just something o wrote while back and i felt like postin it so, peep -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 05:16:04 02/09/03 Sun
Author: nemisis
Author Host/IP: webcacheM08b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.18
Subject: just something o wrote while back and i felt like postin it so, peep

i want every body to really read this song!

In my eyes, i dont really have friends
all they want is my money and new benz
life would be different, lookin through a thicker lenz
so instead ill take life alone
i only trust 2 people and there back home
but now where im livin i am alone
and if anyone here wants to do a collaboration
well it might provide some sanitation
cause i feel we can do good in our nation
cause you wouldnt like to be homeless
we all recognize this, but, imagine the bliss
if someone stopped for 2 minutes
to talk to you, like you do exist for a second
and for that second ya life was brightened
and an hour later ya still stunned
that someone noticed you at all
but then you still have the down-fall
ya still homeless when it comes to night fall
so why cant we change the way we live
why cant we forget and forgive
and change the world with a motive
to help people better themselves
cause, it'll make us feel better about our selves
even if they only end up stackin' shelves
at least its better than beggin' on the street
and needin' somethin' to eat
then on a night they'ed be able to sleep in a sheet

"just try to help people, cause you might be in the same position in the future"

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aight...i didn't even read past the second line here.....and let me tell ya why--"all they want is my money and new benz"....please, just a few posts down you say you're either 14 or 13 years old....you ain't got no new benz...this is fake ass shit...and i don't read that! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:32:44 02/09/03 Sun
yo son wz realy goin on in ya life that shit is twisted...u need jesus...im not all fillin nat verse...needs mad work..."1ne" -- jay, 07:00:10 02/09/03 Sun
well, aight.....yea, the uh....content was okay, nice to see you have a heart...but still your rhyming needs work....a good paragraph of about five lines didnt even rhyme...work on that (NT) -- Vis, 14:03:32 02/09/03 Sun
ONCE AGAIN, it RHYMED!!! This was better then your first drop man I feel you, tight lil' drop keep elevating your thoughts... I'm sure you ment A new BENZ not YOUR new BENZ.. jesus cats is more critical then me these days.. thats ashame.. cause I hate everyone and everything! ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:12:43 02/09/03 Sun

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