What up lounge...Da AbZtRaKt AsSaSsiN presents: 'Now That I'm Gone'...just keyed this up, dunno if its been done before or not...all feedback is appreciated...enjoy! -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:00:39 02/15/03 Sat
Author: Versetyle Da AbZtRaKt AsSaSiN of Abzent Minded Inc.
Author Host/IP: host217-40-202-227.in-addr.btopenworld.com / 217.40.202.227
Subject: What up lounge...Da AbZtRaKt AsSaSsiN presents: 'Now That I'm Gone'...just keyed this up, dunno if its been done before or not...all feedback is appreciated...enjoy!

Last week two shots to the head meant that I died young
Now I�m checking on the world after my times done
I found the world goes on though I no longer exist
My body is cold but i still hear ticks from the watch on my wrist
The tears dry up and eventually memories will fade
Secretly people smile coz inheritance got bills paid
I'm soon left out of their prayers when the room is dim-lit
Mourners have 'peace' of mind knowing I�m resting in it
The Earth still rotates and the sun comes up every day
My absence hasn't impacted the world's functions in any way
The girl I love still prays but words are spoken fast
Time is providing the stitches to mend her broken heart
I wish I could feel her warmth as I float above her
I hope she's never under the covers with another lover
But it'll probably happen coz she's got to keep living
Right now her heart is cold and the lone sleep's chilling
It'll be bout a week till her pillow has no drops upon it
And she runs out of honorary words and stops her sonnet
But I've got endless time so i'll write a scripture about ur picture
And I know she can't tell but I gave her a final whisper and kissed her
As i started to leave the phone rang, she chatted to her friend
She seemed happy but I thought there would be tears in the end
But there was no mention of me and instead i heard laughter fall
Emotions change fast, I guess a grave is just a stone after all...

'R.I.P Versetyle... may his legacy live on'

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Nice concept.....Whether you took your own life or not in the first line...I don't know, but the idea of being able to look back (and yes, you can when you leave this Earth) was well thought out....Sometimes, it's good to take a break from all the "multisyllabicism" and just let the subconscious speak for you...Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:38:55 02/15/03 Sat
this was dope, kinda reminded me of sixth sense, how he didnt know he was dead, but still lived life, well, the life he thought he was still in...but you flipped it nicely, i enjoyed this..stay up James...peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 19:20:04 02/15/03 Sat
GRIME (NT) -- HYGH, 03:52:57 02/16/03 Sun
DAYM nice real nice (NT) -- GoNzo the 16 year old boy wonder, 11:03:57 02/16/03 Sun
Dat was Hot -- ACE, 12:39:10 02/23/03 Sun

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