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Date Posted: 01:39:48 02/03/03 Mon
Author: MORBID ARMOR
Author Host/IP: AC990F99.ipt.aol.com / 172.153.15.153
Subject: MORBID ARMOR returns for his second instillment of supremacy.. ENJOY!!!!!... Feedback appreciated

Liquidate the premise of promised failures in my drowned bliss
erase the stains of piss from my knowledge's circumfrence
force-field operations deploy adrenaline upon the sedated creations
monopoly rhyme structure is truely blatant as emcees stumble upon patience
microphone conception to birth maintenance
infatuations from underground cryptic nations
the army sworn to declare war upon commodity and radio stations
this is command and conquer with no similiarities to video game graphics
vivid instillments of horror with rarities of survivals amongst the combatants
shrapnel metal embedded in skeletons and bodies layed in caskets
2.0 versions like Zion I with ballistics
Deep Water Slangs and Rhyme Wizards kicking misfits
knitwits get caught up in a helix of snares and kicks
wrapped up in images of whores with pierced clits and wannabe street warriors with pistol grips
fuck the nonsense...eliminate the bullshit
in hip-hop you aint the shit if you hop on idolistic mirages to be hip
I'm a Living Legend my production should be blessed by Elusive's fingertips
Living a Gas Dream of chemical indulgences
converting me into The Grouch spitting hateful sentiments in all of my sentences
shooting Slugs upon ANTS from the Atmosphere's plateaus
rebooting and debugging the trance to enchance my rhythmatic flow
the ever-slow incline towards complete structure of words
the epitome of mastering slurs and colliding together beautiful nouns and verbs
my intention....with one stone kill many birds

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damn man...this was ill...very nice post...i wanna highlight da dope lines but there's too many...this was just sick overall...keep droppin shyt like this...(NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 03:35:37 02/03/03 Mon
too complex.....not sayin i dont understand it, but less is more in rap these days, i know this is tha lyricist lounge but, whateva,,,,do yo thang (NT) -- styliztik,....aka...quote, 04:02:27 02/03/03 Mon
Too many sylibles in some lines made it unflowable, and it wasn't very coherent because you used words you prolly couldn't use in a sentance...But the vocab, sis add a very abstract element to this, so it was okay except for flow and illiteracy... (NT) -- Souliberty, 08:40:13 02/03/03 Mon
this was alright ...not great, some lines were nice but your flow off kilter like a bitch and I agree about parts being incoherent because you put words where the shouldn't be...anyways not bad, keep on. Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 11:29:12 02/03/03 Mon
I'm a big fan of poetic-flow.......Plus, your "hints" of being a "Living Legend" had me wondering......"��.....Is he for real...��"....But, yeah....it was dope in some parts.....and I was diggin' the polysyllabic-structure in this.....Some people think being "abstract" means that you don't have to make any sense.....THAT'S A LIE!!!!.....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�......<<<<<<...Hopefully, the soon-to-be sixth member of The Orphanage....., 12:08:43 02/03/03 Mon
I dug all the west coast underground references.. tiiight.. but i didnt like the flow.. i got the meaning of this pretty well, vocab dont throw me off, but the flow just wasnt there too well work on developing your scheme and rhythm.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:40:52 02/03/03 Mon
I like it -- INS, 15:53:41 02/03/03 Mon
swords hit it one the nail.. (NT) -- EMINENT "THE SCIENCE OF ELOHEIM!", 17:13:37 02/03/03 Mon

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