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Date Posted: 08:45:17 03/06/03 Thu
Author: chromenine
Author Host/IP: p508F2F25.dip.t-dialin.net / 80.143.47.37
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Check dissout an tell me what da deal wit it

Yo, you shouldnґt make a bet that u got better rap/
my intentions is mad and not flowin correct/
but see dat, my eyez wont believe what u spillin/
a horrible scene, i get horrorfied while whitness yo handlin/
my rhymez feed your brain and still be like its medicine/
half yo age im a veteran at rap/
better believe when i sayin u aint flowin correct, its like dat/
know how to drop right at every single line i recite/
yo rather commit suicide then stand up and fight/
what i write, thogh its easy shit/
niggaz cant beat my spit/
got a wack handlin/
dont need a beat wit dis/
spittin 15 syllables in split seconds/
better recognize my shit is not killable, BaSTARD/
i RESSURECT/

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maybe its just the way im readin it but , it didnt even rhyme (NT) -- nemesis, 13:35:23 03/06/03 Thu
Only 15 syllables?....Try 37.....Anyway, you used slant-rhyme in this...so I'll give you credit for that....The content is a little played out....Talking about how ill you are or how long you've been rhyming is just plain annoying now these days....But keep doing you and stay up... (NT) -- h Ј k §/|_ A \/©....., 15:57:59 03/06/03 Thu
wad up....... -- [SBc] w|HIGH|Te Mc, 17:03:52 03/06/03 Thu
huh???? -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:32:14 03/06/03 Thu

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