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THE DARK SPITTER PRESENTS... "UNVIELED"... PEEP AND CRITICIZE -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA HATERS LIKE WHYSMIKAL DONT REALLY HAVE TALENT, 13:20:30 03/11/03 Tue
- ...You call yourself the vocabulist or some corny shit and you still misspell shit like crazy....you wack man..... (NT) -- «‡†¤N.a.K.I.X.e.M.¤†‡» aka Ðamien Christ, 13:49:28 03/11/03 Tue
- Fuck caps.. dont do that anymore.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:23:59 03/11/03 Tue
- cough cough, sorry, ok, rhyme was ok but i hate it when people type in capitals (NT) -- nemesis, 15:03:43 03/11/03 Tue
  to all repliers... sorry for the caps.. and to the first replier... I guess you love beef and want to be rip to smitherines... dont fuck around man..... FUCKIN FAGGOT!!! and yo if you want a battle I'm all ready bitch.... fuckin haters!!!! (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:10:00 03/11/03 Tue
  hahahahahhahahah....he said....he said........hahaha ......oh boy smitherines.....lol......im sorry, that just tickled me a little (NT) -- Vision, 16:08:36 03/11/03 Tue
- yo first off man this wasn't bad. it had a few good lines but overall was kinda hard to follow but keep doin you. and instead of taking negative critism to the heart use it to influence yourself to create some off the wall new shit! after all it's music (NT) -- starks, 15:24:47 03/11/03 Tue
- I can't believe I read this with those caps.. it was pretty good.. but never write a whole verse in caps.. it's just wack and hard to read.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:48:06 03/11/03 Tue
- HAHA@you even THINKING about battling Diz...WHO the FUCK battles in TEXT now days???...it's like...fuckin' HISTORY...I ain't gonna waste my time with YOU boy...I gave criticism and you react like a BITCH...so a bitch YOU ARE...nuff said. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL..., 20:58:23 03/11/03 Tue
- you still a bitch arse hater when will you ever learn, your not as good as you think you are, so dont step to DLAR (NT) -- DLASTER, 22:46:19 03/11/03 Tue
- Was not bad at all except these stupid caps. CAPS ARE ONLY USED TO MAKE READING MORE EASY INSTEAD OF DIFFICULTdon´t wanna bother u, but there is a certain concept behind the way things written, and how ur eye percepts visions.... U givin me a fuckin headache readin yo shit but it was coo anyway.... (NT) -- chromenine, 04:03:11 03/12/03 Wed
Yooooo! Yall go peep my audios! I want some feedbacks! positive, negative! whatever! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:06:08 03/11/03 Tue
Im at school now so Ill peep three a lil later! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 09:11:48 03/11/03 Tue
Pretty Awsome -- Lil' Lucky, 11:56:53 03/11/03 Tue
I listened to the first one really feeling it man.. very nice delivery.. keep dropping your shit.. very dope! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:59:41 03/11/03 Tue
wooah peeped em all most of them was off the hook still got that u aint shit to me in my head tigt shit (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:43:43 03/11/03 Tue
when the hell did you plan on posting this??..shit was sick...I rather you post it individually so we can get into details with each...drop some info on em too...Coldest of Bars was niiiice... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:26:24 03/12/03 Wed
ure right! Ill post em individually! I was just in a hurry and everything! thanx though! one (NT) -- GT, 00:57:46 03/12/03 Wed
Hex if you come in my e-mail address is back up, but its new.. Raishawn_7@hotmail.com D-lusional oops I mean Phil get at me.. too! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:55:20 03/11/03 Tue
I haven't dropped anything for months...(A U D I O)...check $hit out and tell me what you think -- MIDEVAL, 01:37:13 03/10/03 Mon
waddup, u now a place to get my shiat for u niggas to listen posted. At work, cant listen to your stuff o` here tho.... (NT) -- chromenine, 03:20:12 03/10/03 Mon
x-cuse, i overlooked the post below!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT) -- chromenine, 03:26:47 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! hot rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:26:16 03/10/03 Mon
daaaaaaamn! cool rhymes! hot flow! Wasnt really feelin the chorus, the beat was nice! I felt that shit, nigga! Reminded me of Masta Killa at parts! hot! Keep it up! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:27:38 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:01:25 03/10/03 Mon
oh yeahhh (NT) -- Tactics, 19:20:02 03/10/03 Mon
pretty good man.. the content was iight though.. not really my type of shit.. the beat was fire though! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:27:27 03/11/03 Tue
(nemesis Vs. [SBc]wlHIGHlTe Mc)its time for the people to decide who won our little battle (no beef & sorry for wastin a thread) (NT) -- nemesis, 14:59:24 03/11/03 Tue
just reply under this (NT) -- nemesis, 15:49:52 03/11/03 Tue
ima post it twcie i dunt know the rules to ur lounge sorry....this ish is fo nemesis....enjoy lounge -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:00 03/11/03 Tue
this was a battle rhyme??? it sounded not very good please elevate god. (NT) -- dark spitter, 12:43:50 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 14:41:03 03/11/03 Tue
yo, i dont know anything about my lines bein eminems and if they were i didnt know about it, and no-one sucks my cock other than sexy bitches (NT) -- nemesis, 14:45:35 03/11/03 Tue
dont really have a name for this..............Just spittin shit -- Tactics, 19:08:32 03/10/03 Mon
Yeh -- Cu-jo, 20:23:17 03/10/03 Mon
Good Shit (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 23:06:44 03/10/03 Mon
i liked (NT) -- nemesis, 01:28:47 03/11/03 Tue
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:19:04 03/11/03 Tue
I like your flow, i think u got madd potential -- INS, 11:34:37 03/11/03 Tue
a keystyle to get the morning started... peep and critcize -- THE DARK SPITTER AKA SUPREME VOCABULIST, 13:25:44 03/10/03 Mon
wad up??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:50:32 03/10/03 Mon
if this was a keystyle, i can understand but use your talent better (NT) -- nemesis, 14:49:29 03/10/03 Mon
I saw your battle response but it was weak so I didn't respond cause you wasting my weekend but im gonna rip you today cause you a bitch that will never make sense brace yourself be ready cause its a real lowblow (NT) -- dlaster, 15:44:56 03/10/03 Mon
Not bad (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:14:52 03/10/03 Mon
eeh........it ryhmed (NT) -- Tactics, 19:18:56 03/10/03 Mon
You shits wacked, you call yourself the supreme vocabulist but tht shits corny it wouldn't even make a 400 pound pig ugly virgin horny... Get off this site your ruining some sick shit from real Emcees (NT) -- White Knight, 19:40:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked it! Shit was cool dawg! keep spittin! keep elevatrin and shit! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:52:22 03/11/03 Tue
i call it *questions for father* peep -- nemesis, 15:10:22 03/10/03 Mon
thats some real shit im feeling it can tell you didn't make that shit up cause you seem very emotional Im kinda the same with my dad I can feel your pain and please do me a favor rip this kid that wants to battle you (NT) -- dlaster, 15:35:16 03/10/03 Mon
I FUCKIN FEEL DAT SHYT BRO! (NT) -- ODe-MastA-oDD, 18:05:14 03/10/03 Mon
damn.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 19:13:36 03/10/03 Mon
Its good stuff. I really cant be a critic on this rhyme cause your words are your words that come from you feelings.It was deep. (NT) -- Tactics, 19:15:13 03/10/03 Mon
Good, Understand it all. I know what your getting at?... -- Lil' Lucky, 23:00:32 03/10/03 Mon
I feelu nugg! mine left when I was five! I feel u dawg! shti was definetly hot! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:50:27 03/11/03 Tue
**~~**Brand New Real Audio/mp3**~~**”**~~**I did a little something cause various people asked me to**~~**”…””Entitled : Whether Or Not””..I haven’t recorded or spit anything in 2 months ON THIS DATE…so If its wack it is..i just did it for the various few who wanted to hear some Dunn Shit….PEACE -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:01:41 03/10/03 Mon
in the beginnin sounded like you no effort or u didnt feel like doin this shyt lol..not wat i expected..was expecting str8 punches and shyt like usual..dont know wat was more surprising..you actually posting an audio or u spittin in this style.. the flow was nice..beat was like chilly chill..good to see an audio from ya..nice post fool.. (NT) -- PhiLoSo..O.M.N.I...wheelchair kids cant move without effort.., 00:15:44 03/10/03 Mon
*Listening*...Beat is tight...I think it's my earphones, but the vocals are a tad bit drowned out by the instrumental so I had to replay it a few times over again to catch words...WORD@"much bigger things to worry about" line...thought "write or not back at you" line was nice...this wasn't up to your usual, but you said yourself that you didn't spit in 2 months...honestly, I didn't even think this was that bad for that period of time, not spittin'..Overall, I thought this was tight...refreshing shit...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:24:21 03/10/03 Mon
yea this was pretty kew, i liked the flow, and i was wondering where did all your punches go?...i got a few in here but its all good, coming back is a lil rust (NT) -- NoFlow, 00:27:44 03/10/03 Mon
i actually like the fact it wasnt all punches...now i know you can do more than battle...cant believe everything you hear...good shit (NT) -- Vision, 01:16:44 03/10/03 Mon
Yo you are a straight battle emcee...man you should try to expand a lil, not saying that you aren't ill...but a lil variety is good. NICE PUNCHES! (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:42:53 03/10/03 Mon
Hmm its like the spark has dimmed out.. Still some dope lines in there.. Last line was great.. Good luck in the future, whatever it is you do.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->Did you peep me and D's audio?, 02:17:33 03/10/03 Mon
To be honest yo.....I wasn't feeling your old stuff too much but it was way better than this...I wasnt even feeling the beat...but hey do you if it works for you...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil..of..G3N@$yD3, 08:40:07 03/10/03 Mon
despite the lil delay between the voice and the backvocals, I found this pretty hot, yo! Nice flow! loved teh rhyme patterns! liked ya voice too! hot shit, nigga! one! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:36:30 03/10/03 Mon
good to hear you again.. really mellow.. I liked it.. I wouldn't call you rusty just kinda bored.. good to see you care about kids enough to drop a audio on their behalf.. all in all I was feeling this it was a nice piece! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:04:06 03/10/03 Mon
BaTTLe??? -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:47:54 03/10/03 Mon
soon just not yet, i will just need to take care of family shit (NT) -- nemesis, 14:44:22 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:08:13 03/10/03 Mon
yeah, you post your verse on first then reply back dawg! lets fuckin battle (NT) -- nemesis, 16:09:39 03/10/03 Mon
yea man I'm up for a battle... hit me up at the provided email adress... (NT) -- the dark spitter, 15:10:15 03/10/03 Mon
Im good to go thanx fer askin (NT) -- ODe-Masta-oDD, 18:09:59 03/10/03 Mon
Audios for yall to peep! -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:16:05 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios righ now..im at A-squela, peep later (NT) -- NoFlow, 11:32:48 03/10/03 Mon
PEEP this its good shit...nice production (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 13:06:43 03/10/03 Mon
wad up.... -- [SBc]w|HIGH|Te Mc, 13:53:06 03/10/03 Mon
i cant peep audios dawg (NT) -- nemesis, 14:58:42 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** -- INTOX & Liquid X... i'll be back later to give three replies. pz, 17:01:13 03/09/03 Sun
yo gotta give it up for ya'll. shit was most definitely a hot track. nice lyrics, sick beat, overall fuckin nice. (NT) -- starks, 17:42:12 03/09/03 Sun
Quality is crystal... lyrics are nice from X.. best part of your part.. I always thought your flow was a bit slow for my liking, but its definitely on-point... Intox's quality aint as good.. Flow and breath control aint as polished as X.. lyrics good but didnt stick as well to my memory.. last part of his verse was the best.. Really feelin what u said.. Chorus nice.. So is the beat.. Yours right? this was very well put together.. Much props deserved.. (NT) -- ===||Swords---> hahah @ soundclick name.., 17:50:52 03/09/03 Sun
yeah i recorded my verse a while ago... before I discovered the wonder of punch-ins and stop-start technology... also, when i spit this, originally it was over the beat a little differently so that is why it sounds off at some parts... but thanks for checking it out. pz (NT) -- TOX, 20:26:10 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now, bet its tight though..pz (NT) -- essence....AM, 21:07:02 03/09/03 Sun
Liquid ripped that shit Intox your shit was pretty dope then got better towards the end.. very good quality.. well up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:28:55 03/09/03 Sun
nice beat... props to whoever made it... x, definetely came ncie.. flow and lyrics on point... tox, i can tell you didn;t spit to this cuz some lines are off.. but your many multi's still keep your flow on point... this was a good audio collab tho... keep it up... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 22:59:40 03/09/03 Sun
got the preview from X on this...beat was aight..kinda boring and repititive......X friggin killed that beat though cause that his realm of beats....LYRICS FROM BOTH OF YALL WAS VERY MUCH ON POINT...x's flow was on point ....tox...ur flow was good..but it does sound like its offbeat...could be either ur spitting too fast...or the mixing was mixed wrong for ur verse....ur lyrics were ill as hell and the connection of them was nice...nice work from both....i hate that beat though..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:26:58 03/10/03 Mon
SIckest audio Ive heard so far! hot, definetly hot, nuggaz Specially Liquid X! loved ya flows adn schemes, both yall! one (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:31:52 03/10/03 Mon
**AUDIO** first audio, got a sound click page..titled STRUGGLES How hard do you get down...do you still fight? the struggles one man delt with but still aimed for his goal..Deep thoughts -- NoFlow, 00:59:10 03/10/03 Mon
you sound like that one cat from Nappy Roots that was rappin on the hill....ya flow aint bad, you stayed on beat...but the levels of ya vocals was.....shitty youngsta...not bad for a first (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 01:24:49 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics are ok, but the vocals need to be a lil louder so that you have more impact (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:39:13 03/10/03 Mon
couldnt listen, but your scemes look a little like eminem style,but as i said i haven´t heard it....Other then that ; dis is not bad (NT) -- chromenine, 03:25:03 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics were hot but work on flow and attitude a lil more! overall, it was nice to listen to! 1st audio? nice! keep doin it! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:20:52 03/10/03 Mon
(((AUDIO))) "Lyricism Squared"......THE REMIX!! .......now the beat Doesnt Suck! lol -- Philoso & Swords OMNI-MAIN LOOP Production, 03:13:48 03/09/03 Sun
lol, the audio has been Swordsified! j/p... i was pleasently suprised at how well this worked... the jazzy beat brings a completely new feel to the audio... feelin it... to be honest i liked the original better but i'm sure most people will feel this more....peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 07:08:27 03/09/03 Sun
You liked that other beat better? blah.. i thought it sucked lol.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:58:44 03/09/03 Sun
yea i like this, sounded much better than the original, the beat is not something i would use but you guys flowed real good over it...overall dope audio..btw this is the best that i've heard D sound..peace (NT) -- ///Trojohn\\\, 10:36:26 03/09/03 Sun
Listening.... reply later.... when i's done........OH.... LOVIN THE BEAT.... Your verse is better than the first guy's... mostly cuz it's clearer... tight shit tho... holla!!! (NT) -- that nigga SKORP, 16:37:00 03/09/03 Sun
thought i'd let you know the 1st dude is D-lusional... (NT) -- Verse, 16:46:06 03/09/03 Sun
LMAO... shit!!! hahaha.... well now I know.... lmao.... statement still stands... (NT) -- thanks for fillin me in.... ***still ****.... FUCKIN-SKORP-I, 17:02:24 03/09/03 Sun
checked this out when it was first posted... swords did u ever post this beat?? real nice man... Phil... lol, i can't believe i just called you phil..haha anyway, this is probably ya best work, you have improved on basically all of ya audios... good shit... swords ya flow sounds real nice on this.. liked the word usage it made the verse come real smooth... good job (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:10:15 03/09/03 Sun
the first cat was nice but the second cat was off tha charts..original voice ...lyik content was ill..beat was fuckiin dope!!..peace yall (NT) -- AKI-RAH, 04:57:09 03/10/03 Mon
Shedding light so those can relate to my life OK this isn't quite finished BUT have a look and see what you think... I appreciate EVERYONEs' CRIT......PeAcE -- Eternal Student, 13:07:21 03/09/03 Sun
this was nice... the content isn't my kind of thing but its well written... some nice lines in here, i liked the centipede one... worse thing about this was the last line, very conry ending... i'd definately change that... other than that it was dope... peace (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 14:44:32 03/09/03 Sun
this is nice... content... very smooth flow... relaxed... not too simple... not too complex.... Very nice. I agree with Versetyle on the ending... but I'm no good with ending MY verses so... no complaints there... HOLLA! (NT) -- SKORP-I..., 16:19:41 03/09/03 Sun
Basically i agree with them but i dont think the ending woulda bothered me if they hadnt pointed it out.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:57:05 03/09/03 Sun
I agree with swords.. but this was pretty tight.. nothing over the edge.. but it was good! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:40:11 03/09/03 Sun
fuk...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 03:13:01 03/10/03 Mon
Elastics and Path, collabo.. THE SICKNESS REAL AUDIO.. peep it out! -- ELaSTiCs "The Loose canon of ELOHEIM!" & Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:12:46 03/09/03 Sun
ewwwww, you killed it.....i always liked this beat...lyrics is ill yea, i do wanna collab sometime in the future, lol you sound like a skinny cat like myself...quality is still bowel movement status, but it cool...an enjoyable piece (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I........ShapeShifter, 22:08:01 03/09/03 Sun
This nice...I feel it. Beat is HOT...I forgot who ish it is though. Nice verses from both. HOlla back (NT) -- Kariz...........*came in on this site at age 14.....17 now..and finna be outta HS* FO SHOOO, 22:34:49 03/09/03 Sun
Like vision said, quality is doo doo... but flow and mic skills are edvident... real nice work... keep doing shit... peace (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:07:26 03/09/03 Sun
ish was nice and hyped...very ill lyrics...doing oddjobs like james bond....hmm im noticing when u do ur audios...u spit alot of metaphors and punches....alot different than your text....quality sounds like thsi was recorded in 92....haha...nice work though...flow was nice also...good luck with ur career.... (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:16:07 03/10/03 Mon
lol i liked dis, dem punches lyrics were dope, the energy and the lyrics behind the music make it sounds something you can chill too, quality wasnt...ehbla, haha, but allaround,, i felt it..peace (NT) -- NoFlow So Much Flow ITs Like I Got None At All, 00:41:20 03/10/03 Mon
nice everything - except quality (NT) -- mid, 01:49:28 03/10/03 Mon
NEW AUDIO! CHECK IT. also looking for peeps to collab wit. i amke my beats. :) -- N'FINITE, 23:19:50 03/09/03 Sun
I wanna preview this. but my comp wont let me. damn soundclick wont work:( -- N'finite, 23:22:20 03/09/03 Sun
shit aint that bad man..i see some potential....hook was aight...nice and simple...beat I WAS NOT FEELING AT ALL...keep it up..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 00:12:48 03/10/03 Mon
hmm..flow i was feeling..beat..was kinda..ehh...lyrics were decent...yea..."everyones trying to push you? to something you dont wanna be" it was nice..but from my standpoint i just got into AUDIO (NT) -- NOFLOW everybody seems to be POSTING audios..lol guess whos next.., 00:36:04 03/10/03 Mon
I liked the beat man, it was nice (orchestra)...there is definatelly some potential ~peep inside~ -- MIDEVAL, 01:46:16 03/10/03 Mon
Hey Lounge... I'm back... new flow... new beats... new me... small sacrifice----> Lyricism for flow... I'm finding the balance...****AUDIO***** **** AUDIO**** ****AUDIO**** -- Skorpione, 16:13:59 03/09/03 Sun
Another fuckin sick audio. Good show man.Stay up Peace (NT) -- starks, 17:44:06 03/09/03 Sun
Has a Southern Underground feel, definitely... Dope quality.. Not exactly my style, but this is pretty good.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:53:08 03/09/03 Sun
cant peep audios right now...damn, Wassup Skorp, long time no see...pz (NT) -- essence, 21:08:57 03/09/03 Sun
damn look at the audios up tonight.. thats good.. just waiting on the audio now.. iight feeling this shit man.. you sound like my boy stacks.. you made the beat huh? hooks energetic.. feeling that.. good job man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:36:00 03/09/03 Sun
ok.. firstly, ya quality was nice... flow was good, no problems with it really... but not feelin the beat... sounds like a keith sweat slow jam..lol you need somethin a lil harder... from a mic aspect you came nice tho... (NT) -- GuTTy, 23:03:48 03/09/03 Sun
ayo, i aint been in here for ages but i was wondering if any vets know the whereabouts of trans p these days? i think he mighta died or some shit, but whatever, anybody know? (NT) -- invalid, 15:46:32 03/09/03 Sun
Good question, i was wondering the same thing a while ago.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 17:54:35 03/09/03 Sun
(((NEW AUDIO)))...yeah i know its about time i dropped another audio...this is a verse i did for a collab but i'm sick of waiting for the others...just a freestyle type verse called 'Art of War'...all feedback is very appreciated...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 10:04:48 03/08/03 Sat
hate the beat...just doesnt seem to fit you right...feeling the lyrics from what i cud HEAR...you sound kinda distant...quality's a lil shaky, interesting voice...nice imagery, you mite wanna just add a lil more emotion...this beat is giving me a headache....good effort Verse...i'd prolly like to hear you over a different beat and with a faster flow though...haha peace... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 12:13:52 03/08/03 Sat
i wish you would've used another beat, the verse was cool... it seems it was a cut and paste verse for the beat, which made it hard to swallow (NT) -- ?, 12:23:26 03/08/03 Sat
nice work dog keep it gangsta (NT) -- Lil' Jay, 15:28:28 03/08/03 Sat
nice -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 19:22:31 03/08/03 Sat
To be honest with you, I'm pretty sure I've heard better from you...in terms of beat selection and running with the beat itself...but I felt the lyrics...maybe it's just us, who knows...but it seemed like the reason why I couldn't really feel it that much...your voice, "interesting" like Xitizen said...it actually makes me want to see what you do with that voice, you know?...but props on the audio... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 00:20:48 03/09/03 Sun
yeah, the beat aint bad as an instrumental, but for you it doesnt suit you as well as someone else like Mr. Lif or something.. Lyrics were tight, Freestyle? nice.. Flow was ok, but you woulda felt more at home on a slower beat.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 03:27:01 03/09/03 Sun
every time I hear you... I forget about your accent... could bearly understand the lyrics but that's prolly cuz of the speakers on this computer.... I wouldn't doubt that they were pretty tight.... I agree with Swords and xiti on the rest... (NT) -- Skorpione, 16:44:29 03/09/03 Sun
This is some real deep shit right here....you might need some knowledge of Biblical scriptures, and I mean DEEP, spirit-led knowledge of it, if your third eye isn't open, this rhyme isn't for you, a lot of niggas don't know who they really are and get caught up in worldly pleasures, well I'ma shed some truth on all that, I call this shit "JUDGEMENT DAY".....YAHAWAH BA YA SHAM YAHAWASHI (All praises due to God and His Son Jesus Christ)......SHALOM! -- Novakane, 04:13:06 03/09/03 Sun
reply to the 3 beneath you first... i gave this a quick read... and seeing as i don't believe in God this didn't do much for me... and do you really think this will confuse Lounge heads when we have our own resident perplexing biblical-emcee in the form of Heksagon Lavish? (NT) -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of Abzent Minded, 07:16:30 03/09/03 Sun
Well i thought this was hot. .. the content is tight and you stayed on point here BUT i didnt think it flowed consistently to start with but then it picked up........so Russia is considered to be the bear right ? Good work and God bless (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:48:22 03/09/03 Sun
Yea this is deep... being christian, I follow you... I'm glad to see someone can do what I can do what I can't as far as the Christian rap goes.... Nice... keep it up son... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:29:07 03/09/03 Sun
what up lounge...here's a brand new keystyle called: 'Tales from a §inful §oul - Part 1' ...just devloping a new sort of style...enjoy! -- Versetyle aka §inful §oul⁷of ABZENT MINDED, 10:04:27 03/09/03 Sun
this was cool, i thiught the flow was good and wordplay was excellent! keep it up (NT) -- nemesis, 11:56:34 03/09/03 Sun
WOAH, this is heat....I really enjoyed this piece, the flow was spot on and some real nice thought here (NT) -- Eternal Student, 12:54:05 03/09/03 Sun
Nice ass flow... I was able to flow right through this... No problem... hellatight piece.... I like the wingless angel thought.... One (NT) -- SKORP-I, 16:24:42 03/09/03 Sun

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