most and some lines were kinda nice, like when you made the word 'rap' into an acronym. The content was kinda lacking to me, I know what you were saying but wasn't nothing new...find something to write about and you'll come nicer. You have improved tho' ,Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:26:26 02/06/03 Thu
Look inside -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:33:37 02/06/03 Thu
Look inside -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:37:29 02/06/03 Thu
iight, I was kinda getting bored while reading.. but it was pretty tight, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:50:40 02/06/03 Thu
Rememberence -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:59:52 02/06/03 Thu
YO, DOG, I LOST BOTH GRAND, MY FATHER, AND MY BROTHER, SO I WAS FEELIN' THAT A WHOLE NOTHER LEVEL! PEEP..... -- LIPS, 11:27:55 02/06/03 Thu
Yeah I noticed the 'switch' and I don't wanna crit this too much as it seemed real personal...however I can tell you it was fuckin' ill and probs the realest thing you've spit...message felt and God rest your all your peeps...Well done Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:57:18 02/06/03 Thu
It's good to get those emotions out......I'm still feeling the hurt from losing my grandfather back in December of 2001.....Keep those feelings up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 14:25:01 02/06/03 Thu
man I feel you I lost alot of friends in the streets.. I still carry the memory with me, I'll never forget what they were all killed for.. it's a shame the way we kill eachother.. and scream about "THE MAN!" we got to organize and build... -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:46:21 02/06/03 Thu
OK you slept on mah audioI suppose that figures cus this site is mostly textual. so here is some..H O T..text for everyone to have a peep..Just scripted this in tha morning PeAcE !!! -- Eternal Student, 14:26:19 02/05/03 Wed
Nice...pretty keen with the multisyllabic-structure......Don't worry about the audio....You probably just posted one a day that most were at computers that couldn't hook up the links or something like that....I should know, I tried peeping the audio yesterday.....but other than that....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 14:50:03 02/05/03 Wed
Flow was intense real steady.. tight drop man, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:55:03 02/05/03 Wed
flow was sick as hell man...dunno how i passed up ur audio...musta not seen it...gotta peep it for sure tho...newayz this was nice...keep droppin em yo (NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 17:00:50 02/05/03 Wed
"Sometimes I'm lackin' the reaction to get things crackin'" I should have wrote that first. Nice post. (NT) -- Blueprint, 13:47:03 02/06/03 Thu
MY AUDIO!!!!!!!!!!!! PEEP OUT "CREEPIN'" AND "CHECKPOINT" THX Y'ALL! -- LIPS, 02:12:43 02/06/03 Thu
Sorry man, this cheap comp doesnt even have a soundcard.. it doesnt even have right-click.. so i cant peep it.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:23:11 02/06/03 Thu
you sound really ready for MTV.. I can't hate because you aint underground.. keep doing you, peace! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:28:08 02/06/03 Thu
I listened to checkpoint and I thought it was dope...you have nice style and I think you've been slept on...shit was nice, flow was on point...decent beat, only lacking lyrically in my opinion. Other than that it was nice...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:35:24 02/06/03 Thu
I listened to the one over the AZ beat, flow was alright, lyrically tou could step it up a little bit, but other than that it sounded alright (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:21:09 02/06/03 Thu
(((AUDIO)))This is the Last Solo Audio I have to post so savor it! "View From The Canopy" I think the beat mighta been too slow for me heh.. but at least you can understand me, right?? -- ===||Swords-->, 03:18:34 02/06/03 Thu
Ayo that beat is sick.. you should have got at me for a second collab lol.. hey if you turn off your speakers then record.. there would be no feed-back at all right? "pretty dope audio man, scratching was sick also!" (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:34:08 02/06/03 Thu
yo man, i havent really seen u online but i woulda gotten atchu.. i got more beats tho.. we'll see.. I dont record with the speakers on, but yeah thatd cut oout a lot of static,.. so would backing far away from any electronic equip, like the monitor will give you fat feedback.. hehe i sampled the scratching so that aint me lol (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:38:32 02/06/03 Thu
nice beat you got goin' here, yeah it kinda slower than usual but the flow sounded good to me and I like the fact that even though it was slower you still managed to flip it nice and quick...good drop man, Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:11:34 02/06/03 Thu
Beat was cool, flow was straight.......yeah it was nice. Keep doin you (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:09:27 02/06/03 Thu
YO.................... -- LIPS, 11:20:43 02/06/03 Thu
MORBID beyond Belief... MORBID beyond your average demented madman...MORBID Is I... MORBID Is Me... and MORBID is Myself.... Enjoy!!! -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:25:37 02/06/03 Thu
this was ill shit man..keep droppin shit like this man..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:30:31 02/06/03 Thu
I don't now about ill but it was pretty tight, you gotta spell your words right man it makes it hard to take you serious.. but keep writing, you can spit some real dope shit if you challenge yourself. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:44:55 02/06/03 Thu
my bad my eyes are tired.. you only spelled a couple words wrong.. damn I'm tired, peace! (NT) -- Path, 01:48:53 02/06/03 Thu
yo, dun............................. -- LIPS, 01:51:09 02/06/03 Thu
Short but for what it had was pretty fucking ill, nice post keep up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:38:28 02/06/03 Thu
I dont know man.. ive heard a lot of lines like this before.. doubt you were trying to copy or nothin, but make sure your punches stand out like "oh shit i wish i coulda thought of that" like "You're jsut a clown to kids that are sick, Like Patch Adams"(hope no one said that before me..) work on it.. be impressive! (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:35:08 02/06/03 Thu
Yeah the punches were nice just not great...but this was kinda ill and a nice post...but Jesus was crucifed to a "cross" y'see, that's why it was cross-shaped...it was a hint...lol Nice post man...Stay up (liked the M.Manson line, it was funny) Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:50:06 02/06/03 Thu
...eehh...flow was cool....2 out of the 3 nicest lines in here have been used already...the Down for the Count line could have been worded better.... the rest were pretty much filler, if it were to be an actual battle verse....pretty cool shit....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink. of O.M.N.I., 11:10:53 02/06/03 Thu
so as to not waste your thread.. I got a sick idea for a audio collab that will shock the lounge get at me.. Yusuke@devil.com save that and we'll work out the rest.. kick keystyle for ya.. -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:54:27 02/06/03 Thu
Nice, i liked the flow towards the end most of all and there was some real nice references in this piece...Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 07:59:01 02/06/03 Thu
Nebulas line was crazy.......this had a different feel to it but that's cool cause it reflects originality. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:05:01 02/06/03 Thu
Another 20 bars -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:36:57 02/05/03 Wed
China hated Bruce Lee for sharing their secretive styles and idealisms within American markets of ENTERTAINMENT.. they looked at him as a traitor for a long time.. they say thats why he died.. he wasn't killed was.. he? hey come inside for a min. - -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:14:39 02/06/03 Thu
THIS was fuckin ill man..nice work..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:06:45 02/06/03 Thu
very layered flow and nice wordusage and displayed of talent in writing... get on the mic man. peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:30:08 02/06/03 Thu
Another 20 bars of the man who makes the BLIND see, nice thoughts yo PEACE (NT) -- pat D.A.W.G, 03:08:04 02/06/03 Thu
lol...I thought if I kept replyin' downwards I bump into you sooner rather than later...This was cool and i loved the "smooth criminal" line and I also noticed the fun you seem to be having with your posts these days, that's all good...I read the first part to this the other but I didn't reply...that one was nicer. This was cool tho' ...Stay up sonn ( I know you will anyway ) ..haha Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:08:34 02/06/03 Thu
.....IM STILL HERE MUHFUHKKAZ...AND IM LETTIN YALL KNOW....GUARD YA FACES WHEN YOU PEEP THIS SHIT..."WAVE TWISTERZ"... -- ~!~BLAk EARTh~!~, 00:57:34 02/06/03 Thu
just pure lines displayed here... raw as hell... nice flow and wicked arrogance... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:28:34 02/06/03 Thu
iight.. I'm coo' now just got some bad news.. I read this and the concept was don't fuck with me I'll shit on you.. pretty dope shit, it's like almost 2:00am I'm about to be out.. peace kid! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:41:07 02/06/03 Thu
WOAH!!!! DAMN SON!!! -- LIPS, 01:55:32 02/06/03 Thu
Yo this was nice...the flow was real nice in areas and in other parts it wasn't. I agree with Path about your content but I thought you managed without it on this ocassion...nice multis in parts too...Nice post Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:02:04 02/06/03 Thu
JUST A BATTLE VERSE I SPIT AT SOME DUDE! JUST AN INTRO TO THIS BOARD -- LIPS, 01:53:41 02/06/03 Thu
I'm surprised I kept reading even after the beginning.. you sounded like MA$E on tell me feat. TOTAL.. who won that battle? "the shit was iight I just was not really feeling it.. stick around kid you'll get way better watching kids in here, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 02:03:51 02/06/03 Thu
yo.................... -- LIPS, 02:07:01 02/06/03 Thu
Not bad, some allright punches in here you got possability ta get iller, dont let me down on that guess son PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:35:39 02/06/03 Thu
Hmm this was aight.. i dont like how you structure your lines, too long, break em in two and itll be easier to read.. (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:32:09 02/06/03 Thu
ok Repost, this is called CHEMICAL-WAR.. it's got alot of pops but just bare with me.. till I get a new computer.. shit sucks, the mic.. sucks.. I don't know and I dont post up album songs due to biters.. so enjoy.. over look the damn pops you babies.. lol.. peace!! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:59:02 02/06/03 Thu
YO, DOG............... -- LIPS, 02:09:52 02/06/03 Thu
LOL you know i like your shit man, but i cant peep audios on this shit comp.. ill keep the addy in memory..peace! (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:30:22 02/06/03 Thu
"POVERTY"-JUST ONE MORE SPIT FOR MY INTRO TO THE BOARD!!! -- LIPS, 01:59:30 02/06/03 Thu
The Cam'ron shit has got to go man, but this was way better then that last shit you posted up.. ummm you could have went into it more in-depth.. take your thoughts and let them paint the vividness of understanding a picture.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 02:09:01 02/06/03 Thu
YO, I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN BY CAMRON SHIT...... -- LIPS, 02:11:25 02/06/03 Thu
I see you really want this first post I read by you, hmmm, take more time on a post and dig deeper. You can get the feelings out yo, just flip it up and be more creative with ya thoughts and word choice keep up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G ==Despencing Amplified Words Geographically, 02:30:29 02/06/03 Thu
AYE, I APPRECIATE WHAT Y'ALL SAYIN BUT,............ -- LIPS, 02:36:43 02/06/03 Thu
Ha these news guys be shoutin at eachother.. but about the rhyme, this was pretty good to me, your scheme is nice, had some ok lines, feelin what you had to say, but speakin as a person and not just an emcee, what will you do to elevate yoru situation? not an easy qestion to answer.. but i dont think its just enough to say "this is what i go through"..you gotta say "how can i make it better?" I think that would be true elevation..So what im saying is.. How can you express yourself in a way that will put your mind above your situation therefore get you out of it? (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:29:05 02/06/03 Thu
....another post for your viewing pleasure.... -- Vis, 20:03:51 02/05/03 Wed
short and to the point pretty good lil' drop man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:09:31 02/05/03 Wed
This seemed like it flowed right off the last joint I read from you. Almost like it was a second verse to a song. The flow was nice, it had a different feel to it.....Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:45:07 02/05/03 Wed
THIS WAS pretty tight man..i was diggin the flow (NT) -- BLAK EARTH, 01:09:16 02/06/03 Thu
nice flow.. nice release of thoughts... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:31:42 02/06/03 Thu
Let the light from my subjects erect the truth we all most see, If we can't open our eyes we'll never just be. The thought of a end is truly the beginning lets spread love not war and reap our new surroundings! -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 19:28:44 02/05/03 Wed
Why hasn't anyone givin this feedback? This was real nice content wise.......The flow was on point, more so in the first half......liked how you threw in different historical perceptions on things. Keep this up, Peace! (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:58:59 02/05/03 Wed
i hate the fact niggaz is sleepin on this ...man PATH..you get iller everytime i peep you..i loeved this shit..celebrate for knowledge..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:13:57 02/06/03 Thu
Hear go a sick ass KEYSTYLE SEE IF YOU CAN READ BETWEEN THE LINES.. and Blueprint and VISION if you still around I got something to say to you both.. -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:09:50 02/05/03 Wed
Good spit loving the topic illuminati lol yeah them cats is wild they arent controlled by Satan but they do beleive in the Sun god the light barer some people see's that as being Satan they're god share similar traits with some other religious figure for instance how Christians depict Jesus or Egyptians with Ra you know the whole hallow around the head deal the ressurection emaculate conception it's all tied together but most are either too blind deaf and dumb to realise the truth I see you've read Novus Ordo Seclorum Good book We should build sometime P.E.A.C.E Gomar Oz Dubar (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 01:19:15 02/05/03 Wed
lol @ Gomar Oz Dubar.. you got alot more knowledge then I would have ever gave you credit for.. the eyes are so decieving.. thanks for the feed back ... all of you, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 00:29:24 02/06/03 Thu
Loving the style you write with and the content you covered here...the ryme scheme was hot and switched up nicely too. You also killed it with the wordplay...Very nice post , Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:20:47 02/05/03 Wed
yo read this earlier too....nice ass key sonn....content was good for reals...luv how ya flip ya lines and switchin ya rhymes scheme.....gotta admit though, ya did have me a lil lost in places wit the content...maybe it's cuz i'm tired as hell...but i caught most of it....enough to know this was nice thought-provokin, intellectual shit.....good shit though Path, stay up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:16:57 02/05/03 Wed
A-yo PATH keep ur personal views of subjects like that to urself and if u wanna say it to other say it to them on a one on one basis...not everyone on this board agrees with ur statements (me being one of them)....but to keep this board on a hip hop posting balance basis.....can u refrain from stating stuff like that..thanks and peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 11:46:47 02/05/03 Wed
thats what hip hops about man.. but if your angered by my thoughts and understandings I'm sorry kid.. where you been at.. just been silently watching huh? Hip hop is about ones diversity, originality, or belief on certain subject matters, you know I'm in no way forcing my opinion on anyone just voicing how I feel, peep! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 13:23:04 02/05/03 Wed
if i was angered id be cursing...i wasnt angered at all......thats NOT HIP HOP...when ur writing a paragraph about it PREACHING.....if it was in rhyme form then i could kinda agree it was hip hop..but the way you did it, WAS WRONG...peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. Š aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.˛, 18:58:57 02/05/03 Wed
Very invigorating and innovative with the wordplay and content.....Keep this up....Oh yeah, not trying to butt heads or get into anything that doesn't deal with me on the personal tip.....But I think David Dunn was just stating his opinion....Not trying to start anything with you....I could understand his standpoint from where it was coming from.....Keep up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:37:18 02/05/03 Wed
I THOUGHT I HEARD THAT SHIT!!!...thanks for clearing it up, no time to really read this now i was just peeking in but i'll come back (NT) -- Vis, 14:39:53 02/05/03 Wed
wordplay was off the meters...i felt it started out a lot more intense than what carried on...started to settle towards the middle, picked up towards the middle...flow, well...i wanna HEAR the flow, because with all the wordplay i read it to myself as if I MYSELF was flowing it with my own style...strong post and all uh that homie...btw thanks for that info again (NT) -- Vis, 16:22:29 02/05/03 Wed
i mean picked up towards the end (NT) -- ., 16:25:23 02/05/03 Wed
War -- Lil Lucky, 13:35:32 02/05/03 Wed
Just a quick 3 minute, freestyle, wanted to get it out there. My first spit ever. -- Lil Lucky, 13:40:28 02/05/03 Wed
You had a lot of ideas in this post that weren't even concentrated on correctly....Example, you started off talking about this upcoming "war"....Then threw in some lines about "platinum" this and "hoes".....C'mon man, center your thoughts....especially the ones you want to express on the Lounge.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 13:42:50 02/05/03 Wed
This was pretty simplistic even for a key but keep elevating and working on tha structure of things....PeAcE ! (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:24:10 02/05/03 Wed
umm.. it irratated me cause of how it was worded.. hex is right with what he said.. keep your focus on your topic don't stray from your plan.. keep steady man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:58:14 02/05/03 Wed
You both are right, and i knew right away, i got off the topic, and im sorry for teh inconvenianc. -- LIL Lucky, 23:17:35 02/05/03 Wed

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