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Date Posted: 19:37:15 01/17/03 Fri
Author: da mad hermit
Author Host/IP: snoopy.suth.com / 207.127.128.2
Subject: your living with the sims

In 2-0-0-3
my flow grows exponentially
just mentions of me
essentially froze all foes elementary assets
all facets fully mastered
I've learned to turn all
microphone clones passive
when i spit my poems
crows and so-called pro's
turn placid
I burn gems with lyrical acid
added vocab is toxic, candid and obnoxious
i got this motor skill package
that is fantastic
my rotors shoulder odors
of burning plastic
now you learn that wisdom is elastic
my venom turns firm lips spastic
I'm a misfit
I mentally shift lists of criptic downloads
as I begin spinning around mistic pincodes
grinning
as i visualize and realize
that we reside in a time passage
of massive theatrics
the programmable sim mode is active
It's mannabuls arrod and slow
your energy nodes
i actively practice
anti-atrophy energy movement accuracy
my biosymetry sinergy explodes
translucent bright light infinitely reloads

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i don't see much of a concept but it was a nice flow. (NT) -- BaZiC BaRz, 23:12:01 01/17/03 Fri
the title had me confused...I agree with BaZiC about the concept, the flow was nice in some areas and I think you could expand the lines a little ( some of these two liners could be one) but not bad, some decent vocab...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 05:55:05 01/18/03 Sat
Not really feelin this.. your multis dont work, cuz you're throwing in words that dont go together to make sense, but just to have the syllables in there.. like "My rotors shoulder odors"..?? Just dont do that and itll be straight.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 13:07:45 01/18/03 Sat
i dont know..........its just......hmmm...???its not bad not good (NT) -- Tactics, 14:57:24 01/18/03 Sat

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