....THE DEMONIC ONE SHALL BE SILENCED....FINALLY...IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I'VE POSTED AN AUDIO....It's official, this will be the last demonic type of rhyme I'll write...never again shall I mock God...I call this piece...-=In The Beginning...=-...lyrics posted as well...***CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 23:25:50 02/14/03 Fri
Author: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I.
Author Host/IP: clsr-2415520-162.ode-tx.clearsource.net / 24.155.20.162
Subject: ....THE DEMONIC ONE SHALL BE SILENCED....FINALLY...IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I'VE POSTED AN AUDIO....It's official, this will be the last demonic type of rhyme I'll write...never again shall I mock God...I call this piece...-=In The Beginning...=-...lyrics posted as well...***CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED***

lo- http://910.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/44651
hi- http://910.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/44651

if the link doesn't work....just try again...ha

-=In The Beginning...=-

Lost Angels Swarm in God's Tranquil Storm,
Descending From Heaven With No Painful Mourn,
Navels Tourn, Gutted, Fleshed and Scarred,
With No Reinforcements to Protect and Guard,
Respected God, But Fled Due to Injustice,
Instructed To Flee With No sense to Trust It,
Hundreds Fall With No Attempt to Stall,
When Descendin They Learn to Accept Their Flaws,
Ahead From All Was One With No Clemency,
Once Heavenly, Now evil, Engulfed in Jelousy,
From spiritual the tortured turned Physical,
Wasn't Difficult To Use Science to Blurr Miracles,
He Convinced Followers, to Not Honor Earth,
It's Only a Place Where God's Problems Lurk,
He Fathered Herds of These Wingless Souls,
Then Ordered Them to Adapt With No Reason's Told,
Civilizations, Still in This Stage Since,
Angels Left With wings Were Killed With Impatience,
These Lost Souls Were Showered Upon By Failure,
The Power of Wrong Behavior,
Awaken The Pure to Cry Louder and to Spawn a Savior,
But Were Forsaken and Damned, Followin Satan's Command,
For God Couldn't Reverse the Creation of Man...

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i feel ya nigga!!! (NT) -- plural, 23:33:32 02/14/03 Fri
dayum beat is sik..lyrix nice...ill trak..notin wrong wit it man...all i got to say is..why stop usin a style that made u get this far?..1ne... (NT) -- Lucian0, 23:42:10 02/14/03 Fri
*Shakes head at bullshit reply above*...I found this very interesting...especially when you said you would end mocking God in the title...but this audio I felt THOROUGHLY...quality, lyrics, flow and beat...the verse, despite it having large words...it was simple...I don't know if you can understand that but it was...and I could grasp the concept behind this easily...I wished it would've been longer but I enjoyed what I heard...thanks for the listen (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 23:42:33 02/14/03 Fri
Peep inside.. -- ===||Swords--->, 00:16:35 02/15/03 Sat
tried to reply a little while ago, but my comp froze...so imma summerize what i said then....better flow, nice lyrics, beat ehh to me but still managed to set the mood and stuck to the theme, wordplay and multi's got better also....PEACE (NT) -- Vis, 00:55:15 02/15/03 Sat
this is dope yo, i like it (NT) -- maximus, 01:05:37 02/15/03 Sat
sick audio... the first sample is dope, beat is nice... lyrics are very dope... your flow could be better, too many pauses... i like ur style of lyrics but i unerstand the need to change.... a nice drop... peace (NT) -- Versetyle of Abzent Minded, 09:33:29 02/15/03 Sat
Nice beat.......nice multis........delivery is pretty good.......dark topic.......I wish this was longer.......maybe a hook........but its tight tho.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 09:55:13 02/15/03 Sat
ya flow shouldve been more rapid on this shit...I personally didnt like anything about it.... just honest with my thoughts... flow wasnt fluid enough and the lyrics were too expected... so the audio lagged in the "interesting" field.... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 12:10:39 02/15/03 Sat
I don't know where in the world you get "mocking God" from.....At least, I don't see any "mocking" in your lyrics....It could be something else but I'm not going to stir-up any trouble...Couldn't peep the audio, but the lyrics had the "multisyllabicism" in it....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...I have heard your voice before....It's decent to me....., 16:38:37 02/15/03 Sat
ehhh sample was nice....lyrics were nice...the way you spit em "Wasn't"....just didnt feel it...that demonic one shall be silenced crap, sounds corny and 4th gradish...lol...anyway stay up....peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 16:47:54 02/15/03 Sat
not bad man... not bad at all... FOR THIS BEAT, your delivery was pretty much on point... but with ANY OTHER BEAT... it probably wouldn't have sounded as good... that dark sounding, demonic type voice shit i mean... but lyrics were nice... you repped right. stay up. pz (NT) -- INTOX, 17:45:02 02/15/03 Sat

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