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Date Posted: 18:28:47 01/27/03 Mon
Author: Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!"
Author Host/IP: ppp-67-37-66-234.dialup.sfldmi.ameritech.net / 67.37.66.234
Subject: hmmm.. I thought this was real.. dope aint the word.. neither is nice or ill.. it was deeply real.. vivid with a harsh feel.. the end was a nice twist.. well thought out.. props on your thoughts in here.. stay up!
In reply to: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink of O.M.N.I. 's message, "THE LOUNGE OF LYRICISM RIGHT?…Well I’m expanding my horizons in lyricism, beyond plain ole rhymes…this is a poem I wrote the morning after I performed some poetry at an Open Mic at this little club…I call this piece, “I listen…” this doesn’t rhyme at all, but I hope the content and the actual essence of the piece will grab you…***PEEP WITH OPENMINDEDNESS AND PACED LIKE IF YOU WERE TO HEAR IT…DON’T SPEED READ…SLOWLY CONSUME THE MESSAGE….ALL CRITIQUE IS APPRECIATED***" on 12:24:05 01/27/03 Mon


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  • This first stanza was wack because you obviously don't know the reason behind "extreme degrees of racism".....the second stanza was good...wasn't really graphic at all....and the third stanza was the best to me, stood out more.....Pretty nice....you just need to stop watching too much TV and pick up a few books....read on Marcus Garvey and Malcolm X....then you'll understand the standpoint from which I'M coming from..... (NT) -- h £ k §/|_ A \/©....., 12:17:06 01/31/03 Fri






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