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Date Posted: 17:49:31 02/05/03 Wed
Author: does it matter
Author Host/IP: cache-dm07.proxy.aol.com / 205.188.209.75
Subject: A VERY QUICK FREESTYLE PLEASE READ....ONE

some say that the eyes are the window to the soul.
and some say that it takes time to grow.
i say take the things that they have said and distort them to where knowledge can fall like snow.
like the blank faces of faith when you walk in church durring a sermon staring at the filled rows.
i feel growth.
and i feel pain.
just as you do, just not the same.
dont try and make sense of the ish' i spit.
cuz, once you do it would start mass confusion and turbulence.
if your a real emcee the words will just fit.
if your a real emcee words dont exist.
just emotion.
just a soul filled with devotion.
just a thought and a notion.
that transforms itself to a beat causing what those who dont understand call comotion.
the words should be smoother than lotion.
it should'nt take any thought.
and if you want my honest opinion, theirs no such thing as writers' block.
and for writers whom are reading this it should'nt come as a shock.
its a consistent feeling you have in your heart, that dont ever stop like a clock.
or better yet like time.
you should'nt be looking into the rhyme.
the rhyme should be looking at you.
and the fact whether or not it was felt is'nt for you to choose.....
you feel it whether you choose to or not.
so if your feeling this rhyme and dont want to... theirs nobody to fault.
just know that the literature you read will never stop.
because nobody on gods creation can stop my thoughts....
one!

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reality bites don't it.. but hey writers block does exist.. it's when your stressed and only spurts can rise from the mind.. mostly feelings of regret for me.. but I liked this it was simplistic in a good way! -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:46:52 02/05/03 Wed
"if your a real emcee words dont exist.just emotion"....favorite line...like Path said it was kinda simple but done in a nice way...dope key...uno(N) -- DiAtRiBe, 18:51:31 02/05/03 Wed
nice keystyle.......like the blank faces of faith when you walk in church durring a sermon staring at the filled rows.....""truth well spoken." (NT) -- SickNen, 19:02:07 02/05/03 Wed
This was alright, I didn't like how some lines had such huge differentials in word usage though, it kind of threw the flow off for me. I felt you content wise though. (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 23:02:38 02/05/03 Wed

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