been a while what up yall, club cancelled freestyle competition cus people wouldn't get off the stage, the whole party sucked except for one cat rhyming the rest was bull like these new cats on the lounge . Quick keystyle ta elevate'em with.PEACE -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 18:47:20 02/18/03 Tue
Author: Pat D.A.W.G.==dESPENCING aMPLIFIED wORDS gEOGRAPHICALLY
Author Host/IP: host-209-214-169-191.sdf.bellsouth.net / 209.214.169.191
Subject: been a while what up yall, club cancelled freestyle competition cus people wouldn't get off the stage, the whole party sucked except for one cat rhyming the rest was bull like these new cats on the lounge . Quick keystyle ta elevate'em with.PEACE

Nowadays, every rapper is a chamellon wit a different shade/
they differ a hair from the last cat but still equally lame.
It doesn't suprise me that hip hop is constantly dissed/
rappers forget how ta write clever rhymes and just move they lips.
My discipline keep me in multiple enviroments ta acknowledge gifts/
polish it so my skill keeps cats trying while rewinding it.
is you feeling it?
My message, stressing how cats betta learn ta grow/
delt your hand in the life but they opt ta fold.
it aint women and gold but elements that i represent/
we aint giving back to our world we fill with ill supliments.
I run down gang infested blocks in a red tank top snaching they rags/
playing capture the flag, oh damn homie is it ya color that makes you so bad?
Everybody in my city wanna claim that they rap and flow/
they lack the skills it takes ta elevate the art thats being misused by hoes.
betta dig a lil deeper before u start syaing that u wise/
I got many shovels that I use ta dig up the truths of ya lies.
Geting me out the lyrical game is like pulling on a push door/
it don't happen, so go back ta jigga tapes ya skilless whore.
I pollute airwaves when I get thicker than the smog/
the mouth consists of toxic jucies that get spilled by the DAWG.
Smoke'em like a log getn high off potent paragraphs/
Laughing at these weak cats for testing my craft.
mic visuals put myself in a battling picture/
rappers go one round and decide they need ta get dentures.
Bite the mic as I kick you in the back of the dome/
ya history, Xed out for trying ta take my throne.

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You know i respect you Pat D.A.W.G. I respected your rhymes sence i was T- ayalis and still do.But wasent feelin this one. Nothing at all caught my eye. Just seemed like a bunch of words put together. I know you got dope shit so keep your head up (NT) -- Tactics, 19:37:53 02/18/03 Tue
Yo i thought the shit was pretty good . it had it's parts where you lost me but, overall shit was nice. peace (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 21:21:56 02/18/03 Tue
Good shit though majority of it (NT) -- GoNzO the 16 year old boy wonder, 00:50:26 02/19/03 Wed
D.A.W.G...to be honest I wasn't feeling this...probably in audio but not text...but yeah speaking of clubs...P.E.A.C.E..to all those who lost some one in the E2 tragedy the other night...Just show and proves the actions of one effects everyone ...One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3N@$yD3, 00:51:22 02/19/03 Wed
this was tight man...i wouldnt have thought so by seein that name..it really dont fit you...you dope anyway..one (NT) -- PERSONAL TRADGEDY OF GROUP THERAPY, 17:03:43 02/19/03 Wed
It was good but to be truly honest i couldn't find a beat. -- Serial, 00:54:31 02/20/03 Thu

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