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Date Posted: 13:56:40 03/06/03 Thu
Author: nemesis
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: yeah, so this is for new mc's so yall peep

so,
what the fuck do you write about without inspiration
you write some shit and hope that it'll be a good creation
but if it isnt you waste more paper and more time
tryin' to write better and perfecting ya rhyme
and when inspiration does come then write it all down
try to express feelings better, and you'll be wearing the crown
so dont let people bring you down, just cause of ya rap style
just dont listen to em, even though it might take a while
take notice from people around you, they can help you learn
every single writer had to start somewhere, just wait ya turn
and eventually you'll gain respect from other mc's
and be compared to other mc's like these
starks, brail and even fuckin' swords
but before all that shit, you need to aim towards
learnin to rhyme and perfecting ya skills
write about fucked up shit, like takin pills
or even write about stuff thats happened to you
cause no-one likes something fake unless you make it sound true
so now im finished so read this shit and take notice
cause all ya need todo id relax, think and focus

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Ok, I understand. It. was pretty good. -- Lil' Lucky, 14:33:08 03/06/03 Thu
yo this was a kind of reputicious kind of rhyme.. did not like it.... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka vocab supreme, 15:29:04 03/06/03 Thu
The message is very appealing...but your way of showcasing isn't too appealing though....Maybe, try a different rhyme pattern rather than a different rhyme scheme.....Keep doing you and stay up..... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 15:53:22 03/06/03 Thu
wad up...... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 16:58:56 03/06/03 Thu
hummm -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:29:44 03/06/03 Thu

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