text for an upcoming audio collabo..simpler than the rest of my ish, sacrificed vocab fior flow, but oh well....just felt like posting it..peace -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 16:49:32 03/13/03 Thu
Author: Essence.....AM
Author Host/IP: ip68-5-113-200.oc.oc.cox.net / 68.5.113.200
Subject: text for an upcoming audio collabo..simpler than the rest of my ish, sacrificed vocab fior flow, but oh well....just felt like posting it..peace

This repetitive beat is like a sedative b
It helps to release the built up stress within me//
Im quite blessed to emcee, just test and you�ll see
Your capacity is clogged, you have no room to be free//
My essence moves so discrete along patterns of beats
I leap over heaps of jargon why do they even speak?//
I father the neat-nifty rhymes that complete
The design of the piece
To lift and climb over peeps//
Kick my dust in their face
As I steadily pace
Along the paths of the greats that split atoms of space//
Others misplace the right substance to lace
Mocking a waste of human flesh that�s forever disgraced//
With treble and bass I decorate the page
Re-direct the maze into a straight line of ways//
Walking into the purpose of fate
With a surplus of taste
No time to waste the goal is up for takes//
I want to be the victor, the guy who rhymes sicker
Then fluid coughing grandpas with fading tickers//
Time is of the essence captured in a sentence
Paying honed repentance in every learned lesson//
Ingesting verbatim with an empty stomach aching
Growling to be fed with knowledge I�m demonstrating//
Figure eights I�m skating over ice beds of patience
Leaving engraved statements in perfect aligned cadence//
Testing my wits with penciled in trips
Journeys to the netherworld are felt in spirit//

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flow is sick....only a couple lines need to be worked on and worded better...but flow was sick, moreso towads the middle.....cant wait to peep the audio (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 17:39:20 03/13/03 Thu
yea man, flow was very sick...i enjoyed this piece, had some nice lines in there, but this was a good read man, seems like you've stepped your game up as well, great flow, audio should be equally as good if not better, stay building, peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR O.M.N.I., 00:17:31 03/14/03 Fri
Ooh.. that figure 8 line and the one after was beautiful.. flow was flawless to me.. knock em dead in that collabo.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 04:53:53 03/14/03 Fri

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