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Date Posted: 12:45:12 01/27/03 Mon
Author: INTOX
Author Host/IP: pcp02328294pcs.summit01.nj.comcast.net / 68.84.56.159
Subject: this was dope... started off a little bit weak, but you made your point with the "extreme degree of racism" shit... then you started off graphic as FUCK on the second part... almost stopped reading... but i'm glad i kept on... shit was powerful... good work man. pz
In reply to: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I. 's message, "THE LOUNGE OF LYRICISM RIGHT?…Well I’m expanding my horizons in lyricism, beyond plain ole rhymes…this is a poem I wrote the morning after I performed some poetry at an Open Mic at this little club…I call this piece, “I listen…” this doesn’t rhyme at all, but I hope the content and the actual essence of the piece will grab you…***PEEP WITH OPENMINDEDNESS AND PACED LIKE IF YOU WERE TO HEAR IT…DON’T SPEED READ…SLOWLY CONSUME THE MESSAGE….ALL CRITIQUE IS APPRECIATED***" on 12:24:05 01/27/03 Mon


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  • this was fuking dope man..i could almost hear you speaking it while i read it...this is some def-poetry ish at its best..i could picture you on stage speaking this very hyped....very nice display of poetical essence by ya..stay up and keep shining...peace (NT) -- Essence....AM, 12:52:43 01/27/03 Mon






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