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Date Posted: 14:44:32 03/09/03 Sun
Author: Versetyle aka §inful §oul7of ABZENT MINDED
Author Host/IP: host213-123-138-114.in-addr.btopenworld.com / 213.123.138.114
Subject: this was nice... the content isn't my kind of thing but its well written... some nice lines in here, i liked the centipede one... worse thing about this was the last line, very conry ending... i'd definately change that... other than that it was dope... peace
In reply to: Eternal Student 's message, " Shedding light so those can relate to my life OK this isn't quite finished BUT have a look and see what you think... I appreciate EVERYONEs' CRIT......PeAcE" on 13:07:21 03/09/03 Sun


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  • this is nice... content... very smooth flow... relaxed... not too simple... not too complex.... Very nice. I agree with Versetyle on the ending... but I'm no good with ending MY verses so... no complaints there... HOLLA! (NT) -- SKORP-I..., 16:19:41 03/09/03 Sun




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