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Date Posted: 09:38:37 02/20/03 Thu
Author: Desi Souljah
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 66.59.149.229
Subject: CHECK THIS SHYT OUT STARKS U BOUT TO GET FUCKED UP

Yo u can sag ure pants and flip the byrd,
but listen to my word,
cause its ure death i will serve,
atop a silver platter, burien a bullet in ure grey matter,
U seem like the MC who cant respect,
the one who wont enter a freestyle tourney for fear of gettin wrecked,
well come bring ure hate messages to us sandpeople,
cause im a hit u with derivitives that are lethal,
U think u bad when it comes to bein lyrical,
promotin a racist notion, if u so good then battle me and my destructive potion.

GET THE FUCK UP AND BATTLE BITCH, U BOUT TO GET ROCKED MOTHA FUCKA, FUCKIN RACIST ASS PUSSY
cause i dont even try to beat u,

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I can tell that I need to start a cypher or something........Look, this was way under par for lyricism....I'm not knockin' your rhyme, just your rhyme style......Elevate, concentrate on originality, word usage, wordplay, different rhyme schemes and rhyme patterns.....then you'll see improvement....Keep up and stay up.. (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:16:24 02/20/03 Thu
who's tha target? personally i didn't like it... there were some parts that didn't make sense... (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 15:02:10 02/20/03 Thu
ha ha nice try. dude you suck give it up.thanks for the laugh. (NT) -- starks (the mouth of madness), 17:04:30 02/20/03 Thu
fuckin die sandscum.............................. (NT) -- GOD the almighty father (the original hater of you stinky fuckers), 17:09:59 02/20/03 Thu
maN Iaint racist but you are more of a camel jockey than a lyricist, starks would harm u son elevate then try againPEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 17:23:03 02/20/03 Thu

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