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Date Posted: 14:02:45 01/16/03 Thu
Author: ===||Swords--->
Author Host/IP: cache-ntc-ad04.proxy.aol.com / 198.81.26.105
Subject: First verse = good.. Second Verse = not so good.. Flow was nice on the first one.. second verse was all over the place..
In reply to: Grotesque 's message, "Song titled "Were all Different" ain't finished it yet, but heres a sneak" on 13:43:10 01/16/03 Thu


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  • It's like I can imagine you thinking.."now what rhymes with that?" ...and just selecting the first thing that you think of. The vocab was kinda drab and elementary and the first verse bored into not reading, but the flow was cool and that is something to build on ...keep writing Peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:40:20 01/17/03 Fri




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