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Date Posted: 17:33:40 03/06/03 Thu
Author: J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm
Author Host/IP: 5-pool3.ras10.tnnas.alerondial.net / 206.148.182.5
Subject: hmm..this was a pretty good piece...the word usage was nice...some nice metaphors and imagery...but the flow did seem kinda 'thick', like to slow-draggin along..and there were a couple spots that i felt ya was tryin too hard to be abstract or somethin..just didn't seem natural...but nonetheless, an aight piece...stay up kidd, peace!
In reply to: the dark spitter aka vocab supreme 's message, "just to sharpen skills up a notch bout to bust a key.... vocab spreme for the two-zero zero-three.." on 16:17:57 03/06/03 Thu


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