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Date Posted: 00:16:35 02/15/03 Sat
Author: ===||Swords--->
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 12.25.217.177
Subject: Peep inside..
In reply to: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I. 's message, "....THE DEMONIC ONE SHALL BE SILENCED....FINALLY...IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE SINCE I'VE POSTED AN AUDIO....It's official, this will be the last demonic type of rhyme I'll write...never again shall I mock God...I call this piece...-=In The Beginning...=-...lyrics posted as well...***CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED***" on 23:25:50 02/14/03 Fri

lol long time no post.. Interesting turn of faith for you.. i liked the samples.. Very nice lyrics.. Decent beat selection.. heard alot worse.. The flow is the worst thing about the audio.. Some parts of words you pronounced too quickly, making you hafta stretch some lines out, then other syllables you stretched out for no reason.. I wonder if you practiced spitting this much before you recorded.. If not its ok, sometimes i dont either.. But that's what you most need to work on, a more consistent flow.. get a better tempo going.. Other than that, no flaws in the delivery.. Peep that text of mine down there.. ehh i know.. i cant make audios right now... so for now we all gotta settle..

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  • tried to reply a little while ago, but my comp froze...so imma summerize what i said then....better flow, nice lyrics, beat ehh to me but still managed to set the mood and stuck to the theme, wordplay and multi's got better also....PEACE (NT) -- Vis, 00:55:15 02/15/03 Sat




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