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Date Posted: 12:01:13 02/08/03 Sat
Author: SickNen
Author Host/IP: spider-tr071.proxy.aol.com / 152.163.201.206
Subject: Battle verse.....................peep

my metaphores metamorph da swordz/ dat'll visously split open ya vocal-cordz/
transform'n into poison, travel'n toward ya lungz, snatch'n out ya wind and wit fatal chemicalz, "itz retored"/
my lyrical force/
emortally devourz body structures and shit out dey corpse/
i'll battle any emcee on any groundz/or in any lounge/ and we can go mo' roundz then tha earth would exist da spin around/
i'll reanforce, force if U ill,
"then snatch ya crown"/
kick U while U down, spit on U as U lie/
of course U can win dis fight,
but theres no chance of U leave'n it "wit out ah black eye"/
get stump'd til ya chest iz sunk in/
to tell U da truth," i hate battle'n but i luv shit'n on those famous for frontin'"/
U done started some shit U couldn't finish, cuz if U could finish it/
i wouldn't be alive da phukin' witness it/
ah battlent/who'z tallent remain extravigant/
my lyrical form/ alone, ah leave U scorn/
and ah have U known as ah disgrace da rap,"by any of ya future kidz born"/
watch tha respect for ya online keystyle dissolve/
individualz vision ya death exclusive on tha internet, and formulate a applaud/
tha architecture style of my rap tacktic'z are far from U being able to define/
forseen ya next rhyme,/
fullest extent of elevation of ya mind/
ya mentalz perplex/ and ya whole verse was far passed being far-fetched/
my fetish iz rip'n apart emcee'z and each emcee dat challenges my tallent, "it manifest"/
i cross-bow metallic poison dartz/ to heartz/ that let'z da poison travel to ya mental and proceedz da destroy ya every thoughtz.

Shit....I just got bored...."thatz just alittle keystyle."

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HAHA! MINES was a KEYSTYLE too in like 5 min. YOU BASICALLY said a whole bunch of SHIT I said just way more simplistic.. FLIP off the norm kid.. this was pretty tight, I hated the start becuase it was filler shit.. but it progressed nicely.. "pretty tight stuff man.. just dig deeper then a settled spot!" ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:10:32 02/08/03 Sat
This was an ill battle verse, had some decint punches, nice wordplay, ill post overall---Now peep 3 posts (NT) -- G R O T E S Q U E, 12:17:49 02/08/03 Sat
too many UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU's in it but keep practicing your shity frestyles (NT) -- nemisis, 12:35:09 02/08/03 Sat
Keep writing.....on work on "witty" punches....This was pretty good....But just keep working on originality....I'm not knockin' your style or anything of that nature....Just keep writing...Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:05:13 02/08/03 Sat
(Shit....I just got bored...."thatz just alittle keystyle.").....Pathologist , did U not see or what? Focus upon tha fact that I'm play'n around...I'm not mad becuz of what U said..itz just, "not much shit comez to me when I'm high (as far as freestyle'n.) (NT) -- SickNen, 12:32:24 02/10/03 Mon

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