fuck... been a while since I've been to this website.... gonna do a keystyle.... criticism accepted -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:03:10 01/15/03 Wed
Author: the dark spitter aka lyrical-e of the realms
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
Subject: fuck... been a while since I've been to this website.... gonna do a keystyle.... criticism accepted

with lyrics spit/
it splits the bone clip/
the bone clip defines it as disposistion/
my misssion in life/
is to eject words from the mouth as they slash like knives/
invert the spine/
lifes not like a cat"YOU GET NO NINE LIVES"/
the mic is right so I stab it into your eyes/
I'm in line and devices are ready to explode like 2000 land mine times/
I rhyme from mind/
with tricks from the mind of brilliant jedis/
emcees will die/
and the dark one will be a evil symbol or a devious sign/
dont need lines to punch/
I make spines curve like perenthesis as it shows a hunch/
smokin amatuers like canibus and happen to LL?.... that mic he wanted to grab now he dident want touch/
the sum of ripped ones is eqivlent to 29840000 megatons of guns/
sooo... who want some/

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um...this was ok....forrealz, i think you could come better than this...i mean for a key it was coo, but...i want to se you come with some ill written shit?..feel me?....surpirse me if you will...pz (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 17:26:35 01/15/03 Wed
I agree....this was aight for a Key...i know ya can come iller topical??? heh?? (NT) -- OV@...This was tyte though...effective for a key...nothing outstanding,...Peace!!, 18:05:01 01/15/03 Wed
this was alright .i guess nothing really stood out but keep posting. we all come for one reason to rhyme. stay up (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madnes), 19:28:17 01/15/03 Wed

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