the dark spitter presents... "scatterd thoughts"... just some piece I wrote a while back... peep this! -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 13:10:11 02/25/03 Tue
Author: the dark spitter
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
Subject: the dark spitter presents... "scatterd thoughts"... just some piece I wrote a while back... peep this!

the dumb, deaf and third eye blind-
will find-
the ryhme-
as gun crimes climb-
cities define intricate minds-
syndicate ways to break spines-
infinitive fades to enslay guys-
primitive aids to make way intimate signs-
illitirate lines-
inconsisderate peeps who want beef embarass mankind-
some gold carrots have tendencies to have some shine-
some rhymes dont have structure nor sufficiant bind-
or sufficiant rights-
an insight-
to magnify bright optical lights-
scatterd batterd shatterd images to infuse fights-
I dispise peoples whos "CROOKED"
in one "EYE"-
megaton mines-
explode the globe whole with no right mind-
super human strength and all mighty might-
all mighty strikes-
I spill my words upon this like buther kitchen knives-
beautiful inner self with included wives-
i kill enemies steadly with one slice-
I spill deadly with melodies with dope lines-
you couldent catch up to me with einstiens mind-
two right rhymes-
I spit and split men with dark spitter chimbs-

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Some parts was nice others I didnt really like you getting better...keep working on it (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 16:08:18 02/25/03 Tue
yo this looks familiar in rhyme skeme. hmmmmmmm. not bad stay up. (NT) -- starks, 17:35:04 02/25/03 Tue
Some parts were nice others I wasnt feeling. bars 11,12,13 were really nice (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:58:33 02/25/03 Tue

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