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Date Posted: 17:14:31 02/12/03 Wed
Author: Vis
Author Host/IP: wylab216.uwp.edu / 131.210.16.216
Subject: "and has the ability to fold your spirit like some psyche origami" <<< that was the illest line...had good flow all the way through but just better in parts, im glad it wasnt a chapter long...good as internal rhyming, i kinda see what you mean about taking multisyllabic rhyming farther...stay up
In reply to: h £ k §-A-g Ø ñ/|_ A \/ ¡ § h...aka tH£ ƒ l e § h øƒ |Ð e § § ¡ £| J© 's message, "AN ALL-NEW POST.....A DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET......"One Man's Spirit" Part 3....Warning: h £ k §-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Rhetoric, Intrinsic Metaphors, And Vocabulary May Cause Mind-Stops..BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING..." on 15:49:59 02/12/03 Wed


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  • I really enjoyed this one, the multis were sick and the line continuity was good...I don't agree with your beliefs but that's your thing, this was nice work Hex (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm dude is called 'Jesus', 12:13:02 02/13/03 Thu




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