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Date Posted: 13:41:10 02/08/03 Sat
Author: a cloudy day
Author Host/IP: 12-231-176-45.client.attbi.com / 12.231.176.45
Subject: A CONCEPTUAL CLOUD

through time a place, i pace thyself
on a path i cant escape from, it takes one... strong soul
to endure the hardships
an aura unpure as the heart rips
a hostile akwardness that mind boggled the cognitive process
an impossible conscience
coordinating a positive recognizance
reflections of being caught in a coffin, caution
36 square feet of earth, i lay beneath undisturbed
we speak in thirds, to reach the outter limits
its all powerful ballistics that rerouted the cowards existence
defenseless clones get their replicated acid extracted
at a rapid rate, a savage blade that ran rampid on your name
obscure anti-venoms, get sent through my veins that were once blue
turn to toxic green, illogical schemes...
intolerable teams bleed, droppin' their life liquid...
i breathe carbon monoxide, god... its the son with hard hide
its all lies, submit... "911 come quick," is whats recorded
when your mission was aborted...
frail physiques lay twisted, contorted
misfits is ordered for kamakazee parimeters
amateurs get sent....

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this was worded well, that's not always a easy task for some.. well up.. nice drop. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:24:07 02/08/03 Sat
was this supposed to rhyme? cause i dont think it did but besides that it was kinda good (NT) -- nemisis&royam(new mc ), 14:28:48 02/08/03 Sat
your kidding me right? you can't see the flow in this... dude can you read? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 14:31:11 02/08/03 Sat
Your style reminds so much of Ach.....or is it Overcast?...HAHAHA.....This was dope...It's always a joy to peep something different every once and a while...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 16:07:27 02/08/03 Sat
Conceptual cloud eh? i agree.. Pretty nice, better than average.. i can tel you can do way better.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:53:27 02/08/03 Sat
Not bad first post I read from you, u can elevate PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 23:27:18 02/08/03 Sat

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