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Date Posted: 05:07:15 02/03/03 Mon
Author: styliztik...aka..quote
Author Host/IP: user180.net329.fl.sprint-hsd.net / 65.40.14.180
Subject: Ight..... I m BACCCCK TO FORM>.....water like....bitch

i was slippin on my pimpin so i put my my mack on tha rise
starsky and hutch, dog chains to bitches, i caught a lark from tha skies, cuz my heart was disguised, to take a part of its life, sprinkle bird seed, mannerisms, and patterns, ive learned to realize..
resize confidence from low self esteem to that of a queen
and back them out of the dream wit one slap to the cheek
put em back in the street...whats happened to me...
all i can ask fo i wont see, hopefully, u heed this and dont breathe greed, but avarice is the only thing i can seem to be,
i mean, i came in had nothing, if i made it, bag somethin..go bag huntin,
if u go and come back and still dont have nothing, that was bad huntin
i try to sleep but keep hearin tha report from tha magpies
some cats mad cuz he didnt get back five, cuz hhis homies SLy eyes devised a plan designed to bring back his PRIde
but within those lines, was the pen that drew them
then tha fingertips that drew them, but what was more amusin
was tha fingerprints the DT dusted fo but still couldnt use em
i used gloves so they couldnt prove mine were the same set that threw them
slugs that chewed skin, D.A n prosecutors left wit bruised egos looks confusin, lookin like a book of confused men
case fell apart they forgot to glue ends
and im back again perusin the strip
drinkin booze wit my clique, twos on my hips, clips slipped in fo any new goon to goon rifts
lookin fo any new noon to moon shifts, ...i said....ull
lose ya soul faster than amputated legs

my eyelids lifted, click...picture takin...
memory photographic, dont u panic, oh that was a blink just waitin,
sit be patient, life moves fast, but learnin is slow mo, got work like a perm....go
hit blocks, i had tha rocky fists, runnin like im a boxa
but i wasnt tryin box these fists
im just boxed in, runnin wit kis, tryna see if i could find the door that keeps us locked in,

im lookin for profits,
im half amazin, half manic depressant
hopin they hearts be untouched,

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"i caught a lark from tha skies, cuz my heart was disguised, to take a part of its life," "cuz hhis homies SLy eyes devised a plan designed to bring back his PRIde." "i used gloves so they couldnt prove mine were the same set that threw them,slugs that chewed skin," DAMN!!! Ill concepts and imagery... haha... Do you do audio's? (NT) -- Souliberty aka IN{O}VADER, 08:00:14 02/03/03 Mon
"loose your soul faster than amputated legs..." haha nice wordplay ...but yo "mackdaddy" you about as much a pimp as I am a Jedi Knight, you need to elevate your subject matter because it' s more played than backwards Kangols. You have a good flow and you wordplay is ill...find something to write about, Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm *slognaK*, 11:17:04 02/03/03 Mon
I couldn't get with the content....I'm not into disrespecting women in lyrics....but the scheme seemed dope.....Try another subject matter or something....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 12:00:46 02/03/03 Mon
Hex musta not even read it, and got confused by the first two lines.. but yeah you should got rid of them, cuz the rest was dope, but those lines had nothing to do with anything and just looked wierd there.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:35:01 02/03/03 Mon
^^^^^^I said the "scheme seemed dope".....yeah, I was thrown off by the first few lines, my bad.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 14:41:26 02/03/03 Mon
Dope -- INS, 15:16:25 02/03/03 Mon
iight.. iight.. this had a nice lil flow to it.. kinda vivid in some parts.. keep at it, peace! (NT) -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 16:10:37 02/03/03 Mon

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