just to sharpen skills up a notch bout to bust a key.... vocab spreme for the two-zero zero-three.. -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 16:17:57 03/06/03 Thu
Author: the dark spitter aka vocab supreme
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
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just to sharpen skills up a notch bout to bust a key.... vocab spreme for the two-zero zero-three..

clouded thoughts combust the spirited image/
clinically brain dead with writers block and diminshed/
type realities shown in the average human when ya open up the mind/
the cranium shows traces of satins dna and dark chromosone cells filled with devilish type mitochondria nucleuses/
the spine bends and sways with beat of cardiac arrest patient untill the final flatline/
dark abstact structures enter infinte life when a sinner enters hell and meets the devil and his son for him self/
illadelph lifes lived through out the nation and witness the truth of what's it like living through hell/
lifes a obstical course gods chosen every one to manage out of/
it'll be like glocks shooting harsh reality but releasing empty shells/
the streets spectrum is politically incorrect and foggy in the mans birds eye view of seeing it/
rotting corpses in my perspective keep the soul untill it disinergrates into underworld where it can go throgh some more devilsh torturings/
my style may or may not be understood but thats what makes us one of kind in holy pure creation/
the worlds ways are inticate in elements and not fitted to be very basic/
reality is there for us to rip through it and finally realize where all here to face it/

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This was good......It's good to see you're starting to elevate at a good pace...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:04:31 03/06/03 Thu
hmm..this was a pretty good piece...the word usage was nice...some nice metaphors and imagery...but the flow did seem kinda 'thick', like to slow-draggin along..and there were a couple spots that i felt ya was tryin too hard to be abstract or somethin..just didn't seem natural...but nonetheless, an aight piece...stay up kidd, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:33:40 03/06/03 Thu
coo -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:40:46 03/06/03 Thu
yeah the start did it for me (NT) -- treyz1, 07:57:21 03/07/03 Fri
it was good. but do you guys ever try to set an overall idea of something you write. everything i read just goes all over the place. decent though. PEACE! (NT) -- Digits, 11:55:31 03/07/03 Fri

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