<font color=orange> Some stuff I wrote earlier, flipped a few lines I have used before to improve. No real theme or topic, just what came out at the time -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 16:51:02 01/31/03 Fri
Author: �r�il:The√�s��η�rψ of Κa�a�l�zm
Author Host/IP: CDR3-235.accesscable.net / 24.138.3.235
Subject: Some stuff I wrote earlier, flipped a few lines I have used before to improve. No real theme or topic, just what came out at the time

What I gotta do to convince you that I'm the prodigal son
The chosen one/ logical abundance flows in my blood/
Make a lot of assumptions based on my own performance/
Multifaceted like transformers/ my rhythmic form is enormous
Even put a mil (million) I didn't have into my flows insurance
But I'm next to flawless so I'll never earn it, Im sure of it
Last seen in a maturnity ward with my dick in expanse
Between some lady's hands giving me a glance of romance
Put it in simpler terms for you if you truly don't understand
In double entendre' my friend I'm the motherfuckin man
Beyond sharp witted/ I'm working with the razors edge/
I cross references like a crucifix/ who's new to this?
Emcees pissed like Deborah Cox they be gettin senimental
"Yeah he got some potential but where the fuck are his credentials"
Check the white pages for Hilroy and number 2 Venus pencils
They'll tell you bout the tapes I did with bootleg instrumentals
I'll subtract a car accident from myself to prove that I'm wreckless
Have you comin up empty like U.N. weapon inspectors
Articulate and ignorant that be a deadly combination
Knowledge of the english language still spit ebonic connatation

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Very up to date with the U.N. line.......very nice, well-structured......You spelled "connotation" wrong though....HAHAHA, just playin'....Keep this up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:27:19 01/31/03 Fri
Dope shit for real.. didnt like that maternity ward part tho.. rest was tight tho..flow getting better.. peace.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 18:12:36 01/31/03 Fri
always nice readin ya stuff Brail...this was put together pretty nice...nice display of multi's in places...flow was smooth in here...nice word usage..yea liked the UN line...nice shit here...glad to see ya still reppin...hopefully i'll be droppin some more soon...been in a bad writer's block slump lately...but i should be back round shortly....stay up sonn, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 03:22:05 02/01/03 Sat
Flow was nice, I can see you've been onto that !...nice post here, I liked the "Yeah he got some potential,,," line shit made me laugh, nice read, Stay up Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:01:32 02/01/03 Sat

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