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Date Posted: 13:22:12 03/11/03 Tue
Author: STARKS(THE MOUTH OF MADNESS)
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 64.80.25.62
Subject: just some quick shit i threw together. peep and critique. I'll make my replies soon!

take a mental dose of this from the lounge pharmacist
jason is a tremendous arsonist equiped with carbon lips
what do you want from me, i�m not the one who started this
honestly my options seem to deminish so pardon this
expressional varnishes illuminate light and sharpen wits
i�m long gone instead born was the spawn of an awsome artist.
Starks marvels over an industry so blatantly tarnished
what was once a strong target, has become a shame regardless
as i watch stars sparkle, i reach my hand out to the farthest
if it don�t come with a struggle its obiously not meant for me
i rarely ever sleep, in fear of the darkness, it�s tempting me
scary dreams of running from voltures who rip apart flesh
i can barely breathe as i step down a corridor, so whats next
your scared to speak for a reason, caught up in your own mess

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Replies:

NICE.. (NT) -- THE DARK SPITTER, 13:24:59 03/11/03 Tue
Yeah! this is what im talking about.. i�m long gone instead born was the spawn of an awsome artist. Niiice line.. dope.. keep this up (NT) -- ===||Swords-->, 14:35:56 03/11/03 Tue
tight, dope, whatever you wanna call it but it was (NT) -- nemesis, 14:52:34 03/11/03 Tue
for how short this was.. I was feeling it! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:43:44 03/11/03 Tue
I liked this, yo + i don�t think it was to short: is tight the way it is, feelin u (NT) -- chromenine, 03:44:38 03/12/03 Wed
short but a nice read (NT) -- treyz1, 11:02:30 03/12/03 Wed

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